Broken Hearts#2 updated LAST PART on Pg 76 / 16-12-2019 - Page 7

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Posted: 5 years ago
#61

Finally Maan unburdened himself with Geet. But Geet was already feeling insecure and now felt she can never be maan’s.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#62

amazing

even piya is helping them to give their relation a chance

hope maan and geet will understand each other better

rahul is misbehaving geet but got two slaps hope maan came to know about this and make them get out of the manison soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#63

Maan hesitating to kiss Geet hurts her. At least for the sake of piya he could have given her a peck on her cheek.

Rahul is really becoming irritating and bold. Hope he does nothing to hurt Geet in Maan’s absence.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#64

Nice update dear Geet understand her daughter very well and make her happy Mann and Adi trying to find any loophole to throw them out mean while Rahul trying to misbehave with Geet but she slapped him hard and warned to stay away from them

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Posted: 5 years ago
#65

Super update baby . wowiee piya baby was so sweet , her moments with her parents was super cute . piya baby wants her uuu's love for her mum so she told maan to kiss geet in her own way but maan was not ready so geet distracted piya's mind but she was hurt . maan and adi discussed about that aseem . that b****** rahul tried to behave with geet and she slapped him .

eagerly waiting for next part .

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Posted: 5 years ago
#66

PART - 32



Maan left for some business trip which increases Geet's trouble. Two days,just in two days and Piya cause bewilderment. Because of sobbing continuously her body turned weaken and she catches fever again. Seeing her condition Geet was shattered. She was roaming here and there,holding Piya in her arms but no use. She coughed badly.

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"le bete ye pila isko." Daija came with some home remedy. She took Piya from her and sat on bed.



"Daija ye roye hi ja rahi hai main kya karu?" She whimpered,holding her tears. "Upar se fever or ab to cough bhi."



"Be strong beta. Kids are like flowers,so delicate." Daija consoles her.



"nahi Daija she is missing Maan. I know." Geet told her tension.



"i know beta that's why i am telling you to be strong. Now give this to her and she will be fine soon." Daija caress both the girls and Geet feed her with spoon but Piya pushed it aside the spoon and made it fall.



She wasnt in a mood and her fever made her more cranky. "Daija...." tears which she tried to hold finally rolled out.



"Geet,please... La mujhe de." Though Piya throwing her legs and hands but Daija feed her forcily. "Maan b aise hi tang karta tha jab beemar hota tha but i feed him forcily."Daija share and told her to behave strongly.



"I wish he come back soon. I can't see her like this." Geet felt sad for her baby.



"Only she misses him. Don't you?" Daija tried to read her thoughts.



Geet's eyes widened at her awkward question when her whole mind was gripped by Piya only.



"Bol beta." She instigate.



"Daija aap kya leke baith gaye." Geet stood up and patted Piya's back.



"Geet i know you feel for him then why don't you tell him?"



"Daija aap Maan ko mujhse zada achhe se jante hai." She replied in deep voice.



"tabi mujhe darr lagta hai." Daija too got tensed. "Geet wo...."



"He loves Tia so much. Daija unka pyar sachha hai or abhi to sirf kuchh hi mahine hue hai. How can we expect from him any thing?" Geet complete her unsaid words.



"Beta baat itni nahi hai. Maan Tia ko na kabhi bhulega or na uski jagah kisi ko dega. I am scared for your happiness. Tune to use apna liya hai par wo....." Daija feared for their future.



"Daija aap please mere liye tension mat lo." Though Geet told her to be calm but deep inside she was worried for the same.



"par beta..."



"Daija apko pata hai har burai me b achhai hoti hai. Kuchh dinn pehle Rahul ne...." Geet hesitate but told the whole story of that day to her.



"What? Why don't you tell me or Maan about this?" Daija's eyes filled with rage.



"Daija calm down apki Geet itni kamzor nahi hai jo apne liye ladd b na sake. But you know what i gave him good reply and if he dare again. He will face my wrath. Any ways leave it. Apko pata hai maine gusse me usse kaha that i love Maan. Itne dinn se jo baat main samjh nahi pa rahi thi now i got. First i thought its my respect for him but no Daija now i realized that what i feel for him." Geet revealed her innermost feelings.



"or Maan?" Daija doubted.



Geet hold her hand. "pyar zabardasti nahi karwaya ja sakta Daija and i don't wanna force him to accept me. I love him that doesn't means he is bound to love me." she hoarsed.



Daija caressed her cheek. She sense her cravings for him but also felt happy that she understood the situation as well.



Both were in talk when her phone buzzed. It was her mother on the other side. She called to ask for Piya's health. "mumma ye roye hi ja rahi hai or mujhe kuchh samjh nahi aa raha."



"Shant hoja beta and give her kada. I will tell you how to make it." Her mother told her the same remedy which Daija already gave.



"I already gave her. Daija prepared and feed as well as mere se to pee b nahi rahi thi." Geet cribbed.



"It's okay beta. Wo beemar hai na aise me bachhe chid chide ho jate hai." Her mother too console her.



"Mom I was thinking to admit her to hospital. There she get best treatment." Geet don't wanna take any chance with her.



"Geet...." Her mother stretched. "Use sirf cough and fever hai. Don't get hyper. Wo kada diya hai na that will help. Tu dekhna subah tak bilkul theek ho jayegi."



"Well i hope so." Geet sound so low as her baby is sick and nothing could help to calm her anxiety.



Late night she recieved a surprising call from Maan. She was amazed as she was not expecting him. A weak smile came on her face and she picked up his call. "Maan aap kab aa rahe ho. Please come back soon." She pleads briskly.



Maan too got tensed as he sense the anxiety in her voice. "Geet is every thing okay there? What happened tell me? Did they troubled any of you?" he was worried.



"Maan, Piya again have fever." she told him. "She missing you badly."



"what she have fever? Do you call the doctor?" Maan paniced.



"I did everything. Please come back." Geet don't wanna scare him but when it comes to Piya both turned weak easily and this can sense by Rahul as well. He overheared their conversation and an evil smirk come on his face.



"Oh so is tote me hai in dono ki jaan." Both of you slap me na. Now its my turn. Get ready for my pay back." his lips twisted and an evil smile spread over there.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#67

Superb update

Maan went on a business trip and Piya is missing her aanu . Geet doesn't know how to calm her but with daija's help she feed her medicine . Daija ask Geet about her feelings towards Maan and she is scared what if Maan don't reciprocate to her feelings .

Maan call and Geet told him about Piya's health their conversation heard by Rahul . Now he their weakness .

Waiting for next

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Posted: 5 years ago
#68

Superb as always

Piyu baby is illl,she is missing her Papa

The talk between daija and geet is ❤

Now Rahul is planning to hurt baby

Hope everything will be fine

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Posted: 5 years ago
#69

Part 31


Fabulous Chapter


Piya is just so sweet and cute and it seems she is somehow

trying to get her parents to come closer

but Maan still holds denial and still feels that only Tia is his love

though Geet is hurt but she manages the situation

its so painful that both Maan and Geet though married stay in one house

but cannot be close , I just hope soon Maan can develop feelings for Geet

so he too can feel what love is with Geet

Rahul must have picked up that Maan and Geet are not close and Rahul

makes this fact known to Geet but Geet she is stronger and slaps Rahul

for trying to misbehave with her

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Posted: 5 years ago
#70

Just loved the update piya and geet missing maan poor child miss her dad badly the way daija consoled geet was nice happy that geet realized her feelings towards maan hope maan too understands it soon maaneet tensed regarding piya health precap is scary hope everything goes well 😘❤️

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