Akshan Ts: Lakeerein (Last part pg 3) - Page 2

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Guddan took right Decision when there is no trust there is no point to stay there and now let AJ sweat little bit in finding and manaoing Guddan

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Chapter - 2

Three Months Later

Jindal House

It has been three months since Guddan left her house but the house was incomplete without her. Few things changed, Dadi stopped interacting with people of house, Durga & Saraswati realised there mistake & accepted Guddan as their Saas. Angad & Revati got married as Guddan left another letter for them & asked them to get married. As for Akshat, his whole world was turned upside down. After Antara fiasco, for three months Akshat is searching for Guddan but there was no trace of her as if she disappeared in air. Vikram was trying hard to find Guddan but it looked like Guddan has closed all doors which lead to her.

Night

As usual Akshat returned home late from restraunt & went to his room. Laxmi took the duty of giving food to him everyday. Akshat entered the room & sighed heavily, after Guddan left he renovated whole room. The room consists of all colours just like Guddan wanted & every wall consists of Guddan's picture. Laxmi entered his bedroom & kept the food on sofa.

L: AJ khalijiye

AJ: Aaj maan nehi hai laxmi bahu

L: Dekhiye zid maat kijiye sasuma jis din wapas ayegi aur pata chala ki aap khana thik se nehi khate phir woh mujhse baat nehi karegi so pls kha lijiye

Akshat half-smiled & nodded. Laxmi left. Akshat went near painting of Guddan which he painted himself.

AJ: Guddan tum nehi ho lekin tumhara darr, masti abhi bhi iss ghar mein aur gharwalon ke bich mein hai. Bahut jald mein tumhe wapas le ayunga.

Saying he had his dinner & got ready for bed. He took out Guddan's dupatta from cupboard & went to bed holding her dupatta.

AJ(lying down): Goodnight Guddan.

Somewhere

Guddan was standing near a window & was looking at stars.

G: Jindal Saab I hope aap thik hai. Goodnight.

Saying this she went to sleep holding Akshat shirt which she brought with her to go feel his presence.

Next Day

Mumbai

Akshat came to Mumbai for a business deal. Reaching Mumbai he informed his mother & went for his meeting. By the time the meeting ended it was already evening. As he was feeling restless he went to a park nearby. He sat on one of the benches & started thinking about Guddan.

AJ(in mind): Aaj itni bechani kyu horahi hai aisa lagta hai ki Guddan aas pass hai.

Suddenly his phone started ringing. It was Vikram.

AJ: Haan Vikram bolo

V: Akshat hume abhi suchna mili hai ki Guddan Ji Mumbai mein dekha gaya hai

AJ(shocked & happy): Sach?

V: Haan hume aadhe ghante mein unki location ka pata chal jayega phir hum Mumbai ke liye rawana hongen.

AJ: Tum mujhe location bhejo main Mumbai mein hi hoon.

V: Thik hai

Akshat was on cloud mone hearing the news. He saw a Krishna temple & went their to pray, as it was already around night only two-three people were there. Akshat stood infront of Krishna statue & started praying folding his hands.

AJ(in mind): Kahna ji aapko toh sab pata hai pls pls meri Guddan ko mujhse milwa dijiye pls..

Akshat rang the hell of temple & turned around to go but was shocked to see the sight infront of him. Guddan was facing him & praying closing her eyes with a soft smile on her face. Tears were rolling down from Akshat eyes, he could not believe his Guddan was standing just infront of him. Akshat walked towards Guddan & stood just infront of her.

G(in mind): Hey Lord Krishna Jindal Saab, Dadi, Papa, Mummy aur pura parivaar ko khush rakhna yehi kamna hai.

After praying Guddan opened her eyes & was shocked to see Akshat.

G(shocked): Ji..Ji..Jindal Saab aap..

Guddan backed few steps to run but Akshat caught her by her waist pulled her closer & locked her with his arms around her. Guddan stood still due to Akshat so close to her.

G: Jindal Saab yeh aap

AJ:Chup bilkul chup tumne kya socha tha tum mujhe chod ke chali jayungi aur mein khush rahunga?

G: Apki toh Antara ji se shaadi huyi hai

AJ: Nehi hui hai shaadi.. Antara ki saachai shaadi se pehlei aygeyi Antara ne sirf aur sirf paison ke liye yeh sab kiya ahan tak usne dusri shaadi bhi karli

G(now in tears): Aur humne jab aapko bataya tabh apne mera yakeen nehi kiya

AJ: Haan Guddan galti hogayi mujhse Maine tumhari baat nehi suni bohat badi galti kiyi hai aur uske liye jitna bhi maafi mangoon utna kam hai lekin yeh bhi sach hai inn teen mahino mein mein har din har waqt har pal hazar maut mar chuka hun tumhare bina.. tumhe jo saza deni hai tum do magar pls Guddan pls wapas chalo..

G: Kyu jaye wapas jab kisine meri baat suni tak nehi chahi toh kyu jaye

AJ: Janta hun Guddan galti kiyi hai aur tumhe iske liye jo saza dogi mujhe manzoor hai par pls wapas chalo plsss

Saying this Akshat folded his hands dropped down on his knees & started crying. Guddan could not see her Jindal Saab like this, she only knows how this three months she has survived without him.

G: Uthiye... uthiye aap

Guddan made Akshat stand.

G: Thik hai hum apke saath wapas chalne ko taiyaar hai lekin humari shart hai.

AJ(happy): Tumhari har shart manjoor hai tum bol ke dekho

G: Apko humse shaadi karni hogi abhi issi waqt issi Mandir mein

Akshat was overjoyed & hugged Guddan.

AJ: Thank you Guddan.. thank you so much meri zindagi mein wapas ane ke liye.. tumhe nehi pata mein tumse kitna pyar karti hun.

Guddan smiled hugging him. They called the pandit of the temple for conducting their marriage. During pheras Akshat holded Guddan's hand.

AJ: Main wachan deta hun apna har wachan puri shidat ke sath aur marte dum tak nibhayunga, zindagi mein kabhi tumhara saath nehi chodunga.

Guddan smiled hearing this.

Pandit: Abb vadhu ke maang mein sindoor bhariye.

Akshat took vermilion & put on Guddan's maang.

Pandit: Beta mangalsutra ke bina yeh shaadi adhuri hai

G: Par mangalsutra..

AJ:Ek min

Guddan looked at him & was shocked. Akshat took out her mangalsutra from his shirt pocket & showed her.

AJ: Ise maine humesa apne pass rakha tha issh soch mein kabhi toh tum milogi aur dekho aaj milgayi.

A lone tear dropped from Guddan's eyes. Akshat tied the mangalsutra around her neck.

Pandit: Vivah samparn hua

Both looked at each other happily.

AJ(in mind): Tumne abhi tak apne dil ki baat tumne nehi batayi hai lekin bohat jald tum bataogi Guddan mujhe bharosa hai

G(in mind): Bohat jald hum apko apni dil ki baat batayenge Jindal Saab.

Sorry for grammatical mistakes. And next part may be will be a little bit shorter.

Wow....

Finally Akshan married...

And Durga saru realized there galti...

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Awsome

Finally akshan mil gye nxt part thoda romantic banana plz

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Finally akshan are together

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Chapter - 3

Next Day

Jindal House

1:00 P. M

All family members were having lunch at dining table. Akshat stood at the entrance door.

AJ:Maa

All family member turned around & saw him standing at the door smiling.

Dadi:Lalla

All went towards the door.

D: Kya hua AJ aap bahar kyu kharein hai andar ayi

AJ: Nehi Durga bahu aaj mein aisa andar nehi ayunga.

Vardaan: Kya matlab papa

Akshat turned his head towards right side & Guddan came from behind & stood beside him smiling. All were shocked & happy.

Da: Guddan meri nachi

D, L & S: Sasuma aap wapas ageyi

One by one all members came & hugged Guddan.

Da: Duga bahu.. Revati jaldi jao aur Grahepravesh ki samagri layo apni babu ka swagat karna hai

They bought all the things & Dadi did Guddan & Akshat's arati. Saraswati kept the rice pot & alta thal infront of Guddan. Guddan pushed the rice pot & stepped on alta thal & entered the house.

Da(in tears): Mujhe maaf karde meri bachi humlogo ne teri baat nehi suni tu naraz hai na

G: Nehi maaji hum kisi se naraz Nehi hai aur jo hua use bhul jayiye

V:Par hum apse naraz hai

All turned around & saw Vikram entering.

G: Rawat ji

V: Guddan ji apse yeh umeed nehi thi apne humse madat mangi aur khud sab kuch chod ke chali gayi aur upar se apko dhudne ke rastey band kardiye iske liye toh apko saza milni chahiye.. waise aap Mumbai mein Kya kar rahin thi

R: Haan Di aap Mumbai kyu gayi

G: woh

AJ: Main batata hun Guddan ahan se apni saheli Trisha ke ghar gayi aur wahan se uske saath Mumbai

R: Par Trisha Di ko toh maine pehle phone kiya tha iska matlab

G: Haan chutki humne use mana kiya tha aur Rawat ji gussa mat kijiye aur jo hua usse bhul jayi

V: Thik hai bhul gayen

AJ: Guddan tum jake aram karon mein restraunt jaa raha hun shaam tak ajayunga. Chalo vikram tumhe poilce station drop kardeta hun.

And Akshat & Vikram left.

Da: Haan Guddan tu aram kar baat mein baat karenge

Guddan nodded & went to her bedroom. Entering the room she was shocked to see the room as it was totally different when she left. Guddan went near her portrait which was painted by Akshat & touched it.

G(in mind): Jindal Saab humse itna pyar karte hai

D: Yeh sab kuch AJ ne kiya hai

Guddan turned around & saw her three daughter-in-laws standing.

G:Aree aap log

Durga & Saraswati came forward & folded their hands.

D:Hume maaf kardo Guddan humne tumhe bahut takleef diya hai

S: Haan sasuma maaf kar dijiye

G: Aree Durga ji Saru bahu jo hua bhul jayi ye

Guddan hugged both of them.

L: Arey sasuma hume bhool gayi?

Guddan smiled & called her & all of them shared a group hug. After group hug Guddan looked around the room & a plan came to her mind.

G: Ab toh hum aap logo ki saas hai toh humari baat manegi aap log

S: Haan sasuma aap boliye toh sahi

G: Toh phir..

Guddan told them her plan. Three daughter-in-laws looked at each other & smiled.

G: Toh batayi karengi humari madat?

D, L & S: Zaroor..

9:00 P. M

Akshat entered the house.

AJ: Late hogaya Guddan toh aaj marhi dalegi.

He went upstairs towards his room. He entered his room & was surprised to see the room. The whole room was decorated with flowers & candles, the bed was also decorated with flowers. Akshat got sound of door locking & turned around & was mesmerized looking at Guddan who was wearing a beautiful red water. She came near him.

AJ: Guddan yeh sab

G(putting finger on his lips): Ssshhh aaj hum bolenge aur aap sunege.. inn teen mahino mein jitna dard apko hua hai usse kahin zyada dard mujhe hua hai apse durr hokar.. Jab apne humse zyada Antara ji par bharosa kiya tabh kitni takleef huyi hai woh hume pata hai lekin hum bina kahen nehi reh sakte.

Guddan holds Akshat's both hands & said

G:Jindal Saab hum apse bohat pyar kartein hai aur apke bina abb iss Guddan se rehna na ho payega

A lone tear escaped from Guddan's eyes. Akshat pulled Guddan close & kissed her forehead.

G: I love you Akshat

AJ(smiled): I love you Guddan

Akshat moved his face closer to Guddan, Guddan closed her eyes thus giving him permission. Akshat captured her lips & both shared a passionate kiss. After few moments they broke their kiss due to lack of oxygen. Akshat carried Guddan in his arms in bridal style & laid her down on bed & caressed her face.

AJ: Phirse mera name bolo Guddan

G: Akshat

AJ: Phirse

G: Akshat

He holds Guddan's fingers & two become one that night.

The End

Sorry for grammatical mistakes

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I read both parts in one go and both parts were really good

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