Akshan Ts: Lakeerein (Last part pg 3)

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Chapter 1

Jindal House

12:00 A.M

It was raining outside, a huge storm came in Indore, it looked like whole city will be destroyed tonight. Here, Guddan whole world was destroyed due to the storm name Antara. Due to Antara, her Jindal Saab did not even believed her Galtiyon Ki Dukan.

FLASHBACK

Few Hours Ago..

Near Swimming Pool

G: Jindal Saab apne koi gunnah nehi kiya hai.. Samaj neki koshis kijiye..

AJ: Guddan abb bash hogaya yeh ekhi baat baar baar kehne se sach jhutlaye nehi jaa sakta..

G: Meri puri baat suniye.. Antara Ji kabhi accident hua hi nehi tha unhone aap ko jaan bujhkr chora tha, woh sab paison key liye kiya hai unhone kabhi aap se pyar kiya hi nehi..

AJ: GUDDAN

Guddan was shocked at Akshat's behaviour.

AJ: Maine kabhi nehi socha tha ki tum mujhe aur apne rishtey ko sahi sabit karne ke liye itna wahiyad ilzam lagaogi Antara par.. tumse yeh umeed nehi thi.. Ab ek shabd meri Antara ke khilaf nehi..

Saying this he left from there.

FLASHBACK END

G(in mind): Humne socha tha ki koi humpe bharosa karen ya na karen aap apni Guddan par bharosa karengein lekin hum galat the.. Apke liye tabh bhi Antara Ji pehle thi aur age bhi wahi rahengi..

And she started crying..

G(in mind): Abb bash hum Jindal Saab ko aur taqleef nehi denge hume pata hai hume kya karna hai..

Next Day

11:00 A.M

The mandap was set up in the middle of the house, all the family members were present except Guddan and Vikram Rawat. All thought Guddan was in the room & Vikram went outside saying he needs to investigate special case. Akshat & Antara came downstairs in their wedding attire. Antara was smiling as her plan was finally successful whereas Akshat was depressed.

Pandit: Vivah ka muhrat nikla jaraha hai apna jaga prasthan kijiye.

Akshat & Antara sat at their places. Pandit started chanting mantras.

AJ(in mind): I am sorry Guddan tumhara dil dukhane ke liye par tum aisa kaisa Antara ke baren mein bol gayi...

Akshat thoughts were interrupted by Pandit telling them to exchange garlands. After exchanging garlands, Durga came & tied the wedding knot(gathbandhan). Both of them stood up to take pheras. As Akshat took one step for phera then..

V: Yeh shaadi nehi hosakti..

All turned towards the door & was shocked to see Vikram standing with police.

A(shocked): Vikram yeh kaisi baat kar rahein ho apni behen ki shaadi kyu rokna chahte ho..

V: Maaf kijiye lekein humari behen ka name Mrs. Antara Jindal tha aur aap Mrs. Antara Saxena hai, Ajay Saxena ki wife.

All were shocked hearing this.

Dadi: Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho vikram beta

V: Sahi keh rahein maaji.. Andar ayi yein

A man entered. Antara was shocked looking at the man and stepped backwards. Akshat noticed that.

Ajay: Mera name Ajay Saxena hai aur yeh aurat meri wife hai. 15 saal pehle Indore mehi mili thi. Antara ne kahan tha ki inke pati ne inhe ghar se nikal diya hai inka koi nehi hai. Maine inhe apni maa ka khayal rakhne ke liye hire karliya aur Mumbai chale gayen uske kuch mahine baad hum dono ne shaadi kar liyi. Mujhe recently pata chala inke barein mein ki kaise inhone apne marne ka natak kiya tha 15 saal pehle aur humse shaadi sirf paison ke liye kiya tha..

Hearing this all were shocked.

Akshat felt like someone stabbed him.

AJ: Toh iska matlab Guddan jo keh rahi thi sach keh rahi thi.

Ajay: Maine jab Antara ko confront kiya toh isne mujhpe jaan lewa hamla kiya aur mujhe hospital bhej ke ahan ageyi. Main jab thik hua mujhe pata chala woh ahan ayi hai aur main aaj subha Indore agaya.

V: Ajay yahan atehi Antara ke name par FIR darj kiya police station mein wahan humara khabri ne inke baren mein bataya aur hum inhe lene chale gaye.

AJ(angry): Kyu kiya tumne Antara aisa

A: Haan Maine yeh sab kiya hai toh kya karti na tum successfull the aur nahin tumhare pass mere liya waqt tha upar se tumhare pagal Bhai kam tha jo tumne tin beto ka maa bana diya isiliye yeh sab Maine kiya.. Maine jo kiya sirf aur sirf paison ke liye kiya...

AJ: Iska matlab hum dono ke bich

A: Haan Akshat hum dono ke bich uss raat kuch bhi nehi hua tha tumhe aur Guddan ko alag karne ke liye woh sab natak kiya tha Maine..

Akshat was happy but he realized whatever Guddan told him was right.

V: Mrs. Antara Saxena apko apne nakli maut ka, Mr. Akshat Jindal pe sexual harassment, Mr. Ajay Saxena ke sath fraud aur murder attempt ke liye girafter kiya jaa raha hai.

Lady constable came and took Antara away.

V: Akshat hume maaf kar dijiye humari dhokebaaz behen ki wajah se app sabko bohat kuch bhugatna para hai.

AJ: Nehi vikram isme tumhari koi galti nehin hai. Galti toh meri hai Guddan ne kahan bhi tha par Maine uski baat ka vishwas nehi kiya

V: Lekin Guddan ji hai kahan humne unhe kal sham se nehi dekha hai.

S: Sasuma toh guest room mein hai subha se nikli nehi kamre se

All marched towards guest room. Akshat opened the door but there was no sign of Guddan. Her things were missing, it felt like no one was staying.

AJ: Guddan.. Gudd

Akshat saw Guddan's magalsutra & her kangan on bed with a letter. Akshat opened the letter & was shocked.

LETTER

Jindal Saab,

Jaab tak aap yeh letter parhenge tab tak hum yahan se jaa chuke honge. Hume dhoonnd neki koshis maat kijiyega. Hum apko hamesha hamesha ke liye issh rishtey se azad kardete hai. Khush rahiyega.

Apki Guddan..

Reading that letter Akshat dropped on his knees holding her mangalsutra. Tears dropping from his eyes.

AJ(in mind): Sorry Guddan, kyu chali gayi..

Sorry for grammatical mistakes.. Hope you like it

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riddy254 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was Beautiful update.

Please continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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😥😥😥😥😥😥 chudial exposed acha hua

But AJ should have believed her thoda sa toh😒

Now she left from there😭😭

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Posted: 6 years ago
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its awsome

ab Aj need to find guddu and manofy her

plz continue asap if possible update it today itself😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Are wah mast update tha...

Finally antra apni sahi jagah pahoch gayi....

Aj need to find gudiya ASAP....

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I wish serial main Abhi Aisa hi ho after exposing antra Guddan should walk out from the Jindal bhawan ...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice one

Aj should hv atleast trust her a bit

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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@payalhazra I was also thinking of same type of plot and writing in the forum.how amazing to see different minds thinking same ideas.please,do keep writing as your writing way is amazing while mine lacked interactive conversations.looking forward to your updates

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Antara exposed yeyy

But akshat ko guddan pr trust krna chahiye tha

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