Mohabbat....part 16....24/10 - Page 12

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Ishra cute nok jhok

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Last two parts was best

Really kiss was unexpected surprise i loved my babies kiss so much

Both started to fall for each other but not completely

Ishu jealous was cute

Really he is hot and charm ishu has to admit it

He is more caring and protective towards her

Full of ishra i enjoyed it throughly

She only wants to call him ravan kumar lovely it was

He knows how to shut up her mouth in his own way

He is more romantic actually

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Part 8

Fabulous Part

Raman was concerned for Ishita and she cannot believe if that is his true self

or he is planning again against her

he enjoys teasing her but at the same time it almost feels like he is attracted to her

claiming to hate yet he enjoyed kissing her and still teases her about it

while Ishita too felt different when Raman was applying ointment to her

I'm sure soon both will start liking the other

Hlo guys.... Here i m back with new update.... Hope u will enjoy it....

Part 9......

Vandu: i know it ishu.... Acha ok byee... I will talk to you later and take care ok.... Byeee..

Ishita: byeee akka...

Saying so she hung up the phone thought to have rest for some time.

At evening raman gets ready for the party wearing blue tuxedo with white crisp shirt his hair was nicely gel. With one day old Stuble he was looking ever handsome and charming. On the other hand ishita also got ready in blue colour off shoulder gown. She curled up her hair little and left them loose in air. She did little makeup with matching jewellery and was looking simple yet beautiful enough to make anyone heart beat faster than normal. She was checking herself in mirror again before going out when her phone buzzed. She saw the caller and it was raman's call. She picked it up

Ishita: hello

Raman: haan hello... Are you ready for the party....

Ishita: haan.... I was about to come....

Raman: ok... Come fast i will meet you at parking itself.....

Ishita: ok...

She hang up the call and muttered to herself

Ishita: how rude he is.... Always in attitude.... Murgun please.. Please give me strength to bear him and his taunt

She left from there and went to the parking area. Where she saw raman who was already standing there looking ever handsome and hot. And when raman's eyes fell on her. He forgot to blink as the view was mesmerizing. She stands in front of him, he looked at her from toe to bottom as if not getting enough of her beauty. Seeing her milky shoulder he gulped down his saliva. Seeing him lost ishita snapped her hand which broke his trance he again made straight face not wanting to show her that he was staring her.

Ishita: chlein...

Raman: huh... Haan chlo....

Raman sit on wheels while ishita was about to sit at back seat when speak rudely

Raman: where are you going..... Sit in front.... I m not your driver....

Ishita: can't u speak calmly always rude....

Raman: apna bhasan baad mein shuru krna party mein pahunchne ke baad.....right now we r getting late....

Ishita silently Sit down beside raman in car after making faces. Raman started driving towards the venue while ishita was looking out side of the car window. All the way raman was stealing glances of her. And thought to himself

Raman(st): aaj toh madrassan kehr dhaa rhi hai......

After half an hour they reached at their destination. A came running to open the door of the car . They both came out from the car and went inside where they saw Mr. Bhatia.

Mr. Bhatia came towards them and welcome them in party.

Mr. Bhatia: hello mr. Bhalla.... And ms. Iyer. Welcome welcome..... I m so happy to see you both here.....u both are making a fabulous pair....

Hearing him raman and ishita both looked at each other and shared a small eye lock. And gave fake smile at him.

Raman: apne bulya tha hme toh ana hi tha....

Mr. Bhatia: by the way ms. Iyer u are looking gorgeous....

Ishita smiled and thanks him for the compliment.

Mr. Bhatia: aayiee... Mr. Bhalla and ms. Iyer... Mai apko apne business colleague se milvata hu....

He took them with himself and introduced them with his colleagues. While going with mr. Bhatia. Raman muttered under his breath only Audible to ishita.

Raman: jarur inki ankhe khrab ho gyi hongi....

Ishita: kyu... Kya hua....

Raman: tumhe gorgeous bola.....

Ishita flared her nostrils in anger and spoke glaring him : jealous ho rhe ho...

Raman: mai kyu jealous hounga...

Ishita: kyukinapko kuch nhi bola na....

Raman smirked victoriously and in her ear: jarra apni nazar ghumao aur dekho... Kitni beautiful and sexy girls mujhe dekh kr aahein bhar rhi hai.... Ese compliment ki mujhe jrurat nahi hai....

Ishita saw her surroundings and found him true. There were so many girls who was staring raman with flirty smile.

Ishita: whatever... Toh mai kya kru... Jao fir unke pass...

Raman: ab tum jealous ho rho....

Ishita: nhi.... Mai kyu houngi vo bhi apke liye... Mai apse....

She was about to speak further but stopped herself thinking something.

Raman: mai apse kya.. ...bolo. ..age.. .

Ishita: kuch nahi apse baat krne ka koi fyada nhi hai....leave it.....

Mr. Bhatia: hello gentleman meet our two youngest entrepreneur. Mr. Raman kumar bhalla and Ms. Ishita iyer.

They shaked hand with everyone and all engrossed in talking. after a while ishita excused herself from there and went in corner taking a glass of juice in her hand. Raman went towards his favorite place in party which is bar. He asked for drink and was sipping it slowly slowly while staring at ishita without blinking his eyes. Ishita was talking with some ladies at the party smiling and laughing in between their talks. Raman was amazed of her beauty when someone pat on his shoulder he turned around and saw he was none other than ashok khanna his friend.

Ashok: hello raman! How are you

He asked while taking seat beside Raman

Raman : hi ashok.... I m fine.... How are you here....

Ashok: well I'm also invited here like u....

Raman smiled and asked him for drink. They were talking about something when ashok's eyes fell on group of ladies where he spotted ishita.

Ashok while staring at ishita with lusty eyes: Hot!.... Kya hot maal aya hai aaj....

Hearing him raman followed his gaze where he spotted ishita.

Raman crunched his jaw in anger and spoke with warning tone: she is ishita..... Ishita iyer, don't stare her like that..

Ashok: oh.... That ishita.... Whom u met that day .... When she slapped you.... That mean you got her.... Wah! Yaar... U proved that you're actually The Great RKB..... By the way have you done sex with her.....vese if you are done with her..... Can I take her for one night....

That was it, hearing him raman's anger reached at peak. He slapped him hard on his cheek gathering everyone's attention in the party. Ashok got furious he spoke gritting his teeth with anger

Ashok: what the hell is this raman..... How dare you to slap me......

Raman clutched his jaw in right hand and spoke while shooting dagger at him like he will burn him then and there with mere his glare itself

Raman: how dare you to talk like that about ishita.......yeh galti dobara repeat krne ki kosish bhi mat krna....vo sirf meri hain sirf meri RKB ki.....you are my friend thats why i m leaving you for now with only this slap otherwise tujhe yahin pe jaan se maar deta....

Saying so he pushed him hard and about to turn when ashok spoke with an angry tone

Ashok: you have to pay for it Raman..... Mai tumse iss thapad ka badla le kr rahunga....

During all this, all were staring them and was gossiping about their fight. Ishita was also trying hard to know the matter but couldn't as she was far from them. Someone near her were saying that ashok had told something about RKB's girlfriend. Ishita screwed up her eyes and saw there was Raman who was indulge in fight. She went to him to know about the matter. When she reached to him she saw he was giving warning to ashok

Raman gritting his teeth : badla lega tu... Badla lene lyak tujhe chodunga tab na....

Raman was about to hit him again when ishita came in between stopping raman. She said while trying to calm him down

Ishita: raman what are you doing.... Leave him Raman... Why are you creating scene here...

Raman: aaj chod rha hu.... Next time i won't spare u.......

While in all this ashok was observing their chemistry and comfort level the way ishita stopped raman for not doing fight with ashok.the way raman obeying her. He was staring her when raman placed his hand on ishita's waist asked her to bid goodbye to mr. Bhatia. She was astonished by his behavior. Sensing his anger she chose to follow him. Soon they came back from party. Raman was driving towards the Hotel. He was driving harshly with too much speed. Ishita asked him to slow down the speed but he was nowhere to listen her. Ishita again spoke with angry tone.

Ishita: slow down the speed raman.. Will you?...

Raman stopped the car with jerk and clenched his jaw line tight in anger. Seeing him ishita again asked him about the matter, but in response he only gave deadly glares to her.

Raman with full anger: why did u wear this gown... Didn't u get anything else to wear

Ishita got angry hearing him : what the hell is this..... Please don't drag my dress in it... Its beautiful.....and by the way why are you so concerned about my dress....

Raman realized what he spoke in a go. Soon he composed himself as he didn't want her to suspect him about party fight with ashok. He spoke while driving again.

Raman : nothing..... I was thinking about something else.... Actually i was thinking about shagun....yeah that's why i asked you about your dress....

Ishita made faces: really can't believe you.... You are such a disgusting man....

Raman: so ...what is disgusting about in talking about the dress of my...

Ishita didn't let him complete his sentence and spoke in mid looking outside : your girlfriend na.... I knew it already....

Raman confusingly : what!... U know her?... How?...

Ishita: bs pta hai.... Ese hi....

Like this they reached at their hotel raman informed ishita that they will leave at 10 o clock in morning. Ishita nodded and went to her room. In raman's raman was pacing in his room thinking about the happenings of the party. He thought to himself that why he got over possessive about ishita, why can't he get over her. He always behave like that when anyone specially any man speak something about her.

Raman(st): i think mujhe kisi se baat krni chahiye iske baare mein..... Pr kiss se.... Kisse kru mein baat... Kon.... Mihir.... Yes mihir se puchunga.... Uske pass honge meri confusion door...

Thinking so soon he drifted into sleep.

next morning ishra get ready after breakfast in there room Itself. While Raman called ishita to ask about is she ready or not. At 10 o clock both checked out from the hotel. Raman was driving the car when suddenly his phone buzzed, he glanced over it to see the caller ID it was shagun's , he picked it up and put it on speaker

Raman : hello!

Shagun: Hello darling

She spoke with extra sweetness which didn't go well with ishita. she made faces and turned her head to window.

Shagun: RKB!....when you are coming back baby....

Raman: i m coming shagun....but had come back Delhi...

Shagun: yeah..... I came yesterday itself just to meet you from London all the way to delhi but alas you were out as usual....

Raman: i m sorry na baba..... Ok....when I'll be at Delhi my all time will be yours ok.....

Shagun: ok..... Byee....

They disconnect the call and smiled a little and spoke

Raman: yeh shagun bhi naa.... Mere bina mann hi nahi lgta iska

( this shagun.... She can't live without me even single second)

Ishita(st): RKB... Baby... She mimic shagun "I had never seen this side of Raman.....he never behaved with me like that.... But why would he behave with me like that.... I m no one to him... And she is his GF... But why i m thinking about him, i don't need him. But why not.....he kissed me... If he has a girlfriend then he don't have right to kiss me....ishita ishita... What is happening to you.... Can't you keep raman away from your thoughts....so what he kissed you... Don't forget he did that in anger.... And yes don't fall for him.... Ok... U just keep your concentration on project after this all will end up..... Haan mujhe sirf project pr concentrate krna chahiye.... Iss ravan kumaar pr nahi or pta nahi how many flings he had in his past.. So just forget it... "

After few our they were at home. Raman dropped ishita at her house. He was leaving when mrs. Iyer stopped him and told him to have coffee mr. Iyer also asked him. Raman nodded as he couldn't deny mrs. Iyer as she was adamant.

Ishita also went beside her appa. Mr. Iyer asked them about meeting and they said it went well. Soon ishita took leave from there and went to her room to get freshen up.

In hall Raman was was sipping his coffee while talking to mr. Iyer. Suddenly mrs. Iyer popped up in conversation and asked Raman with extra sweetness

Mrs. Iyer: raman kanna..... Kya mai tumse kuch puch skti hu( can i ask u something)

Raman flashes his smile and nodded

Mrs iyer: kanna.... Do u love someone......

Raman choked his coffee back and started coughing heavily ishita was witnessing this and she ran towards Raman and gave him water while caressing his back. Raman looked at her and they shared a little eyelock which broke by ishita. Ishita glared mrs. Iyer and spoke

Ishita: amma.... What's this.... How can you ask this type of question to raman.

Mrs. Iyer: areee.... I was asking like that only....

Mr. Iyer pressed her hand and sign her not to speak further.

Ishita to raman still holding his hand: are you ok...

Raman can see the concern in her eyes for him.

Raman: yeah... M fine its ok.... And aunty i don't love anyone.... And u ishita... Hmesha angry bird rehne ki koi jrurat nahi hai...

Ishita: don't teach me raman. As if you are Saint naa...

Raman: now... What i did..

Ishita was about to speak further when mr. Iyer intrude in between and spoke scolding them

Mr. Iyer: aree... U two again started your fight...

Ishita: but appa....

Mr. Iyer showed his palm to her spoke

Mr. Iyer: enough ishu... Boht ho gya.... Don't you know how to behave with guest, Raman is our guest u should behave with him nicely... Now say sorry to Raman

Ishita made pout and said sorry. Raman smirked on her plight whem his phone buzzed which was toshiji. Toshiji told him to come home soon. He told toshiji that He is at iyer house and is about to leave from there. After then he cut the call. And asked for leave from mr. Iyer. Mr. Iyer asked ishita to drop him till his car. Ishita nodded and they went out from house. When ishita was about to go back raman called her she turned to him. He came very close to her and spoke huskily in her ear.

Raman: mujhe nahi pta tha ki tum meri itni care krti ho.... I like it

And went from there in his car not before kissing her on her cheek. Ishita widened her eyes and glared him. Suddenly a small curve adored her face she touched her cheek where he kissed and shook her head in disbelief.

At night after dinner in iyer house. Ishita mihika and vandu was chatting.

Mihika: akka.... Vese i heard that ravan kumar saved you from goons....

She asked in teasing tone while winking at vandu.

Ishita: haan.....aur unhe chot chot bhi ayi thi(yeah...and he got hurt too)

She said absent mind then vandu spoke nudging her

Vandu: unhe and all.... Wow... Ishu... Kbse ravan kumaar ko itni izat dene lagi tu...

Ishita angrily: oh... Please akka... Ab aap dono phir se shuru ho gye.... Mujhe ni krni baat ...m sleepy..... Go to your room....

Though ishita made angry face but deep down she was liking their teasing. Mihika side hugged her and spoke making cute face asked for apologizy

Vandu: ishu... Acha sorry.... Now please sit...

Mihika: by the way... Agar mai akka ki jagha hoti toh mai toh flat ho jati uss ravan kumar pr...

Ishita: acha.... Is that so.... And please stop calling him ravan kumar.... He has a name...

Vandu: are you for real ishu.... U yourself called him ravan kumar....that's why we are calling him by that name.....

Hearing vandu ishita bite hur tongue and tried to divert the topic. But mihika being mihika how can she let it go easily

Mihika: u know what vandu akka.... M feeling that someone started liking someone.... Do you know that someone....

Vandu while faking confusion: who mihika.....m not getting any thing... Please explain briefly

She spoke with wink at mihika.

Ishita understood their plan and start running behind mihika for teasing her again.

After 2 or 3 minutes ishita speak with frustration : akka... Mihiku... Now don't want to hear your blabbering... Now get up and go to sleep...

Vandu: haan....ab toh humein bhejogi bahar... Tumhe apne unse bhi toh dream mein milna hai....

Ishita with pout on her face: what akkaa.... Please stop it and go....

Vandu: ok ok... Jaa rhe hai.... Akhir mujhe toh apne unke pass jana hai naa....

Mihika laughed hearing her and both went out towards their room leaving ishita.

In morning at bhalla house all were having breakfast. Toshiji while munching her food.

Toshiji(st): raman. Se baat kru ishita ki pic ke bare mein.... Puch hi leti hu... Pta nahi phir kb Time mile...nhi nhi abhi nhi akele mein puchna thik rhega...haan yeh thik hai aaj sham ko puchungi....

Romi: bhai..... Apko pta hai shagun delhi mein hai...vo puch rhi thi apko

Raman: yeah i know.... She called me.....

Rinki: bhai vo itni chipku hai apko irritation nhi hota...

Raman while laughing: meri toh yaar childhood friend isliye mujhe toh jhelna pdta hai....

Hearing him all started laughing afyer a while Raman get up from his seat saying that am Done and was about to go suddenly shagun appeared in bhalla house and called raman in full excitement.

She came running towards Raman and hug him. Raman also hugged her back.

Raman: kb ayi shagun tum....

Shagun: kl.... Don't you remember i called you yesterday....

Raman: yeah.... But i thought u are at your place in UK.

Shagun: yeah ...i came just to meet you all....are you going somewhere....

Raman: Yeah.... Office...

Shagun: mai bhi chlu.... Please i also want to see your office raman...

Raman looked at his father for permission. He gave his nod.

Raman: ok.... Mai abhi ata hu apna laptop lekr...

Toshiji: shagun puttar aja nashta krle....

Shagun: nhi aunty ji mai diet pr hu itna oily food nhi kha sakti.... Phir kbhi kahungi....

Mean while Raman came downstairs taking hus files and laptop bag in his hand. Both shagun and raman went out towards his car. Shagun sit in front beside Raman. Raman kept his laptop and file at back seat when one file draw his attention. He picked it up and checked it and found it was ishita's file. Shagun adked raman about the same file.

Raman: meri partner ki hai....

Shagun: wow... Tumne apne liye partner bhi dhund li.... Mujhe bhi milwao yaar....kesi hai dikhne mein beautiful hai naa....

Raman( meekly only audible to him) : boht...... esa kuch nahi business partner hai....or yeh file shyad vo bhul gyi kl...

Shagun: toh ab kya kroge tum iss file ka....

Raman: mai usse dedunga baad mein..... Vese toh uska ghr radte mein hi chlo abhi de deta hu.... Chlo tumhe bhi milva deta hu....

Soon they drove towards iyer house Which was in way to their office.

Precap: jealous ishita from shagun.

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