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Posted: 6 years ago

Superb update

Ishita told mihika raman got injured while saving her mihika was praising raman ishita was smiling mihika waa teasing ishita she was blushing ishita was having battle between her heart and mind she was concerned for raman ishra kiss was nice their pov was nice aww ishitas jealousy was cute ishita got allergy of mushroom loved ramans panick and concern for ishita

Pls update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Omg awesome update dear ishra falling for each other can't wait for next part😍❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Very nice update plz continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ananyaguptha

Nice update enjoyed reading pls continue soon eagerly waiting

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hlo guys how are u all.... I hope you all are doing well. So today i m back with next update hope u all like it and please leave your response as comment. I think u all are getting bored of my this story.... If u guys not liking it then i m thinking i should quit writing.... Next update will be depend on your response.

Part 8.....


Doctor left from there then raman sat near her staring her intently. He called her softly


Raman: ishita!...ishita get up ...


Ishita stir in her sleep and slept again. Raman called her again, she opened her eyes lazily and found raman calling out for her.


Raman: ishita get up.... Get up and take ur medicine. He said making her sat on bed, he adjusted pillows behind her and her sit comfortably on bed. Ahe gave her medicine and started to apply ointment on her rashes. He was applying the ointment on her face with full sincerity and care. Ishita was staring at him without blinking her eyes, she could see the care and concern for her in his eyes. She thought to herself


Ishita: who is real Raman bhalla.... The one who always behave rude with me and the one who is sitting in front of me all concerned for me. Don't know whom should I believe.....i know he hates me then why he is so concerned for me if his hate like this then how would be his love.....


She was staring at him without blinking her eyes on the other hand raman was all busy in applying ointment on her. Till now He reached on her neck, he was hesitant to do it further he looked at her and saw her lost he called her


Raman: ishita....will u be able to apply ointment on yourself or not


Ishita trance broke by his voice she raised her eyebrows and without any knowledge what he has just asked she said no hearing her raman started applying ointment on her neck also. Feeling his touch she closed her eyes as she felt shiver ran down her spine, it was new feeling and sensation which she was feeling with his touches, she suddenly opened her eyes feeling his hand going downward she spoke immediately


Ishita: stop !....


Raman halted at his task when he heard her and ask: what happened...


Ishita: leave it now raman..... Thanks for ur help


Raman hand over the ointment to her and spoke : are u sure......


Ishita: yes.... Thank u.... She said looking downward


Raman:ok....take care.... Vese toh mene dvai lga di hai tumhare rashes pe but fir bhi agar kuch reh gaye ho toh lga lena subha tak yeh rashes kam ho jayenge....


Saying so he left her room, seeing his behaviour ishita thought to her self


Ishita(st): itna bhi bura nahi hai ravan kumaar..... She smiled at her thought after applying ointment on her rashes she slept again.


On the other side raman also drift into deep slumber. Next day sun rays peep from curtains into ishita's room she stirred in her sleep, opened her eyes lazily. Her gaze fell on her own reflection in mirror. She got up from bed with jerk, she rushed to the mirror and touched her face and got happy. She spoke to herself


Ishita: wow.... My rashes gone.... Oh my god i thought i wouldn't be able to attend the meeting. Thanks to raman he help....


She was saying so , when she stopped in mid remembering raman's care. She looked at watch and realized that she was getting late for meeting she went to washroom. meanwhile raman was getting ready for meeting, he was brushing his hairs when he received a call, he picked it up and saw it was mihir's call and spoke


Raman : hello.... Mihir..


Mihir: hi bhai.... How are you...


Raman: good.....do you have some work with me


Mihir: no bhai just to remind that today u have meeting ....


Raman cut him off in mid and spoke: u know mihir... I know i have meeting... I m all ready for the meeting.....


Mihir: bhai ishita ji kesi hai.....


Raman: i hope she gets well....


Mihir: bhai i hope Mean....is something wrong with her...


Raman: mihir right now i m going late... I talk to you later....


Raman cut the call and spoke to himself: oh... Shit i should check on ishita....i hope she is fine till now


Saying so he went towards her and knocked on her room. She was taking forever to open the door raman was getting frustrated with that and muttered to himself


Raman: this girl....he stopped in mid


suddenly door got hope, raman got stiff at his place seeing the view in front of him. He was staring at ishita openly who was standing there freshly showered with wet hair, she was looking angelic in her without makeup avtar. Ishita snapped her hand in front of Raman which brings him out from his trance, but suddenly he made straight face fearing being caught by her. Ishita called him inside and spoke


Ishita: raman aap.... Apko kuch kaam tha kya...kuch discuss krna hai....


Raman: huh... Ammmm... I came here... Just to see you...


Ishita raised her eyebrows in shock: what.... What u said... U came here to see me...


Raman: vo... Actually.... U were not well last night so...


Ishita: oh.... Yeah thanks for your concern... Don't know where i got allergy...


Raman: u are allergic to mushroom... There was mushroom in your sambhar....


Ishita: even i also didn't aware of it.... Thanks again....


Raman: ahmm.... Meeting is by 9 o clock so be ready till then ok...saying so he went from there leaving all confused ishita she spoke to herself


Ishita: ajeeb adami hai.... First he said he hates me or fir care bhi krta hai....mai smjh nahi paa rhi hu isse...may be its his another plan against me...kya pta apne sweet and caring nature ke piche koi plan chipa ho... I shouldn't believe him so easily. Saying so started getting ready for meeting after half an hour she got ready in her formal wear which were perfectly fitted on her body showing her perfect curves.


At 10 o clock they left for their meeting. Raman was driving the car while ishita was sitting beside him she was checking the presentation for the last time when Raman asked her.


Raman: is everything fine.... I mean a presentation and all


Ishita hummed in response while closing the laptop and spoke: i hope sb thik ho...


Raman smiled sarcastically hearing her and spoke: are you scared....


Ishita: no.... I mean thodi si...actually I never had gone for outdoor meeting without my appa...


Raman: u should not be worrying about it as u are with The RKB....


Ishita rolled her eyes and muttered : ussi ka toh darr hai( thats is more scary than meeting)


Raman: i heard what u said.... U know what Ms. Ishita iyer u very well know that how i m about my business.... So u shouldn't be worried about that


Ishita: oh please raman.... I know u very well and yes i know u have lost your one deal to me...


Raman: which one.... I m not remembered anyone.....


Ishita: i think u are forgetting that hun jis project pr kaam kr rhe hai vo aap mujhse haar gye the....


Raman smirked hearing her and spoke: how... Mujhe lgta hai tum bhool rhi ho ki yeh project mera bhi utna hi hai jitna tumhara.... And yes u are saying right u lost one deal to me .... Guess what


Ishita scrunched her eyebrows confusingly seeing her raman smirked at her and spoke naughtily : u were saying that u don't like me and my touches ....


Hearing him ishita cut him in mid and spoke sarcastically: vo toh mujhe abhi bhi pasand nahi hai isme deal khone wali kya baat hai....


Suddenly raman stop the car with jerk on side of the road, ishita asked him why did he stop the car


Raman spoke while coming near her ear and caressing her ear with his finger: don't u want to know which deal i m talking about....


Feeling his soft touch ishita turned her face towards window and closed her eyes seeing her reaction raman smirked victoriously and spoke: mujhe lgata hai tumne apne dil ki deal with haar gyi ho mujhe....


He said huskily in her ear. Hearing him she opened her eyes wide and turned her face towards him. His face was too close to her she spoke : esa kuch nahi hai.... Got that


Raman leaning towards her: is that so....then why did u kiss me yesterday....


Blush crept on her cheeks hearing him. She lowered her eyes and spoke meekly : i didn't but u....


Seeing her raman smiled: acha.... It was me who kissed u... Then u should not respond to that kiss. By the way why did u let me touch you.


Ishita remembered their kiss and bite her lips, she was feeling goosebumps when raman spoke huskily: u know what ishita....u r falling for me...


Ishita made straight face and spoke pushing him away: nope... U r.... I mean its not possible.... Mai aur aap jese insaan se pyaar ho hi nahi sakta...


Raman sighed softly and spoke while ignited the engine of the car: agar esa nahi hai toh tum mujhe 'tum' se aap kyu kehne lagi.... U started giving respect to me.... And u didn't even give me may answer why did u let me kiss u....


Ishita turned her and spoke: i won't give any answers of your stupid questions..... And please ab chalo we are getting late for the meeting....


Raman: one day you will answer my this question..... Just wait and watch


Ishita: that one day won't come ever.....


Raman: lets see....


Soon they reached at their destination and entered in conference room raman and ishita


Mr.bhatia: come come RKB amd Miss. Iyer..... I had been waiting for you two....


Raman shaked hand with him and spoke taking his seat : sorry for tge delay mr. Bhatia......


Ishita also shaked hand and took her seat beside raman.


Mr. Bhatia: would you like to have something....


ishra(unison): no.... No thanks... Saying so they looked at each other and shared a small eyelock


Mr. Bhatia: ok so shall we start....


Raman: ji...


They started their meeting which was two hours long. Meeting was good soon ishra took leave from there and was coming back to their hotel when Raman received a call


Raman:hello...


Mr. Bhatia: mr. Bhalla...

Actually there is party at my place in evening..... It would be great if u two come to the party.... I know its a short note.... Please i would love to see you two there


Raman: sure... Mr. Bahtia.... We will come...


Mr. Bhatia: thaknks mr. Bhalla please inform Miss. Ishita iyer also...


Raman: ok.... Saying so he hung the call and spoke


Raman: ishita......mr. bhatia ka call tha.... Unke yahaan party hai shaam ko hum dono ko jana hai vhaan....


Ishita: ab yeh kya naya drama hai.....


Raman: i also don't want to go with you but alas i have to....


Ishita: i was talking about party not u....


Raman raised his eyes and spoke: acha.... So u don't have any problem coming with me....


Ishita: i didn't mean that also....


Raman: vese... I told u naa...ki tumhe drne ki koi jarurat nahi as i m with u


Ishita: ese toh mai bhi bol sakti hu....


Raman: but u don't have that aura naa...


Ishita: which aura....


Raman: the charm and all


Ishita started laughing hearing him seeing her raman spoke getting confused by her: what so funny in it....


Ishita: nothing....


Raman: madrassan stop laughing... Otherwise....


Ishita spoke still laughing: otherwise what...


Raman: otherwise i know better way to make your mouth shut...


Ishita stopped laughing, seeing her Raman smirked at her and spoke: ab bhi toh chup hui naa... Ab btao why were you laughing


Ishita spoke smilingly: u told that u have some aura which is your charm.... Kya apka charm mens per bhi chalta hai....


Raman stop the car with jerk and spoke with utter shock: what!.... What did you say..... For your kind information i m straight guy....by the way tumhe toh mujhpe shaq nahi hona chaiye as i showed u many times how much staright man i m....


He said coming towards her, ishita widened her eyes and spoke pointing finger towards him: don't come near me raman..... I m warning you......


Raman: why baby....i m just clearing your doubt naa....this is the only way to prove myself as a real man....


Ishita spoke with shaky voice: i don't want to know..... I don't... I don't have any doubts....


Raman: why ....are u afraid of me....


Ishita gulped the lump down in her throat abd spoke closing her eyes tightly: no..... I was...


Raman smiled sarcastically and again went back to his seat and said: u know what ishita....sometimes i felt like u r sacred of me.....


Ishita opened her eyes to looked at him and sighed in relief and spoke : esa kuch nahi....


Like this soon they were at hotel and went to their respective rooms. Ishita came out from washroom after freshening up when her phone buzzed she picked it up and spoke


Ishita: hello....


Vandita: kya... Ishu vhaan raman ke sath jaker hume bhool hi gyi... She said in teasing tone

(what is this ishu.... U forgot us afyer getting Raman)


Ishita smilingly: what akka.... U started again...


Vandu: did u both conclude your cold war or not


Ishita: what cold war akka.... Or vese bhi he started it First not me....


Vandu: ok ok... Let stop it now u tell me... Mihika was saying that some people attacked on u.....


Ishita: yeah.... Akka... But raman saved me but in all that he got little injured


Vandu: oh my god ishu.... Is he fine and u didn't even bother to inform me... U are very bad....


Ishita: its not like that akka... Actually i didn't want u to trouble akka...


Vandu: kya ishu... Isme kya preshani hai.... If something happened with you then....


Ishita: nothing happened na akka.... Now please stop it .....and akka please don't tell it to amma and appa.....


Vandu: i know it ishu.... Acha ok byee... I will talk to you later and take care ok.... Byeee..



Ishita: byeee akka...


Saying so she hung up the phone thought to have rest for some time.


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Posted: 6 years ago

Waiting fr the nxt update/part

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update dear totally in love with this story n we r not bored of this story please continue writing excited for next part please update soon please

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishradivanfan

Amazing update dear totally in love with this story n we r not bored of this story please continue writing excited for next part please update soon please

Thanks dear..... Love you

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome superb update

Totally loved it

Cute ishra fight

Eagerly waiting for next part

Plzzzzzzz. continue soon dear

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ishrarudi06

Awesome superb update

Totally loved it

Cute ishra fight

Eagerly waiting for next part

Plzzzzzzz. continue soon dear

Thanks dear..... Thanks alot

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