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Posted: 6 years ago
#91
Excellent updates Desr...
Read all in a go...
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
#92
Fantastic Chapter

Raman and Ishita leave for their trip and Ishita decides to discuss
about the project when Raman eyes glances her and at the same time
a speeding truck was driving towards them
Raman manages avoid any accident and both he and Ishita leaves again
yes he was concerned about her safety and I do think this comes naturally
while at the Dhabba Raman was getting furious that other men were lusting over
Ishita and yes he did act protective and possessive too
and I think he is slowly falling for her
but he believes that he was only helping her

will be waiting for the next chapter when you are ready
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it n pls me from next time pls
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fabulous update dear

I loved this raman so much

More caring possessive and protective towards loved ones is his original character

Hope soon ishu understand his real character

Thank god nothing happened to ishra from accident and goon fight

He himself confuse about his behavior towards ishu

I think he try to say to her she is raman bhalla girlfriend but call disturb it

I loved it totally dear

Thanks you so much for English subtitles dear

Update as soon as possible dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fabulous update dear

I loved this raman so much

More caring possessive and protective towards loved ones is his original character

Hope soon ishu understand his real character

Thank god nothing happened to ishra from accident and goon fight

He himself confuse about his behavior towards ishu

I think he try to say to her she is raman bhalla girlfriend but call disturb it

I loved it totally dear

Thanks you so much for English subtitles dear

Update as soon as possible dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hlo guys...... How are you all....today i m back with update, and please forgive me for late update its all happened because of forum updation which i think still going on....

Part 7

After a while his order arrived and he got busy in sipping coffee. Mean while in ishita's room.she was taking over phone with mihika


Ishita: yeah....Raman is injured...


Mihika: My god akka..... U should be careful about ur clothes next time....if raman wouldn't safeguard you from that goons.... Thaen it would have been dangerous.....god knows what would have happened....


Ishita: yup mihiku... I think i should thank him for helping me....


Mihika: or nhi toh kya akka.... Ab itna bolna tih bnta hai.... Akhir bnde ne apni jaan lagadi apko bchane mein....i think akka .....he is changing should say he was like this only but we misunderstood him....


Ishita while thinking: hmmm.... Don't know mihiku, I think i need some time to understand him yet...


Mihika: akka ek baat puchoo....


Ishita: haan puch..


Mihika: akka did he misbehaved with u....


Listening mihika, ishita get flashes of today's happening and a sweet smile crept on her lips and unknowingly she said no to mihika.


Mihika: its good akka.... Mujhe tension ho rhi thi ki khin vo raavan kumar apko tang na kre...


Ishita: mihiku..... Tumhe unko ravan kumar nahi bolna chahiye.....


Mihika(teasingly):kyu mai kyu nhi bol sakti....only u have right on him...


Ishita Blushed a little on mihika's remark. And spoke composing herself


Ishita: its nothing like that..... Its just he helped me so that why....


Mihika: ok akka.... Mihir is calling... I will talk to u later and yes.... Take care of yourself and his also

Ishita said yes then the hung the call. And thought to check on raman if he is fine or not.


Ishita(st):But why i being so concerned for him. So what ishu...he helped you with that goons moreover he is injured because of you only.....u should go and thank him.... Yaa i should thank him for his help....


Thinking so she went to meet him in his room. She knocked the door of his room but he was taking forever to open it. She was waiting for him and thought yeh raman door kyu nhi open kr rhe(why he is not opening the door).... Is he alright..... Thinking so she again knocked. after a second raman opened the door and saw ishita was standing there all fresh and was staring at him without blinking her eyes. Raman was standing in front of her with bare body only a towel is wrapped around his slim waist. She was ogling at his chisled body, his six pack abs. Raman snapped his hand in front of her which broke her trance. She composed herself and made a straight face. He called her inside and asked picking the ointment from the table


Raman: do u have any work with me....

He spoke trying to apply the ointment on his back.


Ishita: no... Actually i came here just ask ur well-being.....


Raman was amused by her and spoke sarcastically: u acme here to see me... Why.....since when u started getting concerned for me...


Ishita fumbling with words and spoke calmly: u helped me.... in all this u got hurt so i thought to see u and.... And


Raman raised his one eyebrow: and...


Ishita: and to thank you....


Raman sarcastically: oh so u r here just to say thanks to me....he said trying hard to apply ointment on his back. Seeing him she thought to help him and asked


Ishita: Raman... Shall i help you....


Raman: no... I will manage.....he said while trying hard to apply ointment but it was not happening. Seeing this Ishita snatched the ointment from him and asked him to lay down. Raman got furious seeing her courage. And spoke glaring her.


Raman: give it back now.....


Ishita: no.... I will not... U just lay down on bed i will apply it on ur back....


Raman pulled her towards himself she landed on his chest. Her hands were on his chest and his one hand was on her waist and other one clutched her hair from back in fist. Ishita moaned in pain and spoke


Ishita: leave me... What are you doing raman...


Raman: i should ask u that... Why are u doing this drama in front of me....


Ishita: what drama.... I m not doing any drama....


Raman: oh is that so.... Then what is this u r doing right now by getting concerned for me....


Ishita: i came here just to see u.... I was genuinely concerned for u....she said with moist eyes. Their faces were very close to the other. He saw deep in her eyes, he can see the sincerity and genuine concern for him. they shared beautiful eye lock which broke by ishita's tear which is about to fall down from her eyes. Seeing her in tears he felt a pang in his heart. He wiped her tear and unknowingly drop a feathery kiss on her temple. Feeling his touch she closed her eyes. He saw her and smiled at her seeing her reaction then he kissed her eyes. He caressed her shivering lips with his thumb. Feeling his touch a shiver ran down her spine. he brought his lips towards hers they were lost in the movement. His lips met with her, he started chewing her lips slowly unknown to herself she also started responding to him. She wrapped her arms around his neck and started caressing his scalps digging her nails. But soon the gentle kiss turned into passionate one. He was kissing her hungrily. He bites on her lower lip to get an entry in her mouth. She hissed in pain and opened her mouth, he immediately entered her mouth and relished her flavor. They kissed for long time and parted when their lungs gave up. Raman broke the kiss and joined his forehead with hers. She still has closed eyes and was panting heavily, her lips were swollen. after a while she realised what has transpired between them, she opened her eyes with jerk and saw him very close to her. She pushed him back. And ran away from his room. He was standing on his spot all surprised seeing her reaction and thought


Raman(st): "what happened to her, oh god what i have done yaar....Raman u kissed her....U kissed her.....What is happening to you....Can't u control yourself, what had happened to you.....U need to understand that she is your rival, and moreover u forgot what she has done with u...She slapped u...U have to make her cry....But what are u doing falling for her.....One second what i said...Falling for her...Nope...Thats not possible...U couldn't do this...she hates you buddy....She hates u from the core of her heart....if she hates me then she should have pushed me...It means She was also enjoying the kiss..."he smiled on his thought that She had also enjoyed their kiss.


On the other hand, ishita closed her room's door with thud sound. She leaned back on door after closing it. She was panting heavily and closed her eyes just to calm her down. In hwr closed eyes she was getting flashes of her and Raman's kiss. She still was feeling his lips on hers and touched her swollen lips.she opened her eyes wide realising the reality and rushed towards mirror only to see her blushing face and swollen lips. She touched her lips and thought to herself


Ishita(h):what is happening to me....Why didn't I pushed him when he was kissing me.


Ishita(M):what the hell is this.... He kissed me again and i didn't even pushed him away....Rather i responded to him.....Cheee.. Ishu....U have also kissed him back.... Remember that he is Raman kumar bhalla.. The bloody Raman kumar bhalla....He is using u for his needs....He wants to show u low...

Ishita(H): But i had seen sincerity and care in his eyes for me.... Does he love me..


Ishita(M): no...he can't....He hates u.


Ishita(H):But i had felt his care for me..I think he is changing


Ishita(M): For whom.... Do u have any answer... For whom he will change .... He can't change..


Ishita(H): But i m not feeling dirty by his touch....


Ishita(M):That's means u are falling for him or attracted to him,


Ishita(H):no im not


Ishita(M): Yes my dear u are falling for him.


Her chain of thought broke by her cell phone's ring. She turned and picked up her phone.


Ishita: hello!


Mrs.Iyer: hello! Ishu...have u reached safely...


Ishita: yes amma.... I and Raman reached safely....


Mrs.iyer: have u fought with raman..


Ishita make irritated face and spoke : no amma... Why will i fight with him....


Mrs. Iyer: aree i m just asking you kanna... Acha... Khana vgrea time se kha lena.... Or apna dhyan rakhna ok....


Ishita: yes amma.... I will do... Love u bye...


Mrs. Iyer: love u kanna...


They hung up the phone. After this ishita thought to have some rest. At evening she opened her eyes and saw time in her watch it was 7:30pm. She got up and went to washroom for freshening up. She came out after 15 minutes, she was feeling hungry. She was about to order when suddenly her phone buzzed it was raman's call. She thought why he is calling her, she picked up her phone and spoke


Ishita:hello....


Raman didn't spoke and thought why he is asking her she again spoke


Ishita: hello Raman...


Hearing his name his trance broke he spoke: have u had ur dinner....


Ishita: no... Not yet...was about to order


Raman: come to the restaurant .....i m waiting


Ishita: ok i m coming....


They hung the call.


Ishita: "why did i agree to him.... I think i shouldn't go there..... But i said yes to him... So what.... Mai itni kamzor nahi hu.... I can face ravan kumar infinite time.... Yes I will go there....." she was encouraging herself by saying so but deep down she was nervous to face him. On the mere thought of meeting him her cheeks turned beet root red and was feeling goosebumps.


In Raman's room he spoke irritatedly to himself : why im so concerned about her yaar.....


He sighed in frustration and went out of his room. Ishita got ready in simple red and white colour suit and went out towards restaurant. She reached there and saw Raman was sitting there fully engrossed in his mobile, she thought that how he is so normal after their kiss. she went to him and sat opposite to him on same table. Feeling some one presence he raised his eyes only to saw ishita's innocent face, feeling his gaze ishita downcasted her eyes. She was feeling strange sensation with his gaze on her, she bite her lower lip and thought to broke the silence and spoke


Ishita: raman apne order kiya....


Raman: huh... No nhi... Abhi nhi...


Ishita: toh krein order...


He hummed softly and called out for waiter, waiter came and asked them for their order.

Raman passes the menu to ishita.


Ishita: iddli with sambhar and coconut chuttny also. Saying so she passed menu to Raman.

Raman : butter chicken,palak panner with rice..

Hearing non veg she made face and spoke


Ishita: Raman!.... i can't eat non veg....


Raman: so what.. Who told you to eat non veg...


Ishita: then why did u order it....


Raman:for me ..


Ishita made a straight face and was cursing him under her breath for ordering non veg. Raman was busy in his phone. When her eyes sight fell on group of girls who were sitting on the right side of their table. They were smiling and gossiping seeing Raman. At first she didn't take them seriously though she was curious to know what they were talking. Soon she didn't control herself out of curiosity and thought to hear them. She excused herself making an excuse of using restroom and went towards them. When she reached near to them,she heard one of them was taking about raman


Girl1: aaye haaye... Yaar kitna hot property bethi hai hmare samne....


Girl2: haan yaar...mai toh uski looks pe hi maar gyi.... Kash meri usse shadi ho jaye....


Girl3: mera mann toh kr rha hai ki usse jake ek tight kiss kr du....


Hearing them ishita opened her mouth in o shape and curled her fist in anger.


Girl1: hey.... He is mine ok....don't eye on him


Girl2: aree aree... Hold on your horses baby.... What if he is married then...


Girl1: how do you know....


Girl2: didn't you saw a girl was sitting with him.... I think she is his girlfriend or wife....


Girl1: mene toh nhi dekh kisi ladki ko....


Girl2: pr mene dekha hai dekhna abhi yahin khin hogi.....

Saying so, they started searching for ishita. Ishita immediately went from there and settled on her seat. She was observing their expressions from the corner of the eyes. Girls saw her and started whispering something in each others ears. She smirked on them victoriously and thought to herself


Ishita(st): huh.... Badi ayi raman ko kiss krne wali.....kesi non sense ladkiyaan hoti hain...kisi ko bhi kiss krne ko shadi krne ko tyaar ho jati hai....they should know ....ek minute what is happening to me... M i getting jealous.... But why..... How could you ishita..... Are u attracted to him.... U can't do this.... He is raavan kumar... He hates you... Just stop yourself otherwise you will fall in a deep pit.


She made dissapointed face and looked at him. Feeling someone's gaze raman raised his eyes and found ishita was looking at him. but suddenly she turned her face fearing being caught by him. Mean while their order has arrived and they started eating their meal. Raman and ishita both were stealing glances while eating. After a while ishita started feeling restless while eating her food but she didn't spoke a word, and continue eating Raman was observing her and could sense her restlessness but thought to be remain silent. Suddenly she started coughing heavily and was scratching her neck. Her face turned all red due to cough ans some rashes also come on her face too. Seeing her condition raman asked her getting concerned for her


Raman: ishita! Are u ok...


She couldn't reply back to him because of cough. He forward a glass of water which she gulped down immediately.


Raman: ishita... What happen ...tell me.... Are u all right....ishita!


He again called her but she wasn't in the condition to reply back. He got up from his seat and take her from there towards her room. meanwhile he asked manager for doctor. He made her lay down on bed and was caressing her hairs soft . He spoke calming her down.


Raman:bs ishita.... Some more time.... Doctor is coming....


Ishita spoke with great difficulty: pani....


Raman made her drink water. After a while doctor came, Raman ran towards doctor and spoke restlessly


Raman: doctor... Doctor please check her...... She started coughing heavily while eating food.....

Doctor started checking her and asked ramam


Doc: who are you to patient....


Raman: i m raman bhalla.... She is... She is....

Raman was fumbling with words as he was in dilemma what to say to doctor about who is he to her.


Doctor: r u her husband..... What she ate....


Raman: idlli and sambhar with coconut chuttny....


Doctor: bring it....


Raman asked manager to bring their food. After some time Manager came back with their food. doctor checked it and spoke


Doctor: mr. Bhalla isme mushroom hai.... Apki wife ko mushroom se allergy hai.... Inhone mushroom khaya...i m prescribing medicine and ointment please give her medicine on time and apply this ointment on her rashes she will be fine soon...don't worry.... Take care of her


Raman: thanks doctor....


Doctor left from there then raman sat near her staring her intently.


Ps: Please do comment and like if u people liked it and please ignore grammatical mistakes and give your valuable response. I won't be able to pm to anybody so sorry for that.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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I have updated next part.. .have a look.. .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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How did mushroom came to Ishita order.


Nice going on..s update soon...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome superb update

Eagerly waiting for next part

Plzzzzzzz update soon dear

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update enjoyed reading pls continue soon eagerly waiting

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