Mohabbat....part 16....24/10 - Page 14

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How two business rivals are falling for each other.

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Raman: mai usse dedunga baad mein..... Vese toh uska ghr radte mein hi chlo abhi de deta hu.... Chlo tumhe bhi milva deta hu....

Soon they drove towards iyer house Which was in way to their office. At iyer all were gathered for breakfast except ishita as she was still in her room at the same time Raman appeared with shagun. Seeing raman mrs. Iyer chirped in happiness. She welcome him and ask him to have breakfast with them but he denied politely stating that he already had his breakfast. But she insisted him to have something raman gave in as he didn't want to make her sad as she always welcomed him so nicely. He only asked her for coffee.

Soon mrs.iyer appeared with two coffees for raman and shagun. Mrs. Iyer was looking at shagun keenly observing her. She asked raman about shagun.

Raman: oh i forgot aunty actually this is shagun.... My childhood friend .... Actually i came here to hand over this file to ishita, I think she had forgotten it in my car yesterday and shagun also wanted to meet ishita....

He was saying when ishita showed up coming downstairs. Ishita came to them mrs. Iyer tell her about that raman has some work with her. She saw her file on table and asked about it from her mother.

Raman: actually ishita....mai yeh file hi dene aya hu Tum bhool gyi thi meri car mein...

Ishita: sirf file ke liye mere ghar aa gye... Kisi ke hath mein bhijwa dete

Raman smiled and looked at shagun and spoke: actually shagun wants to meet you so thats why we came here.... Let me introduce you to shagun.... Ishita this is shagun and shagun this is ishita my business partner whom you were desperate to meet....

Shagun forward her hand to ishita for handshake ishita looked at her from top to bottom and realized that she was indeed beautiful and modern. She smiled and shakes her hand with shagun.

Ishita: shagun please have breakfast with us....

Shagun: oh no thanks ishita.... Actually i already had my breakfast.....

Ishita: ok.... Toh aap mujhse milne ayi hain....

Shagun: yeah... Actually raman ki life mein kon hai kon nahi iske baare mein puri knowledge rakhti hoo, he is very special to me..... Haina raman....

Raman smiled and nodded. Ishita thought to herself.

Ishita(st): toh yeh hai raman ki girlfriend shagun.......Raman is so cheap how can he do this to me.... Leave me how can he do this to shagun.... Who loves him... And why did he bring her here. By the way she is his girlfriend then also she should maintain some distance from Raman in front of other people. How was she clinging to him aur ek eh hain how is he smiling looking at her.

She sighed softly while staring at raman and shagun. After a while Raman get up from his seat asked for leave saying he is getting late for office. Ishita bid adieu to them.

In way to raman's office shagun spoke

Sahgun: raman.....your business partner is very beautiful girl haan i thought koi middle aged woman hogi but yaar she was hot..

Raman sarcastically : really shagun.. .are u for real u r praising some other girl....

Shagun with annoyed face: don't try to change the topic.... Vese tumhara uske sath chaker toh nji chl rha na....

Raman: agar hoga bhi toh kya mai tumhe btayunga...

Shagun: kyu nhi btayoge... I m your childhood friend.... Tum mujhse kuch nhi chupa sakte...

Raman: on serious note shagun... Tumhe essa kyu lga ki mera aur ishita ka chaker chal rha hai...

Shagun: The way she was staring at us.... I felt like she was jealous seeing me with u...

Raman: acha esa lga tumhe....vese mera aur uska chaker nhi hai....

Shagun: toh krlo....kya problem hai she is beautiful smart.....

Raman: vo itni asani se patne wali nhi hai shagun..... She is tough nut to crack....

He spoke smiling.

Shagun: ok..... But try toh kr sakte ho naa.....acha ek baar try krke dekho......

Like this they reached at their destination.

Ishita sat for breakfast at dinning table . All were silently soon mihika broke the silence ahr spoke while chewing her food.

Mihika: vese akka.....shagun is very beautiful na.....

Ishita clenched her jaw in irritation and said: haan hai toh mai kya kru..... ( yes.... Then what should I do)

Vandu and mihika looked at each other and again looked at ishita who was eating her breakfast fastly. Mihika again spoke

Mihika: i was saying just like that akka..... Why are you getting angry.... And please stop eating fastly....

Ishita looked at her and spoke: why i will get angry mihiku...... Mujhe shagun se kya...

Vandu: but ishu....mihiku didn't mention that you're angry with shagun......

Ishita choked on her food mrs. Iyer interrupt them caressing ishita's back and give her water.

Mrs. Iyer: enough mihiku vandu.... Don't talk much while eating....

Mihika(st): i think our plan has worked..... It seems like akka was jealous of shagun being his girlfriend.....is it True that akka has developed feelings for Raman bhai.... I need to tell this to mihir....

Soon ishita and mr. Iyer left for office and mihika also left for her College.

It was lunch time in bhalla industries mihir and raman was having their lunch when mihir got a calla from mihika he excused himself and attended the call

Mihir: hello....

Mihika: hello... Mihir mujhe tumhe kuch important btana hai kya hum sham ko mere college wale cafe mein mil saktein hain 6 p clock....

Mihir: whta happened mihiku.... Is everything fine..

Mihir: yeah yeah..... Its about akka and your raman bhai....

Mihir: ok aa jaunga.....byee

Saying so they cut the call. At evening in cafe. Mihika was already present there and was waiting for mihir. Soon mihir also reached.and spoke while taking his seat.

Mihir: hyee mihika.....

Mihika: hyee....kuch loge....

Mihir: yes..... Coffee....

Mihika: mihir.... I want to talk to you something about akka and your brother....

Mihir: yes... Bolo....

Mihika narrated all the morning incident to mihir. And spoke sighing softly

Mihika: u know what mihir.... I think our plan has worked..... Its good naa.....

She said chirping in excitement.

Mihir: ab toh mujhe bhi ese hi lg rha hai.... But mihiku... Bhai didn't told me anything....

Mihika rolled her eyes feeling irritated: mihir.....u know what sometimes i feel like i have fallen in love with such dumbo....mene ese kb kha ki akka ne mujhe batya hai kuch....i had observed her by my own. Smjhe buddhu...

Mihir: it Means i need to observe bhai's actions....

Mihika: haan yeh sahi hai....tum apne bhai ke actions ko observe kro regarding akka.... Then we will think what should we do next....

Mihir: ok... Fine...

Saying so they soon left from there.

At night in bhalla house Raman was working in his room after dinner. Toshiji entered the room and sit beside him on couch. She asked him caressing his hairs.

Toshiji: raman puttar.....kesa rha tera aur ishita ka trip...

Raman: acha tha maa....deal ho gyi.... Aap btao apko koi kaam tha....

He asked while shutting his laptop down.

Toshiji: vo puttar.....mai tere se ishita ke bare mein baat krni thi...

Raman scrunched his eyes and looked towards his Mother with confusion.

Raman: ishita ke baare mein kyu...

Toshiji: tujhe yaad hai puttar... Maine tujhe ladkiyon ki pictures di thi.... Tere rishte ke liye.... Tih usme ishita ki bhi photo thi jo mene tere room mein dekhi thi alag toh mujhe lga ki tujhse baat krlu agar tujhe ishita pasand hai toh hum uske ghar tera rishta bhej dete hain.... Vese raman mujhe aur bhalla ji ko bhi ishita boht pasand hai tere liye.... Ab jaldi bta de ki teri kya rai hai...ishita ke bare mein...

Raman who was staring at his mother astonished.

Raman: maa.... U know naa.... We hate each other.....i mean business rivalry and all....

Toshiji Smiles on his answer and spoke: so what puttar.... Tum sirf business rivals ho janni dushman nahi ho ek dusre ke.... Agr ek baar tumhari shadi ho gyi ishita se to mujhe pura vishwas hai ki vo tumse pyaar krne lgegi.....fir tum dono ka rishta sirf business partner ka nhi balki husband and wife ka hoga..... Aur iss duniya mein esi koi bhi ladki nahi jo apne pati se pyaar na kre.... Aur tu toh itna khyaal rakhta hai apne family se toh shadi ke baad toh vo bhi teri family ho jayegi hain.... Tb yeh business rivalry thodi rhegi....

Dekh mujhe aur bhalla ji ko toh koi problem nahi hai ishita se..... Boht honhaar hai... Sunder ahi.... Tu dekh le agar teri haan hai toh hum baat ko agr bdha lete hain.... Bta puttar......

Raman was in two minds after hearing toshiji. Deep down he knew that he likes ishita but his ego was not letting him to accept his feelings for her. He don't want to admit it that he likes ishita. Toshiji saw him lost and called him which broke his trance

Raman: maa... I need some time..... I want to understand her more....

Toshiji: thik hai puttar..... Le le jitna time lena hai..... Chl yeh bhi acha hai tune kisi kudi(girl) ko toh smjhne ke liye time manga.... Pr jyada der na krna... Agar unhone uska rishta kisi aut se fix kr diya toh....

Raman nodded saying so toshiji left his room. He thought to himself

Raman(st): kya maa jo keh rhi thi vo sahi tha.... Ky mujhe ishita se shadi ke loye haan kr deni chahiye....nhi nhi... Eh kya soch rha hai raman tu... Tu bhul gya vo tujhse nafrat krti hai agar tune usse rishta bheja aur usne mna kr diya toh....aur kya tu khud ready hai iss rishtey ke liye....kya tere dil mein feeling hai uske liye.... Aurkya vo tujhe pasand krti hai... Inn sb swalo ke jwab dhoondne honge tujhe tbhi tu kisi conclusion pr aa payega....

Raman got irritate thinking all these he spoke to him self

Raman: lgta hai mihir se baat krni hi padegi iss bare.....

Saying so got up from couch and settled in his bed for sleep soon he was fast asleep thinking about ishita.

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Raman reached to iyer house with shagun amma welcomed him she asked about shagun he said she is his childhood friend raman asked amma to call ishita as shagun want to meet her ishita came ishitas pov was cute she was jealous mihika was teasing her shagun asked raman to make ishita his girlfriend mimika scene was nice toshiji asked raman if he likes ishita if yes than they will take his rishta for ishita raman liked ishita but his ego was stopping her he asked for time toshiji agreed

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