RoHa SS: You me and OUR world

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Posted: 6 years ago
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"You and me complete each other. You and me make a unique blend. You and me are attached with love. You me and OUR world."

-by myself

It totally differs from one person's feeling to another person's feelings. But when we overcome each other's problems, we create a different world. We create a bond of love in each other. Liking and Caring are equivalent to pure and true love. Being with each other and loving each other to the core isn't that's easy but still it's easy to try.

Hello friends, with this note, I would like to start my story You me and OUR world that is not a dark story but a light hearted story. It's theme is about problems that a couple face.

Myself, Zoyah and I have a crush on writing since my childhood! I will hope you all would find my story easy to digest. Do ignore my mistakes as I may be raw in typing!☺️

Teaser 01:

"Rocky bhai, I said you that happy will never accept your love once she gets married to RV. Please stop the marriage"says Simmi with a mark on disappointment on her face.

"Simmi, I know. I can't do anything as my hands aren't free. Momsy has become so possessive that she has no sense that what kind of care is she taking of me!"confronted Rocky. His eyes were shedding drops of tears as he finds himself stupid for that moment he met Madhu

Simmi also started to cry. She knew how much pain was his brother getting just because he was not able to confess his love to happy as well as he can't leave his mom for his love.

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Happy gets ready. She wears a red lehena gifted by RV, her fiancee. She looks herself in mirror and complains to herself.

"Why happy why? Why did you agree to such a marriage where you aren't happy?... Happy you are just playing with RV's feelings and nothing else. "

Similey comes near her and watches her being upset and broken. She points out " Happy di, the holy priest is calling our for you. Let's go...The time is up."

Happy is about to go when a small mirror falls down. Happy sees her face in that broken pieces.

The End.

|Thanks for checking out|

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Posted: 6 years ago
#2

Your writing seems promising!

That's an awesome start. Teaser seems great. What what what!! RANHA GETTING MARRIED??

NO!! I don't want that..

By the way, all the best for the story!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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nice teaser plz continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awwwww I can totally picture this. Please continue.😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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That's an awesome start

Cont soon dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Waiting for the next instalment.

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