SamAina OS : Little Threats!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Here's a little better version of the thief scene from yesterday's episode. I just wanted few things to be different and thus penned them down. Hope you enjoy! Also, not proofread!




Little Threats!





Sameer sat angrily on the couch. He looked at Naina who was on bed. He was still upset and looked at her again. That's when he could see a shadow of probably a thief with a knife. He was very near to Naina and Sameer was scared. "Kya karun main?" He thought to himself. He took a deep breath to calm down. He didn't want to let the thief harm Naina at all. "Naina mujhe bhook lagi hai." He said. He just wanted to take her out of the room. "Toh maine kya restaurant khola hai." Naina said in annoyance. Sameer has been very annoying to her for some reasons she couldn't pin point. "Naina restaurant chalo." Sameer said not wanting to sound scared. "Mujhe kahin nahi jaana. Mera pait tumhare taane sunn ke bhar gaya. Tum jaao." Naina said without even looking at him. "Tumhein pata hai na mujhe khali pait neend nahi aati. Chalo please nahi toh restaurant band ho jaayega." Sameer said moving towards her. "Mera dimaag kha ke tumhara pait nahi bhara?" Naina asked. "Chalo please." Sameer almost dragged Naina out of the room and locked it from outside. Naina was already very pissed. "Tum ye..." before she could finish, Sameer pulled her in a tight hug. Naina felt something wasn't right. "Kya hua Sameer?" She asked against his chest. After a minute or two he parted with her and they went to the reception where Manager was instructing something to the receptionist.




"Excuse me!" Sameer said suppressing his anger for such carelessness. "Yes Sir?" Manager said looking at Sameer. "Humare room mein chor hai. Maine dekha. Aur uske paas ek chaaku bhi hai. Maine room bahar se lock kar diya hai. Aap please dekhiye jaa kar." Sameer said trying to control his anger. Manager was shocked to know that and quickly rushed to their room with security guards. Sameer then looked at Naina who looked completely scared. He held her hand and made her sit on the nearby sofa. She was still shaking a bit. Sameer sat next to her and held her hand. He brushed his thumb over the back of her hand to calm her down. Few tears trickled down her eyes. She looked at Sameer who was holding her close to assure her of his presence. Just then the Manager came back with the thief who was apparently one of the waiters who entered their room using master key. "I'm really sorry Sir." Manager said. "You better be. Bas naam ka five star khol rakha hai, security naam ki toh koi cheez hi nahi hai. Woh accha hua mujhe dikh gaya nahi toh agar meri wife ko kuch ho gaya hota na toh tum yaad rakhte." Sameer blasted out on the Manager and took Naina to their room. She needed some rest.


Naina entered the room and saw everything scattered around. She sat on the bed while Sameer kept all the things back in the suitcase. She just kept looking at him. She saw him leaving to the washroom. That's when she couldn't hold back her tears and let them flow. She curled up on the bed and tried to forget everything. Sameer came out of the washroom and thought that Naina was asleep. He moved towards her to cover her with quilt. Naina sensed his presence and held his hand without opening her eyes. Naina shifted a bit and Sameer laid beside her. Naina shifted towards him and adjusted herself in his arms. Sameer pulled her closer and she snuggled on his chest. Sameer held her with his other hand and kept looking at her until his eyes felt heavy...




Uss chor ko Naina ke itne kareeb dekh ke sach mein meri jaan halaq mein aa gayi thi. Poore honeymoon pe bhale hi main Naina se kai baaton ke liye naraaz tha par uss waqt pe na jaane usse kho dene ka darr meri jaan le raha tha. Kuch cheezein, kuch log, kuch rishte zindagi mein kitna maayne rakhte hain ki unke khone ka soch ke hi aisa lagta hai maut isse behtar hogi. Haan khoon kharaba nahi hua *Laughs* par dil bahut baith gaya tha. Aaj tak woh sab sochta hoon toh ajeeb sa darr lagta hai...

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mysterious17 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#2
The VO in the end 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely!!!! And lastly sameer's vo dil ko chu gaya👏
With love,Suparna
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Posted: 6 years ago
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beautiful OS
this was such a beautiful take on yesterday's incident. the hug and the possessiveness of Sameer was heart melting and the cuddling samaina I am waiting to see in the show...

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I was missing this possessive sameer! Thanks for making it. The hug was needed! Loved it.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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this was very beautiful
loved it
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was beautiful
That hug has my heart ..
Loved the way sameer blasted out at the manager
And the voice over at the end is love ..
Gave me full show vali feeling..


Love
Laalchi reader
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome version of the episode... These are the exact same things that would have happened with the Samaina we all fell in love with.
I am so disappointed with the current episodes and direction... They seem to be focused on ensuring that they show at least 50% of negativity in every episode.

I'm going to watch out for ur takes on future episodes too.

Thanks
Mayuri
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Something which we missed seeing the show
it was awesome
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Posted: 6 years ago
#10
Very beautiful. These additional dialogues and actions portrayed Sameer and Naina's condition much better than in show.

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