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Posted: 6 years ago
simply great
maan refuse to acknowledge his biological parents but he throw them away when they try to blackmail him
the way ram n janaki wants to adopt maan is very adorable
n ver surprising to geet
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice teaser...
Waiting for more...
Update soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Is extremely sorry sorry dear for being late got busy In personal life
😭
You updated 8 parts back to back still thanks for pm me 😊
From 16 to 23
Its a marrathon
Geet still not want to understand him she only think about herself
Here adding problem in maan life his biological parents came to take him back are they thought he is Miner ? Or kid whom they can claim
But I want to know why they left him to die 😡
They were like geet in their younger days ? Or something else
Finally geet destructed everything thanks to her anger and over thinking plus negative
She didn't care about guest 😡
She hurts maan as he never ever forget her words 😕 what will happen to maaneet then
Truth came out of their relationship
All family including handa are angry on geet
Khurana want to throw her our but they can't because of babies
Handa broke ties with her but my question is why don't they made her understand or told her why they wanted to marry her at least yeh sab nahi hota
Marriage is not solution they should done something else or just cleared her mind they hided the letter from maan misunderstanding start from there they are foolish parent just want to throw their responsibility to other so they can face society 😡 😡
Now broke relationship with her seriously are geet really her daughter ?
And khurana also doing wrong somewheres they makes geet point correct they care about only baby not her
Not everyone mature in that age like janki
They were campers janki with geet ?
Everyone brought up in different circumstances
They force geet and maan and unborn babies suffer now they again think with anger and husty decision may ruined unborn babies life hope some one still think in calm mind handle geet and made her understand what she is doing is wrong what ever happened happen nobody stopping her to get education
Hope their marriage not break 😕
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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 24



C- why are you here so suddenly?
What do you want now?
A child yelled clutching hand of his father for support. When she see soon other girl child come of same age as him.
C2 you want to kill us?
Don't you??
It's our papa who protect us. We have mumma we don't need you. She said while clutching the hand of a lady
G- meera?
Geet whisper with tears in her eyes and look toward an angry maan who clutch both of his children tightly
G- m main I iam your mother.
Not she!

C1 then why you left us?
Wasn't it you who choose freedom over us?
We don't want you now .
Go
C2- bhai is right
Go back
Girl child said clutching hand of meera
C2 she is our mother and he is our father.
You are not needed in our life.
Causing maan & meera to hug both of their children

G- nhi
You can't
Geet cried.
I I am y your m mmo ther

Maan look geet angrily
M- guards
GUARDS
Maan yell
Geet tried to protest nodding in no
M- throw her out.
AND NEVER LET HER ENTER IN MANTION.

Guards hold her hand. Geet tried to protest but no use they were more powerful as compared to her.
Geet look at them with teary eyes want to be their but his words rang in her mind

M- I MAAN SINGH KHURANA PROMISE YOU THAT YOU WON'T BE ABLE TO COME BACK IN OUR LIFE ONCE YOU LEFT EVEN IF YOU PLEAD TILL DEATH.


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Geet open her eyes , breathing heavily . Her whole body covered with sweat as her hand immediately clutch her tummy. Soon realization drawn upon her she was dreaming?
What a horrible dream she saw herself in place of his biological parents.
Her hands were still shivering, she extended her hand to fetch glass of water but found jug empty. She get up slowly as now a days she felt difficulty in even moving due to her pregnancy.
She made her way toward kitchen only to find the lights still on.
She frowned looking at wall it's 2 in night who is awake this time? When her eyes fell on him he was on phone with someone look like some business issue.
Geet made her way toward kitchen to have water first.
When she come back he was still there talking with someone. When his eyes fell on her. He looks at her worried . He cut call first and then look at her.
M- are you well?
G- haa
Vo I I was thrusty
M- ok
Geet look at him for a moment as she recalled everything she saw and the words left from her mouth
G- you should give your parents a chance.
Maan look at her surprised
M- kyun?
G- because they are your parents. Your blood relative who cares for you after all you are their blood.

M- then what?

Did you gave your parents a chance?
You were their blood na?
They did everything possible to complete your wish.

M- and my child that you are carrying?
Isn't it your blood?

Geet look at him stunned
M- were they at fault?
& who are you to tell me they are my blood relatives?
I don't think i need advice at least from you.


Geet look at him stunned
M- what your parents did was wrong. But they try to give you chance as much they can .
I'm not taking their side.
I knew they were wrong at their place but so you were.

Vo toh tumhare blood relative the na?
Your biological parents!
Not like mine who threw me out as soon I was born they did take care of you. Complete your every wish till now. But ine decision and you think them as your enemy?

Geet look at him stunned.

Maan get up from their
M- I didn't mean to hurt you.
It's just
He ran his hand through his hairs turning to leave when she stopped him
G- what if they leave you at some point.
She said refereeing to janki & Ram.

M- look at you & me.
I have my parents standing beside me at every moment and you.
Your parents broke every tie with you.
I'm not taunting you. I didn't mean to hurt you.
It's just i'm giving answer to your questions.

Well it's late you should go & take rest it's not good to stay awake in this condition . You need to take rest. Come

He say while extending his hand i'll guide you to your room..
Geet look at him unable to meet his gaze. She held his hand as he guide her to her room.

She look at him as he turn to leave

She clutch her tummy.
G- I don't want to leave.
I want to stay for my child.

She whisper to herself as few tears made their way out from her eyes.

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Nxt - depend on response.
I WANT GOOD RESPONSE THIS TIME.



Edited by Ramjanki - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
very very good update maan bahut lucky hai jo ram aur janki jaise parents mile hai n btw ye biological parent kaha se ab aa gaye orphanage mai maan ko chodte time in ko maan ki bebasi nahi dekhi hogi un ka dil tadpa nahi hoga ?
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Posted: 6 years ago
geet ko akkal agayi kya?...abb kyun bachche per pyar jaag utha...she was going to abort dem na...den why nw...maan opened her eyes may b she think positive dis time atleast...

lovely update...

loved it...
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Posted: 6 years ago
SCARE GEET HAVING DREAMS THAT MAAN IS THROWING HER OUT LIKE HIS BIOLOGICAL PARENTS REMEMBERING HIS WORDS THAT SHE WONT HAVE PLACE IN THEIR LIFE EVEN IF SHE BEG FOR IT
MAAN'S ANSWER FOR HER QUESTIONS PUSH MOTHER IN GEET FORWARD
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for pm.. Nice update. ..
Great asking this too ma'am and maan given right check and feet is realising her mistake... Plz don't prolong realisation part of geet...and plz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Fantastic update.geet seen a dream and get terified.she seen maan and meera together in dream.she talk with maan but he show her a mirrior of reality.good geet need types of this lecture who gave her akal.now she want to stay with her children.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update maan geet talk at least geet listen to maan and as she has seen in nightmare seperate from baby now she don't want to leave them did maan listen and if he listen when what he will reply update soon waiting

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