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Posted: 6 years ago
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Just a thought that if in place of aneri Helly shah would have been pari and in place of veer it would have been namish(laksh) and in place of ruhaan it would have been Varun(Sanskar)...I would have been mad for it😳... recreating memories... since in swaragini too things happened like this initially!!!
One more thing...I was shell shocked that gajra was a writer of Balika Vadhu... means that was a cult show...and gajra also wrote veer ki ardaas...then how ema story falled in drastic manner...coz it could be like that Kunal and Mauli are also not happy as we saw in kabhi Alvida Na kehna!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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then i would have shipped pari-ruhaan because i am swaswan/vahe shipper forever their chemistry is magical passionate dreamy
Edited by Poorabhforever - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Then it would be swaragini season 2 instead of silsila season 2😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhi_kanchi

Just a thought that if in place of aneri Helly shah would have been pari and in place of veer it would have been namish(laksh) and in place of ruhaan it would have been Varun(Sanskar)...I would have been mad for it 😳... recreating memories... since in swaragini too things happened like this initially!!!

One more thing...I was shell shocked that gajra was a writer of Balika Vadhu... means that was a cult show...and gajra also wrote veer ki ardaas...then how ema story falled in drastic manner...coz it could be like that Kunal and Mauli are also not happy as we saw in kabhi Alvida Na kehna!


Then I would have been rooting for paro
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Purendu shekhar was main writer of Balika vadhu and veer ki ardaas both. Gajra was just teammate. Purendu shekhar is great writer.

Balika vadhu's awesome dialogues and perfect character consistency is not gajra's cup of tea 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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gajra was also writer of astive prem Kahaani .on 2004.and this was award winning serial

gajra has given 16 years to TV industry. do u think is it easy for a bad writer to stay in TV industry since 16 years


if gajra is bad writer then she could haven not survive in TV industry for longest period


in balika vadhu she was story development writer but her contribution is not small in bv

she also made jyoti


and I think some liberty should given to writer.




there should be some liberty of creative should be given to writer .
Edited by surabhi01 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: surabhi01

gajra was also writer of astive prem Kahaani .on 2004.and this was award winning serial

gajra has given 16 years to TV industry. do u think is it easy for a bad writer to stay in TV industry since 16 years


if gajra is bad writer then she could haven not survive in TV industry for longest period


in balika vadhu she was story development writer but her contribution is not small in bv

she also made jyoti


and I think some liberty should given to writer.




there should be some liberty of creative should be given to writer .



Indeed astitva and Jyoti were very good show but she completely fails with silsila.

Garja wanted to show new light on extra marital affair but due to poor writing and direction it was horrible love story of kunan and still she had guts to expect that audience should accept kunan 's divine love story

As a writer it is her big failure was that when audience constantly rejected her forceful attempts to prove divinity in extra marital affair.

Agree Creative liberty is writer's right but writing should not be full of loop holes and poor characterizations .

Kunan divine saga was very poorly written by gajra. One side gajra tried to portrayed divine love and another side she was busy in giving lusty romance to audience with same couple. One side she was showing divine interventions for kunan and same way for maunal too during divorce track. Bhagvan ke naam par kitne galat bill fade the gajra ne .What a crap writing by gajra in S1 . 🤢
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I don't understand how is it poor writing. I think she has shown reality if a married man continued keep helping divorcee woman then it high chance of divorcee women to fell in love with married man who is continuing help her

may be some people will not follow this idelogy. but not every people followed same principles

may be scene rush but what ever gajra shown it was bitter reality

and gajra is not promoting so called divine love.. of kunan. she is showing reality jub yeh situation hoti hai tub aisa ho sakta hai


and gajra don't want to promote divine love that is why she did not show so called divine love for longest time

and I don't believe just because gajra get crictism that is why she changed story no way

no writer will change their plot totally just because audience did not want it

and gajra is, one who left balika vadhu because channel r not showing that story which gajra has plan. and after gajra hai left bv. when new writer start writing story of bv then bv could not even survive for one month when gajra left bv




gajra want to show relationship is not always same . when situations change relationship is also changed be it between friend or between husband and wife or parents and children




aur aage BHI gajra yahi dikhayegi ki rishte hamesha ek nahi rahenge woh badalenge

aage BHI gajra so called divine love dikhayegi kyonki is serial ka main aim yahi hai to show rishte kabhi ek Kaiser nahi rehte. Samay ke saath rishte badalte Hain
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: surabhi01

I don't understand how is it poor writing. I think she has shown reality if a married man continued keep helping divorcee woman then it high chance of divorcee women to fell in love with married man who is continuing help her

may be some people will not follow this idelogy. but not every people followed same principles

may be scene rush but what ever gajra shown it was bitter reality

and gajra is not promoting so called divine love.. of kunan. she is showing reality jub yeh situation hoti hai tub aisa ho sakta hai


and gajra don't want to promote divine love that is why she did not show so called divine love for longest time

and I don't believe just because gajra get crictism that is why she changed story no way

no writer will change their plot totally just because audience did not want it

and gajra is, one who left balika vadhu because channel r not showing that story which gajra has plan. and after gajra hai left bv. when new writer start writing story of bv then bv could not even survive for one month when gajra left bv




gajra want to show relationship is not always same . when situations change relationship is also changed be it between friend or between husband and wife or parents and children

I really didn't raised questions on her writings...indeed she is a great writer and being a writer I can't even think to disrespect but story could have been better bcoz at the end they projected Nandini as a home breaker and Kunal was forgiven...and ya she brang the complexity of characters very well... but public didn't accept it and Drashti had to quit the show ... sexist society! And moreover people have accepted stories like kabhi Alvida Na kehna but how come Kunal who was living a perfect life fall in so called divine love of Nandini and that was not love even!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_tania



Indeed astitva and Jyoti were very good show but she completely fails with silsila.

Garja wanted to show new light on extra marital affair but due to poor writing and direction it was horrible love story of kunan and still she had guts to expect that audience should accept kunan 's divine love story

As a writer it is her big failure was that when audience constantly rejected her forceful attempts to prove divinity in extra marital affair.

Agree Creative liberty is writer's right but writing should not be full of loop holes and poor characterizations .

Kunan divine saga was very poorly written by gajra. One side gajra tried to portrayed divine love and another side she was busy in giving lusty romance to audience with same couple. One side she was showing divine interventions for kunan and same way for maunal too during divorce track. Bhagvan ke naam par kitne galat bill fade the gajra ne .What a crap writing by gajra in S1 . 🤢

Exactly !! Agree with you!! more than a love story it was a lust story...coz Kunal who was living a fairy tale kind love life with Mauli suddenly fall in love with Nandini that too watching her in rain!! Like wooww!!

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