Bonded by Fate- AkshAn FF (Part 48 Pg 117) (UPDATED-2 Jan) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: captainplus

hi ! welcome to the forum 🤗

A great start 👍🏼
Would lo❤️e to read further 😊
continue soon ⭐️


Aye!Aye! Captain😉
Ill continue soon, if you promise to continue to be my critic😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: captainplus


@bold at 1st even i thought the same 🤣


🤣got relief reading the further lines 😆😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi everyone..
I am new here.
Was planning to post something from few days but this story made me comment...😆

What a scene👏
Tm expect your scene to be fulfil in reality because guddan and an will do something like this😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey loved ur ff.u written so beautiful scene😳. I hope makers will read this and ye sce😆ne hume real mn dikhne ko mile😆.please written more something like this😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Welcome to the forum Nish_Vir👏👏👏
You have written a beautiful Piece of relastic scene, through your writing I could just visualize AJ and Guddan in this situations👏

please update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: attiya1.3

Hi everyone..

I am new here.
Was planning to post something from few days but this story made me comment... 😆

What a scene👏
Tm expect your scene to be fulfil in reality because guddan and an will do something like this😆


Yaar why do ppl plan so much😵
Switch on ur laptop and voila, start writing!!
kaash ye scene sach ho jaye
glad to know that i was able to strike a chord in ur imagination ;)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Secretfollower2

Hey loved ur ff.u written so beautiful scene 😳. I hope makers will read this and ye sce😆ne hume real mn dikhne ko mile😆.please written more something like this😉

thanx for your appreciation😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: *Piku*

Welcome to the forum Nish_Vir 👏👏👏

You have written a beautiful Piece of relastic scene, through your writing I could just visualize AJ and Guddan in this situations👏

please update soon


I wrote the scene based on the fact that Aj and Guddan married each other for their selfish reasons.
Aj had been in love before but for Guddan, Aj is the first man in her life so she is bound to be attracted given his personality and decent behaviour.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Already eager for part 2👍🏼
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On popular demand😆, I am here with Part 2⭐️

Part 2- The First Night


After few minutes,Guddan showed up in the room, dressed decently. Akshat had been waiting andwithout as much as a word, swiftly moved to the door and closed it.

Guddan clasped andunclasped her fingers uneasily.

Why was uncle notasleep yet? Shouldn't he be snoring away to glory at this time of night?

At the back of her mind, hervoice screamed in the highest, non-audible pitch. It's your wedding night!!

Guddan quickly turned around, words of rejection ready to take off hertongue when his voice boomed through, shattering her misconceptions.

"Why? He asked, his back still turned to her.

"Kya!? she asked, confused.

"Jb chali hi gayi thi toh wapaskyu aai?! He repeated, turningaround.

Guddan looked at his face. Her throat suddenly felt parched, his wordshad sucked the life out of her.

"Jawab do!, he demanded taking two steps in herdirection.

Guddan backed off, scared. Guilty. She was in the wrong here.

"Main wo... she stuttered.

"Mehandi se bhaag gayi, I let yougo thinking that forcing you against your wish won't be good. Phir kyu aaiwaapis?! Akshat asked,accusation surfacing in his voice, as he stepped closer to her.

Guddan stepped back involuntarily. Her half assed senses screameddanger.

Should she confess the truth?

"Jab kisi aur ke saath haldikarne gaya toh waha aakar hungama macha diya, or mujhe haldi se rang diya!Kyu?? He stepped closer yetagain, his voice getting low with an undertone of something akin to rage.

Guddan stepped back only to collide against the wall. She gulped onseeing the inferno ablaze in his eyes.

Finally Akshat stood infront of her, centimetres apart, towering overher existence. Guddan felt like a deer caught in headlight.

"And then, you actually attackedMiss Shweta to marry me! Why??He asked, more like ordered.

She stared straight into hiseyes. Words deserted her. Would he beable to bear the truth?!

And suddenly, his phone started ringing. As Akshat fished for his phonein the pocket, Guddan decided to slip away discretely.

But alas! Her respite died the instant she moved her body to escape, asthe bulky' arm rammed right against the wall, blocking her escape. She triedto escape from the other side, but Akshat was quick, he threw the phone ontothe bed, and caged her in between his arms.

"Meri baat abhi khatm nhi huihai, he cleared, boring holesinto her.

"Important call nhi tha kya? Guddan asked, trying to smile as much asher face joints permitted.

"This is more important, I wantmy answers or we can just stand here the entire night, gazing into each other'seyes. And the night after, and after and after

In usual circumstances, these words would have been consideredromantic. But he was not normal. She was definitely abnormal, she knew it. Andtheir situation was totally nowhere near the brink of normality. His words helda promise, a promise to breathe down her neck like a fire dragon till sheagreed to spill the beans out.

"Kahin tumhe mujhse pyaar toh... He had almost voiced out his doubt when hervoice cut in, sharp as a knife.

"Iss galatfehmi mein mat rehnauncle, Guddan stated poking herforefinger against his chest.

He looked down at her finger and then looked into her eyes. The micehad transformed into a ferocious lioness. He had no misunderstanding about herfalling in love with him. Her actions always spoke louder than her words. Buthe needed to rile her up, to get his answers.

"Apni umra dekhi hai? Poore 25saal ka fark hai hum dono mein aur pyaar ki baat karte hai! Guddan almost laughed at the last sentence.

"Haven't you heard? Age is justa number! He whispered into her ears, leaning closer.

She had moved her face to other side, the instant he dipped his headdown but his words angered her. She moved her face and stared right into hiseyes, taking him head on.

Akshat almost let the smirk slip to his lips. She was taking the bait.Such a naive, foolish girl!

"Don't you know!?Numbers areimportant, they matter. I may not know much about love, but Y-O-U can never bemy definition of love, sheemphasised.

"Pyaar nhi hai toh phir kyu ki yeshaadi? Let me think- For money?He asked, more like told her.

"As you said numbers matter, alot. Jindal khandaan ki bahu bankar, you could get it all. I never knew youwere that smart!? He praised herin a mocking tone, ghost of a smirk dancing on his lips.

Guddan suppressed a chuckle athis theory. Ameer log aur unka paisa!

"I thought you were better thanthat AJ uncle! Mujhe daulat ki itni chahat hoti, toh aapki vo beshkimatianguthi nhi khoti! If I wanted so much as a penny of your earnings, I didn'tneed to even try. Destiny, literally, dropped you right into my life. I wouldhave never ran away from mehandi if I remotely desired the luxuries of Jindalhouse, Guddan completed.

"Then why?! he almost shouted, getting tired of thisblame-chase game.

Guddan looked at him. She could tell him the truth but then...

"Meri chutki ke liye, she spoke, baffling AJ.

"Par mene toh Parv ko... he confirmed, furrowing his bushy brows inconfusion.

"He found his way back. He toldchutki about how we both forced him to, LIE to her about his infidelity

Akshat moved back, angered at Parv.

"Main abhi uss Parv ko... AJ started to leave the room when Guddanstopped him.

"Aap aisa kuch nhi karenge. Chutkihas cleared to me that if we pulled another stunt like that, she will harmherself. And even if Parv's wife knows the truth, Chutki won't buy a word, Guddan explained.

AJ turned back. "Theek hai, butwhat has this matter got to do with Parv?

"It has everything to do withParv, wo aapki bahu ki behan ka..

"Hamari bahu, Akshat corrected her.

"Haan, Parv hamari Saru bahu kibehan ka husband hai. He lives in this house, I can keep an eye on him, collectproofs against him, expose his lies in front of Chutki and his wife both, Guddan explained.

Akshat let out a sigh in relief. "Thankgod, so this was your reason for marrying me! He knew that she was not inlove with him but he was surprisingly relieved to know that she hadn't marriedhim for his money. If that would have been the case, he would have actuallyfelt hurt, and he didn't know why?!

"Haan! She seconded him.

"Ho gayi tassali, Shall I go tosleep or are you actually planning to spend the entire night gazing into myeyes?! Guddan faked a smile,fluttering her lashes mockingly at him.

"Definitely not, Akshat deadpanned.

"Glad to know that our viewsmatch on something, Guddansmiled and started to leave, when Akshat moved closer and caught her prisonerin the cage of his arms, once again.

"Ab Kya hua?! Let me go! Guddan tried to move his arms away,brimming with annoyance.

"Maine kab roka tumhe! He feigned ignorance, his lips quirked up amillimetre or two.

"Apne inn dhai kilo ke haathon kohataoge, tabhi toh jaungi, Guddanexplained, irritated.

" Dhai kilo ke haath?! The lasttime I heard you, you classified this as swelling in my arms, as a result ofold age. He pondered.

Guddan felt like crying. Kis jhamele mein fas gyi!!

She clapped her palms infront of her forehead, and spoke-" Galti ho gayi uncle, flow flow meinnikal gaya tha, now please spare me some good night rest.

"Ok, he shrugged nonchalantly and moved away as if he was never there.

As she moved to the other side of bed, his voice tortured her yetagain.

"That side is mine

At that moment, Guddan wanted to bang her forehead against the wall.

Guddan tumse na ho payega.

SO GUYS! HOW WAS IT? DO SHARE YOUR VIEWS

Part 3 - The First Attack - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/148660261?tid=5034085



Edited by nish_vir - 6 years ago

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