Bonded by Fate- AkshAn FF (Part 48 Pg 117) (UPDATED-2 Jan) - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
#21
thanks for a fast update 🤗
this situation & conversation seems very much possible in the show
lo❤️ing how you kept both AJ & guddan's characteristics from the show intact. 👍🏼

would be waiting for more... 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: captainplus

thanks for a fast update 🤗

this situation & conversation seems very much possible in the show
lo❤️ing how you kept both AJ & guddan's characteristics from the show intact. 👍🏼

would be waiting for more... 😳


Thanks for the appreciation🤪
I will try my level best not to deviate from their personality😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23
Omg what a realistic potrayl of the characterisation
👏u at too fast loved loved loved it
.dhai kill ka hath 🤣

Umar Dekhi hai u are not definitely my definition of loved it hurts 😭

I hope Guddan falls for AJ soon please

Such a Fandastic writer u are
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
I am loving this AJ😆
You are increasing our expectations for the series.

BTW...ahhh-mazing..👏

Best was hamari bahu😆

But I doubt... Will they share bed too easily?? 😃


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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: attiya1.3

I am loving this AJ 😆

You are increasing our expectations for the series.

BTW...ahhh-mazing..👏

Best was hamari bahu😆

But I doubt... Will they share bed too easily?? 😃



I feel that Akshat is never going to say that I'll sleep on the sofa, you take the bed' kind of cheesy stuff coz he is arrogant and definitely OLD. But at the same time, he is mature enough not to suggest Guddan to sleep on ground or sofa coz he respects woman and she is HIS WIFE. And Guddan, definitely won't back down from a challenge😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: elsanna

Awesome update sooon 😳


Will do dear, thanks😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Icebubble

Omg what a realistic potrayl of the characterisation

👏u at too fast loved loved loved it
.dhai kill ka hath 🤣

Umar Dekhi hai u are not definitely my definition of loved it hurts 😭

I hope Guddan falls for AJ soon please

Such a Fandastic writer u are


Patience!patience! Pyaar ki kheer ko pakne mein time toh lagega hi?😎
And thanks for your kind words😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Very relastic portrayal of characters👏
I love each and very line of your dialogues,
I love your Guddan and AJ😳
Aww hamari bahu😳
I hope writers make their AJ and Guddan clear their misunderstanding too.
Please update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: *Piku*

Very relastic portrayal of characters 👏

I love each and very line of your dialogues,
I love your Guddan and AJ😳
Aww hamari bahu😳
I hope writers make their AJ and Guddan clear their misunderstanding too.
Please update soon


Thank youuu😆
kaash writers mujhse consultation kr le ;)
will try to updt by tomorrow
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
PART 3 - The First Attack

The curtains fluttered in the wind. The owls hooted. The cicadas chirped.

And a rumbling sound pierced the stillness of night, every now and then.

Akshat's eyes snapped open as he found himself staring in the dark, while another rumble echoed throughout the room. The corner of his lips twitched in annoyance and he turned his head to the left to see...hear, Guddan snoring away to glory!

Then his gaze moved towards his legs where he felt something weighing him down, hampering his movement.

A leg. Her leg, which was leisurely, sprawled over him as if he was her mattress.

What the hell!!

The cushion wall that he had very meticulously created to mark his space was nowhere to be seen except its remnants that were being choked by her, with a goofy smile on her idiotic visage.

What was she even dreaming about??!

None of his concern.

Without wasting another moment, he swatted her leg away as if it was a fly. Now, for the snoring...

"Will you stop this noise!? I am trying to sleep here, he hissed at her, but to no avail. She didn't even move a muscle in response, except the ones that were already engaged in making his night sleepless!

Feeling restless, he poked her on her shoulder once, twice, thrice but she didn't even budge.

Is she a relative of Kumbhkarna or what?!!

He patted her cheek lightly in a final attempt to bring her back to world of mortality when she finally muttered something.

"Volume kam kar, Raavan uncle jag jaega, and with that she was back to her task of snoring.

AJ's nostrils flared and his fingers itched, to pinch her nose shut, to teach her a lesson. But she was so unpredictable that he was worried for his ears. She was lethal for his health.

Better to be safe than sorry. And with that moral lesson distinctly reminisced, he sandwiched his ears in between the pillows, and tried to sleep.

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Half an hour later, Akshat gazed at the bedside table, feeling pathetic. The past half an hour, not only her snores were promoted to ugly grunts of a donkey but he was also demoted to a human pillow, or teddy bear, or whatever it was!!No matter how many times, he pushed her leg, or hand away that was trespassing his body, she came right back with an even greater force. To escape coming in contact with her, he kept on scooting towards the edge of bed until there was no more space to shift. But Guddan wasn't the one to relent. The more space he spared her, the more she spread, like a weed!! And finally, she had her right arm and leg, hoisted over his arm and leg, and he had nowhere to run.

As his patience reached its limit, he turned his head towards her, ready to scream his head off when the closeness of her face caught him off guard.

Shocked at the situation, he pushed her away with full force, unconsciously. And the unsuspecting Guddan rolled over to her side and down the bed!

Surprised at his uncalled reaction, Akshat quickly leaned to her side to check her and...well, he was not disappointed. She continued to sleep like a log, like a dead croc that had no plan of moving, at least in coming years or so. And with that, he leaned back on the bed, shrugging his head in amusement.

What a weird specimen she is? Didn't even budge!

Finally, sleep decided to take over his tired self and he ventured into the world of dreams.

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As the first rays of morning sun filtered through the windows, Guddan stirred in her sleep, irritated by the shiny rays.

"Parda laga na Chutki!, Guddan whined in a drowsy state, covering her eyes.

"Its high time you decided to wake up, a deep, familiar yet new voice greeted her.

Familiar yet new.

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Uncle!!

Guddan's eyelids flew open, literally! And cautiously, she rolled her eyes around, trying to inspect her surroundings. As the incidents from previous day pinged in front of her eyes like notifications, she sighed, in defeat.

"Aadhe ghante mein ready hokar, neeche aa jaaiyega, aapki muh dikhai hai and with that AJ left.

Guddan sat up slowly, trying to wrap her head around this new reality. By the way, why was she on the floor?!

"Uncle ko toh baad mein bataungi, pehle ready ho jati hu varna sahi mein khoon kar denge! She huffed and quickly ran into the bathroom.

20 minutes later, as she appeared out of bath, a beautiful satin saree embroidered with zari was lying on the bed in addition to jewellery, and stuck in between the saree was a note.

Aapko ye saree hi pehnni hai muh dikhai mein. This is the tradition of Jindal House.

Durga Bahu

"Sounded more like an order, jaisa sasur vesi bahu, dono nakchadhe!, Guddan snickered and picked up the saree and jewellery.

Akshat was busy glaring at his watch when the entire hall came to a standstill and everyone's head turned towards the stairs. He looked too, to see the new malkin of Jindal House descending down the stairs, her face concealed in a veil. He moved towards the stairs as the crowd circled around, and he stretched his right hand in front of her, as a gesture of courtesy.

Guddan ever so slowly slipped her palm into his, as his fingers tightened around hers and then she took the next step.

If only things were that easy.

The saree was annoyingly long for her short built and was coming under her sandals now and then. The sandals had those super sharp pencil heels that she was sure, was leaving a dent in the stairs as she moved. The jewellery felt like carrying a ton of bricks, and cherry on top was the veil, which was making it hard to see in front. She was somehow balancing herself on the stairs by holding onto the railing with one hand and with the other, holding her saree.

Par nhi, AJ uncle ko shanti kahan'

As she placed her palm in his, he turned around and descended down the stairs, taking long strides. She tried hard to keep up but at the last stair, the saree came under the heel and she slipped.

"Waaa

Her sudden cry alerted AJ as he turned around quickly, and she fell right into him. He tried to balance himself against the edge of railing, as his hands came around her waist, to prevent her centre of mass from shifting sideways.

The crowd and the family looked on as AJ and Guddan slowly moved away from each other.

"Kya tum dono theek ho? Dadi asked worried, rushing to the front.

Both of them nodded. However as Guddan took a step, a wince escaped her lips as she lost her balance and almost fell when Akshat's hands came around her shoulders to support her.

"Kya hua? He asked seriously, staring into her face.

"I think I twisted my ankle, Guddan replied meekly.

As she tried to take another step forward, Akshat sweeped her off her feet, and into his arms, bridal style.

Guddan tried but failed. Her eyes couldn't move away from his face as he carried her to the diwan and settled her down gently.

"Vardaan, call the doctor! AJ shouted and then looked at her.

Guddan gulped. The veil, which earlier felt as black as dark of night suddenly felt very transparent and bare.

"If you can't balance the heels, why did you wear them!? Har jagah koi na koi tamasha! He hissed only for her to hear.

"Ye toh Du... Guddan tried to reply but the seething look in his eyes cut her off.

"Maa, aap rasm shuru kijiye! He asked his mother and moved to greet the guest but not without sparing Guddan a glance, which was returned.

"Jethani ji, you said that AJ will be very angry but not only did he catch her, but lifted her into his arms too!, Lakshmi whined.

"Sabra kijiye, Did you follow my instructions?! Durga asked, a slight smirk decorating her blood red lips.

"Ji, Saru and Lakshmi nodded.

"Then wait and watch, ye toh shuruaat hai, saasu maa ka swagat toh abhi shuru hua hai.

HOW WAS IT?/
Edited by nish_vir - 6 years ago

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