FF: Avneil thru Neela version(19/06/18) - Page 3

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Guys! So here I am ,I hope u like it

NO COPY

chapter 9

as the morning started and sun started to peep true the window of the ward Avani got irritated and suddenly

maa! sone do na please!!! with her closed eyes only to realise the reality and again cheeks were wet as if any tap has been opened but soon nurse came and soon the same procedure and she left to get ready

police station

sun! ballu!? Said Avani

madaam use to bail mil gayi! : Sun

I knew it !(frowning) but thik hai hume jo information mili hai us se hi aage badna hoga: avani

ok madaam! :Sun

sun Maine tumhe Neil ke baare mein bhi info mangi thi kya hua!?: Avani

madaam actually info to kal hi Nikal di thi but sab ke chakar thin bhul gayi dena

Neil ki badi ajeeb baat hai! Apne maasi ke Saath rehta hai,father se no contact sun me Mila ki maa me suicide Kiya tha and dadi se nhi jamti : sun

ok but uski maa ne suicide...!? are u sure : avani

sun knew that the topic was of mother so Avani was bound to be concerned and nodded in affirmation

haa! according to reports

but kyu sun! mujhe nhi lagta ki suicide hai ! kya naam bataya uski maa Ka!? : Avani

Shweta khanna and baap Prakash khanna! : Sun

pata nhi kyu lagta hai ki hum jaante hai in khannas ko! shayad dad!... haa let me call him

Avani called Ashish to know more about them

Ashish: are waah! aaj din kaha se shuru hua hai! ya mein Sapna dekh raha hu!? kaisi ho avani

Avani: dad! thik hu but mujhe na ek case ke silsile me ek kaam tha!

Ashish: bolo meri supercop always on duty

avani: dad!... hum khannas ko jaante hai kya!? I mean Prakash khanna and Shweta khanna!?

Ashish: (shocked recalling past) beta! kyu puch rhi ho tum!? kaunsa case hai khannas Ka!? door rho tum inse!

Avani (now sure): dad ! kaun hai ye log please batao!?

Ashish: beta vo humara past the and is se jyaada Kuch bhi nhi hai mere pass bolne ke liye. chalo bye I have some work.

Avani : bye dad!TC

sun listen abhi vo kaha rehta hai!? give me his address I will find out ki kya khatak raha hai

at harleen's place

avani: namaste aunty mein Avani hu!

harleen: namaste beta but kya mein tumhe jaanti hu!?

avani: nhi actually me Neil ki dost hu bas usi ke baare me baat Karni hai!

harleen(Neil ki dost): beta vo nhi hai yaha baad me aana!

Avani : aunty dekhiye I know aap log police officers se bohot gussa ho par mujhe as a friend Neil ki help Karni hai par Uske liye mujhe aapki help Chahiye

harleen: vakai tu help karegi!? ya fir vo logo ki taraf dum hilayegi!?(pure dissatisfied tone)

Avani: mujhe meri maa ki kasam auntyji sachai ke liye me Kuch bhi karungi but mujhe bataiye aap ki kya hua tha!?

harleen: himmat hai sun ne ki!?

Avani nodded

harleen: to sun; kafi time pehle yaani ki abhi se 20 Saal pehle Neil ki family thi, Shweta ki saas yani Amruta khanna pehle se hi Shweta ko le Kar comfortable nhi thi par Shweta aur Prakash the ek dusre ke liye kafi the par uski saas ko vo pasand nhi thi. chahe kitni bhi vo koshish karein par sab dheere dheere bad se batar hote Gaya,Neil jab hone wala tha na tab se hi unhone Shweta par pressure banana shuru Kiya tha ki bacche ko gira do , yaha tak ki Kisi mard ke saath usko dhamka Kar pictures bhi khichvaye taki Prakash ko vishwas ho jaye aur hua bhi!(tears flowing) par Shweta kaise Karti vo ! ek maa thi vo us se bhi pehle ek aurat jisne saccha pyaar Kiya tha par use kya Mila badle me distrust ! Uske Apne pati ne uspar Uske pyaar par barosa nhi rakha ek din to shayad uski saas aur uski nanad ne use maarne ki tyaari bhi Kar le thi par mein vaha puch gayi thi aur unhone baat ki daba diya jab bhi Shweta ko lagta ki use ab police ki help leni Chahiye tabhi samaj naam ki bediya thama dete the, Prakash bhi kaam ke vajah se bahar rehne laga! ya yu kaho bhaagne ke bahaane doondhe laga aur dheere dheere Amruta khanna aur maddy (nanad) ne use torture Kiya ek din use jalaane ke darr se ek suicide note bhi likhwaya par tab tak Shweta ne us darr pe kabu paa liya tha aur himmat jata Kar vo police station bhi gayi par vaha bhi Amruta ke darinde bol rhe the vardi pehne jinkone Kuch nhi Kiya par Jo bhi ho vo bacche ko janam jarur degi ye thani thi mujhe bhi 7 mahine tak thoda thoda shak to ho gaya tha isiliye main use ghaar le aayi par bohot der ho chuki thi! vo Shweta jo chekhti thi vo Mano kho gayi thi!!...b...boh... bohot ko.. koshish ki maine par jab us din ...

Avani grabbed water and her to drink

us din jab uski delivery hui aur me reception pe formalities Puri Karne gayi tab tak unhone...un...ho..ne use terrace se ... dhakka de diya"

now harleen could not continue further as that day ruined everything and still today came across as if it was just hours before

Avani(tears flowing) : saanth ho jaiye! calm down! aap bikhar nhi sakti aap jaante ho aap kitne strong ho!!

harleen (composing herself): kya fayda jab mein use insaaf hi nhi dila paayi!khareed liya tha usne aur agar Kuch karti to shayad Neill.

Avani: isiliye Neil ko police se itni nafraat hai!.

harleen: haa! vo bohot nafraat karta hai aur shayad tum hi ho vo ladki jo us din pahaad par use Mili thi..par jaise hi usko pata chala ki tum ek police officer ho use gussa aa gaya aur tumhe dhakka Marne chala aaya

Avani: kya!?.. dhakka...par aunty ek baat me aapko sach me batati hu ki agar is baat me sachai hai to Amruta khanna ko saja jarur milegi.haa! Mera tarika alag hoga par u need to trust me.

harleen: beta I trust you Varna aivaye mein ye sab tujhe nhi batati.

till then Neil also reached home

neil: tum!! yaha kya Kar rhi ho!?

Avani: Kuch nhi bas tumhe thank you bolne aayi hu kal ke liye.

Neil: but tumhe yaha Ka address kisne diya!?

harleen: ofhoo chod ye sab aur baith yaha!

avani;: ab mein chalti hu kafi Der ho gayi hai..bye aunty,thanks Neil

she went...

so guys hope you like it

chapter 10

NO. COPY

as Avani came out of the harleen's home she was frustrated as to how any police officer could do such things and rather than helping the victim they were with criminals but not any more she decided to get Neil justice

besides at home harleen was also content that her view was right and now a new hope was raised in her heart but she thought not to inform Neil bcuz he won't take anyone's help and specially a police officer.

Neil's POV

Avani ko kaise pata chala!?I mean Maine to Mera address kisiko nhi diya tha and masi se vo kya baat Kar rhi thi!? let me ask masi but agar Kuch important kaam hota to unhone bataya hota and vaise bhi mujhe aur bhi Kuch important kaam hai, ab apni ulti ginti gin na shuru Kar lo Amruta khanna ab tum nhi bachogi. main purpose of joining Mehta and sons was they were rivals with khannas and he was determined to destroy them by hook or by crook

left for office again after taking file

avani- sun mujhe within half an hour me Amruta khanna and pure khanna family ki info Chahiye

sun(understanding her police cum angry woman avatar) ok ho Jayega.

soon Avani determined to keep Neil away from khannas and his revenge spree but thing bothering her was Ashish frustration over khannas she decided to know more about this and hence went to meet Ashish

at office

Ashish- hi, who's there!?

receptionist- sir, Avani ma'am.

Ashish- tell her I am busy won't be possible to meet will meet her tomorrow!

Avani- nhi milenge! kaha hai

!? don't worry I will not tell u informed.

the receptionist guided her towards the cabin and left

knocking the door

Ashish- come in (busy in laptop)

avani- entered the room and saw him busy so just sat.

Ashish- jab bolna hi nhi tha to appointment kyu li!? still busy

she slowly ran behind him and closed his eyes, a small smile crept on her lips

Ashish (finally realised her being Avani): but kept a frown on his face.

Ashish- itni jiddi kyu ho tum! Bola na Maine door rho unse har baar problem me phasna jaruri nhi hota Avaniii

as Ashish spoke with a high tone Avani was shocked as he never reacted as such and that too on Avani no matter what the situation is

calming himself down after realising the tone

superstar dekho I am sorry! but subah se tum vo baat leke baithi ho and I want you to be away from them!

Avani: aap nhi chahte ki aapki beti in sab me pade to nhi padegi par ek officer ki duty Ka kya!? aaj mujhe pata chala hai ki Amruta khanna ne apni bahu ko mara hai!! kaise chod du and aapka reaction dekh ke lagta hai ki aap Kuch jaante ho !

papa meine sab ko yehi baat batayi hai jurm ko chipane wala bhi utna hi gunhegar hota hai! mein chahti to dadi ya kisi se bhi puch Sakti par mein aapke mu se sun na chahti hu!? Avani requested

Ashish (lost against his daughter): Prakash aur mein kafi time pehle ke jigri dost the Shweta ke maut ke 1 Saal pehle usne mujhse saare naate tod liye.. jigri tha isiliye pata lagane ki koshish ki to pata chala ki ...vo sharabi ho chuka tha aur Shweta ko bhi Maarta tha.. Maine use samjhaya bhi kyunki Shweta ko me jaanta tha vo aisa nhi Kar sakti. par us par bhoot savaar tha isiliye ek din Shweta ki madat ke liye mein us se Milne gaya aur use help Karne ke liye lawyer ko bhi le gaya (tears welled up)... par mujhe kya pata tha vo Mera Prakash nhi vo Amruta khanna Ka Prakash tha ...usne mujh par womaniser Ka tag laga diya aur Shweta ki halat to aur bhi kharab ho gayi

mujhe ye bura nhi laga ki usne mujhe bura bhala kaha par usne mere khilaaf fake police complaint bhi file karvayi...beta trust me Maine bas ek acche dost hone ki jimedaari nibhayi thi par vo bhul gaya tha mujhe , Shweta ko,Apne aap ko,Apne pyaar ko par maa ne mujhe jail se to nikalva liya lekin Neela ko Shweta ki bohot chinta ho rhi thi so vo chali gayi us se Milne us din bhi usne pee rakhi thi aur Neela ko dekh kar uspar hawi hone laga (angry) Shweta gayi bachane aur use to bacha liya par khud maut ki dawaat de aayi

jab mujhe pata chala ki us ne aisa Kuch Kiya hai to mein khud ko rok nhi paaya usi kafayda uthakar donno maa ,beti ne Prakash ko bhadkaya aur usne dheere dheere mujhse saare Achi yaade bhi le li aur mujhe bhi ab us se Kuch nhi Chahiye

after a pin drop silence for a while Avani said

papa! vo Apke acche dost the na!? par unhone aapka dil tod diya aur kitne logo ki lyf ruin ki hai... ab use sazaa to mil kar hi rahegi

as Avani was also hell shocked with the truth she without thinking ran towards Neela to meet her

at hospital

maa! aap ne use sazaa kyu nhi dilaayi!? aapki dost Shweta bhi usi ke wajah se... aap jaante ho Neilll hai uska beta... isi liye police se nafraat karta hai vo to uski maa ko dekh bhi Nahi paaya..(sobbing) ,Chu nhi paaya.., family nhi Mili...

maa ab mein un khannas ko uhi jaane nhi dungi.

Avani had enough to hear about khanna's and their crimes so she went to bed early as from next day she had too destroy khanna's and give justice to neil and Neela

so guys I know 2 shockers but yeah that's the zist of the story

Thanks hurrom for motivating me I am doing this only for you...

Please read and do comment

chapter 11:

the following day Avani reached at police station early before anyone and also followed by sun

sun: madaam lagta hai jitna ye log upar hai utna hi niche hai!

Maddy Shweta ki nanad ki Apne pati se nhi banti isiliye apni beti ki saath yahi hai, shayad hasmukh Maddy Ka pati use Kuch pata ho!? par inka lagataar chori chupe gundo se link rha hai! Prakash Ka Kuch pata nhi hai! abhi Amruta Apne business ke liye ek caretaker ki talaash me hain...(smirking as indicating Avani an opportunity)

Avani: to fir neki aur puch puch (smirking)... par pandit ka kya!? use bhi pakadna jaruri hai(delimma)

sun: madaam! pandit ka aur Amruta khanna Ka koi relation hai...kya pata nhi!? par vo hume jaldi jaan na hoga kyunki ab aapki jaan ke Saath neil ki bhi jaan khatre me hai!

Avani: dw sun! ab Amruta Ka aur pandit ka game over me karungi! bas Apne sources se ye baat faila do ki Avani is on break due to head injury for some time. aur abroad mein hai!

sun: ho gaya madaam!

avani: thik hai to fir mujhe Amruta ki pura timetable Chahiye kyunki bohot jaldi ananya verma unke business ko aage badhayegi! tum sab tyaari Karo! mein thodi der mein aati hu!

Avani left to meet harleen and she had already informed her that she's going to meet her so harleen made an excuse and reached at Ali's cafe

at Ali's cafe;

Ali:aaj shayad din ulta shuru hua hai! chaand humse milne humari chaukat par!!!!!!

Avani: Ali tera kya hoga Ali (pulling his cheeks apart)! kaisa hai!

Ali: Avaniii! bas Kar laal ho jayega aur phir Riya kya sochegi!?

Avani: acha beta ab girlfriend ke liye dost ko bhul gaya!(dramatically) thik hai Dekh le teri dosti!

harleen just arrived at cafe both Avani and Ali greeted her

avani: Ali hum tere cabin me jaa rhe hai kuch der ke liye! Neil Aaye to mat batana tujhe mein badme batati hu!

Ali: Avani yaar har baar na Tu mujhe phasa deti hai!

avani:( puppy face)

Ali: thik hai jaa but Riya ke saath ek date!?

avani: done!

they went inside and soon Ashish also joined by the time

Avani: papa! ye...

before she could speak

Ashish: ye harleen hai right!? nice to meet you!

harleen: aapse bhi mil kar Khushi hui. badi pyaari hai aapki bacchi

Avani: aap dono jaante hai ek dusre ko!?(shocked)

beta Amruta ke sikhaar me kayi phase the so kai unhe chapters hai vo waqt aane par pata chalega!: Ashish (guilty eyes)

Ashish bhaiya aap kyu khud ko us cheez ka zimedaar mante ho! jab galti unki thi: harleen tried to pacify him

Avani: paa! listen abhi hume rona ya tutna nhi hai ! Jo hua use bhaagne ke badle accept karna hoga and paa... ravaan Ka naash karna hai to kisiko to lanka jaana hoga na!

said the last sentence observing ashish's reaction

harleen: beta ye kyu..., mein khud ko maaf nhi Kar paungi if tujhe

Ashish got numb but then uttered: Lanka jaa to rhi hai par muje maayus mat karna(gathering his courage)

Avani: mein aap log lo update karti rahungi but abhi plan discuss kare

Avani started with the plan and it took 30 mins for her to explain everything.

meanwhile Ali was constantly curious about which khictdi is being cooked

Ashish: toh... kab se start hoga ye plan..!?

expecting few days interval to spend time with Avani

avani:( breaking his expectations) inhaling heavily: kal.

identity ready ho jayegi bus ab Amruta ki nazaro mein aana hai.

now that the discussion was over Ali was called in to be briefed about Avani

Avani: Dekh Ali! ab se mein ananya verma hu!

Ali: accha tere naamkaran ki discussion thi!? joking

Avani: Ali ... ab sunega!? mein ek mission pe jaa rhi hu sab ke liye avani is on break and out of India and agar mujhse saamna ho to I m ananya verma thik hai.

Ali: now Ali was damn serious and just nodded

sab se important Neil ko ya kisiko bhi nhi pata chalna Chahiye ki mein kaun hu!!!

everyone nodded

but Avani dhyaan rakhna: Ali

so that's all

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chapter 12

later at night

In Mehta mansion

Ashish was miles away from sleep as he knew what was Avani upto but also knew about amruta, all the flashes were so raw as if it happened just now leaving him again terrified

aayesha too was watching this and she knew something is bothering him so she went to meet him

aayesha: aise tehelne se neend nhi aayegi ! ye lo coffee! tumhare type ki

Ashish: (unwilling but took) thank you

aayesha: ek baat puchu!?

Ashish: haa! pucho na ! maine Kabhi roka hai kya!?

aayesha: tumhe kya problem hai!?...kab se tehel rahe ho! face pe wrinkles padi hai tension me ho...!(worried)

Ashish: aisi koi baat nhi hai just work load ( could not make eye contact)

aayesha: itne saalo se jaanti hu tumhe jhoot bolna nhi aata aankhe tak Mila nhi rhe ho...Kahi avani...(frown) as she knew whenever it comes to avani he is that nervous and worried

Ashish: (shocked easy to notice from his face) nhi! ai...ai..aisa Kuch nhi hai tum jao so jao mein aata hu (shivering)

aayesha:(I know ye usi manhus Ka Kia hua hai ghar se to chali gayi par Zindagi se...huh) ok!

but aayesha knew that he won't tell her and nor was she interested and what's important was him to calm down so she went to dayawanti

aayesha: maa! so gaye ho kya

dayawanti who was about to sleep heard her and opened the door

dayawanti: are aayesha!Tu is waqt Kuch baat hai kya!?

aayesha: maa vo ashish aaj jab se aaye hai tension mein hi hai jaise unhe Kuch under hi under khaye jaa rha hai! shahyad us manhus av!!

dayawanti: manhus nhi aayesha!!!(angry) tujhe us se problem hai mein samjhti hu lekin uski koi galati nhi thi par phir bhi ...phir bhi sab se dur chali gayi tere un sabdo ne use aisa sadma pohuchaya ki ab vo khud ko vakai main manhus samajhti hai! Tu jaanti hai...(smiling) huh...Tu kya jaanegi mein batati hu vo ladki ne tere bdae ke ek din pehle hi tera bdae manana shuru Kar diya tha.. bohot Khush thi.. aur vo bdae gift from ananya verma... she stopped and composed herself Tu jaa aur so ja mein bhejti hu Ashish ko!

she left and now aayesha was more angered by Avani

tum nhi chodogi na ek bhi mauka mujhe nicha dekhane ka! are tumse se dusman ache and she went to check upon Ashish to know about avani to create hurdle for her

dayawanti: batuk...! idhar aa!

Ashish: are maa! Tu kab aayi aur Tu soyi nhi!?

dayawanti: beta tension mein ho aur maa ko neend aaye aisa ho sakta hai kya!?

Ashish: maa aise Kuch nhi hai! Tu so ja me bhi so jaunga

dayawanti: ye Tu bhi jaanta hai ki mein nhi jaaungi aur mein bhi . ab bata kya Karne jaa rhi hai avani.

Ashish: (remembering Avani s words ) maa! khud ko khatre me dalne jaa rhi hai.

dayawanti: batuk... peheli mat bujha Sab Kuch bata.

Ashish (crying): maa! is se jyaada Kuch aur nhi bata sakta par haa bohot darr lag rha hai (sliding head upon her lap) kahin... bohot koshish ki strong rehne ki par..

dayawanti: (worried but calmed her down) batuk...Tu bhi na teri beti hai vo ...ladna jaanti hai...aur dekhna vo jeet ke hi aayegi.. Tu bhi na vaise ye to bata kaha hogi vo

Ashish:(sorry maa) kal jaa rhi hai out of India.

dayawanti: aur Tu ab bata raha hai ... Tu rukh...pehle to Avani ki khabar leti hu...

she called Avani

Avani: are dadiii kaise ho!?

dayawanti: Jaan Lena nhi bhulegi na!!!! bataya mujhe Ashish ne...Tu jaa rhi hai mission pe.

avani:(shocked and still after registering for the words ) k...ky...kya b..bataya aapko papa ne!?

dayawanti: yehi ki Tu jaa rhi hai kal out of India Kisi dangerous mission pe!? par kyu ...? Accha ye chod ache se jaa aur aa! Mera ashirwaad hai tere Saath.

Avani: thank you dadi ! par apni davai mat bhulna!

dayawanti: thik hai aur phone karte rehna , good night.

aayesha-accha Hoga agar aayegi hi nhi

soon Avani ended the call and sun appeared with her 007 skills

sun - madaam! ye rahi Amruta ka time table and haa kal vo Kisi business meeting ke liye hotel grand jaa rhi hai.

Avani : perfect sun! great job. thanks and ab se I m ananya verma and ye rha Mera look so abhi se hum tabhi hi baat karenge jab mein tumhe phn karungi or else if it's urgent.

sun: thik hai ma'am ! dhyaan rakhna.

avani just nodded and sun left but just then her phn blinked a message as she read tears welled up her eyes

aayesha maa- accha hoga agar tum aao hi na! aaj bhi Ashish tumhari vajah se tensed the..tum kyu nhi chodti Hume akela..and thanks but no thanks for that gift...MS.VERMA

jaanti hu aap naraaz ho aur ek din aap man ho jaoge par maa aap nhi jaante ki Aapke sabd kante ki tarah chubte hai... please maa ek baar Muje pyaar se aakar bolo mein sach me chali jaungi

she cried and slept

there harleen too was tensed and Neil could sense it easily

Neil: masi kya hua hai!? kya Soch rahe ho!?

harleen: Kuch nhi bache! chal sone chalte hai

Neil: are u sure!!!!!

harleen: 100% ab chale

both went to respective rooms and slept

that's all guys