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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Nice one dear! It's getting interesting. I would love to read more. Do continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Will surely post the next chapter soon.
But seriously this meant a lot as I felt that it's not that interesting and I too m writing it for the first time so just waited for u all's reply
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice and different concept... you are keeping me hooked to the story line... continue soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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chapter 5

ASA Avani reached Riya's boutique she knew the usual procedure that Riya followed always whenever she visits her boutique,

as Riya saw Avani she shot daggers at her immediately as to what she had been just like some janam janam ke dushman

Avani: Dekh Riya I know kal ke liye but sach mein sab itna jaldi hua n tym nhi Mila Varna Kisi ko to inform Kar hi Derick

Riya: par tu vaha pohunchi kaise( as if unaware but she too had her sources)

avani: mat puch ek ladka tha use laga ki mein suicide kar rhi hu and he came to help but kaam badha Diya.

Riya: achha...hnm kya naam hai uska??

Avani :( immediately )Neil .

Riya: (smirking) ok aur bata kya hua? I mean tu thi, handsome sa ladka tha aur koi bhi nhi tha and beach side tha Kuch to hua hi hoga ( manupating things to get her tell more about the man)

Avani: oh please Tu jaanti hi hai ki meri lyf mein vo sab ki koi jagah nhi and chod us Neil ki hum kapde dekhe.?

Riya (frowning as her plan got flop): mujhe pata tha isiliye tere liye Teri pasand ki designs banvayi hai but with Riya the great ke touch ka and ye tu sabhi try karegi and rakhegi bhi.

A: ok ma'am aur Kuch!?

Riya: nthg that's like a good girl.
they both got engrossed in getting avanis proper outfits.
but soon Avani received a call and she noticed but got nostalgic about the person who called her as she shared a good bond with that person no matter what ups and downs and she considers him as his biggest wealth or rather Neela maa ki jaan basti hai and she had a hope ki jab bhi Neela maa uthegi to she will ask for him just as few memories came the phones ring caught her attention and with most of her courage she answered the call.
a:hee...hello.
Ashish: beta Avani mein bol rha hu tera dad Ashish kaisi hai Tu!?

a: ha dad thik hu par aap aise kyu bol rhe ho mujhe pata hai ki ye tum hi ho koi introduction ki jarurat nhi

Ashish: nhi beta socha ki tujhe bulne ki aadat hai jaise pichle 4 Saal se apne ghar ko bhul gayi hai to yaad dila do

a: papa ab bas bhi Karo na main aati to hu na aapse milne and I know aap kal bohot tension me they and I am sorry for that

Ashish: haa par beta tu jaanti hai na I miss you and Teri awaaz sune bina mera din nhi gujarta to isiliye chahe tu Teri duty nibha par tujhe ek call roz dena hi hoga kafi darr lagta hai... already maa ko to...ab beti bhi nhi hogi to Mera kya hoga.

a: papa maa ko kya!? aap aisa mat bolo vo jarur aayegi aur phir aap dekhna mein Kabhi jhoot nhi bolti (tears welled up in her eyes)
as she had no words and strength to continue she just said I will call u later and disconnected the call and just as she disconnected the call she could not control herself and hence ran away from boutique as she could not handle her break down.
but as she was going with tears in her eyes Riya noticed it and could make it out as to what would have happened but she knew no one can meet that avani whom she has hidden since that incident only few gleams can be visible but not that Avani as if a great fake wall exist and she got worried as a good elder sister
within seconds she grabbed her phn and called
Ali: hi Riya aaj ka din kahi dream to nhi hai na?
Riya : Ali stop it Yaar Kabhi to serious ho ja Amol bhi hai line par .
Ali: just as Riya informed ki this is a con call he understood something is serious and hence he just asked out of concern jyaada ro rhi thi kya!?
Riya: us se kya fark padta hai , fark is se padta hai ki vo upset hui hai and usko diversion ki jarurat hai Varna...
Amol: vo saari baatein ghoomti rahegi Uske mind mein rite!? but di vo thik hai na!?
Riya : haa but usko divert karna hoga,kya kare...?
Ali: Riya sun mujhe na ek cafe party Ka invite aaya hai with passes jaana hai kya
Riya: Idea to achha hai par...
Amol: par di nhi mane gi
just as all of them were thinking about how to convince Avani Neil reaches Ali's cafe and sees him serious with deep thought in eyes
Neil(winking) all fine!?
Ali: Riya...Amol... idea kyu na hum Neil ko bole!?? cheerfully
Riya: Ali ye vohi ladka hai na Jo Avani ke Saath .?
Amol: wait Avani di aur ek ladke ke Saath!!!!! maine kya miss kiya hai!?
Riya: baad mein batati hu par Ali tujhe lagta hai vo Kar payega convince!?
Ali: try Karne mein kya jaata hai!?
Riya: ok then if everything falls to place then let's meet up!
bye
as the call got disconnected Ali saw the weird expression of neil just as bakre ko halal hone ke pehla vala expression
Ali ( very buttery): Neil Tu aa gaya mere dosst aa baith mein na tere liye chocolate muffins lata hu tere favourite.
Neil: aliii8. ye kya chal rha hai mujhe bataye ga ya tujhe hi muffin banna hai!!!!!?
Ali: Neil Dekh please Tu mana mat karna please

just as Ali told him about their target and he has to do
Neil's eyes grew wider and wider
Neil: Tu pagal ho gaya hai kyaa !!!!! tujhe Sher ke pinjere mein dalne ke liya aur koi nhi Mila kya and vaise bhi hum dono dushman hai vo meri baat nhi manegi so i am out of this plan ... bye
Ali: achha hai aaj ye din bhi Dekha Diya mere maula(dramatically) dosst dosst na rha jaa chod ke Tu bhi chala jaa mujhe jaise Avani
Neil (irritating) : kaha hai Avani!?
Ali(440v smile): police station abhi nhi but 30 minutes mein hogi.
Neil: tujhe kaise pata ki only 30 mins hi lagega !?
Ali: hum bachpan ke dost hai aur ab to Hume ek dusre ke baare mein sab Kuch pata hai so...tellypathy mere dost
then see you both at 8in cafe yum!!
Neil left to meet avani only for his friend ali
as he reached police station in 20 mins he met an interesting character
sun: arre aap yaha!!!?
Neil: haa mein Avani se Milne aaya hu!?
sun: arre par madaam to yaha hai nhi!
Neil: ye hi khasiyaat hai is department ki koi bhi time pe hota hi nhi
sun: are aisa nhi hai bas maam aati hi hogi vo kahi phasi hongi
Neil: ha vo to ek perfect excuse hai apni galti ko chupane Ka!!
Avani: ahem..ahem lagta hai aaj kisiko humari jarurat hai

Neil: astonished as exactly 30 mins were over and she was there and her face had smudge kohl towards ends indicating that she might have cried but none of his business so he started aaj Maine kaha tha na dood ka dood aur pani ka paani ho jayega ye dekho( showing her passes of the cafe)

Avani: haa to main iska kya karu!?

Neil(smirking):kanun ko saboot Chahiye hota hai na... ye hai vo saboot jo batata hai ki Ali Mera achha dosst hai.
he had invited me to join him in cafe tonight.
vaise tum to bachpan ki dost ho na tumhe to... before he could complete

avani:Dekho Ali Mera dosst hai koi degree nhi ki main uska proof leke ghoomu and second usko pata hai ki mein nhi jaungi isiliye usne pucha nhi(at least puch to leta aliii8)

Neil: madaam tum na Kitna bhi mujhe convince Karo par the sad fact is Ali ne mujhe invite Kiya hai tumhe nhi...and acche dost ki tarah mein jaunga Uske Saath ( just as small kindergarden kids fighting for )

Avani: I guess mujhe bohot kaam hai agar aaj tum free ho that doesn't mean mein bhi .. u know so please leave

Neil:fine... but itna mat jalo varna fire brigade ko bolana padega( smirking and leaving)

Avani: Ali bhi na mujhe pucha to hota kya Yaar ali!!!!

she got engrossed in her work
after a while she got Ali's call she was irritated so she disconnected
Ali: smiling as Avani was jealous and could clearly understood and again gave her call... disconnected...call... disconnected...call
finally as if never ending cycle came to end
Avani : kya hai Yaar Ali main busy hu jaldi bol
Ali: are Yaar Avani Tu itni kya busy hai ki mujhse...tere bachpan ke dost se baat Karne ke liye time nhi hai

Avani: achha tujhe Yaad hai hum bachpan ke dost bhi hai!?(mocking)

Ali: haa mujhe to yaad hai isiliye to call Kiya actually koi bhi nhi tha na baat Karne ke liye to tujhe call Kiya actually na aaj ek cafe ki party invites Aaye hai and me,riya,neil and Amol jaa rahe hai and mein confuse hu ki kya pehnu Tu help Kar na

Avani(matlab sab ko Bola mujhe hi nhi): mujhe kya puch raha hai puch le tere us akdu dost se and vaise bhi tune mujhe invite nhi Kiya to mujhe kaise pata hoga party Ka theme kya hai u ask others.

Ali: invite nhi Kiya!? bol to aise rhi hai jaise Tu aati!vaise chal ab karta hu invite aayegi kya!?

Avani(calming herself down): nhi tum jao enjoy Karo mein thik hu yahi.

Ali: Dekha! tujhse aacha to vo neilll hai stressing on Neil Jo ek Baar me hi ha bol diya Tu toh as expected spoil spot hi nikli anyways mein do pass bhijva deta hu tere aur sun ke liye so just in case you change your mind.

Avani(deep down thinking):hnmmm
Ali knew that it's a tough nut to crack so there were 50-50 chances ki vo aati but then too he kept the plan on and informed Riya about it.

sun: maam humara case 007 hai na Uska lead Mila hai ,I mean aaj ek cafe mein vo log trade Karne vale hai and jo collect Karne aane vala hai drugs vo criminal Ka right hand bhi hai.

Avani:good job sun! bus ab ye bata cafe kaunsa hai hum aaj hi under cover jayenge as civilian so kisiko bhi humpe sakh nhi Hoga!

sun: maam cafe yum

Avani:ye vahi cafe hai jiski aaj party hai na... ok sun get ready in some party outfits will go I have the passes jisse kisiko bhi humpe sakh nhi Hoga

sun:ok ma'am!

at around 8:15 Ali and Neil already reached cafe and were waiting for others to join
Riya :aliii8.
Ali: hi Riya giving a side hug.
Ali: Riya meet...
Riya: Neil right !?
Neil: ha but tumhe kaise pata chala ki mein neil hu!?
Riya: Avani ne tumhare bare mein bataya tha and baki Ali ne
Neil: ye miss.advertisement advt ki Tarah Mera publicity Kar rhi hai to himself

just than Amol joined in
Amol: hi everyone!
Riya: hi Amol,
Ali: Aja mere Bhai meet neil.
Amol : Accha to ye hai Neil.
Neil: to tumhe bhi Avani ne bata hi Diya mere bare me
Amol: actually di ne nhi ye dono ne
neil: thank god but itna kaam jiske liye Kiya vo aayegi na!?
Ali, Riya : haa shayad.
Neil: shayad! I mean kafi attitude hai usme itna try Karne ke baad bhi nhi aayi.
Ali : attitude nhi Neil but usko uska nature rokh rha hai! jis din vo use face Kar legi na vo happily normal ladki ki life jiyegi
just than Avani and sun discussing the case came.
Avani: hi Ali! Riya hi Amol Kaisa hai Tu and good to see u too Neil
sun : hello everybody
Ali: Avaniii mein sapne mein to nhi hu na
Riya : stop it Yaar ali let's go inside bhuk lagi hai.
Amol: chalo Varna miss drama queen ko chakkar aa gaya to...
just as everyone was preceding inside Amol ,sun and Neil were following them
Amol: vaise sun di ,aaj din Bhar me di ne Kuch khaya kya !?
sun: din Bhar Ka to nhi pata but mere Saath thi tabhi to nhi khaya tha.
Amol: yahi aadat na nhi pasand hai mujhe jab bhi upset hoti hai khud ko to itna busy Kar deti hai aur khanna bhi nhi khati, just hope abhi Kuch kha le

Neil was observing their conversation and was jealous of Avani that she had such a cute family and he could not have that but soon composed himself

so guys that's it for today.
my part is done and now it's Ur tym please do comment and get me Ur reviews
I know last chapter was bit lengthy hope this is not that lengthy but please like share Ur views

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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
awesome... amazing... continue soon...pm me if possible...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey thanks a lot but seriously I have not done pm yet so u will have to wait
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
chapter 6

as Avani and sun were on their mission but none knew their motto so they decided to go with the flow and not to disturb anyone by telling them their plan.

they too had a trap set as they knew the lustful behaviour of the person and that's the reason for sun and avanis get up

Riya: finally!!! ab Kuch order kare!?
they were busy Avani was desperately looking for her prey and his companion and as it involves high profile persons it's more risky than any other chase

Neil: (winking at Avani) madaam Kuch order bhi karogi ya logo ko hi apna dinner bana loge!

Avani: mujhe bhook nhi hai Pani chalega thanks ( absent minded)

Neil: mujhe to laga tha ki tum to Kuch khaogi but yaha sirf pani pene aayi ho!?

Avani: nhi aur bhi Kuch important kaam hai

Neil: Kaisa kaam!?

Avani: realising the blunder she made quickly with confidence haa Ali ke liye aayi hu important hi hua na

Neil: (gave a confused look) ok.

Riya: guys jab tak khanna aata hai let's click pics

Avani: nhi Yaar Riya tum log lo na ( looking in other direction)

Amol: di! kya hua hai jab se Aaye ho aap Jaise kisiko dund rhe ho kya hua hai.

Avani: aisa Kuch nhi hai Amol.
mein...tum...logo ke Saath hi to hu

Amol: (grabbing everyone's attention and bit louder tone)
Di ! sun di kaha hai and aap Baar Baar Apne baalo ko kyu haath laga rhe ho aur yaha vaha kyu Dekh rhe ho!

aapko pata hai subhe se sab lage pade hai Aapke mood ko thik Karne ke plan mein!?
aur to aur ye Neil bhi Jo apna aur tumhara matter chod kr aaya tumhe convince Karne and see what are you up to ...

Avani : Dekh Amol I know tum log kafi mehnat Kar rhe they subah se ( hiding micro phone) and aisa Kuch bhi nhi hai I was just seeing the surrounding of the cafe.

Neil: to tumne aisa kyu kaha tha Kuch imp kaam hai!?

Riya (going towards Avani and seeing the ears removing the hairs aside)Avaniii micro phone..!?

everyone understood ki mamla gambhir hai!
Ali: Avani batayegi ya fir...

Neil: watching everyone in stress

Avani: Dekho ! don't panic but mein aur sun yaha ek mission par Aaye hai and you all please leave the place asap I will join u all afterwards.

I know you all r confused, lots of questions and also tensed but nthg will happen trust me sun will be here as I have to leave and cover the front within 5 mins so is there any queries

before anyone could speak
Riya: I trust you but please khayal rakhna n Baki badme and isiliye u have to come safe and sound.

Ali: I know Tu champ hai but khayal rakhiyo

amol: di plz kisiko Kuch nhi Hona Chahiye.

Avani: ok..ok and Amol kisiko Kuch nhi Hoga agar use pata chala to bhi ... cuz Uska target koi aur Hoga. and one more thing kal na Ayesha maa Ka bdae hai I have made the arrangements but you all please handle that as I don't know how long will operation will last and neilll... thanks.

before anyone could answer Avani was called and sun had came to see them.
sun: maam are you sure!?

Avani: sun I can't risk kisiko bhi so I am 100%sure

sun: jai hind ma'am and please return soon mujhe aur department ko aapki jarurat hai.
as Avani left sun knew that now it's a big task to calm them down and she prepared herself to face them

all: sun abhi bataogi ya humare questions Ka wait karogi!!!!(frown)
sun: bataungi but this is not safe place let's first reach there and all Ur answers will be answered.
all reached avanis apartment

they were shocked to see the plan,threads, avanis pic ,some criminals pic with info.
all were now in worry also Neil was trying to understand the connection between the avanis pic and chart placed there.

sun: ye pandit hai.. kafi naam hai iska aur isi naam ke under vo drugs n human trafficking Kar rha hai...kafi tym se department is par nazar rakhe hue hai and last year hi Hume is case ke baare mein pata chala n maam ne ek ke ek sab ko pakdne ke liye plans banaye Kuch successful hue aur Kuch... aur aaj bhi vohi plan hai and Uska successful Hona bohot jaruri hai Varna hum ye loose Kar denge and humari mehnat waste ho jayegi, agar ye fail bhi hua to kisiko bhi kano kan pata bhi nhi chalega as this is secret and ...she paused

Ali: sun and kya...!(terror)

Neil: and Avani ki life bhi ja Sakti hai(firm).

all were distraught upon the developments
Amol: ye...sab...kaise (tears and shock)

Riya : stumbling Avani...(crying).

Neil quickly ran to get water for them
sun: tried to connect to Avani if possible to get the update.

Ali: sun! ye tumne Hume pehle kyu nhi bataya tu jaanti ho hum kya bolenge family se !?
trying to be strong

sun: I am sorry but mujhe unhone mana Kiya tha vo jaanti thi aap unhe nhi jane doge.

Neil: sun koi update ki vaha kya ho rha hai, I think u should go and cover there we r here

sun: just as she was leaving she heard Avani on line

Avani: nhi sun tum yaha nhi aaogi!

sun: maam par aap jaante ho it's risky

Avani: isiliye sun I can't risk u! tujhe vahi rhna Hoga
before sun could answer

Ali: samajhti kya hai Apne aap ko Marne Ka itna sauk hai tujhe !? ab dadi aur uncle ko kya bolenge

before Ali could continue

Avani : Ali speaker pe daal! plz tym nhi hai jaldi! ab suno sab please tension mat lo Mera aur maut Ka na aaj koi plan nhi hai and humari aaps me nhi jumti so mujhe Kuch nhi Hoga and ha ghar pe kisiko kuch bhi nhi pata chalna Chahiye Amol ro mat kal Ka sab tujhe handle karna hai and Riya please mat ro I know maine galat Kiya but please kal sab sambhal lena kisiko udaas mat karna just before she could continue there was a firing sound in background
mujhe jaana Hoga bye!!!

all of them were shocked as if time just freezed and all they could hear is that sound
Neil: I think we all should be strong and hope Avani will return fast

sun : according to plan agle 25mins mein ma'am aane Chahiye but ...

Neil: but kya

sun : vo nhi Aaye to it means ki unki Jaan ko khatra hai!

Ali: sun tujhe vo vaha Jane nhi degi but mujhe to usne Kuch nhi kaha na mein jaata hu aur kaan khich ke leke aata hu!

Neil: aliii8 I think u should stay here mein jaata hu dekhne u please stay and handle them

sun: but sir aap kaise unhone mana Kiya hai

Neil:haa but mein Ali ko aise nhi dekh sakta and I have seen people loosing their dear ones and their pain.
yes this is the same Neil who hates police department but today what was new let's see that in next chapter

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful! This is shaping up really well. Love the daring Avni. I hope Neil's opinion about her would change soon. Are you bringing Ragini Pandit & Vidyut R to the story? And why doesn't Avni go to her home? Something to do with Ayesha? Why is Neela in coma?
There are a lot of questions. Please update soon dear. I really want to read more.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Hi all!
Here's your new chapter hope you all like it

N O C O P Y!!!!!!

chapter 7:
within seconds the cafe crowd was replaced by civil police officers and constables in case of emergency situation to be curbed

now was the time when Avani was speaking to Ali on microphone and just as she heard gunshots in background she rushed to the scene and was shocked to see one constable was injured and other officer was on the gun point of the pandits man

soon Avani realised that it's not gonna be easy as they already knew people are from police department and they are in tight spot but Avani cannot loose any of the officers

ballu: tumhe na Kuch jyaada hi jaldi hai Marne ki! kya socha tha tum logo ne hume pakadna itna aasan hai ab dekhte hai kaise bachte hai!
aur tum officer avani kaha tum ek lady officer hoke pandit se takrane ki Chah rakhti ho!? vaise Accha hota ki gun point pe tum hoti thoda kareeb we hum jaan lete! Maja aa jaata!!

Avani: aaj tum Bach ke nhi ja paoge ballu!!!(as aata Avani chi satakli and she had enough of it)
tumhe kya laga ki mein ek lady officer hu to dar jaungi!?
tere jaise to kaiyo ko jail ki hawaa khila chuki hu main aur haa kum jor hum nhi tu hai jise aaj bhi bachne ke liye bandok ki nok ka sahaara lene ki aadat hai

ballu: Avani soye hue sher ko jagao mat varna tumhari tabahi ki jimedaar tum hi hogi!

Neil just reached the spot trying to analyse the situation with mixed feelings one telling him to leave as police is one responsible for his current state and past incidents and other her masi had said ki log har har tarike ke hote hai n what Avani is doing will be good for future
after long debate he decided to help her out
Avani: anjaam to tera aaj kharab hoga jara apni ankhe khol aur dekh Apne Aas pass ab tere paas ek hi option hai ki Tu meri baat maan le!

ballu: ufff! ye gussa ! chalo batao itne angaare barsa rhi ho par phir bhi thandak Mili kaleje ko!

Avani: vo officer ko chod aur Uske badle mujhe tere Saath leke jaa Varna tera bachna na mumkin hai!

ballu: vaise Accha offer hai par tu kab se itne jaldi ghutne takne lagi kahi tera koi plan to nhi hai!?

Avani: agar hai bhi to u don't have option to jaldi se use chod

ballu: indicated his partner to leave the officer and the officer started taking one by one step.

Neil: Avani!!! kya Kar rhi ho(himself)
pagal ho gayi hai kya.
as Avani reached near ballu she realised that the officer is safe n sound and now she can execute her plan b

ballu: vaise man na padega Kuch to baat hai tum me pandit ji bhi Khush ho jayenge tumhe Dekh Kar ! chale

Avani: (as ballu loose his eyes over Avani she grabbed a injection and poked into ballu s neck ) vaise milna to main bhi chahti hu tumhare pandit se but aaj nhi aaj mujhe tumse baatein Karni hai

before Avani could continue ballu's partner grabbed a rod and hit her on her head and she stumbled but she asked the officers to not intervene and she was about to fight but ballu to some how stood up and pointed gun on avani
now Neil had enough and slowly he reached behind ballu and made him unconscious by punching him on his head and beating ballu's partner as much as he was on to the ground unconscious

Avani: tum yaha kyu Aaye!?
Neil: not a word! chalo Hume hospital jaana Hoga u r bleeding heavily.

Avani: I m fine ( stumbling) I need to do the procedure and inko Lockup mein dalna hai

officer: madaam vo sab hum sambhal lete hai aap jayiye kafi blood loss ho rha hai.
before Avani could utter a word she collapsed on the ground

Neil immediately rushed her to nearest hospital and only informed sun about it and made sure ki kisiko pata na chale

sun: sir! madaam !?

Neil: calm down! vo thik hai bas blood loss hua hai doc hai vo Dekh rhe hai, I think ab she is fine so we can inform them.
after few minutes as Neil informed others about the incidence they came asap to the hospital to see her

Ali: Neil!! av...!?

Neil: Ali sambhal khud ko she is fine bas thodi Der me usko hosh aa Jayega

Riya: Neil !! thank you aaj tumhari vajah se Avani!!!!

Neil: please Riya aakhir hum dost hai so itna mein Kar sakta tha.

soon they reached at Avani s ward to see her

Avani( trying to sit): arre tum log aise kyu Dekh rhe ho! I am fine! sach me.

Riya: haa! Tu toh great Avani hai na! Ali hum hi pagal hai Uske liye worried hote hai Amol ki halat to sab ko pata thi aur ye kehti hai I m fine!

Amol: mazak lagta hai na di! hum hi pagal the inhi ko to sauk hai khatre ki tokri uthane ki ! ek Baar bhi nhi socha na humare baare mein! no it's ok ab mujhe bhi baat nhi
Karni(tears welled up)

Ali: avani kab samjhegi Tu!?

Avani(tears in her eyes):ab tum log bhi naraaz ho jaoge!!!

Riya: nhi! Aarti utarenge(frowning) no actually u stay here u are the great super woman and hum jaate hai(left)

Amol to went behind her

Avani: Ali Tu to mat jaa ! sab to Ruth te jaa rhe hai ! Tu bhi!?

Ali: Avaniii Dekh tension mat le vo log worried hai isi liye gussa ho gaye unhe time de sab thik hoga Tu rest Kar.

Neil please thodi Der yahi rukh I will see them!
Neil nodded
Avani: thanks but tum vaha kyu Aaye!?

Neil: kyuki pata tha tum dumb ho and phas jaogi!

Avani: (lost in flash back)
maa! kabse aap yahi baat ghooma Kar bol rhi ho now straight away come to point
.
Neela: Avani mein kaise bolu!
tum na sach mein dumb ho
tears rolling down

Neil: arre dard ho rha hai kya!? doc lo bulau!?

Avani : nhi thanks I think I should rest and she laid down to rest with back facing him so as to keep away from facing him and she went to sleep due to medication

so guys that's all
I hope u all r liking it and please do share Ur views

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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
I hope you are liking it

NO COPY


chapter 8
she went to sleep and Neil was deeply puzzled as he for the first time he came across any police officer being damn serious about her duty and that honest, he felt guilty about his first meet when he was about to push her and remembered harleen's words and he decided to make up for the mistake and soon dozed off.

while Ali returned after having a bad time dealing with them and saw Neil sleeping and so not disturbing him he went out of the ward and waited till sunrise.

next morning around 8 in morning sun came to meet Avani and also knew what would avani require just as she faces her
she first saw Ali sleeping near the bench of her ward and without disturbing him she entered the ward she saw Avani woken up and trying to get ready

"ma'am kaise ho!?
Aapne to dara hi diya tha,
vaha Riya aur Amol bhi tension mein the" sun ask in one go without realising Neil was sleeping

" sun aaram se nhi bol Sakti vaha vo soya hai! ab ye batao Kuch pata chala!?" Avani ask

" maam vo sab ho Jayega aap aaram kijiye doc ne aapko complete rest till 2 days bola hai na!?" concerned

Neil soon heared the small discussion going on and came out of his sleep realising as kya ho rha hai

sun meri chinta chod aur ye bata ki ballu ke baare me Kuch mila ,I mean any lead!?

par ma'am aapko resttt... as she was completing her sentence Avani stumbled and soon was about to loose balance but was held by Neil

dekha jaga diya na tune! ab kaam ki baat kare!? -Avani

kaam! abhi tak tum under observation thi; thik se khadi nhi ho paa rhi ho! kal se Kuch khaya nhi hai, almost marte marte bachi ho and tumhe us criminal ki padi hai!? Imean u r impossible, logo ko unki fikar honi Chahiye jo unke liye puri raat tension me they, vo log ne ghar me shayad kisiko bhi pata nhi Chalne Diya and tum yaha par! a raged Neil said

till then Ali also reached to check upon Avani finding Neil tensed

avani- haa, mein jaanti hu kal kya hua tha n vo log kya Kar rhe hai mere liye par duty is duty aj meine us criminal se Kuch bhi information nhi nikala to vo chut Jayega by the end of the day and thanks to political influence they use , aj agar pata nhi chala na to shayad mein bebas aur lachar ladkiyon ko bacha nhi paungi!I think that's enough I should leave

Ali: Avaniii,kal hi itni daat khayi hai tune and abhi jaana jaruri hai kya !?

Avani: aliii8 thanks Yaar unko sambhalne ke liye Neil thanks for being here but tum log samjho aaj mera jaana jaruri hai and haa un logo ki help karna maa ke bdae decoration mein! please, ok bye

as Avani left Ali saw a disgusted expression on Neil's face
ali- chodna Yaar Neil Avani na aisi hi hai, kisiki life ko khatre me nhi dekh sakti aur shayad kal bhi isi liye us officer ko bachane ke liye khud ko khatre me dala chal u get freshen up aj tera first day hai na Mehta and sons me!?

saying that both went and got freshen up and reached Mehta house as Ketan had called Neil at home to discuss the project as he was working from home

Neil: good morning sir!
Ketan : good morning,on time! Impressive!
Neil: thanks
Ketan: actually aj bhabhi Ka bdae hai so sab log busy hai and isiliye I thought to work from home as dono manage ho Jayega so let's start our work!

soon they got busy in their jobs
on the other end Ali went to meet dadi
dadi: good morning Ali!

ali: good morning dadi.toh aapko to Avani ne bata hi diya hoga na ki party Ka theme kya hai

dadi: haa! but riya and Amol se milkar aage ka plan karte hai sab ko bol do ki use wish na kare n pretend ki sab uska bdae bhul gaye hai

soon Riya and Amol too joined them and they asked winking at Ali about Avani to which he assured that she's fine

Riya: soo venue and all final Kar Diya tha Avani ne bas ab Hume chachi ko pata nhi lagne dena hai and unhe ye bolna hai Kisi ki party mein hum invite hue hai

Amol: chalo! ab sab responsibility baat lete hai

at night too the party hall
before anyone comes Avani quickly came to see the arrangements and was happy as it was same as planned and was about to leave only a voice grabbed her attention

rockstar rukegi nhi!?

(tears welled up)are papaa! aap? itne jaldi ? aapko to maa ke Saath hona Chahiye na!

ab Apne aasu bhi chupana Sikh gayi hai! accha hai ab mein hu hi kaun!? vaise bhi Ashu tyaar ho rhi thi so socha ki arrangements Dekh Lu!

(hugging him)papaa mein aapki rockstar hu na aur aap mere best friend bhi ho na and vaise bhi mujhe kaam tha socha jaane ke pehle dekhti jau

thik hai but tujhe ye chot kaise lagi!

are ye bas Kuch nhi vo Chota sa accident hua tha but aap kisiko mat batana!

kitni Baar Bola hai dyaan rakho apna par tum ho ki!doc ne kya kaha !? thik ho na!?

haa! I am fine dad. chalo ab me jaati hu bye
she left asap as she could not control anymore and to clear her heart out she went to Neela

at party during 8
all the guest has started coming in and also Neil came as Ketan requested him to join and he too helped Ali with arrangements and as aayesha, dayawanti and Ashish came the lights went off
aayesha was already irritated as no one wished her on her bdae

aayesha: oh off!hum sahi jagah to aaye hai na!? lagta hai party nhi hai yaha!excuse me koi hai yaha! chalo ashish chalte hai wrong place hai.

soon as she turned to leave she echo of people chanting
happy birthday to aayesha ji

ye sab!?( she was shocked as she thought no one remembered her bdae)

Ashish: aisa ho sakta hai!?hum bhul Jaye!
dadi: happy bday ayesha
Riya,Ali: happy birthday
Amol: happy bday
neil: happy birthday aunty
Ayesha: thank you so much

as Ayesha was really happy and also the party was rocking Neil noticed that avani isn't there so he asked Ali

Yaar Ali ye Avani kyu nhi hai!? kal se to bada excited thi bdae ko le Kar and ab!?

Ali changing the topic: chod na Yaar vaise bhi vo busy hai
still Neil was confused and this was noticed by dayawanti

dayawanti: vo nhi aayegi!

Neil: are dadi! aap! kaise ho!

dadi :thik hu! jise tum dund rhe ho vo nhi aane wali!

Neil: kyu dadi !? I mean kal se Amol ko bole jaa rhi thi bdae hai planning ki hai and kafi khush bhi thi par aaj nhi aayegi!?

dadi: kahi Baar kud ko door se hi khushiyoon Ka hissa banna padta hai and Avani door se hi is Khushi ko enjoy Karti hai! kyu! ye mein nhi vo batayegi but Uske liye u have to wait!

Neil: understanding dadi he just nodded and went to assist Ali

soon the party wrapped and guest left now the time for gifts
as usual she was excited for this part of the day and soon she opened everyone's gifts and was really very very happy and one last gift was left

Ayesha: are sab ke gifts to khul Gaye ab ye kiska Hoga(grabbing and finding it from person with name anaya Verma) ananya Verma!
let's open it but pata nhi kaun hai!?

dadi understood her being Avani and kept silence
soon she saw a wonderful bracelet also customised and everyone was spellbound to see it
woow! Kitna accha hai na!? -ayesha

haa!-riya

ab ise pehn le aur chale ghar ab kafi der ho gayi hai!?-dadi

haa maa!chalo par mujhe be ek kaam Yaad aaya hai mein aati hu-diksha

thik hai but jaldi aana- dayawanti

soon everyone left for home and diksha went to meet Neela and avani as she knew about the gift and also how would avani be feeling and where will she be

as she reached to neelas ward she found 2tear strained eyes closed lost in sleep due tiredness bcuz of crying soshe thought to speak to her later and left


so guys that's all



Edited by Jgada - 7 years ago

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