Devil's Bride Samina ff Chapter 60 on page 144 - Page 32

Originally posted by: doublecross

Hey there !

You are doing one swell of a job with this one dear! I guess the the way you introduced all the characters and the slow unravelling of their true nature is something am falling in love with. The layers are getting peeled and every time we are seeing something different in every character. The best part is the pace, it's neither too past, nor too slow. Just the correct balance of all elements which makes this story just so irresistible and so every time I see my inbox ping with an update I silently do a somersault and come rushing to the thread to read the latest offing.

I loved the way sameer explained himself especially the part where he points out the staggering loophole in saxena's story and tries to win naina's trust. I think he is genuinely trying to make amends. This time it seems he wants to give naina Nina and their marriage a chance and that's what am really excited to read about.

Naina's Heart to heart talks with her Maa is something i cherished. It somewhere reminded me of my mother and how she too feeds me and how i love the feeling of her hands feeding me.

Will be waiting for more

Continue soon

Originally posted by: moumita04

Hey Aashna...!! I am back from vacations and just finished reading all your updates. 😳

I am amazed at the way the story is progressing... It's gripping, each and every update. You have maintained the interest and eagerness of the reader despite the daily updates. Great work! 👏

Putting in a combined comment for all the updates -

I liked how Naina gave it back to him understanding his hidden nature. But sometime after that just like Sameer even I could feel she was overdoing her act. Anybody who knows Naina would know that she cannot be bold with everyone and the party costume was a dead giveaway. Sameer understood it, and he played on that. He forced her reveal what she had been doing.

I was stumped at the way he kissed her in the party... I hated it... Touching a woman without affection and against a will is not acceptable, it doesn't matter she is your wife or not. And look what price Naina had to pay for his act. His one moment of revenge could have destroyed her life because it made her appear cheap in front of Mr. Saxena - not to mention that Saxena himself is an asshole. He capitalized on the information he got, but I am grateful of the fact that Sameer was the one who saved her. What touched me was that in that trouble and mess, she remembered and sought help from Sameer. And afterwards at night too she sought solace in his arms. She didn't feel unsafe with his arms around her, his touch didn't revolt her. Acceptance is there in both of them - and I am so glad to see it.

This incident shifted something inside Sameer and he realized how he missed her bright jovial nature. It also made him realize that what she was going through emotionally and physically. What happened was brutal, but looks like it paved a way for a new relation. And I am happy to read in the latest update that Sameer was successful in convincing her of his innocence. It was needed, for both of them.

I am not going to focus on Sanjay yet, I know he is a future threat, but I will wait for more information on him before commenting. But, I am really curious about Vishakha... I can barely refrain from asking what are you planning to show with her? The way she talked with Sameer and then the way she was advising Naina... She seems good one moment, and bad another.

Eagerly waiting to read more...!! Thank you so much for the daily updates...! 😳

First of all thanks for clearing our doubts..

It was nice update dear.. really liked it!! 👍🏼

Finally, Naina got convinced that Sameer was not involved in this.. So no more misunderstanding 😊

OMG I loved this Sameer.. kaha tha ye ab tak 😛

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: Geminismart

Love the way story is unfolding...

Update soon dear

Desperately waiting for the next part yaar

Originally posted by: acwriter

Around the corner but I m still writing so a late night one

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