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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice update... geet first day started with taunts and scolding from dadima and relatives.. hope maan will stand by her as she is new to the house and support her...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
poor geet
scolded by dadi very first day
hope maan support her
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
part 1
sorry for late comment as out of station for few days


congrats for new story

very nice
geet thinks that maan is force to marry her when he ask her to change her cloths

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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
superb update
maan say he feel cute listening geet's self talk
daadi scold geet hearing taunts from relatives
hope maan will be always on geet's side

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hmm again what a start of her first day
romance se sidha tears poor girl
it's just the beginning ...
picture abhi baki hai mere dost lol
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Nyc concept nd character...maaneet had an arranged marriage which is my favorite topic to read...liked maan's character...geet as always Vry cute...loved maaneet moments...dadi seems to be strict here...well dat will be interesting to read nd maan will be there to save geet frm dadi's scoldings nd these relatives are always hell bent on giving deir taunts nd free advises ...vry nyc starting...do continue soon...waiting for nxt
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update geet woke up in maan arms cursing herself maan hearing her cribbing woke up looking at his wife calling her jaan geet such a confused soul Meera call geet as Dadi asking for her geet in hurry forgot to wear sindoor Dadi being the discipline saas scold geet who ran into maan arm maan very worried for geet while geet doesn't know how to tell maan what's going in her heart
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
I liked how he called her jaan
Geet needs to very careful
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
i hope u are not thinking that maan is going in some verbal fight with everyone . common all when in real life it happen?
u need to keep patince


Chapter 3



Maan held her from ber waist making her turn toward him
M- kya hua jaan?
He asked in a concern voice

Causing her to hug him tighly .
She was feeling alone in this big mantion with none known to her . she now feared to go even downstairs don't know what she will do wrong and get a taunt again .
She hear one relative saying savitri
Why she choose that clumsy girl?
Her niece that she recommended before was best choice for maan .
And what if she say something to him . he feel offended?
That she is complaing about her dadi to him?
M- jaan?
But she never responded a fear was there . that he may be judge her and consider it as her complaining to him about her dadi. She can't even talk to her mother .

She will definatly scare them with the news and her maa surely be so sad & depressed . suddenly she was feeling so alone.

Maan break the hug and made her look toward him by placing his hand under her chin . he first wipe her tears .
M- ok then relax and jao wash ur face.
Saying so he place a kiss on her forehead. She just nodded & left

As soon she left meera knocked door
M- come in
Me- veerji this is for bhabhi she said while forwading a sindoor box
Maan nodded
Meera turned to go when maan stopped her
M- meera what happen downstairs?

Meera turned tensed immideatly
M- daro mat tell me
Then meera tell him everything that happen downstairs .

Me- veerji dadi bhabhi ko bula rhi h
M- u go meera tell dadi we are coming downstairs in few minutes

Meera nodded and went downstairs when maan turn he find geet standing on door . her head downward so she listented everything !

Geet thought he was going to scold her as he look angry .
Maan come toward geet when she say
G- dekhiye i'm sorry i ddidnn
Tears form again in her eyes
G- mujhhee nhhi p p aata

M- shh
Calm down
Saying so he engulf her in his arms
Causing her to hug him back finally she found someone who understand her

M- i know it was not ur mistake . u didn't did it intentionally calm down
G- vvoo daadi ggusa
M- no geet . u are misunderstanding her . it's her way for showing concern .
She faced a tough time in her life that make her somewhat rude but she is not angry .
Okey?
She noddded in yes
Maan placed a kiss on her forehead
M- now calm down & come
He first filled her partition with sindoor
Making her look at him in awe

M- come
She just followed him
..

All look upstairs as maan & geet come downstairs causing a relative to admire the couple .
Savitri look toward them trying to judge did she tell maan? Did geet compkaint about her to his grandson?

When they both come toward her maan smiled & touch her feet first then wish her gud morning .
Causing savitri to smile finally .
She was wrong new dulhan didn't complaint . it was a gud thing according to her .

S- meera go & take dulhan to kitchen for rituals she need to prepare food.

They nodded & both left .
..

Maan sit beside savitri
M- what happen dadi?
U look dull . aren't u feeling well?
Savitri caressed his face
S- i'm fine son just tired .
M- u must take rest dadi .
S- not now so many relatives are still here.
M- no need to get tensed dadi . u told me na she is best?
Geet is ur choice dadi .
I trust u . nothing will go wrong .
Aur agar kuch ho bhi gya toh u are here to guide them.
bcoz i know my dadi won't take wrong decision now come u take rest abhi dinner banne main time lagega .

Saying so maan guided savitri toward her room .
Causing savitri to smile .she just love her grandson . he was more close to her than yash bcoz he was always responsible .
She always feared like any other maa that the new dulhan that will come try to cause rift b/w them but no her choice was right .
..
After few hours



Dinner was served & all sat on dinning table .
Servants served food made by geet .
Geet was so nervous that she feel she is sitting in exam & going to get punishment . when her eyes once met with maan who blink his eyes in assurance

Savitri eat a morsal & called geet
S- dulhan come here
G- ab toh tu gyi geet . u did some sayypa again
But savitri placed a diamond set on her hand
S- food is gud .

Causing geet to look toward savitri like she saw some alien .she said her gud?

All praise her food when a relative who was hell bent on binding maan with her niece say
- Haan thik hi tha but it can be improved


This time savitri replied
S- how naina?
Jitna ki mujhe yaad h ur bahu burned whole food on her first day .
Food is perfect savitri said sterly

Causing her to shut her mouth & maan to smile .
And geet & meera to look at savitri like she has grown some heads .
..

Hj all plz let me know ur view if u want this story to continue .
i'll stop updating the day u prefer to keep silant bcoz it take lot of time to write so i can expect few seconds from u .
thankyou



Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
as usual I'm here
waiting

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