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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely updteee waiting for d nxt updtee
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lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 2




Morning



Geet open her eyes only to find herself lying on him . he was sleeping soundly but his one arm wrapped around her waist .
She gluped
Her heart go dhak dhak
How she reach in his arms? When she was sleeping on extreme end of bed?
G- jalli maa sahi kahti h . i can't sleep on one place .
She tried to get up trying to not intrupt him & make herself embarace again

G- babaji ?
Why i am so clumsy
She crused herself
But her continious murmuring cause maan sleep to break as he is always a light sleeper .
Geet was so busy to notice this
Maan look at her trying to grasp everything . he was not used to girl slepping in hus arms that yoo in morning cursing herself so wonderfully

Maan pull her to himself causing her breath stuck in her through
Good
She make fun of herself again
G- babaji he now must be thinking i'm a joker

Maan chukled listning her
M- no i think u are cute .

Saying so he placed a kiss on her cheek
Causing her to turn totally red.
Geet look toward him with open mouth
M- close ur mouth jaan

Geet frowned jaan? Who?
M- u jaan

Maan teased her .
Never in his life he saw an antique piece like his lovely wife .
But before she respond in any way meera knocked their door it's 7 in morning & surely it's not going to leave a gud impression when all were taunting savitri about her new dulhan


Me- maan veerji?

Causing maan & geet to look toward door
Me- veerji dadi calling bhabhi downstairs . all are waiting for her for first day rituals .

Geet get up with a jerk getting tensed as she look toward cloth
M- u go meera we are coming .
Before maan say something to assure poor soul she ran inside bathroom to get ready .

Geet get ready in record time
In 10 minutes maan found her rushing downstairs where meera already waiting for her .

Maan shook his head smiled & took out his clothes to get ready .
He is not going office due to dadi orders but his dadi want him downstairs as many relatives were still present .
..

Geet when come downstairs she bend to touch feet of elders. Some in return taunt her in b/w their talks she felt bad but never expressed .
Savitri feel offended she didn't like it a bit .
When she hear someone taunting geet that why she didn't appilied sindoor ?

That was enough for her to loose her patince.
S- dulhan come with me
Savitri said sternly


Geet followed her dadi sass with fear in her heart . .
Meera look toward geet with sympathy
Savitri soon closed door and turned to geet
S- WHAT IS THIS DULHAN?
Why u didn't applied sindoor?
I know today girls do nit believe in all this but u did dissapoint me !
I won't tolrate such mistakes again & again .
Go & get ready then only come downstairs .

In all while never a single word escape from her mouth . she did a mistake she admit .
she never faced This situation . in her home her family was strict but never scold her something like that .

Why so difference?
isn't she is a new member ? instead of scolding her if dadi make her understand lovinngly that was a much better option?

Tears form in her eyes that was noticed by savitri
S- yahi problem h beta aapki generation ki.
If someone said something then start crying .

G- n no no daddi ii
Wwoh

S- go & come downstairs fast as we are already late for rituals .

..

Geet come out of her room try to control her tears which was on the verge she rush upstairs when she banged with maan who was coming downstairs after getting ready
M- sambhalke geet
u'll hurt urself

when she distant herself from him . she look at him and then rush upstairs .

..

Maan followed geet
She face said she gonna cry at any moment .

M- kya hua?
Geet for once starteled but wipe her tears immidatly
Maan come toward her
M- kya hua?
She nodded in no and turned to mirror

Maan held her from ber waist making her turn toward him
M- kya hua jaan?
He asked in a concern voice

Causing her to hug him tighly .
She was feeling alone in this big mantion with none known to her . she now feared to go even downstairs don't know what she will do wrong and get a taunt again .
She hear one relative saying savitri
Why she choose that clumsy girl?
Her niece that she recommended before was best choice for maan .
And what if she say something to him . he feel offended?
That she is complaing about her dadi to him?
..

Hj all plz let me know ur view if u want this story to continue .
i'll stop updating the day u prefer to keep silant bcoz it take lot of time to write so i can expect few seconds from u .
thankyou

Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
So fast neha .. not bad
hey update few chapters people will like it slowly
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Nice update... Thats true that nobody understand the new bride everyone expects from her but what about her expectations... Poor geet getting scolded for someone else jealousy... Dadi too cornering her with so called relatives... Thankgod maan is little bit understanding but how much.. waiting eagerly for that...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice part..Geet first day start good but Dadi not like it..Geet listen first time scolding like that..Maybe Dadi has to soft little..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice part. It is.good start of maaneet but dadi is not happy hearing the taunting.geet is new there. Dadi needs to be calm with her. Geet was scared and started to cry. Maan asked the reason but she is.just crying. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
Thank you for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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dadima u can tell her lovingly na...uski adat nehi hai...sab kuch sikhne mein time toh lagta hai na...usse pyar se sikhao na ki daant ke...didnt expected dis frm dadima...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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