Kaleerein: The unsaid love, MEEVAAN SS

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi guys, I have come to a realisation that this forum does not have enough Meevaan's ff/os/ts/ss. So here is a potential start to a ss. I love this show and meevan are my favourite!!!

The story is based on what happened today when the doctors ask for emergency blood and from here onwards, i will develop the story further forward. comments and feedbacks are appreciated. Enjoy!!!

The doctors were doing the up-level best to get Amaya's vitals back on track. Outside the ICU Vivaan was losing his brain just thinking about the possible outcomes. He knew that he had to be strong for Amaya but her being the last shred of family he had left, he did not want to lose her. Meera was hyper conscious of everything that was happening around her: Vivaan's non-stop tears, the doctors and nurses running back and forth, her family worried.

Doctor: Mr. Kapoor, we need blood as soon as possible, the blood bank has ran out of AB - .

Vivaan: I'm AB+ (not knowing what to do, he looked over at Meera, to only find her standing right by his side, but he remembered everything that he has said to her in the past 24 hours, and looked away), I'm going to find blood, you carry on doing your procedures.

Doctor: Okay hurry up. You don't have much time.

Meera was clueless, she had no idea what to do. Her mother was extremely angry at her for her childishness, however only her mother could help her now.

Meera: Mummy, please mujhse baat to kijiye. Acha thike maat kijiye mujhse baat. Papa kiya apko pata hai mera blood group konsa hai?

Amar: Puttar AB-, kiyun?

Meera: (Amaya ab toh tere bhabi tujhe bachaega, himmat maat harna) Amaya ko zaroorat hai.

Saying that, Meera ran off to the nurse who was in charge of the blood arrangement and got ready to donate blood. Vivaan was going to crazy, no one he knew had that type of blood, no blood banks had that type either. He did not know what to do and he was not ready under any circumstances to give up on his sister. He continued.

Vivaan: - on the phone - I DON'T CARE. FIND BLOOD SOMEHOW. I NEED 3 UNITS OF AB- IN THE NEST 10 MINS. YOU KNOW WHAT I CAN DO IF I DON'T RECEIVE THEM.

On the other side of the hospital, Meera was being prepared for the blood donation.

Nurse: Apne ajj kuch khaya? Smoke karti hai? Kiya...

Meera: Didi, ap bas jaldse karo kaam, baad meh pooch na yeh sab ar haan mein khaya hai subhah mein aur nahi, main koy smoke tok nahi karti. Aur thoda aram se karna please.

Meera had a deathly fear of needles, she never willingly came in contact with it, but today, no fear was bigger than Amaya's need of blood. She was ready to give as much as needed and go through any pain and hurdles to make sure that Amaya was okay.

Vivaan's search of blood was still in vain. He couldn't find any, anywhere, whilst walking back in defeat towards the ICU, doctor stopped him.

Doctor: Mr Kapoor, I must say, your wife is one in a billion. She is a keeper.

Vivaan was already sad and very much angry on Meera and now this doctor started to compliment her. His jealousy kicked in even if a little.

Vivaan: Kiya matlab? What did she do? Where is she?

Doctor: Mrs Kapoor is in ward 4, donating blood.

Vivaan did not know how to express his happiness, he ran to ward 4 and what he saw swelled his heart with pride. He knew that Meera is one determined girl, who never gives up. But today she also showed that she is somewhat like him, a person who will do anything for their closed ones. Even through such a hard time, she still stood by his side and supported him, he knew that anyone else would have just walked out when he shouted to do so.

Meera: Didi, aram se please. Mujhe dard hora hai...

Nurse: App chup hoiye please. Mujhe ye karne dijiye.

Meera: Agar mera ye dard Amaya ko bacha sakta hai, toh thik hai, chup rahoongi. (Vivaan could see Meera in immense pain and agony. He hated that.)

Vivaan: - to himself isse ziyada koy ajooba ladki mene kabhi nahi dekha. Itna datne ke bhi, itna suna neki baad bhi, yeh yahain hai, itni ziddhi kaise ho sakta hai.

With that Vivaan went towards her, upon seeing Vivaan, Meera started to get scared. She remembered Vivaan telling her not to be anywhere near Amaya. But as usual she decided not to listen to him and do what her conscious told her to do anyways.

Meera: Vivaan, please mujhe ab maat dato, main ye saab sirf Amaya ko madad karne ke liye kar rahi hoon. Baad meh daat le na, main kuch nahi bolungi, sirf sunongi, pakka promise.

Vivaan was somewhat amused to see Meera rumble to much. Her care and love for Amaya was enough for him but what he said to her earlier today was eating him alive after seeing her go through all that just to make sure that his sister was okay.

Vivaan: Chup! (he holds her hand) mere taraaf dekho, kitni bolti ho tum. Kabhi muh nahi dard karti kiya? Pagal ladki.

Meera calmed down and quickly donated 3 units of blood, despite not having eaten anything for more than 15 hours. After knowing this, Vivaan was trying his best to send her home, but she was not willing to go home.

Meera: Main nahi jaoongi, jo karna hai karlo. Jab tak Amaya nahi uthega main yehi rahoongi.

Vivaan could not say anything and decided to get something to drink for her as she did not want to eat anything.

--- to be continued

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice one dear! You were right, we badly need more stories on MeeVaan!!
I like the progression of your story so far! Keep it up
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Hi guys!!! I decided to make this story only have 2 parts because i can't dedicate that much time as my exams are just 2 weeks away! 😭😭😭 but anyway...here is the last part...enjoy!! :-)



Meera's health was slowly becoming worse and worse as the time was going. She was adamant. She did not want to eat claiming that she was not hungry and Vivaan was growing more and more concerned for her.

Vivaan: Meera kuch toh khalo. Tumne 3 units khun diya ho. Upar se kidnapping se baad tumne kuch nahi khaya...

Meera: mujhe bhuk... (she faints)

Vivaan: MMEEERRRAAA...utho...

Vivaan was already stressed and Meera's childishness was making more stressed.

Vivaan: Didi, kuch kijiye, ye achanak se behush ho gayi. to himself yeh ladki mujhe sach me pagal kar degi. Kabhi koi baat nahi mante, ek bar utne do, phir dekte hai.

Nurse: Ma'am ki nutrients level bohot kaam hai and exhaustion ke liye behush ho gayi. Maine glucose laga diya hai, kuch der meh ut jayegi.

3 hours later

Meera: Vivaan...paani

Vivaan: ab paani chahiye, pakka na? (he was mad at her for not taking care of herself. He knew that somewhere down the line he was to be blamed for it, but she should know that by now that he is like that...) yeh lo...ek minute me abhi ayi.

Meera: Akru, gundamaster kahi ki...

Vivaan: Chalo ab yeh chup chap khalo. Koi behes nahi! Tumhara halat dekhi...esi lag rahiho jeseki tum abhi abhi dead se vapas ayi ho...

Nurse: Mr Kapoor, apki behen ut gayi, ayie! (Vivaan did not have the time to react as Meera jumped from her bed)

Meera: Amaya ut gayi?!?!?!?!?! Chalo Vivaan jaldi jaldi...

She took her glucose off and hurt herself but the excitement to see Amaya was too much for her to realise that whilst taking the pipe off, her scratched herself. Noticing Meera's excitement, Vivaan did not say anything and signalled the nurse to keep quiet and he himself quietly followed the running Meera.

Meera: Amaya...tuh ut gayi!!! (went to hug Amaya)

Amaya: bhabi, ap ki yeh halat kyu??? Ap kuch khaya nahi kiya? Kiya Bhai...ap bhabi ki kheal nahi rak sakti kiya???

Vivaan: abhi abhi utha...aur tum already Meera ke side lena shuru kar dia?? Kiski behen ho tum?? (saying this, he went to hug her with all the force he had at that time)

Amaya: Bhai...I...CAN'T...BREATHE!! Bhai main think hoon...ap roh kiyu rahi ho??? Bhaibi samjhaiye na

Meera's health was slowly becoming worse and worse as the time was going. She was adamant. She did not want to eat claiming that she was not hungry and Vivaan was growing more and more concerned for her.

Vivaan: Meera kuch toh khalo. Tumne 3 units khun diya ho. Upar se kidnapping se baad tumne kuch nahi khaya...

Meera: mujhe bhuk... (she faints)

Vivaan: MMEEERRRAAA...utho...

Vivaan was already stressed and Meera's childishness was making more stressed.

Vivaan: Didi, kuch kijiye, ye achanak se behush ho gayi. to himself yeh ladki mujhe sach me pagal kar degi. Kabhi koi baat nahi mante, ek bar utne do, phir dekte hai.

Nurse: Ma'am ki nutrients level bohot kaam hai and exhaustion ke liye behush ho gayi. Maine glucose laga diya hai, kuch der meh ut jayegi.

3 hours later

Meera: Vivaan...paani

Vivaan: ab paani chahiye, pakka na? (he was mad at her for not taking care of herself. He knew that somewhere down the line he was to be blamed for it, but she should know that by now that he is like that...) yeh lo...ek minute me abhi ayi.

Meera: Akru, gundamaster kahi ki...

Vivaan: Chalo ab yeh chup chap khalo. Koi behes nahi! Tumhara halat dekhi...esi lag rahiho jeseki tum abhi abhi dead se vapas ayi ho...

Nurse: Mr Kapoor, apki behen ut gayi, ayie! (Vivaan did not have the time to react as Meera jumped from her bed)

Meera: Amaya ut gayi?!?!?!?!?! Chalo Vivaan jaldi jaldi...

She took her glucose off and hurt herself but the excitement to see Amaya was too much for her to realise that whilst taking the pipe off, her scratched herself. Noticing Meera's excitement, Vivaan did not say anything and signalled the nurse to keep quiet and he himself quietly followed the running Meera.

Meera: Amaya...tuh ut gayi!!! (went to hug Amaya)

Amaya: bhabi, ap ki yeh halat kyu??? Ap kuch khaya nahi kiya? Kiya Bhai...ap bhabi ki kheal nahi rak sakti kiya???

Vivaan: abhi abhi utha...aur tum already Meera ke side lena shuru kar dia?? Kiski behen ho tum?? (saying this, he went to hug her with all the force he had at that time)

Amaya: Bhai...I...CAN'T...BREATHE!! Bhai main think hoon...ap roh kiyu rahi ho??? Bhaibi samjhaiye na

Vivaan: im not crying you idiot!!! Bas hayfever hai

Meera: - in Amaya' ear yeh toh ek bacha ke tara rah rahata. (Meera and Amaya engaged in a conversation)

Vivaan decided to use this opportunity to make Meera eat something. When he came back, he saw Meera and Amaya talking and laughing as if they were both not weak, as if there was no problem at all. This concluded his thoughts. He knew that he loved this silly, childlike and idiotic girl, who was also determined, loving and caring. Seeing the 2 most important people of his life smile and laugh, just made him realise that life was much more than just meetings, and files and phone calls. Life was sacred and like Meera says "Zindigi dobara nahi aati, so issi esai jane maat dena

Vivaan: im not crying you idiot!!! Bas hayfever hai

Meera: - in Amaya' ear yeh toh ek bacha ke tara rah rahata. (Meera and Amaya engaged in a conversation)


Vivaan decided to use this opportunity to make Meera eat something. When he came back, he saw Meera and Amaya talking and laughing as if they were both not weak, as if there was no problem at all. This concluded his thoughts. He knew that he loved this silly, childlike and idiotic girl, who was also determined, loving and caring. Seeing the 2 most important people of his life smile and laugh, just made him realise that life was much more than just meetings, and files and phone calls. Life was sacred and like Meera says "Zindigi dobara nahi aati, so issi esai jane maat dena

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Posted: 7 years ago
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👏..very nice dear...All d best 4 ur xams...👍🏼..and do continue writing after ur xams..😊

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