Naamkarann Epilogue series FF, Chp 13 pg 8 final part updated

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Chapter 1

Shweta was waiting at the door of her house with a aarti ki thali ready to welcome her daughter in law and grandson. Just then a white SUV stopped bringing smile on everyone face. Avni and Mowgli were welcomed back in their home.

After the aarti, mowgli went to him room to get ready, while Avni was gifted a bridal dress which Shweta had worn on her own wedding. After an hour, Avni was ready accompanied by brides maid Mitali. Neil was proud of her today, the sacrifice she gave will eventually bring happiness in all three lives. Avni was wearing a peach lehnga adorned with kundan jwellery. It was hard for Neil to take his eyes off from her. But Papa had to say "beta teri hi biwi hai, aise kya ghoor raha hai usko".

Neil couldn't stop blushing. Finally their proper wedding was happening. He offered his hand to Avni while she was about to start her new journey as Avni Neil Khanna. The pandit started with the mantra chants, while AvNeil remembered their old moments, how they met at beach, it all started with hatered then accidental engagement at jwellery shop,then how that shagun duptta fell over both of them, then their marriage to freindship to being soulmates with the promise to be with each other as on their first night. Shweta tied the gadbandhan and the pheras started.

Mowgli was happy to see the wedding, when his Dadu said " beta tu bahut lucky hai jo apne maa baap ki shaadi apni aankho se dekh raha hai". Mowgli smiled and affirmed in response.

Pandit asked Shweta to bring mangalsutra and sindoor, she brought the thali and gave it to him. Prakash asked them to stop for a minute.He went to lord ganesha idol, to bring that mangalsutra broken by Avni. He gave it back to Neil and said "jo cheez meri bahu ki hai, woh usse koi nahi le sakta"

As Neil smiled and put the same mangalsutra on Avni neck, a tear fell on his palm, just like the last time during their wedding.But this time he knew it was happy tears. He filled Avni's mang with sindoor.

The newly wedded couple was congratulated by freinds and family. Prakash went to thank god for again bringing happiness in their life.

It was already 5 am before everyone left. Avni went to sleep with Mowgli as he was more comfortable with his mother. While all others went to their respective rooms.

Next morning Avni was ready in red saree which Neil gifted her, while Shweta asked her to hit the kalash filled with rice. Prakash played the song " haule haule tu kadam bada meri jaan, itna yun bhi naa dar tere sand mein haan...chal meri jaan" as Neil holded her hands while she left red imprints on the house floor.

Avni gave a puzzled look to Prakash,when he said "betaji jab tum yahan nahi thi naa 10 saal toh maine tumhare papa ke room mein jake , tumse related har choti choti cheez jane ki koshish ki, yeh sochke ki kash tum hoti toh mein meri beti ko kaise khush rakhta. I know yeh tumhara aur tumhare papa ka favourite gana tha right"

Avni couldn't hold her tears, the fathers love which she had missed since childhood was showered on her .As tears rolled down from her eyes, she said "Thank you Papaji"

Shweta asked Avni to prepare her pehli rasoi. A smile broke on Neil face when he remembered the old days when he used the food prepared by her for interrogation. How far they both have came and it was time to start their life afresh.

Without asking Avni prepared everything. Neil was still wondering if she knows now to cook or not. But yes the time had changed, the chole,puri,halwa all was layed on dining table. As he put the first morsel in his mouth, a feeling of contentment ran through him. That from now he will not have to eat outside food while going office.

When Shweta asked "Avni , kyunki aaj tum dono ki suhagrat hai,toh batao kaunse phool pasand hai tumhe roses or jasmine, I will decorate Neil room as per your wish"

Avni was shivering,completely confused what was supposed to happen tonight '10 years of frustration 'she murmred and then she said "white, white mummy ji' as she left the place,but her fearful expression didnt go unnoticed by Neil Khanna,who was ready to give it back to lady don the punishment of 10 years keeping him away from her.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome too good lovely waitingg for next
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hii it is too gud pls update next part soon
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Wow!!!amazing
So happy to read your story. Hope they had showed something on similar lines in the show!!
Please continue soon!!!! Waiting for your next update!!
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Nice one eagerly waiting for next
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Great idea to write this epilogue FF. Love that you started with remarriage. Love that you incorporated chal meri jaan and the explanation...how papa went through ashishs room and found out about avni. very nice touch. Look forward to reading more happy moments...family, bonding with Mowgli, avneil romance everything! Suggestion- perhaps you can edit your thread topic to Naamkaran epilogue series FANFIC so that people don't miss out on reading this...lot of people must be craving to read the ending that we wanted but didnt happen.
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Thank you so much for writing this, wanted an epilogue series like this. Jo dikha nahi woh pad toh sakte hain kahin. I'm glad they started with re-marriage, coz they were divorced legally. Please update the next chapter soon, waiting for it.
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A big thank you for writing this . We all wanted to see this on-screen . A good welcome for Avni by family . Loved the remarriage idea as they are legally separated. Prakash 😭 This man is just love. He went into Ashish room to learn about Avni's childhood and also gave the same MS she broke !. He is the best character after Neela , Ali written in this show .
I loved Chal Meri Jaan played for them . Had always felt it's better suited to AvNeil .

Please update sooner 😉 I am eager as what is Neil having in the form of punishment .
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Aww, totally loved this.
Remarriage I want that to happen.
But sad they didn't give good closure.
They didn't satisfied us.
Thank u so much for this.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Continue soon
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Chapter 2

From the time Neil heard the word Suhagraat his mind was already on cloud nine. Those unspoken words, feelings which were attached to Avni, which he beholded for 10 years , were supposed to find an answer tonight.

Neil left the house for half an hour only and returned back. He said " Avni mujhe tumse kuch kaam hai . Can you please come to our room now"

As Neil entered the room, soon Avni followed him and then he closed the door. Neil asked her, "Toh my dear wifey tum mujh se kitna pyar karti ho yeh toh mein janta hoon, ki tum mere liye apni jaan bhi de sakti ho. Par yeh sab karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Mein tumhare liye kuch laya hoon , is packet mein ek dress hai , aaj raat ko doodh ka glass, pan aur yeh dress pehen ke aajana. Baki mein sambhal lunga". He went away leaving the doors opened.

Avni curious eyes saw that packet and opened it . It was a black net dress with loose nylon strings and as she went in front of mirror holding that dress . She said "Neil yeh laya hai mere liye, means he wants me to wear these kinda of clothes. Jabki usse ache se pata hai ki mein aise kapde kabhi nahi pehenti. Bahut shauk hai naa use aaj raat ka, dekhe hai aaj kaun sher banta hai aur kaun uska shikar"

AvNeil room was already decorated with white jasmine flowers , while Neil decorated himself the rest of the room with small LED lights. Mowgli saw all this and asked him " Papa aap yeh kya kar rahe ho. Yahan aaj koi pooja hai kya "

Neil smiled at his innocent queries and replied "Haan beta yahan aaj raat ko aapke papa aur mama pooja karenge ek chote baby ke liye. Yahan par aapka koi friend nahi hai naa, aap bor ho jate hoge. Toh bas bhagwan se usi ke liye pray karenge hum dono", while looking lustfully at Avni.

Avni was petrified, thinking what was Neil upto. From last 10 years she hadn't allow any male to touch her even. Now again going through all this was similar to feeling she had before her so called first night. And to save herself she remembered the same drug which Ali gave her last time to make Neil fall asleep.

She soon left the house to buy some household stuff and that drug from a medical store. When she was back she saw Neil was in his study room, anchoring for his show "Woh Lamhe". Just then Mowgli came from back to say " Mama mujhe neend aa rahi hai , please story suna do naa, I will sleep then"

They both left for Mowgli's room. Avni found it safe to sleep in his room. Just then a message came "I am waiting. Plz come soon", followed by another past 10 minutes. Avni , knew Neil wouldn't leave her tonight and the only way to save herself was to mix those sleeping pills in the turmeric milk.

Soon she went to kitchen and prepared one glass of turmeric milk adding the sleeping pills to it. Neil was busy in his study room when Avni offered him the glass of milk, which he politely declined. Again she offered him, again he declined.

Neil went to their room , soon to be followed by Avni. He played music on the stereo set with the song "Kuch toh hai tujh se rabata" as he didn't want any awkward noises to be heard by his family. Avni again signaled him to drink the milk. He wondered if she still remember that I don't like milk. After much insistence he gulped down a sip from the glass faking that he had drink the milk. As Avni went to keep the glass on the table, he holded her back from her bare waist. When she forcefully tried to free herself, he twisted her hand and forcefully made her to drink the rest of the milk. Soon Avni fell on the bed asleep.

Neil smiled looking at her and said to himself " tum kitna bhi try karlo wifey, I am smarter than you. bhalai maine police ki job se resign kar diya ho, but mera dimag aaj bhi waise hi sochta hai " as he slept quietly beside her.

Next morning when Avni woke up, she looked at her messy saree, unpinned. She tried to recollect what would have happened last night, but after drinking milk there was nothing she could remember. Just then Neil came out from the washroom and said " Good morning wifey, kal tumhe ache se neend toh aayi naa. I mean aayi hi hogi. Jab inti mehnat ki toh, insaan thak jata hai naa. Mein toh soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki meri Avni itni romantic hai"

Avni was panick stricken over what would have happened last night, she was not ready to have another baby now. Her first priority was to settle in the family with mowgli and then look into her work. But here things were signaling something else. Tears rolled down from her eyes and she got up from bed to ask Neil "Kal humare beech kya hua Neil. tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho Neil. Mein iss cheez ke liye abhi ready nahi hoon , ek baar mujh se puch toh lete"

Neil cupped her face, wipping her tears and replied " Pehli baat mein aisa bilkul kar sakta hoon because you are my wifey now. dusri baat agar tumhe yaad na ho toh yaad dila doon . Mein aaj bhi wahi Neil Khanna hoon , jo uski biwi ko bhi bina permission ke haath nahi lagata. Kal raat ko humare beech kuch nahi hua. Chalo ab jaldi se ready ho jao , hume tumhare pag phere ke liye sunheri ke ghar jana hai "

Avni smiled at him and nodded to freshen up and leave for Sukoon house.
Edited by njain16385 - 7 years ago

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