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Chapter 8

As per the news updates, monsoons have already arrived in Kerela, that means another 10 days it would start raining in Mumbai too. Avni wanted to be extra precautious with the health of Prakash during this season.

After so many days,Neil finally got some free time to spend with his family. It was early in the morning he woke up seeing his wife missing,he went outside to serach. She was not in hall,kitchen, then through the window he saw two shadows enjoying their coffee in the lawn,and thenleft for jogging.

As Neil reached the table placed in lawn, there were two cups, one read worlds best daughter, other read worlds best dad. Neil smiled and said "that means yeh Avni aur Papa ka hai"

Being busy in handling his fathers business Neil had missed this small things, but today he took a day off to spend some time with his family.

Mowgli left for his school, while Shweta had her breakfast to leave for her kitty party. Avni was nowhere to be seen. He went to his dad's room where he saw they both were eating boiled vegetables, without any masala, a tasteless soup, which Avni drank showing it as delicious just to encourage his father to drink it as well.

He said to himself " worlds best daughter, best wife ,best mother, now what remains best director".Neil remembered once Avni has said that a short telefilm has to be shot and she had a offer to work as an assistant director.


Neil called Avni to their room. As she arrived, she saw a small table with breakfast and her favourite poha. She sat on chair,once Neil pulled the chair. He took the plate and served poha, then with his own hands he asked her to eat. Once she ate first bite, he asked " hai naa bilkul Ali ke chamko cafe jaisa poha". As she smiled, her welled up too, because somewhere in handling family responsiblities her dreams had taken a back seat of which one was to open cafe with Ali and other was to be a successful director just like Ashish Mehta.

Neil said "Avni I understand pichle kuch dino se our life has been in turmoil. Papa ke health, aur business ke pressure ke karan hum dono ek dusre ko time hi nahi de paa rahe the. Avni tumne papa ka bahut ache se dhyan rakha and am thankful for that. Par family life jeena matlab yeh nahi ki tum apne sapne bhul jao. I want to see you as a successful director. Tum papa ki tension mat lo, ab woh mom handle kar lengi. Aur mowgli ka school aur padai woh sab ke lie ek home tutor lagwa lenge,rest mein handle kar lunga. I want you to concentrate on your carrer now. Tumne kaha tha naa koi Mr Dixit,go and work under him"

As decided, Avni started to work as assistant director for a short telefilm whose shoot lasted for 10 days. But the production house seemed happy with her work, hence she handled 2 fashion photoshots as well as one shot for a song.But since being a director meant to work on freelance basis, she needed a break for a substantial movie so that she could acheive her dream of being best director.

While Avni completed her short term assisgnments,Neil too opted for a balance timing, giving time for his family as well. Soon the corporate life was becoming boring for him, and he understood that he also needs to give time too something that interests him.

Neil has not yet resigned from Raabta fm, but he was on leave. As Avni suggested, they soon hired an intern who would do the back work for Neil,while he hosted the show at night,just for one hour.

Everything was falling in place, both had found their new proffesional identity, but still there were miles to go. On one night when Avni slept in Neil's arms ,he said in her ears " Avni ab aisa lagta hai jaise sab kuch thik hone laga hai. Ek baat hai jo mein tumse share karna chahta hoon. Pichle 10 saal maine mowgli ka bachpan miss kar diya, usse god mein uthana, haath pakad ke chalna sikhana. I want to relieve those dreams again. Now if you agree, kya hum ek aur baby plan kar sakte hai"

Avni didn't want to make him sad because she felt guilty for his unfulfilled dreams. But it was safe to ignore the question and she replied "Neil abhi mein bahut thak chuki hoon. Hum iske baare mein kal baat kare"


Avni didn't want to make him sad because she felt guilty for his unfulfilled dreams. But it was safe to ignore the question and she replied "Neil abhi mein bahut thak chuki hoon. Hum iske baare mein kal baat kare"

It was a Sunday, monsoon had arrived in Mumbai. Avni was busy preparing some evening snacks, while listening to radio, where RJ played some rainy songs. As Avni went outside to check what Neil was doing RJ played the song "gunja sa hai kou iktara"

Neil was in lawn doing pushups, the sweat drops falling from his face made him more hot and sexy. It was hard for Avni to take off her eyes from him. Just then the first rains started and mowgli asked his dad to play football with him.

As they played , Avni remembered Neela maa words "mein ek cool nani bana chahti hoon,apne grand children ke saath football khelna chahti hoon". Though she was not there now,but atleast her dreams of having two grandchildren can be fullfilled.

Hidden behind the door Avni realized that for this dream to achieve she would need Neil's help. As she lustfully saw Neil,his eyes caught her red handed. Shying away she ran indoors but he understood, that Avni was ready to take their relationship to next level.
Edited by njain16385 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Terrific story, love your mr toon of the songs and how you include our past fave moments
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
I love the way you recreate the past moments . Esp Iktara 😳 You have brought work-family balance so beautifully . I'm happy that Neil hasn't quit being RJ ..
Avni a director 😃 I have imagined her in different professions but never as a director /producer . Avni had that natural talent from her childhood . Maybe this is best career choice for her .

Another kid 😳 I am already eager it's a girl or a boy 😉
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Awesome update.
Loved this epilogue series.
Update the next soon.
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Loving this epilogue series of yours waiting eagerly for upcoming episodes
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@njain you write very well... update soon
Do read my story

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wow u r jst writing it in d exct way we wntd to c..👏..
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Chapter 9

Neil was back in his room fully drenched, while Avni just came back after changing Mowgli clothes. He wanted they both shower together and as planned things went exactly as they wanted too, two souls entwined into one rediscovering their long lost feelings. Since it was a evening, Prakash and Shweta were back from market soon to be joined by Avni and Neil . But their mission was accomplished.

Evening snacks were enjoyed by all, when Prakash asked " Aur Neil bata Khanna industries ka kaam kaisa chal raha hai, next week mera retirement hai . Office ke sab log aayenge. I want Avni is bar tu saari celebrations pe dhyan de, mujhe pata hai mera beta nahi handle kar payega". With envy Neil saw Avni and thought it was better not to reply to his dad.


Next morning Neil went to his office , but he looked tensed as if something was bothering him. Avni stopped him at entrance door to ask "Neil kuch aisaa hai jo hume discuss karna chaiye. Tum kuch share karna chahte ho. Can I help you in anything. Ab tum bologe toh hi mein kuch kar paungi naa." Since Neil didn't want her to involve in his office work he said "Avni jo tumhara kaam hai tum woh karo naa. Woh Nagpur wale plant mein se khabar hai hi ki humare products mein koi milawat kar raha hai . I have to go there once to check what is wrong. ab yeh sab mere business se related hai aur tum ho masters in forsenic science jo ki agar koi criminal case se related hota toh mein tumhari help leta. But yahan how can you help me, batao?"

Prakash was silently hearing what they said , once Avni came back he said "Avni puttar idhar aa. woh kya bol raha tha ki tum uski help kaise kar sakti ho, right. Mein jaanta hoon mere bete ko woh business mein tumhari help nahi lega. infact he doesn't like ki uske kaam mein koi interfere kare. Hum uski help karenge, par use pata nahi chalna chaiye. Maine Prabul ko bulaya hai , jo ki Nagpur ke humare agro products se related saari information tumhe dega. Now you decide how to help Neil, par dhyan rahe Neil ko pata nahi chalna chaiye that we have helped him"

Khanna industries was into export of agro products and it was heard that someone was mixing some toxic chemicals in oranges so that bad fame came to the company. Avni remembered that Ali handled coffee plantations, so he must be aware about the good farming practices. She called him to get some information and soon some unknown parcels were deliverd to the logistics managers to go all the organic way and use the organic fertilizers.

While Neil was unaware what was happening on his back, one day he came late at night and said "Avni tumhe pata hai woh Nagpur wale plant ka production increase ho gaya hai. Koi hai well wisher jo humari help karna chahta hai . I want to meet him to thank him. Pata nahi kaun hai. . Aaj ek baat aur pata chali ki humari company ke 20% shares market mein float hote hai. Baki 80% mein mera ownership hai 38% and rest 42% belongs to you. So biwi ji aage se koi bhi major decision lena raha toh hume aapse aagya leni padegi"

Avni smiled when she heard this, but she recalled what Papa has said "woh janta nahi tum kaun ho " and it was best she didn't gave any hints to what was happening on his back. She continued " Neil woh Papaji ki retirement plan karna thi, maine caterer aur decorations ka order de diya hai. And I was thinking ki hum ek DJ ko bhi bulaye. If you don't mind Ali Mumbai aa raha hai 2 din ke liye can we also invite him for this party"

Neil replied "Haan, haan kyun nahi mein bhi use kafi time se nahi mila. Isi bahane mein bhi mil lunga aur haan mitali ka transfer Kanpur hone wala hai . You please call her and invite kar lena. Pata nahi agli bar kab milenge hum apne doston se " Neil has often seen Avni was talking to Ali later night on phone about something he was unaware of , but certainly a fire of jealousy was igniting in him . He seemed to deny that fact every time, however whenever Ali name was voiced during their conversations he got uneasy

The retirement party of Prakash was organized and everybody looked beautiful. While Neil was dressed in a black tuxedo, all eyes were set on his pretty wifey who wore a black saree and a backless blouse. Neil was worried what if someone touches her. He needs to honour the guests as well, how would he be able to protect his wifey.

Mitali arrived in a pink gown and Neil even once didn't notice her. But when Ali arrived and praised "Avni tu kitni khobsurat lag rahi hai yaar kasam se" in front of them. He had to say " Waise mitali bhi aaj kuch kaam nahi lag rahi hai naa Ali. She is looking lie a fairy. "

Two best friends had met after 10 years and there was lot to talk and here Neil was burning with jelousy. It was hard to ignore whenever Ali or Avni touched each other by mistake. Soon Neil reached the center stage and announced "Ladies and gentlemen, we are gonna grove now to your favourite tunes . So ab sabko ek chit di jayegi , you can write your favorite song on it. The DJ will pick up chits one by one and songs will be played while we will all hit the dance floor with the changing partners ".

As the game started, all started dancing with their requested songs being played by DJ. Neil was not worried if someone else touched his wifey, what made him more worried if Ali dances with her and touches her . Soon "Khamoshiyan teri meri "was played where Neil danced with Mitali and Ali with Avni. It was not easy for both of them, Ali wanted Avni to see for once the love he holded for her, but her eyes were set on Neil how tightly he holded Mitali's waist. Ali murmered " Khamoshiyan teri meri gayi tel lene ab toh " . Since Avni didn't hear him properly she said "Ali, kuch kaha tumne " . He said "No".

Avni was passed to as a dancing partner to Neil and his song started "tu safar mera , hai tu hi meri manzil tere bina guzura , ae dil hai mushkil, mujhe azamati hai teri kami. meri har kami ho hai tu lazmi" tightening her grip around her waist to signal her that you belong to me and no one else.

After few songs "Lag jaa gale " was played on request of Mitali when Neil danced with her. As his eyes were still set on Avni she said "Bhag jaa saale ". Neil asked her admist loud music "Mitali kuch kaha tumne " . She said " Nahi Neil, yeh gana kitna awesome hai naa"

The party ended and all guests left the venue. Soon the Khannas to retired back to sleep, while Avni went to Mowgli's room to make him sleep and just returned to her room. A late night call from Ali was enough to irk Neil , he handed her phone and said "tumhare best friend ka phone hai , mein yahan se bahar chala jata hoon tum baat kar lo".

She retorted "Neil tum kyun bahar jaoge ". He replied " kyunki tum do no ki privacy hai naa, aur mein tumhe disturb nahi karna chahta "

After she messaged Ali " to talk later its late at night" . Avni replied "tum pagal ho gaye ho. Kab magi maine privacy. Aur Ali sirf mera dost hai. I don't think tum kuch aur soch rahe ho"

Neil was angry again and said " Acha sirf acha dost hai toh phri aaj woh tumhare saath kamar mein haath dal ke dance kar raha tha, woh kya tha "

It was enough for Avni to give it back to him " aur jo tum aaj bol rahe the dekho mitali kitni achi dikh rahi hai dekho mitali kitna acha dance karti hai , dekho dekho sab mitali ko hi dekho " ignoring her husband .

Neil was surprised as his wife too was jealous and said " Mujhe nahi malum tha ki tum hum dono pe nazar rakhe hui ho" . Avni said "Aur jo tum mere aur ali pe nazar rakhe hue ho uska kya, woh kaise bhul gaye ".

Neil had to defend himself and he said " See meri aur mitali ki friendship hai naa tum dono se better hai. Hum dono tum dono ka jaise nahi hai jo kamar mein haath dalkar dance karen ". Avni gave it back " Dance to meine tumahre saath bhi kiya tha woh kaise bhul gaye "

Neil said "Listen mein tumhara husband hoon. jab chahe jahan chahe tumahre saath dance kar sakta hoon and no one can stop me from doing it"


As the voice of their arguments grew louder,Mowgli woke up to see from key hole what were his parents upto. On seeing Mowgli like that Shweta to asked what he was watching. He said "mumma papa ladai kar rahe hai". Shweta couldn't believe her ears.

Soon Neil could gauge someone is outside their room and whatever the first song came on stereo,he signaled Avni to dance on it together. The song started as "jhingla hoo,jhingala hoo"unaware how to act they danced like tribal people. When mowgli saw the same from outside he asked "dadi yeh mumma papa african tribal dance itni raat ko kyun kar rahe hai?". Shweta was equally surprised, when the song continued 'hum bewafa hargiz naa the..' when AvNeil started their romatic steps,while Shweta watched the same from outside and she answered "beta woh aapki baby sister ko lane ke liye aisa dance karna padega unko"

As curious Mowgli got the answer, he along with his dadi left for sleep. While Neil fell on bed with Avni holding the position until they left. Avni said "Neil sab log chale gaye, ab hume apni jagah so jana chaiye". Neil was still mesmerized by her beauty ,he said " i know".To break his stance, she replied "Neil, I am pregnant" giving a shock to him.

Edited by njain16385 - 7 years ago
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Love the dance memories frm past Abd the end was such a cliffhanger
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Chapter 10

Neil was happily surprised, as he kissed Avni forehead to say "Thank you for giving me my world back to me". As Avni smiled in reponse she knew a new responsiblity was coming her way and it had to be handled carefully.

Next morning, while Avni was serving breakfast, Mowgli asked "mama ,papa kal ab dono dance kar rahe the,toh ab meri sister jaldi aa jayegi naa". Neil replied "haan beta jaldi aa jayegi". Shweta was unable to control her laughter listening mowgli questions from last night, but once Neil confirmed she knew now Avni will need special care and attention.

Neil dropped his son to his school, while his wife to Sukoon house,before he left for office.Neil shared the good news with Sunheri. Initially she seemed very happy with the news but few lines of worry on her forhead were noticed by Neil. However, it seemed good if he talked about it later.

After a long time Avni and Sunheri were alone at home and it seemed perfect to talk to have heart to heart talk. Avni said " Sunheri ab toh mein bhi settle ho gayi hoon , ek din tara sitara bhi shaadi kar legi aur yahan se chali jayegi. Tu bhi kisi ko dhund le naa, puri zindagi akele rehne ka irada hai kya". She replied " akele kahan yaar, par yeh dil jisse laga hai woh toh kahin dur hai, ab tu hi bata mein kisi aur se shaadi kaise kar lun". Avni understood she was talking about DD , so she answered " Don't worry abhi mujhe ek break mila hai as a movie director, uska ek part shoot ka Mumbai mein shoot hoga jo abhi mein kar rahi hoon aur ek part Nagpur ke pass ek village hai wahan pe. DD bhi wanhi posted hai Nagpur mein agar mujhe time mila toh mein tere aur uske rishte ki baat zarur karungi"

A worried Sunheri replied "Avni tu pagal ho gayi hai kya, ek toh tu pregnant hai , last time yaad nahi doctor ne teri pregnancy mein itne complications the ki kahan tha second pregnancy mein Zada dhyan rakhna, aur tu, abhi kaam bhi kar rahi hai , phir travel karegi, mujhe teri chinta ho rahi hai yaar, yeh sab kaise hoga". Avni stopped her inbetween and answered " main janti hoon ki last time mujhe bahut problems hui thi par mere saath tu thi naa, aur iss baar toh Neil hai mere saath . Aur jab bhi hum dono saath hote hai naa toh mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta. dekhna sab ache se ho jayega" .

Sunheri nodded her head, but she knew that it will not be easy for her best friend, since last time the doctor had clearly indicated the her next pregnancy could have more complications endangering her life and here Neil didn't have an iota of idea about it.

As planned Avni left for Nagpur for the shoot of her movie 'Paani' based on scarcity of water to shoot for the next part of movie, some 102 km away from the city. However, Neil called her time to time to check if she was taking good care of herself. His mind was not ready to believe, that she would be able to handle it alone and he also had to see who was adulterating the food products of the Khanna industries . So, he left earlier than his planned visit which was 10 days later.

However, as this information was received by the local corporator, he planned to get Neil Khanna meet with an accident, so that he is not able to come to the city only. It was late at night , when he was driving on a highway to Nagpur when an overspeeding truck came from behind which tried to hit his car. But Neil jumped on time, then few goons came to have a fight with him, in his half unconscious state he fought. Then somebody came, to save him, with blows and punches the goons left away.

Next Neil opened his eyes in the hospital, when he asked the masked nurse " yahan kaun laya mujhe kya aap bata sakti hai". As she replied "Tha koi bhala insaan". He was not convinced with her answer, because he was sure it was not a man, but a woman, but who was she and why she tried to help me. May police had a better idea on it. He asked " yeh toh police case hai naa toh police kahan hai , mera statement lena hoga naa unko". The nurse replied "statement kal lenge, abhi ap aaram karo aur chup chap se yeh soup piyo". As he concentrated it was the same voice, same nail paint of that helping woman, he asked "Kaun ho tum, maine pucha kaun ho tum".

Avni removed her mask and replied " mein hoon baba tumhari wifey, kal tumhara accident ho gaya tha. DD ne mujhe bataya ki tum yahan hospital mein ho. Ab visiting hours toh khatam ho gaye the toh tumse milne ke liye mujhe aise aana pada. Don't worry DD sab eyewitness le raha , woh kaun tha jisne yeh sab karwaya aur kyun jaldi pata chal jayega" . Impressed by her reply , he asked " aur insab mein tum meri help karogi, puch sakta hoon kyun". She smiled and said " kyunki mein tumheri wifey ho, bhul gaye " He pulled her back and said " mujhe toh humesha yaad rehta hai par tum kabhi kabhi bhul jati ho"


To keep him safe, Neil was shifted to nearby guest house, but his where abouts were known only to few people including DD. Avni was busy arranging his clothes and hers in the cupboard, when a call came on Neil's mobile. As he lied on bed, Avni picked up the phone " DD sir policestation nahi aa sakte , unhe aaram ki zaroorat hai . Tumhe police ne jeep di hai, tum yahan aajao statement lene ke liye" . DD happily replied "Ok Bhabhi"

Neil was staring his wife from last few hours because he had a doubt was she the one who saved him or someone else . No it was not possible she was away in the village that time. But her voice, nail paint everything matches with her . His curiosity and bossy attitude from wifey forced him to dray Avni closer to him and say " Lady don hunh, yeh sab kya tha "

Avni replied "Subah ek decision tumne liya tha ki hum Mumbai nahi jayenge , toh ab ek decision maine liya hai ki tum yahi rahoge, aur is jagah se kanhi bahar nahi jooge". Seeing his sherni avatar back Neil was more interested to know that definitely she knew more about his accident than him and how , the answer had to be found by the ACP Neil Khanna brain now.
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