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Posted: 7 years ago
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thank you so much for writing this beautiful ff love it pls continue 👏 ❤️ ❤️
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Chapter 3
Avni opened her suitcase, thinking what to wear for her pag phere. In the last 10 years, her wardrobe had completely changed to western dresses.

Neil saw all this and straight away went to bebe's room, to bring something. Avni opened the box, it had a blue saree. He said "Avni you know is ghar ka har ek member tumse kitna pyar karta hai. Bebe ne tumhari sari sarees chupake rakhi thi, taki mujhe tumhari yaad naa aaye,aur woh khud move on nahi kar paa rahi thi"

Avni knew the amount of pain she had given to this family due to her actions was not forgive able. Hence her only motive at present was to bring back the happiness in this family which was lost long time ago.

Honouring,Neil's wish she wore the blue saree, the red bangles and mangalsutra. While hubby dear was observing his wife in mirror reflection so as not to disturb her while she got ready. His mind just said beautiful, when she turned up to say "Neil, lets go"

Neil stopped her and put kala teeka behind her ear to say " kya kare zamana bahut kharab hai,kahi meri khoobsurat wifey ko kisi ki nazar lag gayi toh"

Breaking their eye lock, Shweta entered the room to say "Avni puttar tu lag to badi sundar hai. Par where is sindoor. Oye tillu le ye dabbi aur bhar de apni votti ki maang"

Neil hesitated initally, but he had to take the box from her mother. And turned back to Avni. Just then, Shweta received a call on her mobile and he signalled Avni to fill her maang,which she did.

As she left the room, Neil said "Avni kya cheez meri hai aur kya nahi yeh mein ache se janta hoon. Mujhe pata hai in 10 saalon mein kafi kuch badal gaya hai, woh mein hi tha jisne tumhare maang mein use bhara bhi tha,aur vidyut se bachane ke liye hataya bhi tha. Aur meri family ko bacahne ke liye tumhe apna sab kuch kho diya jisme yeh sindoor bhi tha. I will never enforce myself on you. Ab jab tak tum mujhe dil se apna pati nahi maan leti. Mein tumhari maang nahi bharunga"

Avni heard his words carefully and a proud smile ran through her face.

As they sat in the car, Neil asked her to fasten the seat belt before the left for Sukoon house. Avni started the FM radio which accidentaly played the song "yeh moh moh ke dhaage ". As the lyrics came "tu hoga zara pagal, tune mujhko hai chuna,kaise yeh tune unkaha sach suna". She smiled thinking even without saying a word how much Neil understood her, he was ready to give her that time and space needed to absorb him in her life.

They arrived at Sukoon house, when Sunheri did the aarti, of the new damad with nak kichna rasam. Tara Sitara,served them with kheer and left the house for some work. While Neil also excused himself after having some kheer for some court related work.

Avni was alone, when Sunheri asked "Avni tu wahan khush toh hai naa. Joo tujhe chaiye tha, teri perfect family ab woh mowgli ko, aur tujhe mil gayi hai naa"

Avni nodded and replied " haan sunheri, mujhe woh mil gayi, par jo 10 saal ke ghaav the naa woh itni jaldi thik nahi honge. Mujhe adjust hone mein time toh lagega. Maine jis pehchan ko 10 saal pehle chod diya tha, ab wahi meri nahi pehchan hai,jise mujhe accept karna hoga. Chal par chod naa in baaton ko. Yahan par sab kaisa chal raha hai".

Sunheri answered" tu yahan ki chinta mat kar. Tujhe pata,mujhe as a dance teacher job mili hai, aur tara sitara ne bhi tutions lena start kar diya hai. Aur shaam ko hum log activity classes bhi lete hai bachon ki. Toh ab financially koi problem nahi hai".

Avni was very happy to hear all this, and said " aur in sab mein tumhari madad kisne ki". She replied "Neil ke papa ne"

Avni couldn't understand why papaji was doing all this. Just then mowgli came back from his school bus with daisy,pinky. Soon Samrat too joined them after his college day ended.

They enjoyed their evening, playing games, chit chat. Neil also arrived to pick them up. Mowgli said "papa apne jaisa kaha tha maine waisa hi kiya. Maine mumma pe nazar rakhi thi ki woh kahi bhaag na jaye"

Neil replied "good job mogli" as he handed him few choclates to be given to everyone in Sukoon ghar.

Avni was miffed and she took Neil to a lonely corner to ask " yeh sab kya hai Neil, tumne mowgli ko kyun kahan nazar rakhne ke liye".

He retorted " woh isliye wifey ki tumne humari suhagraat toh kharab kar di. Aur subah humara beta aake puch raha tha Papa meri baby sister kab aayegi. Mujhe darr tha ki tum kanhi bhaag na jao,phirse first night ka naam sun ke,isliye maine mowgli ko tum pe nazar rakhne ko kaha tha"

A goodbye was done and all three arrived at Khanna house.Avni went into search for Prakash,but he was nowhere to be found

She asked Shweta"Mummy ji ,woh papa ji kahan hai,mujhe unse kuch kaam tha"

Shweta replied "kaam se yaad aaya ki asjkal unko bahut kasm hai, ek mahine bad retire hone wale hai.ab neil toh unka kaam sambhalne se raha,toh dusron ko kaam samjhana padega naa phir"

Avni herself thought who will handle khanna industries, if Neil is not interested,someone from family needs to take ownership now.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome work
Waiting for next
Update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry for being late . Thank-you for recreating old AvNeil moments . Such nostalgic it was ! And looks like Avni is gonna take up job in Khanna's business.
Your idea of suhagrat was such a ride down memory lane . Same set up , same reaction , same feeling and same turmeric milk . Surprise was Avni forgot he hates milk ! Similar blue saree , similar scene before pag phera. 😳 And again Neil proves to be the same gentleman where he is gonna wait till Avni accepts him wholeheartedly.


A request ! Bring more Neil and Mowgli scenes . Want to see their bond .😃 Neil asking Mowgli to keep eyes on his mother so that she doesn't run away was so cute for words .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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aswome beautiful updated

waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanx guys , for your lovely replies. I will be updating one part each day . The main focus will remain on AvNeil journey and how they reshape each other personally as well as professionally while balancing each other. I will cover bonding of Mowgli with Neil also,along with AvNeil romantic scenes.
However,want a quick suggesstion, do you want me to cover dd-sunheri and ali-mitali love bond. Please reply, i will continue further accordingly.

Thnx once again
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey..
First of all I would like to say that the story is beautiful. Please keep writing. Loved the way Neil is supporting her and at the same time flirting. Avni's inhibitions are also valid as she was away from everyone from the past 10 years and these are common issues. And to answer your question, I would like to read more about AvNeil. Show tho khatham hogaya.. Kam see Kam yaha tho AvNeil dedo :D
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awsm epilogue..puja at night ws hilarious😆..if possible I wud def wnt to c dd dunheri angle..nd also I rqst if we cn c again acp neil by anyway
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Chapter 4
After few days Prakash was back in Khanna house. Avni went to his room to ask "Papaji woh sunheri ne bataya ki aapne uski help ki dance teacher ki job ke liye, aur tara,sitara ki bhi. Yeh sab aap kyun...mein bas aapko thank you bolna chahti thi"

Prakash could gauge what she wanted to know ,so he replied "Avni puttar,yeh sab maine isliye kiya,because I want to see them working. Women empowerment. Ab wahan koi problem nahi hogi,tabhi toh tum yahan apne sapne pe dhyan de paogi. Nahi samjhi...mera ek freind hai, Dixit he is a director. I want you to work under him as a assistant director for his next short film,jiska kaam tum honeymoon se aajao phir start kar denge"

She heard and couldn't believe his words director, yes that was her long lost dream . Now it was coming in front of her as a offer and how could she decline, but her new phase of life had just started. She said "thank you, Papa ji", while taking his blessings.

Avni went to her room, seeing all her sarees scattered all over the bed , while Neil was working on his laptop acting ignorant as if nothing has happened. She asked "Neil yeh sab kya hai , tumne mere saare kapde bahar kyun nikale cupboard se. Tum ache se jaante ho ki yeh mera bhi room hai toh ab se hume cupboard share karni padegi right?". Neil responded "Yeah that's right, matlab 50% tumahra hissa aur 50% mera, but yahan toh 80% tumhara hai . mein apne kapde kahan rahkunga bolo".

Avni angrily replied " Neil tumhari pehli baar shaadi hui hai kya, jaante nahi shaadi ke baad 80% cuboard or bed pe hissa wife ka hota hai aur 20 % husband ka " . As she tried to remove again the belonging of Neil to create space for her saares, a box fell from her hand. Inquisitively she opened it to find all the education certificate of Neil, surprisingly there was one MBA from London Business School. She asked "Neil yeh tumne London business school se MBA kab kiya, what I know after my fake death you became an RJ "

Neil answered " Haan mein RJ bana, par jab mujhe tumhari death ke bare mein pata chala , I was completely broken. Slowly I went into depression. Mein kissi se baat nahi karta tha, police force se resign kar chukka tha. There was no motivation in my life ki aage kya karna hai. Aur agar mein yahan rehta toh roz is kamre mein aake tumhari yaad aati thi, chahe kitha bhi koshish karun, tumse dur nahi jaa par raha tha. Isliye mom dad ne mujhe London bheja MBA ke liye, yeh soch ke ki dur rahunga toh aage bad paunga. Par jab yahan wapas aaya toh tumhari yaadein phir saath thi, isliye apna dard baatne ke liye koi dost dhundta tha, Ali toh tha nahi yahan , toh maine RJ banane ki sochi. Socha ki kuch anjaan logo se hi apna dard baat lun, isse mera mann bhi halka hojayega, aur meri family ko lagega ki maine move on kar liya . simple"

His words had a deep effect on Avni, she stood still like a statue as if lamenting on what effect her actions had on Neil. Neil broke the silence " Avni hume passport office jana hai , tumhare passport ressiue ke liye, ab tumne apne saare id proof jala diye , toh phirse sab kuch start karna hoga. I have made our marriage certificate and affidiavit of fake death certificate , and now passport. Finally tum officialy zinda ho". Avni was still lost in her deep thoughts motionless, drop of sweat on her face.

Neil moved towards her breaking her stance, she moved another step backwards. As she moved, he moved forward, trying to hit the table, he holded her safely from her waist. He wiped the sweat from her forhead and looking deep into her eyes " kya soch rahi ho tum, mein kabse tumhe ready hone ke liye bol raha hoon. Hume passport office jana hai "

He could see pain deep down inside her dark black eyes, which she always wanted to hide from others. As he released her from his hold, she started combing her wet hair and pinning her red saree. Meanwhile, Neil hid the mangalsutra on the bed, Avni got up from dressing table saying "Chale", and he responded "Haan chalo. Then she realized something missing adding "Neil ek minute ruko" . She searched the mangalsutra on the bed and went near to mirror to put in, making Neil realize that she still loves me.

They went to passport office , followed by a trip to Mowgli' s school for parents teacher meet. On the way Avni asked "Neil yeh passport kyun, hum kanhi ghumne jaa rahe hai kya, kahin bahar". He replied " Haan hum honeymoon pe jaa rahe hai. She asked "Kahan jaa rahe hai, Bali???". He wanted to tease her so he said " Bali nahi Borivali. Ab tum jaise jungle ladki ke saath Sajnay Gandhi national park ke jungle mein hi honeymoon banana padega naa, bali toh mein mitali ke saath jaana chahta tha".


Avni was silent, but her nose had turned red and cheeks in pink colour. The sight, solely to be enjoyed by Neil Khanna, yes he loved his angry wife , how beautiful she looked with that red nose, as his eyes kept on drifting to watch his wifey. She retaliated " Neil tum mujhe aise ghoor kyo rahe ho" . He pleasantly replied " kya karun wifey tumhare chere pe gussa dekh ke kitna sukoon milta hai, yeh tumhare tamatar ki trah lal lal gaal, gusee wali naak. How can I miss this sight " , making her to blush even more.

They both arrived at Mowgli school. He proudly introduced his dad to his friends and teachers . Neil was enjoying this sight that his son was just like him . He said to Avni " tumhe pata hai Avni, jab mein school mein tha tab papa kabhi kabhi hi meri PTA meeting attend karte the aur kitna proud feel hota tha sabko apne papa se mil wake. Aaj jab mowgli mujhe uske friends se milwa raha hai , toh I feel very happy to meet them". Avni replied " Haan Neil jo khushi mujhe mere papa se kabhi nahi mili, mein khush hoon ko who mere bete ko mil rahi hai" wiping off a tear.

Neil knew he unknowingly had hurt his wifey , to change her mood he added " Haan mere bete ko toh milegi hi, par meri biwi ko use bhi zada milegi.Believe me, lots of surprises are waiting for you wifey"

As Avni smilied , she looked at all the fathers of the students were wearing formal attire and Neil was in his casual dress. How she missed the ACP Neil Khanna in waist coat. She wished to find if there could be a reason to get back him in police force.

Mowgli was picked up and as they drove to a mall. Avni asked " Neil tum phir se police force join nahi kar sakte,kya". Neil replied "Avni , mein phir se police force kaise join kar sakta hoon . Police mein select hone ki ek age hoti hai, kuch criteria hote hai. I am already above that age. Secondly, I don't want you people to involve in any crime patrol drama now. So bhul jao police force ab". From his answer Avni knew the only way to get back him in that waist coat attire was if he joins Khanna industry, but will he agree to join that was a big question .


They reached a mall, where Neil asked Avni to pick some light colour, cotton dresses for herself and some toys for Mowgli. After a movie date together, they reached home in evening. Avni asked Neil again "Neil hum honeymoon pe kahan jaa rahe hai batao naa". Neil was not ready to disclose anything and he replied "kaha naa borivali, wahan ke jungle mein hum mangal karenge".

Avni took the hints passport, then light colored clothes, meant something abroad and probably on a beach side.


Edited by njain16385 - 7 years ago
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Chapter 5

The pressure of working extra hours due to his retirement was taking a toll on Prakash health. But who could he confide his problems with, from last 10 years it was Neil and his greivances. Now, Avni had brought back the happiness in his family and there was no need to disturb their small world. A small health check up would be fine to know if anything was alarming, till then it was safe to ignore.

Neil was busy packing his clothes, when Mowgli asked " papa aap yeh kya kar rahe ho,mumma aur aap kahan jaa rahe ho".Neil answered " beta mein jo bol raha hoon naa usse hum dono ke beech secret rakhna. Apki baby sister ki delivery god ne aatka di hai. Isliye hum dono courier wale uncle se milne jaa rahe hai ki mowgli ki baby sister ko jaldi bhej do".

While Mowgli was very happy with the news of baby and everyone knew in the house a baby was coming. Avni was equally miffed with Neil ,she didn't want to have a second baby, but the false news was binding her in an unknown pressure. Shweta seemed very with news and Prakash too ignored his health for now.

AvNeil arrived at the airport, till now she was not aware where they were going. At the immigration counter it became clear that location was Mauratius.Neil said " it is a 15 day trip madam. Mera mood mat spoil karna,jaise last time Coorg mein kiya tha". Avni was clueless why he said so,because last time there honeymoon was made out of compulsion,but she thought it was better to keep mum, so as not to spoil his mood.

They boarded the flight, when Avni remembered they had Ali and Rhea too last time on their honeymoon. So she asked "Neil kya tumhe yaad hai last time humare honeymoon pe Ali aur Rhea bhi the. Rhea ka toh pata nahi, but aajkal Ali kahan hai . Tum usse touch mein ho".

Neil replied "Avni mein tumhe ek cheez clear karna chata hu ki humare honeymoon par hum sirf humare baare mein baat karenge. Aur rahi baat Ali ki toh yes am in comtact with him. Woh Kerela mein settle ho gaya hai,wahan uske mom dad ke saath. Coffee plantations ka business uska, he is marrired now with two kids"


Avni was elated on hearing the news that Ali is married, she said " kitna acha hota tum,me,mowgli, ali aur uski family hum sab is trip par jate". Avni continued to talk about Ali and their childhood memories. But here Neil was getting angry,as this was supposed to be their trip then why was Ali coming in between.

Observing the ignorant behaviour from Neil, Avni also kept quiet during whole flight. They arrived at hotel,it was a premium suite, just the room and blue water everywhere. The veiw is beautiful as the hotel manager said, "we have you a cosy king size bed, and just you two people in room , no one will disturb you sir and madam".

Avni was already avoiding talking to him,as Neil was not responding. Looking at non chalant behaviour , Neil was angry too, as he said " ek nahi, do seperate bed chaiye hume" thinking madam ko toh Ali ke saath rehna hai naa apne sapno ki duniya mein toh raho ab. The hotel manager was taken aback, by his reply, but he smiled and said "understood sir, chota bed mein zada maza aata hai. Mein aur meri wife ko bhi aisa hi pasan hai, I will arrange sir. Don't worry. But sir bada bed bhi acha tha". Neil cut him inbetween to say "aapse jitna kaha jaye utne kijiye. Plz".

They visited their room, it was decoarated with red rose petals, a champenge and lavender incensed candels. Since none was in mood of romance they cleared the clutter by themselves with an unexpexted eyelock.

Neil freshened up,alone in the big bath tub where he had dreamt to bathe together provoking his anger all the more murmring "hum aaye kyun hai honeymoon pe,gilli danda khelne". Avni freshened up after him. They had a dinner date on the yatch.


It was a perfect setting crimson red sky,two glasses of wine on the white yatch. A soft music was played in background. But both had ego issues and an unspoken wall of silence was building between them.

Avni still wondered what was going inside his mind. Neil said "so Avni you know how to swim. Kal hume water sports karna hai, phir scuba dive hai so you know how to swim?".

As Avni said "no". Neil angrily replied "yaar tumne in 10 saalo mein kya kiya phir. Tum se achi toh woh mitali hai she is state level champion in swimming".

It was too much to take for Avni, as they danced ,she threw him inside the waters saying "ab karo enjoy mitali ke saath".

Neil was back in yatch all drenched, he chased her saying "Neil Khanna ke sath itna ghinona mazak"

She put him at one hand distance and said "Neil dekho mein tumhare karan bhig rahi hoon .mujhse dur hato"

But where was Neil ready to forgive her "toh ab pura bhig jao",forcing them both to go inside blue sea waters.

Avni was unable to breathe in deep waters. Neil holded her tightly to bring her above the surface asking "tum thik ho". She nodded and they went back to yatch.

But here Avni was already feeling cold,fearing if she falls sick, what would Neil mood turn into.
Edited by njain16385 - 7 years ago

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