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Posted: 7 years ago
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In this story viditi are happily married and are about to complete 5 year of marriage and has a cute boy of 4 years named Vidit.

5 days before anniversary vikrant was sitting alone in shaitan chowki as aditi went out for investigation. That's when a nearly 10 year old boy entered the chowki.

Boy(apperance: belonging to labour community): arrey andar koi hai kya?

Vik( who was in the evidence room,came out): arrey haan chotu kya hua?

Chotu: sahab yeh lo(handing him a paper)

Vik: yeh kya hai re?

Chotu: apan ko kaise maloom hoga sahab apan ko school mein sikhya ka dusre ka chitte ya kuch bhi bena ijazzat nahi padte. Kya bole tu madam ki bhasha mein manners.

Vik: arrey wah bahut dyan se padh raha hai school main,par diya kisne yeh?

Chotu: kal raat ko jab mera chota bhai monu baba ki chai ki tapri mein madad kar raha tha tab ek admi aaya aur bolo ki kal subah jab tum aao to tum yeh dedo aur apun ko jo nayi kitab aur joote chahe the woh diya sath mein.

Vik(was little taken aback and started to think as the DCP): acha shakal dekhi uski?

Chotu: nahi andhera bahut tha aur bahut chota hai monu

Vik: acha tu ja padha maan laga ke

After the kid left vik opened the chit : YOU HAVE A SECRET ADMIRER.'

Vik was little stunned but he relaxed when he realized who it could be. He started calling his wife, but she was out of reach, so vik went back to his work.

Night:

The evening was quite uneventful. Vikrant went home not before buying some orchids for his wonderful wife and chocolates for his naughty son while aditi was already home after picking vidit from his day care. They had their dinner discussing their day and vidit telling them the things about his school. While vik did the dishes aditi made vidit sleep and went to their room, changed in night gown and was applying cream when vik entered the room entered the room and straight away went to adi and hugged her from behind.

Vik: I have missed you so much(while kissing her neck)

Adi: vikrant vidit abhi soya hai...abhi uski neend thik se lagi bhi nahi hogi uth jayega.

Vik: ACP sahiba wo so chuka hai. Main abhi use gud night kiss de ke aa raha hoon wo soo chuka hai.

Adi: aur humme bhi soo jana chahiye.

Vik: soo jayenge pehle bete ki tarha mumma ko bhi gud night kiss dedo(with that he turned her around and started kissing her cheeks, nose and finally lips)

Adi(breaking the kiss): aaj bohot pyaar aa raha hai waise toh dcp saheb ke pass time nahi hota.

Vik: aaj mere secret admirer ne mujhe yaad dila diya na.(again he tried claiming her lips but aditi shifted back a little)

Adi(with surprise): secret admirer!! Kon hai aur kiska.

Vik(pulling her towards him): accha tum nahi pata? Don't act so innocent Acp Aditi Vikrant Singhal.

Adi: kya bol raho vikrant mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha .

Vik( now getting little annoyed): tum ne wo chit nahi bheji chotu ke haath mujhe.

Adi(going away from him towards the bed): maine koi letter nahi bheja I was busy working on the case today.

Vik(removing his shirt and coming towards the bed): cut short the acting aditi tumhe ache se pata hai ki woh letter aaj nahi kal raat ko diya use bache ko .

Aditi(her voice little high): vikrant maine koi letter nahi bheja aab so jaye please kal wo bhardwaj ke case ki hearing.

Now vik was little shocked if aditi didn't send the letter then who was it.
do let me know your views😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awsome! Aab jaldi update karna next part wait nahi hoga!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting start mitras. Do continue soon!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Jaldi next chapter post karna,start toh badi interesting hai
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Posted: 7 years ago
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KON HAI?!?!?KON HAI?!?!?DAMN...PLZ UPDATE SOON
BTW...CHAPTER MAST THA...VIDIT
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it .. totally loved it...
Waiting for next part... update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks everyone for the comments earlier i thought this will be completeted in 3 shots however i have now realized it will be a ss. i know this part can be little boring but bare with me
part 2

Now vik was little shocked if aditi didn't send the letter then who was it. Nevertheless he went to sleep he was already tired and tomorrow was imp for them.

Next day(4 days to anniversary)

The day was quite busy the bhardwaj was one of the most imp cases of the year and mumbai police didn't want to loose any loopholes. After the hearing vik send aditi back home he knew she had worked very hard on this case and indeed her hard worked paid off when the culprit was sentenced life time imprisonment, while he went to complete the task of sending the crimnal to prison. After completing the work when he reached his car to go back home he found a chit placed on the windshield of the car. Vik looked around to see if somebody was there but found no one. He took the paper and went inside the car and read it THE BEST KISS IS THE ONE WHICH HAS BEEN EXCHANGED THOUSAND TIMES BETWEEN EYES BEFORE IT REACHES THE LIPS' vik was again shocked and rushed home. It was quite late around 11 when he reached home so he decided to talk to aditi tomorrow but was shocked to find her waiting for him at the dinner table.

Aditi: fresh ho lo khana 5 min mein garam ho jayega.

Vik: tumne khana nahi kaya phir mere wait kar rahi thi.

Aditi: aaj tak kiya hai maine aisa toh abh

Vik knew there was no point in arguing,he went inside freshen upand came outside to find aditi placing two plates on table and was about to put on both

Vik: jaan ek plate mein dhalo ek sath hi kalenge aaj.

Aditi understood what he wanted and placed the poha in single plate. Vik sat on the chair. Aditi was about to sit on the other chair but vik pushed that chair away and motioned aditi to sit in his laps

Aditi: vikrant thak gaye hoge

Vik: please aditi itne din ho gaye hain sath baithe akele hum dono ko

Aditi didn't argue further, sat on his laps and started eating and feeding her. After the food vik again decided to talk about the letter

Vik: tum ne aaj phir letter bheja hain na(showing the the letter)

Adi: maine koi letter nahi bheja vikrant

Vik: aditi please tell me the truth

Adit sach mein... wait a min mujhe toh yeh lag raha ki koi tumhe letter bhej hi nahi raha.

Vik: accha to yeh kya hai?

Aditi: I know what you are trying to do

Vik: what

Aditi :last week jab main girish se baat kar rahi thi toh tum chidh rahe the as usual ur maine tumhe thoda aur tease kiya tha toh ab tum mujhe se usi baat ka badla le rahe ho by trying to make me feel jealous

Vik: aise bachon wali harkat na tum he shobha deti hai mujhe nahi. Aur main kyun hone laga use girish se jealous aur mujhe ne aab bohot neend aa rahi hai.

Aditi: haan ja aao pakade gaye isliye neend aa rahi hai.

do let me know your views
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wah ye secret admirer toh bada hi romantic hai...and sath me dinner how sweet... Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#9
Lovely update.. I wish we had similar banter between ViDiti on screen too 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kaun bhej raha hai ye sab chit????
Bichara Vik..so confused!!! Pahle se bichara confused hai upar se Aditi bhi usse hi blame kar rahi hai...
She sat on Vik's lap and he fed her omg...
Waiting for next part.. update soon

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