Shaurya's valentine message-one shot

Hello all... This is my first venture...expecting tomatoes and chappals... Plz do leave your comments and plz do ignore typos n errors

She walked along the path filled with rose petals in an elegant red gown. The path led to a romantic setup, sparkling in their moonlit lawn. Suddenly she got startled by a familiar voice, the most romantic, husky and dashing voice she has ever heard. Her prince charming, her sweet hubby Shaurya stood infront of her holding a mike. She stood there anxiously waiting for his loving words...

Main phool hoon, toh guldasta ho tum(if am flower , you are a bouquet)
Main zakhm hoon, toh marham ho tum(if am wound, u are my soothing balm)
Main Nafrat hoon, toh pyar ho tum(if am hate, u are love)
Main dil hoon, toh dhadkan ho tum(if am heart , u are my heartbeat)
Main Sooraj hoon, toh kiran ho tum (if am sun, u are its rays)
Main chand hoon,toh chandni ho tum(if am moon, u are moonlight)
Main musafir hoon,toh raah ho tum(if am traveller, u are my path)
Main bhajan hoon, toh aastha ho tum(if am prayer, u are belief)
Main dariya hoon, toh samandar ho tum( if am river,u are sea)
Main andhera hoon, toh roshni ho tum(if am darkness, u are my light)
Main talwar hoon, toh dhal ho tum(if am sword, u are shield)
Main baarish hoon,toh indradhanush ho tum(if am rain, u are rainbow)
Main nazar hoon, toh nazariya ho tum(if am vision, u are my viewpoint)
Main darwaza hoon, toh dastak ho tum(if am door, u are a knock)
Main zeher hoon, toh amrit ho tum(if am poison, u are honeydew)
Main zammen hoon, toh aasmaan ho tum( if am earth, u are sky)
Main aag hoon, toh paani ho tum(if am fire, u are water)
Main nark hoon,toh jannat ho tum(if am hell, u are heaven)
Main aakashganga hoon, toh kaayanat ho tum( if am galaxy, u are universe)
Main khaana hoon,toh zaayka ho tum(if am food, you are sapor/taste)


Haan...Ab filhal main Shaurya hoon, toh meri zindagi ki mehak ho tum...
(as of now am Shaurya and you are the fragrance of my life)

It was lovely Shinu 👏 👏

Beautiful ⭐️⭐️ Love it Keep writing friend ⭐️

Just loved it ...very well written dear ...👍🏼

Originally posted by: Shamz15

Just loved it ...very well written dear ...👍🏼

Keep writing⭐️

wow feeling great to hear from a multitalented person like you. Couldn't make a comment on your vm... It was as always superb... And me too have few vm requests 😉 , hope you don't mind...
Thankyou

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Beautiful⭐️⭐️Love it Keep writing friend⭐️

And thanks I got to learn some more words in Hindi🤗

Hehe... Even my mother tongue is also not Hindi.. Thankyou for your feedback 😛

Amazing start Shinu!! 😳
What a romantic update!!
Filhal main shaury hoon..
aur tum meri zindagi ki mehek this line just took me away.

BEAUTIFUL. please continue to write more soon have a blessed day ahead

Very beauuutifully wriiten dear 😛👏

Lovely n beautifully written shinu.