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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Others two parts were fine

But Maan and Geet newfound

Also their becoming one was little rush

Hope it had few more parts

But it's was also nice

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

Stunner

+ 17

Posted: 7 years ago

#152

Thank you for being a part of this rushed journey

Now am going to come back after my exams

And going to finish my pending stories

Edited by _Greylicious_ - 7 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Sorry , but yes I did feel the Maaneet's part very much rushed

though I felt it throughout the story

but its more important that you concentrate on your exams and once finished

you can think about rewriting it

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#154

All the best for your exams👍🏼

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#155

Part 3

great update! Maan excels in his career! Maan and Geet tread carefully when they decide to get married again! the past has taught them well!

they meet and get info abt each other and once satisfied proceed further!

their families meet and then they get married!

nice end!

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

thanks for the note!

I did also feel that you rushed the story!

all the best for exams!

shall wait 4 you!

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Yes I too felt a bit rushed...

If u write in detail will love to read

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

Stunner

+ 17

Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Guyz please check this link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4981807/thread-1-maaneet-ff-gullam-thread-2-pg-1

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#159

wonderful updates 2& 3...loved it...oh no as well as geet maan also cheated by his wife who was already pregnant with her BF & so she refused to settle with maan in London...maaneet called as divorcee... well to know both were moving by engaging in their work... both told their family same reason to find out their partners themselves only & both families accepted... maaneet had to meet as maan ki geet & geet ka maan hehe... but its destiny to meet them... oh geet already met 2 guys but thanked to reject it as maaneet forever together...loved their meeting & both trusted each other...in his sis's marriage geet was introduced as maan's bride.. wow in simple function both got married & both became one...every time destiny plays imp role in everybody's life..very well written..thanks for pm!!

Excited for maaneet married life in detail...but take your own time...!!

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Kalpana

@maaneetfavo

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Posted: 7 years ago

#160

Hi dear

Sorry for late

I think first time I read ur story

Story was realistic and interesting one.

Geet pov

I don't like vikram and his family finally they back up from geet life but why they played with geet life first.they know they spoiled innocent girl life but still hidden big truth from geet.first geet thought accept vikram with his illness time god her brother knocked her mind with help of doctor.i love geet family stand with her.every family not stand with girl rights.

Maan pov

Oh god poor maan, he thought his anchal but she bretrayed maan,its not maan mistake not stay with wife.i am not say fallen love with someone..its mistake but she married women atleast first gave once chance to maan,he tried to brought her to his place , her descision broken his heart.I love maan character , her ignorance , he thought in positive way.. his wife was unlucky lost best husband in her life.

Maaneet POV

Maaneet met very casual way and geet taken decision herself ..its good one first time she trust her family that failed one .now she decided her choice herself. Maan also want know about her and both r not blind decided their relationship,they researched their future partner past life then step up their new life .finally both got true soulmate in their life.

Story was realistic one and writing style was awesome yaar and convey ur message in short and sweet ways.

Thanks for pm

Sorry for late