3 Shots Maaneet's story of finding true soulmate : completed page 1

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Hii guyz
Am updating this story to tell you guys am well and alive hehe just kidding and no am not back ...not yet ...I will update my all ffs but please have some patience
Ok so back to this story ...this topic come into my mind two days back I tried but cannot stopped myself to pen it down this story is very dear to my heart
And mind you it's not a love story ...I want to show geet and maan's life simultaneously so to avoid confusion I'll update this story in 3 posts ...in first post it's going to be geet life in 2nd maan and finally in the third post maaneet

It's a story about family , marriage , adjustments , betrayal and in the end it's about finding your true soulmate

P.s please ignore mistakes as my computer is dead and I don't have any lappy so typing in mobile

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Geet's life
Author pov :
Geet is a regular 25 year old Delhi girl working in some MNC Gurgaon who love hanging out with her friends but there's some quality of hers that make her different from other Delhi girl first she's soft spoken which quality is rarely seen in Delhi girl and she's very cool minded she handles every situation patiently without getting angry

She's going to 26 next month so like every parents her parents are also worried about her marriage
And then one day a rishta came from a very well to do family for their younger son Vikas

Vikas is a ok looking guy working in family business
Her parents were happy with that alliance...she was getting extra ready as she wants to impress her supposed to be in-laws and finally they came Vikas family include his parents and one married elder sister and brother with their spouses who came to see her in her home and geet's family include her parents and one elder brother who's married and his 2 year Daughter

Geet's family welcome Vikas family after exchanging some pleasantries geet's mother told her daughter in law (geet's Bhabhi) to bring her in the living room and like a TV bahu no she didn't brought tea with her ...she came with a confidence walk ...head straight up ...and one thing that adorn her look was her beautiful and polite smile

She greeted his parents and said Hii to his siblings and their spouses lastly she give a small shy smile to Vikas and then take her seat on couch near her Bhabhi ...after more talking asking questions both families said yes and both geet n Vikas also nodded in approval...and then it was decided that they will finalize this alliance while doing roka today itself they already came with full arrangements ...her parents agrees and send her brother to bring some sweet boxes from bikanerwala which is very expensive and famous sweets brand in Delhi

Finally the roka was done ...At night time she was standing in her rooms balcony and constantly seeing the gold chain which she was holding in her hand WHICH her future MIL make her wore in the roka ceremony

"Something seems weird" she thought but what then she closed her eyes and whole evening flashes in front of her and then it clicked in her mind that she never heard him talking a proper full sentence he was just in monosyllables and only when some one asked to him he never initiated a talk ...and then she thought "maybe he's shy or introvert but however he is I'll adjust" which thinking this she lied down on her bed and a very restless sleep consumes her

Next day his parents came with their panditji to take out auspicious date for marriage while matching their kundlis ...and the earliest one was after a month both families agreed on that date coz the later one was not even possible both families is not ready to wait for next 3 years

I am skipping the wedding preparations and wedding we'll directly jump to their wedding night

She was waiting for Vikas on her wedding bed when her mother in law come in her room for handling label less bottle of medicine and instructs her to give it to him on time she questioned her what is this medicines for but her mil ignored her question like never heard and said while going "Mai Vikas ko bhejti Hu"


After some time Vikas come in their room geet give him his medicines he take it from her eat it and then went to washroom to change

When he come out from washroom geet asked him "ye apki medicine kis liye hai"

He remains mum and silently lied down on left side of bed and in second he starts snoring indicating that he's in a deep sleep

Geet's mouth drops after watching all things
"Something is very wrong bohot badi gadbad chal rhi hai yaha ye sab kuch normal nhi hai pta toh lagana hoga...par kaise " she thought

While thinking all this again a restless sleep consumes her now she became habitual of restless sleep since roka day she's getting this only

They also went to the honeymoon which was a honeymoon only for name sake
he remains silent and sleep all the time after eating those medicines during the whole trip

After that trip she have decided she will find out all her answers if her in-laws are not going to answer her then she'll dig out all her answers herself
One day when no one is at home she started her mission to dig out answers and her first stop was her MIL FIL room she search all cupboard drawers but found nothing ...only one drawer was left which was beside the bed she pull the knob to open the drawer but found it locked she got surprised as not even jewelry case is locked she tried to open it in desperation but it's not opening she slams her hand on bed in frustration then she remembers that she have seen some bunch of keys in cupboard she immediately went to the cupboard open it and take out keys from there

She tried every key and finally found the right one ...she opened the drawer and found some medical files in it she open it shocked to see patient name Vikas

She got blank she don't know what to do after few minutes she come back to her senses and she called her brother and asked him to meet her in some restaurant urgently then they decided CCD is the best place to talk peacefully

After 1 hour
Geet reached CCD where her brother wad already waiting for her they ordered 2 coffee then after a few minutes pause grey started telling him EVERYTHING ...her brother got shocked beyond words
" Itna sab ho gya Tu ab bta rhi hai tune 1 month bhi wait kyo Kiya you should have come back home on that wedding day itself tujhe humesha se lag rha tha kuch gadbad hai toh kisi ko btati toh Shi thoda sa hint hi de deti ab ...chal Ghar Mai tujhe ab us Ghar Mai Kabhi nhi jaane dunga un logo ko toh hum court Mai dekhenge cheating se Apne beemar bete ki shaddi jise god knows beemari kya hai uski shaddi tere se karwa Di " her brother said in anger
" Nhi Bhaiya Mai abhi Ghar nhi aa Sakti aur mai aise apni shaddi bhi nhi Tod Sakti janti hoon mere sath dhoka hua hai par Mai jab tak divorce Ka decision nhi let Sakti ...aur sochiye Bhaiya agar Vikas ko kuch shaddi k baad hua hota toh kya Mai use chod deti...nhi uske sath khadi rehti uska ilaj karwati aur yahi Mai abhi bhi karungi ...Mai tab tak divorce Ka decision nhi lungi jab tak Vikas k theek hone ki umeed Na khtam ho Jaye " she replied
" Geet Tu Jo keh rhi hai theek hai par soch Teri Puri life tere aage padi " after trying alot to convince her ...she didn't change her decision so her brother decided her to accompany her to that doctor office which is printed on the file

Her brother dialled that clinic number for an appointment
Luckily they got appointments for the same day

After sometime
At doctors office
Both entered the doctor's cabin after saying hello both took their seats and then geet brother's tell him "doctor Hume apki help chaiye"
"Yes tell me how may I help you " doctor said
Then geet pass him the file and said " Hume apke is patient k bare Mai sab jaanna hai ...Vikas ghai iski shaddi hui hai mere sath "
And doctor's reaction was like "what" ..for few minutes he remains silent and they also didn't said anything there were just noticing his every reaction

After a long sigh doctor said " Mai apko kuch nhi bta Sakta Apne patients k bare Mai but humanity k liye Mai apko bas itna keh Sakta hoon ap beshaq divorce dena chahti hai toh de dijiye because Vikas k sath Kabhi apka normal married life possible nhi hai uske theek hone k chances -1% hai means there's no chance wo humesha aisa hi rahega isse jyada Mai apko kuch nhi bta Sakta"
"Thank you doctor kuch Na bta k bhi Apne bohot kuch bta diya thank you " her brother said and then they come outside from doctors office
Tears started flowing from geet's eyes "ab kya karungi Bhaiya meri toh life hi barbad hi gyi " "koi life barbad nhi hui hai abhi toh Teri life padi hai Jo bura hona tha ho gya ab Jo hoga acha hi hoga " her brother said while embracing her and then they left for their home

In their home her brother told their parents everything they also supports her and call Vikas parents to tell their decision ...they knew it was their mistake do they agreed for the divorce for mutual consent and also agreed to pay the compensation of the whole amount geet's family spent on marriage and gifts ...geet's family also return the gifts ... And after a month or so finally she got a peaceful sleep

Edited by _Greylicious_ - 7 years ago
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Maan's life
Author's pov
Maan is 27,Delhi based guy residing in London for the job purpose ...maan lost his parents in a very small age ...now he have only his grandmother and one younger sister in the name of family
His grandmother called him back as she found the suitable girl for him and have already fixed the alliance by just showing him the pic through WhatsApp
He landed back in Delhi just on the day of his engagement day ...he doesn't need to buy anything as he have already done his shopping back in London ...he's not going to wear any traditional attire on both days he's going to wear tuxedo .
His dadima welcome him in home with so much love and showering hugs and kisses on him
"Lo Bhaiya k aate hi mujhe bhul gye" his sister said while entering the living room
" Oye tujhe kaise bhul sakte hai...motttiii" and he pull her cheeks and later taking her in a loving embrace

Later when they're ready to leave for the venue ...maan said while hesitating a little " hmm dadima ek baat apko batana bhul gya ...meri wapsi ki flight shaddi k next day ki hai " " kya...Maine kaha tha Na jyada chutthiya lena sab kya kahenge maan shaddi k agle din hi apni dulhan ko chod kar London bhag gya " her dadima said while getting angry on his revelation
"Maine try Kiya dadima but jyada din k liye nhi mili leave ...aur ap tension mat lo Mai waha jaate hi aanchal (his would be wife) k visa papers apply kar dunga aur jitna jaldi ho sake use bhi waha bula lunga fir jab hum dono waha settle ho jayenge toh ap dono ko bhi Mai waha Apne pass bula lunga ...ap tension mat lo Maine sab planning ki hui hai " "tension kaise Na lo aanchal k parents ko kya kahenge unhe ye pta hai shaddi k baad Tu waha jayega fir use bhi bula lega par ye thodi ki agle din hi Chala jayega " she said while getting worried for his in-laws reaction
"Oh-ho dadi ap bohot tension le rhe ho apko Lagta hai hum dhoka kar rhe hai toh sagai se pehle hi sab baat clear kar lenge koi dhoka nhi hoga ab chill mark " his sister said

And then they leave for the venue

And like decided they cleared all things before the engagement and his in-laws reaction was not what dadi expected...they're happy for getting a damad like maan and they didn't even have problem if he left for London the next day

So finally the engagement is done ...dadi suggested maan and aanchal to spend some alone time as after that day they're not going to meet till the wedding day
They agreed with dadi's suggestions and spent some time together and trying to get to know each other both were telling each other about their jobs , family etc

After 2days wedding is also done and on their wedding night Maan enter his room and found aanchal coming out of the washroom looking pale "what happened" maan asked "periods" she mumbled in embarrassment not looking at side ...and then in hurry she take out her night wear and some necessary items from her suitcase and ran inside the washroom

Maan was little disappointed as like every man he also have some dreams about his wedding night ...but what can he do he sigh ...and went to the cupboard to take out his nightwear and changed in the room itself ...he also take out his suitcase and started packing as he have his flight next day at evening

And next day he left after completing the page phera rasam

In starting they keep in touch through video calling, texting or simple voice calling but after a month it started reducing when she again joined the company she was working before marriage...maan was very understanding so when she cut his calls after just saying that 'i am in office' he doesn't get angry or took on his ego

Now their 6 months anniversary is going to come in next Month so he's trying to clear all the paperwork for her visa asap as he wants to spend their 6 months anniversary together only ...not knowing that his wife has started seeing someone else and going to give him a gift of betrayal even before their half year anniversary

After few days he got a call from aanchal ...he was very excited as this is the first time she's calling him after joining the office ...he was going to say 'hello' when he heard " I want divorce" "what" "I want divorce mujhe divorce chaiye " " aanchal is that you " he said getting confused blank or what not "are you drunk... this number is mine right so off course it's me " "then what the hell are saying you want divorce" he said getting angry " I am saying the truth I want divorce" " divorce chaiye tumhe yaha Mai paglo ki tarah tumhara visa lagwane Mai laga hua hoon " " agar ye visa k kam pehle hi lagwa dete toh ye situation hi create Na hota " she said in anger " situation ...what situation are you taking about" he asked in confusion "I love someone else " she replied ...for a minute there's a silence on both side ...maan don't know what to say and aanchal was giving him time to absorb everything but after few minutes he still didn't said anything and she started getting frustrated and asked "are you coming back or not for the divorce proceedings " " I am coming " he replied with no emotion in his voice

He agreed for the divorce as he know he have no right to bind someone in a relationship without their consent

In few days he come back in India and their divorce proceedings started ...and in a month or two they will also get the divorce too

And he finally released from the unfaithful and loveless relationships


P.s there was so many things I want to add but thought to keep it short and simple .

Edited by _Greylicious_ - 7 years ago
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Now it's been 3 month since maan and geet both got divorced from their respective spouses ...both are trying to move on in their life ...geet started working again...maan resigned from his job in London and has opened his own company in delhi...which is flourishing in comparison of other startups.

Both of their families wants to see them married again but they've clearly said them that they're not ready for the marriage for now ...and maan also said his dadi ' that this time he'll find the girl for himself ... he'll going to get married but not now ...as now he's very busy in establishing his business ...he doesn't have any time for marriage business'

And without telling anyone geet also started searching groom for herself .

After a month maan registered himself on shaddi.com and started the Search for his future bride...and the first profile he liked was of geet ...after all the procedure they decided to meet

But maan was not the first person geet was meeting ...before maan she had met with 2 guys...she didn't liked the behaviour of the first guy so she ended the meeting in 15 minutes...she liked the 2nd second guy very much as he knew how to treat a woman like she deserved but the problem with him was that his divorce was not yet finalized and she was not ready to wait for the guy who not even divorced yet .

And now the third guy she's going to meet is maan ...they decided to meet in CCD as there's not a better place where you can talk peacefully other than cafe coffee day

She reached CCD and remembered the reason she last time came here ...she shake her like scolding herself for remembering that day ...and she reached the table where maan was already waiting for her ...both said hii to each other and maan pulled out her seat like a pure gentleman and she liked hid that gesture ...after they ordered some coffee and sandwiches ...they start talking telling eachother about their school college family and in last they both tell each other about their failed marriage which was not even a marriage in a true sense ...both sympathize with each other and they ended their meeting on a good note and also exchanging each others phone number .

Both truly sympathize with each other but but but sympathy is not enough to agree for the marriage they've to be fully sure ... they're not going to do the same mistake again... so they started the enquiry...they started making enquiries by sending their friends and colleagues in their neighbourhood to know about the guy/girl and their families

Geet have one school friend who's now residing in London she told him to find everything about his life London by telling him the company name he was working .

After making a lot of enquiries... digging out information as many as they can...both doesn't found anything suspicious about each other and then they finally decided to meet again .

After 2 -3 meetings ...both decided to wait till they tell about eachother to their respective families ...they want to be fully sure about each other before they involve their families

In the meantime maan's dadi started searching groom for his sister...and one guy also coming to meet her .

Both families liked eachother but decided to wait till they give their answer...and maan's not going to make any mistake...as he doesn't want his sister to face anything like him or geet ...he make all the necessary enquiry ...when he found nothing suspicious about that guy...he nods with approval 'but the final say is going to be hers only .'..he told his sister ...his sister also said yes as she liked the guy ... next day they got the got from that guy family that they liked the girl and then they fixed the engagement

Now again comes to the maan and geet ...their relationship also started flourishing ...both started liking and trusting each other now just waiting for the correct time to tell their families

Maan even wants their families to meet before his sister engagement as he want her at his side on his sister engagement and every function she's going to had but she informed him about the upcoming official trip ...which is colliding with his sister's engagement so they decided to wait for a little more time till they inform their families

" but I want you at my side on my sister's wedding...no if no but ...I want you at my side that day and that's final " he declared
"Ok done " she replied with a chuckle

After his sister's engagement both informed their families about each other ...his dadi was ok as she already knows that he's going to find the his bride himself...but that's not the case in geet's home... they were upset that she hide all these things and was meeting with all the suspected grooms alone...but they decided to let it go and meet this maan guy

After two days maan's family come to meet geet family ... geet's family liked maan at first glance and maan's dadi also liked and trust his grandson's choice ...after talking a little bit more both families approved for their relation and also did the roka ceremony too to finalize the relationship...not over the top like they did last time with lots of sweet boxes and all

Both families didn't exchange any gifts ...they just make each other eat sweets specially to the bride and groom and just give shagun of Rs2001 to both respectively .

After some days maan's dadi invited geet's family to their house to familiarizing as now they're going to be relatives in no time

Her family were impressed with the house and their hospitality and with so much love and affection maan's dadi were treating geet ... they're also surprised to see the interaction between maaneet as they've never seen their daughter or sister interacting with some one with so much frankness...and there was a mutual respect for each other in their eyes and actions ...they were looking just made for each other

After seeing all this her family got truly happy to see that their geet is finally getting the life partner she truly deserved.

His sister's marriage date is also fixed and preparation has also started ...geet also helping his family in wedding preparations ...their relatives started coming and was noticed geet as she was doing all the work here and there but they assumed her as Ria's friend ( and finally maan's sister got a name)...his dadi also not clear their any assumption as they want to introduce geet as maan's bride formally on Ria's marriage only

Wedding day is near and geet is confused what to and then she asked maan who told her no no literally ordered her to wear something simple and elegant .. do some light make-up ...he told her there's no need to overdo ... she's beautiful as she is

On wedding day maan and dadi introduced geet as maan's future bride ...many were impressed with her simplicity and politeness... Some thought that it's all fake ..

Finally the wedding is done and maaneet family thought that now it's time that their marriage date should also be fixed

And then the date fixed which is after a month ...both doesn't want any grand wedding they not even want separate days for engagement and marriage so they decided to complete the engagement ceremony before the pheras

On wedding day
Geet's family welcome maan ...and after sometime geet arrived .. maan got mesmerized after looking at her ...and felt something which is alien to him ...yeah he was attracted to her in their first but today after looking at her as his bride he felt something else

Geet was wearing simple yet elegant reddish lehanga ...a big nose ring in her nose and head band which is called mathapatti a traditional Indian jewelry

Geet was coming near the stage and in background "din shagna da" was played by DJ ... finally she reached the stage where maan offered his hand in helping her on climbing the stage...

Then the ceremony got started first they did the engagement ceremony ...then varmala ceremony

Then they left for the mandap for the pheras

Finally the marriage is done and geet become Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana

During the vidai her family was little sad but mostly happy ...and happily bid her adieu with a hope for her happy future

In maan's home ria welcome her with all the ritual ...and after doing the post marriage ritual ria take her to maan's room which is now hers too

And that night both consummated their marriage and become one in true sense

After consummation Maan and geet both laid down on bed facing each other naked and lost in each others eyes

So what if it's their second marriage the thing that matter is that they finally got their true soulmate

Curtain closed


Edited by _Greylicious_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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arrange marriage of geet with vikas
but that guy weird
didn't even talk a word and those medicine too
whats can be the matter
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting story so geet is nice Delhi girl who gets married to a guy name vikas who talk very less but the family is nice or it seems to be geet has been restless since this alliance fixed but was confused why on the wedding night her mil gave her instructions to give medicine to vikas geet was confused and restless though she ask vikas but he didn't say anything and slept now geet more determine to find the truth
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Originally posted by: nakh5683

Interesting story so geet is nice Delhi girl who gets married to a guy name vikas who talk very less but the family is nice or it seems to be geet has been restless since this alliance fixed but was confused why on the wedding night her mil gave her instructions to give medicine to vikas geet was confused and restless though she ask vikas but he didn't say anything and slept now geet more determine to find the truth


Hii thank you for your comment

But please read the part 1 again it's completed
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Drashtilove

arrange marriage of geet with vikas
but that guy weird
didn't even talk a word and those medicine too
whats can be the matter


Please read the part 1 again it's completed
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Posted: 7 years ago
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geet still tried to keep her decision but there is no chance in her marriage
better to get separate
but im angry on his parents for their sake they married their son to geet
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Poooja it's kriti Yaar not kirti

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