3 Shots Maaneet's story of finding true soulmate : completed page 1

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#141

khatam bhi hogaya😲

this is what i felt like when i read the title

this one gave a feel of gossip more than a story

matlab I'll elaborate

wo geet hai na usska divorce hogaya apparently usske husband ka koi health issues the and the guy she's married to they met on this matrimonial site.. poor guy usski biwi ka kisi aur k saat chakkar tha

but end of the acha hai na dono ki shadi hogai and they moved on

pheka tha na😆

this was what ur reader was talking about bina chatni ka dosa😆

the story which would need detailing and emotions was way too rushed

poori story ka timing was max of 3 or 4 years nahi

aur yaad karo how many times i said sab hadbadi me ho haha hai

kabhi kabar choti cheze add karti hai story k feel ko

concluding

maine ek achi baat nahi boli hai iss story k bare me

i don't understand how you are taking so much of negativity from me

do keep writing!

q k stories ko likhne k liye nahi uss k ache aur bure response ko accept kar ne k liye himmat chaye hoti hai

and I'm glad you didn't take my words to heart!😊

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#142

Yaar Mai ise detailed bna Sakti thi ...but mujhe wait nhi ho rha tha mere exam hai 1 month Mai ...for mujhe July tak wait Karna hota

...and mobile Mai ye sab type Karna it's not an easy task

This story is cliclo to my heart aur mai rok nhi Saki khud ko...coz har time yahi chal rha tha mind Mai

I know it's rushed ...but I deliberately make it rushed so that I can finish it in one part

For that have to cut some important scenes too

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#143

And m not afraid of criticism 😛

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#144

Hey are you available right now

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#145

Note

Hey guyz
Many of you think that maaneet's life was a bit rushed ...I agree as I deliberately make it rushed to complete it in 1 part ...for that even have to remove some important scenes

Ok now I want your honest opinion in yes or no ...I don't want don't know or anything

So as I can't disappoint my honest readers...I thought to come back after my exams and make a brand new ss only on maaneet's life ...now you guyz know about Vikas and Aanchal m not going to add any of their scenes.

Thought part 3 as summary ...but are you guyz ready to read detailed version of that summary ...

I want your honest opinion

Thank you
Kriti

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: _Greylicious_
Hey are you available right now

yup

kya baat hai?😊

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#147

oh about the note

sari story hi rushed thi😆

but jo khatam ho gai usko mat chedo

when you come up with something new let me know😊

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 7 years ago

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#148

That's what I wanted to know

Thank you for your honest opinion

Now am not going to think about any story during exam's days

You know writing a rushed is far more difficult than a detailed version

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#149

tumhe hi pata hoga

zero experience😆

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 7 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
oh about the note
sari story hi rushed thi😆
but jo khatam ho gai usko mat chedo

when you come up with something new let me know😊

Yes grey I kind agree with sporty make a new ss let this be 3 shots only