AvNeil ff: The only meaning of my life-Neel very very imp note 16/4/18 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Shreya_patel160

It's amazing plzz update soon it's so long since you have updated 😊

Hi evevryone. It took me a long time to deciede what to put up in the 4th part. Here is part Part 4...

Avni's POV is red

Neel's POV is blue

Narrator's POV is black

I came home the next day. I couldn't wait any longer to see Neel,to tell him about our baby. I wore a long full sleeves pink t-shirt along with pajamas to hide the wounds. The physical pain held no existence in front of my broken soul. Neela maa came in hugged me. She sang "AA LEKE CHALU" and i drifted off into sleep.

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I opened the door of our bedroom.It looked the same exept the curtains which were missing from the window.I saw my angel sleeping peacefully with my photo in her hands.I sat beside her and tucked the strands of hair behind her ear,she was not the same Avni whom I had said goodbye too 4 days back.

She was strong,brave and a fighter, but now she looked weak and scared.Tears poured out of my eyes looking at my beautiful angel so weak.I kissed on her forehead,cheeks,eyes,nose and temple. I kept hand on my face to lower the voice of my sobs. My attempts failed beacuse she woke up.

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This shouldn't have happened,someone so god-like was crying that to because of me.I wiped away his tears and hugged him.

"Nahi...Neel mat ro" my eyes filled up.I exactly knew what to do next,so I got up and brought his gift for him. Butterflies danced in my stomach.

"Neel bina sawal jawab kiye please apna gift kholo. I can't wait."I chirped.

Neel obeyed the instruction and in the next minute he held the cup in his hand. He tried to observe from every angle about what was exciting me too much.He suddenly stopped looking at the bottom inside of the cup.

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I felt short of words to describe the next few minutes. The qoute read-

'Papa, I am comming..'

Was this for me? Was i gonna be a dad?Avni was pregnant, i was totally freaking out.Happy tears replaced the sad ones. It felt like my heart froze then suddenly started pounding. I got up not caring about my hand and hugged her in the most humanly way possible.I pressed my lips against her

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The feeling at the moment was beyond words.We kissed cherishing the happy time after what felt like years.I tangled my hand in his hair and he held my waist with one hand.We parted because I was hyperventilating. He shifted his hand from the waist to my cheeks and then he looked down to my stomach.Our eyes met and his eyes clearly told that still he couldn't believe that I was pregnant."Yes" I spoke.He bent down on his knees and kissed my stomach one,twice,thrice.He held up my hand and proposed me for our marriage.We again kissed and hugged each other.

They found solace in each others arms and slept peacefully forgetting what the future might hold for them.

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tbc

So this is Part 4 (a).

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Please guys seriously tell me should I continue this ff because I don't think it is being liked that much.

Rachna, ur fanfic is such wonderful. I read this now. God why did not i read it before. Don't worry. It takes time for people to respond. You keep writing you works. And please don't discontinue. Also do see my work. And i say your work is wonderful👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Sami72

Rachna, ur fanfic is such wonderful. I read this now. God why did not i read it before. Don't worry. It takes time for people to respond. You keep writing you works. And please don't discontinue. Also do see my work. And i say your work is wonderful👏👏👏

Plzz continue this... I'm waiting for you to update..plzz update