AvNeil ff: The only meaning of my life-Neel very very imp note 16/4/18

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi everyone. So finally the story I had been writing since such a long time is ending. I thought to put up it's first part today.
Merry Christmas all of you.
Hope you enjoy reading!!!!!
Note:This part will be completely Avni's pov.

Part 2 :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4938975&PID=145634734&#p145634734

Part 1

I removed my hands from Neel 's eyes. He gently opened his beautiful brown eyes. A big smile crept up on his face as he saw the warm surroundings.
"Happy birthday to the best husband in the world Mr. Neel Khanna."
I was super excited about the gift I had for him. I played his favourite song "Dil diya gallan."
The place was filled with music as we held hands and swayed along the song. I got lost in his beautiful eyes so much that I didn't realise that the song was already over. We cut the small cake which I had prepared for him.
Neel looked around curiously.
I knew he was waiting for the gift so I explained him,"So tumhara gift. U have to finish the coffee till the bottom to find out your gift.I love you Neel and I know ki aisa gift tumhe pehle nahi mila hoga."
""I love you too wifey and now I am super excited to find out what my gift is. "saying this is gently planted a kiss on my hand and made me sit on the chair in front of him.
We sat in silence and drank the coffee. I admired Neel gulping down the hot coffee down the throat in excitement.
"Neel slow down. Please puri raat hai."
He just looked up from the cup at me for a split second and went back to concentrate on his coffee.
After 10 mins he kept down the empty cup and closed his eyes. Ok I knew his tongue would be burning right know but his excitment held no bounds. He picked up the cup. The cup read-
"Hey dad! I am on the way "
Neel got puzzled and made the tube light face to me. He looked into my eyes and I could notice the grin which was spreading from ear to ear slowly. In no time we stood up and Neel hugged me crushing my bones. He feverently kissed me all over my face and finally crashed his lips on mine. The feel was so unearthly . When he kissed me I lost the track of time. The overwhelming happiness sent shivers down my spine. I wanted to live in this movment forever. He parted only when he realised that i was panting. His eyes were full of happy tears. He placed a protective hand on my stomach and looked at me making my insides melt. I placed my hand over his and we smiled sharing the happy family movement.
A loud noise broke my beautiful dream...
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To be continued

I hope you like this one.
Will try to update soon.
Silent readers please atleast hit the like button to let me know that you enjoy es it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's very nice., Please continue.
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Wow superb, But dream💔😭 continue soon.
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So it is a dream
Interesting starting
Awesome update
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I will try to update as soon as possible.
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Originally posted by: Veenapain

It's very nice., Please continue.


Thank you dear
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Originally posted by: avneil2

Wow superb, But dream💔😭 continue soon.


Thank you. 😊
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Originally posted by: Kmhcrazyfan

So it is a dream

Interesting starting
Awesome update


Thank you. I will update soon.😳
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Superb 👏👏👏
Loved it
Plz update next
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That was beautiful...
Sapna hi sahi... Par Pillu is on the way😳
Continue Soon...😃😃

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