AvNeil ff: The only meaning of my life-Neel very very imp note 16/4/18 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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First of all thank you for supporting me by reading my ff.
I was thinking about the name of pillu and pilli who will soon enter in the story.
Pillu is Avneil
Pilli ke liye Natasha
Na-Neela
Ta-shweta
Sha-aayesha
So pilli's name comes from the mothers name.
Will wait for ur views on their names. If u like them please hit the like button.
Edited by sugar_candy15 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
LOVE the girl name but boys name maybe you can come up with something else.
Maybe Akash ( Ali/Aman and prakash ko mila ke...the 2 other important men in her life.)
Edited by neeraja91 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

LOVE the girl name but boys name maybe you can come up with something else.

Maybe Akash ( Ali/Aman and prakash ko mila ke...the 2 other important men in her life.)


Thanks for your suggestion. I will see to it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi everyone. Sorry for this delayed update. Hope you like this part...
This part is Avni's POV
I opened my eyes and found myself lying on a bed. The room had a white cieling. I felt a tube under my nose that was supporting my breathing.My vision was blurred but it got better in a few minutes. I finally understood that I was in a hospital and Neela Maa was sleeping on a sofa in the room.The first thoughts that came in my mind were about Neel and our baby. Where was Neel?Was he fine? Is our baby alright? How did I get here? Definitely I was not willing to think of the events that took place in last two days.I managed to speak a few words at first but they came out as soft whispers. It felt like speaking just maa drained my whole energy. I closed my eyes due to heaviness in my head, that is when I realised how weak I had become. This time my voice was a lot loud than before.
Maa came running and took my hand between hers. She kissed my hand, then my forehead.
She sent for doctor and Kia. The latter came in with a bouquet of flowers wishing me to get well soon. Doctor checked me and told that I was very weak and required a complete bed rest for a week. Kia went out with doctor to do some formalities while Neela Maa caressed my hair. I was to eager to ask her about Neel but I feared what her reaction would be. Neela maa broke the silence which seemed to last like forever.
"Baccha tumne mujhe Neel ke baare mein kyun nhi bataya. Tumhe mujhpar bharosa nhi tha kya?" She asked with concern.
"Maa, Vo main Neel se bahaut pyaar karti thi,mujhe laga app humara relation approve nhi karoge. After knowing ki Aayesha maa ne kya kya saha hai." I told.
"Baccha mana karne waali baat nhi hai. Dekha na tum dono ki shaadi bhi nahi hai aur tum pregnant ho." Now she was angry.
"Maa Neel papa jaisa bilkul nahi hai. Jab use pata chalega ki main pregnant hun without giving a second thought he will ask me to marry him." I spoke doubt free.
"Iska matlab abhi tak use pata hi nhi. Avni tum ye kya kar rahi ho. "
"Pehle aap mujhe batao neel kahan hai. Mera dil jaanta hai wo theek hai."
Neela maa told me that she had called police to find Neel. They had found and admitted him in the nearby hospital. There was a minor elbow fracture and he got 5 stitches on his forehead. They would inform her when he regained concioius.I sighed with relief.
Kia came in and they both started questioning about what had lended me in this dreadful situation.
I closed my eyes as tears made there way out on the horrific memories of last 2 days. I could still feel the lustful eyes on me,those filthy hands touching my cheeks,my arms. The symbol of cowardice for me,that gun pointing on our baby. The malicious sinster smile on his lips.

So this is the part 3.
I will love to hear from you all.
Imp notice for silent readers: hit the like button if you like this part.
Happy lohri forum people.
Thanks for reading...
Comment kar dena.😛

Edited by sugar_candy15 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 4 will take a longer time. Sorry in advance for the delay. I am giving exams right now so I won't get time to write a good ff.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😲 what a twist...
No misunderstandings ..plej sugar...
Lustful eyes? Noo...no vr... kya hai ye twist?

Jaldi se neil ko ye good news reveal kardo...😳
Do Update soon...


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wat neil ko nahi pata. Kaha hai voh.
Hope he dont leave her.
Vr yaha bhi aaghaya pagal ladka.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...SA...

😲 what a twist...

No misunderstandings ..plej sugar...
Lustful eyes? Noo...no vr... kya hai ye twist?

Jaldi se neil ko ye good news reveal kardo...😳
Do Update soon...



Part 4 will be about the last 2 days. Part 5 mein Neel will be back.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: avneil2

Wat neil ko nahi pata. Kaha hai voh.

Hope he dont leave her.
Vr yaha bhi aaghaya pagal ladka.
Continue soon.

Neel ke bday ka wait kar rhi thi Avni reveal karne ke liye but things dindnt work out the way they were planned.
Neel ko bahaut jaldi pata chalega.
But u will have to read further for clearing your doubts.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's amazing plzz update soon it's so long since you have updated 😊

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