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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Thank you for the appreciation Readers! :)

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abhilasha

@jaansahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Wow that was so good!!

The song was in complete sync with the story. I loved the way how Shivaay felt protected in Annika's arms. And I even loved it when she was able to read him. And the lines where it was said that he always drinks the poison and distributes amrit, I am not so easily going to sleep without sending a compliment or two to u.

Loved it.

Abhi

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: jaansahiba
Wow that was so good!!
The song was in complete sync with the story. I loved the way how Shivaay felt protected in Annika's arms. And I even loved it when she was able to read him. And the lines where it was said that he always drinks the poison and distributes amrit, I am not so easily going to sleep without sending a compliment or two to u.
Loved it.
Abhi

Thank you Abhi!

Quite honestly I love writing Shivaay's character from eyes of everybody and also through his own eyes.

This song took me straight to Shivaay, and hence I ended up writing this.

Yes that line -Ban Jaayenge Zeher peete peete, ye aksh Jo piye jaa rahe ho.

Thank you for the wonderful comment !

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