My Impossible Love || An Avneil TS short one updated (08-03)

ayushi23 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#1
So since Ayushi one of my best friend said me , I decided to showcase one of my stories to you all. This one was initially written for rikara but then since this one is really close to my heart I decided to share it with you all too. This one is a really special story for me because this is a real life love story. Though I will be adding dramatic twists but the main idea of the story is taken from my favourite real life couple. This one will be a two-short story... So avneilland ke wasiyon here you go
P.S.- sorry for the typos and errors

SHORT 1

They were close, really close. She could feel him breathing on her neck while he held herby her waist. She was able to feeling her heart slamming inside her chest like a hammer hitting a wall. His hands were moving up and down, right and left and all over her back. He lightly kissed her neck and moved to see her. She was too shy to face him but he lifted her chin up by his fingers. He moved closer to her and was about to meet his lips with hers.

"Avni, get up. Get up baba. We are really late now. It's just 15 minutes to 9 and look at you; you are still sleeping. Come on we have a class" Richa informed her almost hitting her face. "Ughhh! Richa come on. It's been two years now for us in the hostel and you still wake me up shouting every time " Avni said in her usual morning tone. "Not for two years madam, the last year you used to wake up early and get ready on time. But I seriously don't know What the hell happened in these few months that your sleeping habits have become too annoying" she shouted on her as Avni went to freshen up and got ready. "Look I am ready, now should we leave" she said calming Richa down. "Yes" Richa sighed. "I don't know what to do about this girl", she thought. Avni Ayesha got admitted into "The Art's college" in Mumbai, through a scholarship. Being an orphan, she had to manage everything on her own after she left her orphanage two years back, completing her graduation. And she did manage everything very nicely and all thanks to her best friend Richa who was a very big support for her. It was Richa who helped her to clear the government exam held to give selected girls' scholarship for free studies, so that they can stand on their own.

Everything was going well until a handsome, well build man took admission into her college the last year. He was Neil Khurana, the only son of Mr , the head of the Khurana industries. It was love at first sight for Avni. At first she thought that it was a general impulse in her heart, but then as the time passed by, she realised that it was not simply her crush but something much more deep and beyond mere attraction. And not only that, the more she saw him, the more her heart gives her a yes for him. But then he was the heir of The Khurana Empire' and what was she? Nothing, just nothing. Everybody in the college knew that Riya Mehta, the only daughter of Mr Ketan Mehta was the one who could fit him perfectly. She knew she would never be able to get him by her side, but the saying goes "dil hai ki manta nahi".

Riya was just like the girls of the higher class family would be; selfish, arrogant and disdainful. All she knew was to dress up come to the college, meet Neil, and obviously mistreat Avni. Avni some times felt irritated but it has to go that way, she had nothing to answer on her taunts. "Avni how was your viva yesterday? Richa asked her. Avni was waiting for her to ask this because there was so much to tell her. "Richa, you know what?" she began. "I answered all the questions a so properly. All the teachers were so impressed by my work on the presentation" saying this she entered the class.

Neil was as usual sitting with his friends, discussing about his viva and presentation when he saw a chirpy girl, dressed in a normal shalwar-kammez with a dupatta; entering the class. Though she was not as much dressed as others did, she looked beautiful. This was now a daily routine for him to start his morning classes seeing her, as if she was the reason he attended them. Being an Oberoi, he didn't needed to attend every class or even come to the college, and he did not in his previous one. But God knows what charm this girl possessed that he started attending them from the first day of the college itself.

"Look at her, again in the same clothes. Don't you get tired wearing your same old clothes again and again" Riya said mocking Avni. "This is my favourite one, I never get tired wearing it" she replied. "And mine too " he said inside him. "Oh you poor girl, don't give excuses about your poverty my dear. Accept the fact that you are not even capable of buying a dress for you. I really pity you, my dear" Riya again mocked her. She kept silent as she did every time and moved to her desk to attend the lecture.
"Hi Neil saying this Riya excitedly ran toward him and sat next. He moved a bit to avoid her, but she again moved towards him. Defeated Neil left his desk and sat on the idle one, which was just next to Avni. He could see her punching the desk hard and harder every time out of frustration and anger but could not speak anything.
"So class as we finish our session for today, I need you all to gear up for your group project. You will have to make a sculpture on a topic given. The group will be of two people, a girl and a boy. So starting with Richa, I will keep Mukesh with you" and the professor went on with the other students. Riya was with Rahul, one of Neil's friends. "And at last Avni, you will be Neil's partner " he announced. "But sir". "No Questions Avni, you will be Neil's partner" he told her. "Okay sir" a defeated Avni could only say this.
All the students went on with their partners to discuss about the project, leaving Avni and Neil behind. "So our theme is Love" Neil said looking at his phone. "I know that she said avoiding him. "Look Avni, if you are going to avoid me then the sculpture will definitely not be completed in this year and we just have two days" Neil said. "Who said I am avoiding you?" she asked. He went near her "Well you are not looking at me either" he muttered in her ears. She felt chills rushing in her body. "No, I am not" she said pulling herself back. "Okay then, meet me in my studio at 5, we will decide what to make and will complete it there". "Why at your studio?" "I don't think your hostel will be a good place" he said pointing at Richa who already had decided to make the sculpture in her room already. "Okay " she said in a defeated tone.

"You are welcome in my studio Avni" he said smiling. "Thank you. Hmmm this is nice" she said looking around. His studio had his paintings which were beautiful. The walls were decorated and the curtains added perfection to them. "You have an amazing studio" she said. "Well thank you, come in and sit down" he almost dragged her. "So let's start she smiled at him. "Okay then you begin; will you like to have coffee? "he offered. "No" she said denying.

They started on, mending the sand. He saw her struggling with the proportions. "May I help?" he asked. "Yaa sure. It's your project too" she said smiling and he joined. They both were mending the sand when he saw to look at her. Her cheeks and the corner of her lips were covered with sand. She was looking even more astonishing that way. "Neil control" he said in his mind which wanted to kiss her and lick the sand away. "Amm Avni go and clear sand from your face" he said. "Ahh it's okay. Don't worry I will, when we finish this up for today" she said. "But till then who will control me" he said in his mind.
"Okay so as we are done for today, I will meet you tomorrow" she said washing the sand off her cheeks. "Thank God she washed her face" he said in his mind. "Okay then; see you at 11" he said to her. "At 11; Why so early?" she asked. "Because we have two days and we have to complete and paint it tomorrow itself" he said raising his eyebrows. "Oh yes; Okay then see you at 11 " saying this she left.

"Oh God, I am in love with her" he said to himself looking at Avni.

Do tell me if you want me to continue
Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

9

Views

2.8k

Users

5

Likes

36

Frequent Posters

Sanakhan67 thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#2
It was amazing!do update next one plzz
😉
Alostgirl thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#3
Amazing post next part soon
Wingsoflove_2 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#4
ItS amazing. Wow avneil r students. Superb continue soon.
ayushi23 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: Sanakhan67

It was amazing!do update next one plzz

😉


Thank you
It will be up soon
ayushi23 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#6


Thank you
It will be up soon
Amayrasharma18 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#7
This was nice..do continue plz :)
ayushi23 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

This was nice..do continue plz :)


Thank you
It will be up soon
ayushi23 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#9

Helloo dearies... Thank you all so much for liking my story... Frankly I was really not sure about this one... I am really happy by your responses... I am sorry if I am not able to respond to you guys but seriously thank you for liking this one... You know this one is my favourite... So now putting all the anticipations to rest I welcome you to second and the last short of the story...

SHORT 2

"NEIL open the door Avni knocked the door. "Yes, I am coming he opened the door and Avni was shocked by the view. He had only a towel wrapped around his waist and the water was dripping drop by drop from his hair from his neck to his body, making the scene more exquisite. She didn't wanted to, but closed her eyes and turned around "Go wear your clothes she shouted. "Excuse me, this is my place right. And I can do anything I want to he said shrugging. "Okay then, I will come afterwards she moved. "Okay, sit for a minute, I will be back saying this he let.

"Shall we start he asked. "Yes, I think we should she answered. They both started woNeiling on the statue. NEIL was woNeiling on the sand while Avni was preparing the colours. "Avni what do you think about love? he asked. "I don't think anything she said avoiding the question. "Huh, why, I mean everyone in today's world loves someone or the other. Don't you? he expected answer. "I am not meant to be loved a choking voice answered. "And what do you mean by that? he again asked. "Why do you want to know about me? she turned. "Because the theme of our project is love' and as we are a team I need to know your views he answered hesitantly.

Avni wanted to avoid the question but she knew until she didn't answer he is not going to shut his questions "I have no one to love and nobody is there to love me, not even my parents she answered. "Oh! I am sorry saying this he turned around to get his spatula "Aaah! he shouted. She turned and rushed to him "What happened? she asked. "I think a paint bucket dropped on my head and that's aaah, Avni don't touch it he cried as she touched to see how bad the wound was. She tried hard to avoid laughing "NEIL you are still a kid saying this she laughed out loud. NEIL was astonished to see the beauty. She was looking even more beautiful. "Where is the medicine kit? she asked. "In the left hrawer of that table he said pointing on the table.

She brought the medicine box and started putting the medicine. She then realised that it was a very bad idea. She started feeling his breadth on her neck when she started treating his wounds. NEIL, on the other hand, was almost lost in her scent. He was able to feel her heartbeats almost shouting against her body. He was now pretty sure now about what she thinks about love. He held her hand stopping her. "Let me do it she insisted. Without even a word he slammed his lips on hers. They went on kissing when Avni surrendered after struggling a bit. They went on kissing each other like they both found out their satisfaction.

"NEIL baby Riya entered. Seeing her Avni pushed NEIL back "What? he questioned. He turned and found an angry Riya walking towards Avni. "You showed your true colours girl. I knew something like this would happen one day if you get a chance with him. You are a characterless and a shameless girl. I knew you would pounce on my NEIL one day Riya insulted her. "Riya mind your words NEIL shouted. "You are telling me to mind my words, NEIL. Tell her to mind her actions she shouted back. "Shut up and leave he dragged her to the door and shut the door on her face.

Avni was shocked. She was unable to take what happened. At first her dream was being completed, but what happened just now shattered her. Riya had always insulted her but today it was a question on her character. "Avni, I am sorry he said guiltily. "It's not your fault; I said I am not meant to be loved she said crying. "No, that's not your fault; I was not able to control my emotions he said holding her. "I said I am not meant to be loved saying this she left the room crying.

"Congratulations Avni, your project was the best one Richa excitedly chirped. "Oh yes thank you she replied. "Hey let's go to the activity area, I think something special is going on there Richa told her. "No, Richa I am not in a mood to handle anything now, you go she answered. "Ok then I will come with you. I am not going there alone Richa slowed down. "You know my weakness saying this she left to the activity hall with Richa.

The area was decorated beautiful with flowers, balloons and covered paintings. Everybody in the college gathered there to look about what was going on. Riya walked to her "Today you will get to know who my NEIL loves. You know what; he has arranged everything according to my taste. Definitely he is going to propose me today she said smiling. Avni was left with no words. Her heart was almost broken. He turned to leave when...

"I was a man with many problems... Problems which were too simple to handle but they seemed like huge mountains. I was really a big duffer before who tried to be bigger than my age... Right Rahul? But then she entered my life. She came as a wind, blowing my fears away. She came as ice healing my pains. She never needed anything to make her look beautiful, only her time was enough to take my heart away. She made me realise that I am still a kid he said walking. "I have been a very big fool to not make her realise the same day I was with her. But look I have paid for my mistake now Riya was shocked as he passed her.

He went on his knees "Miss Avni Ayesha, Neil is in love with you from the first day itself. I love you more than anything and anyone. I love you because you are meant to be loved. I love you because you are the one with whom I find the kid in me alive. I love you just because I love you... Do you?. Avni was filled with a storm of emotions. She heard her mind and her heart fighting. She didn't say anything and just ran out.

"Avni he was about to rush behind her as he fell someone holding his hand. "How can you do this to me? You are mine, NEIL and that's it. She is a cheap... "Shut up Riya, I am warning you. You are talking about my love. You are talking about Avni. And I am not here to listen anything against her. So just shut up and leave my hand hearing his anger, Riya instantly left his hand and he ran to her.

"Avni, stop, and listen to me he said. She was not in a state to listen to anyone at this time. He ran and stood in front of her "At least tell me your decision he asked. "I love you too, NEIL. But life has just snatched everything from me, even my mom and dad. I cannot afford to lose you she said crying. He hugged her tightly "I will not go anywhere, I promise he said. "But I am not as rich as you are she stated. "But you are stupid, and that's a fact he said smiling. "I am not stupid she cleared. "You are, how could you think I would not love you just because are not rich he asked. "I am sorry she replied. "No problem Jaan, the only truth is that I love you and will continue loving you till I am in this world he said assumingly. "And I will love you till the day this world dies she replied happily. And now without wasting any time he slammed his lips on her sealing the deal of love forever.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Scroll down for epilogue

Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago
ayushi23 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#10

EPILOGUE

One of many nights of them being together since he proposed her in the best ways she could expect. It was impossible for her to actually budge of, the reason being that she loved him from all of her heart. Since he entered, the things became easier for Avni. Though she never thought that she would receive so much love from not only him but his family too, she was really very happy to find that his family being a billionaire one too accepted her with open arms. Never since she got married she experienced that she was not or less than any member here. His parents had accepted her as their daughter and she was happy to have her parents once again. Life was like paradise now, Neil had his own exhibition club now which showcased her paintings too. Though it was not her wish at first but yes being the best hubby possible he did everything even before she thought about it.

Neil, on the other hand had his heavens in his arms everyday in the morning and at nights. Being the son of an industrialist and that too billions on this name he never thought that he would get such a wonderful and selfless wife as her. The reason he loved her was this that he was drowned in her eyes every time he saw them. Her lips had a capacity to take him crazy whenever her heard "Neil from them. These letters never sounded that good when they were not from her lips. Life was just perfect and all he needed. She was there and all he wanted was to see her face first thing in the morning and the last thing at night.

Smiling he entered the room only to find his lovely wife still submerged in her sculpture not even noticing that her hands and legs were in the mud. Her hair were tied up in a bun with little strands brushing her cheeks slightly as she seemed irritated with the movement. She was trying to remove them by her wrist or by blowing air from her lips. He chuckled softly seeing this as he went near her only to tuck her hair behind her ears.

His hands automatically snaked through her waist on the tiny bump which had the mark of their love in it. "How was the day? he whispered in her ears softly. "It was amazing. I can't tell you how good a day can be. I did so many things... She kept on chattering as he was still there listing to everything while gently caressing the bump. "So will I get my share? he asked raising a bow. "What do you mean? she returned with a question still in the confused state.

He started trailing down kisses over her neck as he gently brushed her hair to the side. She gasped at the sudden movements on her back and neck. A slow moan escaped her lips when he playfully nibbled her ear. Moving down with each of his hand movements taking the place of his lips he gently kissed her knuckles sending shivers in her body. Seeing her effected so much by his touch he immediately pressed his lips to her in a soft yet firm kiss.

She opened her mouth to give him entrance as she only enjoyed him dominating her tongue. She hissed when he bit his bottom lip only to go for a soul searching kiss again. Without ending he lifted her up in his embrace and guided both of the aching bodies to the bed. They breathed hard when she ended the kiss placing her forehead on his. His hands snaked to his breasts gently massaging them as the sensations were multiplied due to her stage.

He placed his hands on the buttons of her kurta when she stopped his hand. "Neil, the baby she whispered. "Sorry baby, but mumma is mine today he smiled caressing her belly and looked to her. "You believe me he asked as she nodded. "Then let me in he said as they were lost in each other like many previous peaceful nights.

Five months after that they welcomed their daughter "Purnima Neil Khanna who completed their family.

Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".