RiKara FF - NOOR - EPISODE ONE UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

A very emotional start... poor Gauri is living her life in darkness and is only surviving because of her daughter... the you have penned down the story is beautiful
I hope her husband was not Omkara and he is yet to enter her life and fill it with light
Continue Soon

Thank you so much ... I am happy that you liked ththis emotional start and about her husband ... That you will have to wait to read.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sh_aarohi


Well I did Thank you 😆😆😳

Di how are you now ? feeling well ?


Yes Aaru I am okay now ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its amazing pooru..interesting story line

About This shot..heart wrenching and too emotional😭

You portrayed gauri's emotions, feelings and how she is alone, living in darkness..very well, loved it

And arohi..her only light

I think gauri's husband was not om..but let's see

Update soon han

Edited by rikara94 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Why Pooru ? Why ?! Why did you do this ? It's 3:50am in the night and I have tears running down my eyes and my eyes are now burning...
I had hope... I was so light and hoping and happily reading this until "he is dead" came up... I wish I had my expressions recorded... My heart flinched... it stopped for some moments... it was a shock... a big shock... He cannot be gone... I still have hope... He cannot leave her that way... Why did you have to word her pain that way ? I can't take it...
You took me back to some bad memories... My aunt's a widow with daughters.. I'm sure she lives for them... Her world just shook, it went down this way... I've seen her in pain... those were bad times... it isn't easy... it really isn't... One should be thankful and cherish and give back all the love before it's too late... it doesn't take even a second for things to change...

Sorry for getting distracted, I had to let it all out... it's just too heart wrenching... heartbreakingly beautiful maybe... I loved reading it... it controlled my emotions really well... and I would love reading further... I just hope no one in real has to go through such times... since you've named this piece of yours "NOOR" , it gives hope... I'm gonna wait for things to unfold... I hope the mother daughter duo's life is filled with 10 times the light that's been taken away...
Update soon...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Really emotional and heart wrenching.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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that was so heart touching
loved it

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