The Written Apology*Maaneet SS*UPDATED CH6,7@Pg66*COMPLETED*28th Mar

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Chapter 4

This one is equally awesome as third shot ...

Maan aisa nahin hain lol 🤣 maan ki personality se suit nahin kartha... Hahaha... Why cant she say that she is jealous man.. 😆 Awww... Seriously maan confessed in this manner ?? He confessed her when she is ill.. Lol and she is not ready to believe him and thinking abt her story plots 🤣 poor maan... Kithna sehna pada usse samjhane ke liye ki vo sach mein geet se pyaar kartha hain 😆 i can see that geet is playing with him... She too loves him but ghuma rahi hain 😆 wow likh ke lelo ... Maan ko sirf written things pasand haina 😆 Awww ... Maan made her cry and geet asked him written apology to show that whenever he makes her cry .. So sweet .. Ab samajh aaya naam kyun written apology rakha tune 😆 W*F seriously??? Maan ne amyrah ko appoint kiya taaki vo geet ko jealous kare ? 😲 Lol i cant stop myself from laughing after knowing this he literally used this idea from one of her story plots ...🤣 maan ke paas khud ka dimaag nahin hain kya geet se confession nikalvane ke liye .. Jealousy ka sahara liya and yeh backfire hogaya ... Geet blasted on maan ... Lol ab he screwed up everything ... He is thinking that geet will commit suicide ?? 😲 Even this thought came to him because of her stories ... Lol ... Dont worry maan geet aisa kuch nahin karegi ... Ab maan ko written apology likhna padega firse 🤣

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#342

Baby i cant stop laughing.. Omgg plzz update soon... Cant wait now

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#343

Shall try to update this!!
Busy with work!!
Thanks a lot everyone for loving this short story!! 😳

Edit : Done!! 😆

Here comes my written Apology for being late!! 😕
Was really entangled between hectic schedule, health issue and guest arrival!!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#344

Reserved for Chapter 5

CHAPTER 5 : Confession Vs Apology!

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And to make the circumstances worse he remembered one of her story where the female protagonist also runs away from her longtime crush after knowing he is in love with someone else!!! That was one of the unrequited stories as the girl... The girl committed suicide!!

That girl's last word were also, "Aab kabhi ye chehra nahin dekhna hoga tumhe...koi aab pareshan nahin karega tumhe...

With this thought he pressed the accelerator hard, panic was running through all his veins!!

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PART 1

Temporarily moved >> Chapter 5 part 1

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#346

PRECAP : Now she lifted her eyes to contemplate his expressions also continuing her infamous divulgence, "And when you proposed to me...Main darr gayi thi..

Naa hi main khud ko rok paa rahi thi..Aap ka pyaar nasha baan ke mujhmein beh raha tha...Lekin ye ek galti...Aur...Aapko khone ka darr..." Fear was prominent in her quivering voice!

"Now...Aab aapko pata hain...Main kyun...kiya aab bhi aap mujhe aapnayenge?? Maan..Kuch toh kahiye?? Mujhe darr lag raha hain..." His silence was feeding on her as she stuttered timidly, looking at his blank face anxiously!!

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#347

Awesome update baby ... You know what i read this update about five times and still want to read it without any interruption but for the time being i wanted to give my comment first... A very lovable update... 😳

Geet is totally burned up in jealousy and vent all her anger on poor maan 😆 i agree with her because that needed the most ... Lol even geet knows that maan used her plot to make her jealous... 🤣 but when she saw maan sitting with amyrah she couldnt stop herself from feeling jealous.. Then she must understand how maan felt when he saw her with ranveer 😆 i liked new name given to maan by geet.. 😆 Stupid coconut 🤣

I just loved the way she showed her authority on him and anger on him... Her dialouges non stop talking and cute cribbing .. All over its a fab update baby 😳 chudail ke saath rang raaliya 🤣 lol... I was still rofling on that line... Her all cribbing shows her depth of love on maan which she is trying to hide from along time... Finally when maan questioned her about ranveer she couldnt take it and slapped him 😆 and even kissed him after slapping him and showed him that he only belongs to her.. I think maan would be on cloud nine and would love to receive more slaps in future if she kisses him likethis after every slap.. 😉 awww... I love you after i hate you...thats the most cute confession baby... Hahaha... Abhi bhi jagda kar rahe hain dono... So i am right.. Maan is waiting for her confession and she is not confessing which made him impatient.. I loved the way he teased her in that situation...lol and the way he cribbed and teased to get an another kiss from her is soo cute.. I just loved this more and more... Ulluowali harkat 🤣 honewali husband ko ullu kaha... Omg kya kya nahin kaha geet ne maan ko 😆 Akdu sadu budhu 🤣 we can get more nick names for maan after marriage as well 🤣 yeah. . Geet is right.. She gave him right to get close to her lekin budhi singh khurana ko samajh nahin aaya 😆 ... Maan is getting very impatient abt marriage and geet 🤣 bathroom mein bhi 🤣 seriously she is one piece .. Love you for creating this character... I just love geet here... Two reasons?? ? What could be the reasons ???

Baby totally splendid awesome fabulous mindblowing update .. I really mean it... Its such an entertaining update.. My mood got enlighted after reading this one.. Thank you soo much for updating.. 😳 love you ❤️

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#348

Accepted your apology baby... 😆

How can i be angry on you after reading this mindblowing update... I just loved it.. .

Gifs are ❤️

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: curtus
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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#350

Finally decided to take time off and read from 1st chapter to 4th chapter

It does seem like between Maan and Geet they enjoy irrirating each other

as at first Geet had thought that Maan is just trying to make her upset and irrirate her

but then she was shockly surprised by his words , yes he had confessed his love to her

but now telling her he loves her and cannot accept that and he wants her to be transferred so

that she can realize her love for him , he really wanted her to confess her love

but using the jealousy card telling her that he is going on a date , that just broke her and she didn't want him to go with another woman as Geet is also possessive in a cute way though

I enjoyed every flashback and Geet just made her place in Maan's life in his heart without even trying anything .

after Maan had confessed he made sure to always make it known to her that he is there he loves her , pampering her with his hugs and kisses so she indeed misses him

his mistake going through with the fake date and not answering Geet's calls , she was angry she was hurt but she also had been to hospital too so there might be some tense news also adding to her condition

Maan probably realized he move with Aamyrah was totally wrong and now Geet has left she didn't confess her love and he is 100 steps back

now trying to get hold of her and speak to her he is also in some kind of fear at this moment