The first gift of love OS:Tribute to Sridevi

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Posted: 7 years ago
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The first gift of love


This OS is inspired by the Malayalam movie Devaragam.The characters Vishnu and Lakshmi are taken from this movie.This movie did not show a proper confession scene of Vishnu and Lakshmi.So I wrote their confession scene through my imagination.The songs used in this OS are also from the movie Devaragam.I dedicate this OS to my favourite actress...the late Sridevi.I want her to be alive forever at least in movies and stories.

Thank you so much for the beautiful banners Riana.You actually surprised me by saying that you will make banner for this OS as a tribute to Sridevi.
Vishnu's point of view...

"Lakshmi is a beautiful damsel.I can't deny it.When I saw her first at the dance event during the temple festival itself her cute innocent beautiful face caught my attention".


Vishnu recalled Lakshmi's beautiful graceful dance.

(Those who have not watched this dance please watch it here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i8hpmDcaH3c)

Sasikala Charthiya Deepavalayam

Namthana Namthana Namthana Namnam
Nisayoru Karthika Varnabharanam


Namthana Namthana Namthana Namnam


Kalanoopura Shinjita Ranjita Melam




Thananana Thananana Thananam


Puthu Kaithiri Neythiri Vidarum Yamam
Thananana Thananana Thananam


Pala Varulu Porulu
Unarumuyarum Devee.


Thananam Thananam Namnamnamnam


{Thamthanananam Thannanana Thamthanananam}(2)

Varalekshmi Kolam Varayunna Neram
Thalirilam Chundil Uyarunnu Manthram


Karthikaraavin Kanmadagandham
Chaarthi Deviyithaa Orungi


Thaaranithaazhvara Chiritooki
Tazhuki Ozhuki Ilam Thennal
Panchamaragam Sanjithathalam
Nin Kalchilankakal Ragarajikal
Kilukilu Kilukilu Chiluchilu Devi


{Thamthanananam Thannanana Thamthanananam}(2)



Aaa...Aaa...


Aaa...Aaa...

Aaa...Aaa...


Kalmandapangalil Kalabhaabhishekam
Kalimanchirathil Kanakaabhishekam

Kaanchanaroopam Deviprasaadam
Kaivalyamekunnoree Neram
Darsanapunyam Padamaadi
Lekshmibhaavam Nadamaadi
Manjularaagam Chanjalathaalam
Manivarnakkolusukal Raagaraajikal
Kilukilu Kilukilu Chiluchilu Devi

{Thamthanananam Thannanana
Thamthanananam}(2) (Sasikala)(Devaragam).


"When she and her friends gave me Prasad purposefully she kept the plate of Prasad forward as she wanted her Prasad plate to grab my attention.She looked at me carefully to know my reaction.

I ignored it as I found it funny.Lakshmi was a funny attention seeker who always did all kinds of mischievous activities to catch my attention.I made fun of her..I never left any chance to tease the drama queen.She often got embarrassed before me.I even ignored her though she wanted me to notice her.But to be frank I was enjoying her tantrums secretly.When she drowned in the river for a moment I thought I lost my life.I realized that she is my life and I wanted my life to live.So I did'nt let the river swallow her.I pulled her closer holding her tight not letting her go away from me to danger..

I carried her in my arms to the shore.


I gazed at her wet face.She looked so innocent.Something in her pulled her towards my heart.
I don't know how Lakshmi entered my heart.I can't stop thinking of her.The day and night I am thinking only of Lakshmi.My dreams are also acquired by her.My heart craves to see her.I waited for Lakshmi to bring me the milk bottle like always.But unfortunately instead of her it's her dearest maid who brought milk for me.I miss her very badly.My heart is restless to see her".


Vishnu went near the beautiful expecting his Lakshmi there.As he expected Lakshmi was there.She was lying on the grass wetting her milky feet in the river.
"Lakshmi.."He called her.
She looked at him.Her face was glowing seeing him.
"Vishnu!She blushed as she called his name.
He smiled happily seeing her.His heart got fine only after seeing her.
Lakshmi got up.
"You came here to do painting.Right?
Vishnu always found this area to do painting which is his passion.
He replied,
"I already did a painting.You have not seen it.
Lakshmi smiled.
"Is it?What did you draw?Can I see it?
He replied,
"Of course you can.But before that I want to ask you one thing.Why did'nt you come to give me the milk?
"After drowning in the river I caught cold.That's why I did'nt come.You did'nt get milk?I had sent you the milk.
She asked.
"I got the milk you sent me.But it was not given by your hand.That's a big difference.
He said.
She raised her pretty eye brows and looked at his face.
"Why such a big difference?She asked.

(Those who have not listened to this song please listen to this romantic sensual song while reading it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ciOVHKWYm4)

Shishira kaala megha midhuna rathi paraagamo
Atho?dheva raagamo
Kuliril mungum aathma dhaaha mrudhu vikaaramo
Atho? dheva raagamo

He rolled his eyes on her deeply.
"Lakshmi...I know what is in your mind.Though you have not told me openly I know what you feel for me.From your gestures I understand that.
She blushed.


Indriyangalil shythya neelima
Spandanangalil raasa chaarutha
Moodala manjala neerthi shayyakal
Dhevathaaruvil virinju mohanangal

He held her hand
Image result for devaragam shishirakaala pics
and said,"But I never let you know my feelings.I guess now it is the right time to tell you that.
She looked at him eagerly when he said it.


Shishira kaala megha midhuna rathi paraagamo
Atho?dheva raagamo
Kuliril mungum aathma dhaaha mrudhu vikaaramo
Atho? dheva raagamo

He continued,
"I felt gloomy when I saw someone else in your place.I missed you".

Aadhya roma harshavum anguleeya pushpavum
Anubhoothi pakarunna madhuram

She was surprised as well as happy.
She asked him,
"Why did you miss me?"

Aa dhivaa swapnavum aananda bhaashpavum
Kathiridum hrudhayangalil
Vishnu looked at her deeply.
Lakshmi looked down shyly.


Madhana gaana pallavi hrudhaya jeeva ranjini
Ithalidumee nimishangal dhanyam dhanyam



He embraced her from behind by her waist giving her cold vibes through her body.
She felt a strange sensation in her skin.
Shishira kaala megha midhuna rathi paraagamo
Atho?dheva raagamo
He whispered in her ears softly making her feel his breath on her skin
"I missed you every single second.Because I love you Lakshmi".
She smiled with a sweet blush.

Kuliril mungum aathma dhaaha mrudhu vikaaramo
Atho? dheva raagamo

He held her chin softly and asked her,
"Now tell me openly how you feel about me Lakshmi.My heart is craving to listen to it".
She blushed.

Lola lola paaniyaam kaala kanaka thoolika
Ezhuthunnoree prema kaavyam

Her lips shivered while uttering those magical words from her heart,
"I love you too Vishnu.You are my life".
Their lips produced a beautiful smile from their hearts which had become one now.

Ee nishaa lahariyum thaaraa ganangalum
Aliymee hrudhayangalil

Their eyes had a beautiful union through love.
A beautiful romantic eye lock was formed between them.


Layana raaga vaahini tharala thaala gaamini
Thazhukidumee nimishangal dhanyam dhanyam

He lifted her up in his arms and twirled her around.

Shishira kaala megha midhuna rathi paraagamo
Atho?dheva raagamo

She felt blissful in his arms.

Kuliril mungum aathma dhaaha mrudhu vikaaramoAtho? dheva raagamo

Vishnu took Lakshmi to his room.
Lakshmi said,
"I can't wait to see your new painting".

Vishnu smiled.
"Just a second".
He unveiled his latest painting.
Lakshmi was surprised seeing his painting.She could not believe her eyes.
It was she herself on his canvas.

The credit for the painting goes to the original painter.
"Vishnu..."Her lips shivered due to this sweet surprise. .
He held her closer,
"You are my inspiration Lakshmi.You are my heart.I just put my heart into the canvas.Thus a beautiful creation took birth".
She smiled tearfully.

Indriyangalil shythya neelima
Spandanangalil raasa chaarutha

"This is my first gift of love for you my dear".
Vishnu handed over the painting to Lakshmi.She could not express the emotions she felt that time.

Moodala manjala neerthi shayyakal
Dhevathaaruvil virinju mohanangal

As she took the painting from him,she rested her head on his shoulder holding him closer while he caressed her soft hair with his love.

Shishira kaala megha midhuna rathi paraagamo
Atho?dheva raagamo
Kuliril mungum aathma dhaaha mrudhu vikaaramo
Atho? dheva raagamo(Devaragam).

The end


Friends...
A make up artist has given a make up tutorial to have Sridevi's look in Devaragam.If anyone is interested you can watch the video.


http://www.1src.club/video/nfTlAKxbuaRczs

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Posted: 7 years ago
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what a lovely OS ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ thank you so much chechi for giving Sridevi ji this tribute 👏 👏 👏
I am sure that every fan of Sridevi will appreciate this 😳 (special thanks to Raina for the beautiful banners made with love ❤️)

and yes, Sridevi ji will always be alive through her movies and stories ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ such a star she is

this OS has been such a wholesome experience for me, with the beautiful pictures, lovely writing and the wonderful music in the background 👏 👏 👏 your love for Sridevi ji really shows, and as someone who shares the same sentiments, it was a dreamy period for me (reading this OS)
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ i visualised the poetic sequence you wrote, it was magical 👏 👏 👏 also, it fits perfectly with the film 👍🏼 great job 😃

Vishnu's words on Lakshmis' cuteness and innocence 👍🏼 👍🏼 something that I admired greatly in Sridevi ji...her baby like face😳 😳 like a doll it gave her a unique charm 😳 😳 😳

and the pictures you have posted such a beauty 😳 😳 and what grace 👏 👏 no words! (And the painting is superb ⭐️ kudos to the artist 👏)

thanks for sharing the video of the make up tutorial too 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 (btw Sridevi ji looked good in such diverse get ups 😳 not many actresses would suit this look !)

P.S. putting so many smileys makes me feel weird as actually i feel very sad about whatever happened...but at the same time, i want to celebrate Sridevi ji's talent that lives on for ever 😭 😭 😭



Edited by sugar.and.spice - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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WOW...Jasmine👏

I have watched this movie. Guess it was released way back in 1996. Its very very emotional movie and it really touched me...

Ofcourse Sridevi looked so very beautiful especially in those 2 songs which you have mentioned.

Coming to the OS...its wonderfully blended with the scenes. and its so well written. Your OS took me nearly 20 years ago...to me, Sridevi - Arvindswamy made a wonderful pair and this movie had its spark with their amazing chemistry and the same could be witchessed in your OS as well...its amazingly written ...very simple yet very romantic. Well Done...👏

Thanks for your PM and for sharing your wonderful OS. 🤗

Thanks for this Tribute for the great actress. Let her soul rest in peace. 😊



Edited by Vaidhumom - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow di what an amazing Os..
Loved it..
RIP sridevi ji..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing os!!
Loved it.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Nice tribute to the great actress...beautiful pictures...wonderful songs of that movie and brilliant writting...thanks for pm
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Awesome fantastic fabulous amazing OS dear
Thanks for pm
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Lovely OS
Thanks for the PM
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Nice os..
I watched this movie and your os did justice...
The pics were awesome
Thanks for pm
I love the both songs...
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Beautiful Os dear...Song & pic's were perfect... Sridevi ji will always be alive through her movies and Acting...thanks for the pm.

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