AvNeil SS ~ Colliding With Each Other...Again {Pt 7A} - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Atyay



A very interesting start. Do continue soon..
And as far as I can see, I like this Saisha. 😊 Will look forward to how Neil lands up in Neilanjana's life.
Take care.

Thank you so much, I'm really glad you go hooked to the story. Now I'm feeling much better, thanks for the prayers.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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beautiful after reading 1st few lines i got really emotional and had tears for the misery neil is going through its painful😭😭 but i hope destiny has some wonderful plans avneil will meet again have there happily ever after and this time its forever 😊
Get well soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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beautiful after reading 1st few lines i got really emotional and had tears for the misery neil is going through its painful😭😭 but i hope destiny has some wonderful plans avneil will meet again have there happily ever after and this time its forever 😊

Get well soon 👍🏼

Thank you so much, Safia. Neil's misery is really difficult to watch, we need to appreciate Zain for bringing out it really well on screen. Destiny had its game played for quite a while, it needs to stop and let the couple enjoy themselves. I want their reunion ASAP on the show.
Now I feel much better, all of prayers and the medicines helped in my sooner recovery. Thank you so much.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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AvNeil SS ~ Colliding Each Other...Again


Instalment 3



Main aaj bhi usse utna hi

mohabbat karta hoon...

Aur is liye nahi ki koi aur

nahi mili...

Par is liye ki usse mohabbat

karne se fursat hi nahi mili...



With the signature quote at the end of the programme, Neil withdrew the headphones from his ears. Leaning against the office chair, he closed his eyes, sighing in despair. He was least bothered about the commotion going on outside his cabin when the doors flew open and there walked a man in his late twenties, standing tall at five feet eight inches.

'Hello Mr. Khanna' He addressed, prompting Neil to open his eyes and see the ruckus created by his colleagues in his cabin. Neil looked aside, narrowing his gaze on the man responsible for the pandemonium. Women were behind him as they took turns to click a selfie with him.


'Hello mister, may I know who you are and what you are doing in my cabin.' Neil asked, exasperated at such chaos. He was never a person used to such things, he wished to remain aloof after Avni's death.


'Hey bro, this is KK, Karan Kapoor the biggest star of Bollywood. Pity you didn't recognize me, the whole country knows about me.' KK replied to which Neil rolled his eyes, thankfully inwardly (Neil Khanna can never forget his manners, OK).


'And how can I help you?' Neil asked, pushing out the crowd from his cubicle.


'Few days ago, you saved a girl remember though it was a part of a film shooting. Honestly I was impressed with your bravery. So I decided to have you as my body double.'


'And why do you think I would agree?' Neil posed his query.


'Man, there'll be a lot of stunts, superb action scenes. And..and I'm..scared to do those.' KK admitted sheepishly, his ears pink due to embarrassment for revealing his secret.


Neil was lost in his thoughts. Stunts meant danger, sometimes playing with the death yet they could give glimpses of his Avni refraining him from doing so. After few moments of hesitation, he answered,


'I'm ready. When shall we be leaving?'


'Great man! I'm so glad you accepted the role. Maybe by tomorrow afternoon.' KK suggested to which Neil gave a positive nod. KK left little while later, after flaunting his fame among the employees.


Sukoon Ghar, Kashid

'Get up, everybody. Samrat, Daisy, Pinky utho' Avni fussed around the children to wake them up.

'Jaan didi, two minutes' '1 minute' 'Please let me sleep' Were the various replies from the children who were in deep slumber, blissfully dreaming about something.


'No five minutes, nothing. Jaan didi ke ache bache ho na, uth jao' Avni tried to coax them. Making different sounds, they woke up with groggy eyes and half open mouth.

'We love you Jaan didi' They muttered before starting the day's work. After an hour or so, the kids dressed up and marched to the living room where breakfast was laid by the four ladies of the house.


When everybody were settled, munching onto their bread toast, Avni cleared her throat, indicating she had something to say.


'I think we should leave this house.' She fumbled between her words. This was a tough choice for her, the house they are living in held so many precious memories, memorable events, eventful shenanigans yet she had to take this decision.


'Par kyun?' It was Samrat who broke thick silence evaporated in the room.


'haan Jaan didi' Came pleas from other kids short while later.

'Because I promised to myself that I will provide all of you a better future where people will acknowledge you with pride, which is not possible in this place. Goons come here, destroy our things, make us feel helpless, I don't want any hassle around you kids. I want to ensure you all are safe.'


'But we will be safe here also. You, Sunheri di, Tara-Sitara didi, you all will keep us away from all problems.' Saesha intervened.


'No Saesha, it is decided. We are leaving this place, I have found a place for us to stay. For paying the advance, we will be participating in the Annual Cultural Fest of Kashid. Prize money is INR 50,000 and this time we should win.' Avni declared. If she will be hated, so shall it be but she will ensure the safety and comfot of there children who are the only reason she is existing.


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There you go with the third chapter. Pretty small one, I know, but please pardon me. Let me know how the update was through your feedback. Constructive critisism will be gladly appreciated.

Cheers,

Nivedita

Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res for Chapter 3 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Reserved for Chapter 3.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Cheers,</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nivi</font>


Waiting update soon
Edited by AvNeil_TV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Thank you so much, Safia. Neil's misery is really difficult to watch, we need to appreciate Zain for bringing out it really well on screen. Destiny had its game played for quite a while, it needs to stop and let the couple enjoy themselves. I want their reunion ASAP on the show.
Now I feel much better, all of prayers and the medicines helped in my sooner recovery. Thank you so much.
Love,
Nivi


great to know your feeling much better agreed that Zain is excelling in his craft currently one of best actot on itv👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Updated the third chapter in the previous page.
Love,
Nivi
Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39



Nice update 😊

Looking forward to next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update 👏 👏

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