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Posted: 7 years ago
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The show which was on Top10 is out of top 20, why are are you doing this. Achhe show ki band kyu baja raha ho yaar. Show bandh karke he mano ge kya. You have such wonderful set of actors, and lead actors have such an amazing chemistry, why on earth are you not coming up with a script to justify them, their chemistry... this is so disappointing..

The show look a leap, it was good and the first episode was quite interesting & feel good episode too, but did you guys know how to promote it. Why on earth did you come up with that senseless Pooja as tawaif & Naren throwing money at her promo, when in the show, neither Pooja leads a tawaif life nor does Naren treats her as one... you guys thought a promo like that will bring in viewers but irony it drove away the existing ones, coz it was so disturbing at multiple levels. Even a regular viewer like me felt sceptical to watch the show further... instead had you come up with a promo showing Naren getting romantic with Pooja, it would have raised inquisitiveness as to how is Naren with Pooja after separation. But no you were so true to your typical sadistic writing that you had to come up with a sadistic promo. Result the leap was interesting still it didn't attract viewers.

You hit a jackpot with the first leap, it's execution and conclusion but squandered away everything coz of your adamency to not to show the lead couples happiness even for few weeks. Your obsession to fill their life with negativity & tragedy led to this down fall. Kept ranting in this same place to tweak the story with little bit of positivity but no...you just won't listen...

Kid Pooja track would have been so much better had you shown her being naughty & playful and Naren taking care of her like a parent, but instead you made her aggressive, Naren frustrated & Supriya bitter, gave a negative shade to every positive character, what was left for the viewers to watch, sadness, tragedy, bitterness. Finally concluded the track in the most illogical way, by showing Pooja faking memory loss from the beginning. Chalo teek hai, it would have still worked had you continued with Naren and pooja's nokh jokh, Pooja trying to manow Naren with her love, but you came up with yet again a sadistic Naren's illness track resulting in Pooja Naren's separation.

Now this leap, well so far the drama sounds interesting, if only you tone down Naren's hatred. Naren's anger towards Pooja is logical but hate, well writers he doesn't have an iota of logical reason to hate her, post first leap he had tons of reasons to hate her, but he still had a soft spot for her, now he has absolutely no reasons to hate her, he can be super annoyed with her, she left him for her mom, but not hatred, so pls understand the difference between anger & hate and tweak the screenplay accordingly.
Since they are together now, you can come up some feel good scenes between the leads, it might only do good to the show...

Last but not the least pls change the montage & stop showing the tawaif promo, neither does it match the current storyline nor is it interesting, in fact it's highly disturbing. If this leap didn't bring in expected Trps then the main reason is the Disturbing Promo...the promo was oozing negativity, the show as such post leap looks interesting so come up with a montage or promo showing the leads together...I am sure it will make some positive difference.

Good luck to the PA team, may the show get better from now on and gain more viewers...god bless.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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True...but i am more angrier at the way the characters have turned out post leap..Like pooja has absolutely no self respect! The way naren treats her is disgusting and the way she reacts is somehow more disgusting..Like these days people dont like watching spineless heroines who are insulted left right and center by the hero...Cvs just killed naren's character he was shown a champion for the nachne walis before in the show and now he doesnt miss a chance to taunt pooja about her bad blood!
I hope pooja develops some spine and naren develops a brain.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonsmine

True...but i am more angrier at the way the characters have turned out post leap..Like pooja has absolutely no self respect! The way naren treats her is disgusting and the way she reacts is somehow more disgusting..Like these days people dont like watching spineless heroines who are insulted left right and center by the hero...Cvs just killed naren's character he was shown a champion for the nachne walis before in the show and now he doesnt miss a chance to taunt pooja about her bad blood!

I hope pooja develops some spine and naren develops a brain.


I know Naren's attitude towards Pooja is getting disgusting, but I feel he is doing this for a reason, probably he is faking it and has a strong reason to behave this way with her. He was not this heartless even when he had reasons to hate her post first leap, but now on one hand he still considers her his wife, takes all liberties but behaves badly. Don't know why but I feel he does have a very strong reason to do this.

The reasons you stated is the same why I feel Naren is faking his hatred... if they come up with a strong reason to his behavior then I am sure we are going to sympathize with him...like it was wrong on part of Pooja to fake her memory loss and hide the truth from Naren even when he kept requesting her to do...but she didn't reveal the truth coz that would break him and the family similarly what if Naren is forced to behave like this...well let's see...keeping fingers crossed.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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My problem is the overdose of tragedy in the lead couples life and the negative promotion of the show...it's like they have decided never to show them happy. Little bit of happiness in their lives shouldn't hurt anyone. Drama tho chaltha rahega...they should understand there is limit to which viewers can see tragedy, sadness, fight, bad blood. The last time Pooja and Naren were a little happy was after their marriage... right from last August to this day, it's separation, depression, tashan, murder attempts, accidents, memory loss, sickness, hatred...if in real someone has to go through all this in a span of 8 months, I am sure they would go mad or kill them selves. I am shocked seeing the appetite for negative writing by PA creatives Have not seen any show with so much negativity in such a short span of time.
Viewers expected some positivity in the lead couples life after the conclusion of the first track and its three months, we are yet to see them smiling whole heartedly, leave alone live happily. I feel this is the reason for the Trps fluctuations.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Narja life started with lie and still continuing . Pooja entered into Naren's life as less educated girl and as helper . harish told first Pooja to be as friend to Naren and broked it when Pooja came as helper . Pooja ki majboori ka bahaane se harish made her as servant instead he would've told that some friend's friends daughter . Narja started trusting each other and went to next level in their life , it's friendship which later turned into marriage gone with so many twists .
cv's started Pooja's kundali dosh . Pooja hell bent on leaving Naren without informing about her kundali dosh , supriya too supported her . Pooja succeeded in getting separated by Naren by telling another big lie that Pooja only did her job and never loved Naren which broked Naren . I felt bad for Naren as Pooja took decision about Narja's life without even discussing with Naren .
after 1 year leap Pooja led life remembering beautiful moments with Naren . on other side Naren remembering Pooja became alcoholic and spoiled 99 women life who didn't do bad to Naren . Naren became woman hater even though in his hatred , beinhetaan pyaar chupa hain Pooja ke liye . he doesn't want to openup infront of anyone and not even with himself . I felt when Pooja comes she'll solve everything . Pooja again entered into Naren's life with another lie as Kapoor's wife .this hurted Naren again who in hatred for Pooja kahin nakahin waited for her comeback in his life . Narja had tashan between them . later Pooja revealed truth but Kapoor spoiled everything by telling lie and broke Naren and his hopes of getting Pooja back in his life . Naren played drama and insulted his wife in party and throwed her out from house as he felt Pooja doing drama and playing with his emotions .
Pooja came back to Naren as she is still his legal wife . Naren showing his hatred gave chance to Pooja as he too wants his Pooja back in his life but Pooja should go through 4 testsof Naren . Naren went to last heights of madness and asked Pooja for tests as he wanted to prove himself right or get his Pooja back , aar ya paar . Pooja won Naren's trust by succeeding in all Naren's tests . Naren at guilt for not trusting Pooja . Pooja fallen to trap of Kapoor , Rahul , surbhi and decides to give divorce to Naren to save him and vyas family . Naren already in pain broke because of Pooja's decision infact another lie . to hurt Pooja , Naren decides to marry surbhi . Pooja saves Naren by exposing raul , surbhi and Kapoor . Naren accepts his mother supriya as he disowned her .
when everything about to be normal in Narja's life Pooja met with accident and starts acting as kid . which make supriya take decision to send Pooja with satish as she cant fulfilled her duties as wife to Naren .Naren at any cost wantst bewith Pooja ,stands with her and fightswith whole vyas and gupta family and even world and protects Pooja . on other side in this kiddish drama Pooja nurts Naren a lot physically and mentally as Naren couldn't able to see Poja in that state. felt very bad for Naren . Pooja started kiddish drama as dadaji revealed Naren's birth to Pooja , if it get revealed Naren , supriyaand whole family break . on other side Kapoor wanted Pooja in hs life . to hide secret from Naren , Poojatoo gone through so many pains and still going like taking electric shocks ,got beaten by mami , torturedby surbhi , got molested and insulted by Kapoor . after going through all naina , Pooja's half sister enter into Narja's life and gains Naren's trust . Naren brings apni barbaadi ka saman naina to vyas mansion and she succeeds in creating misunderstangs in Narja life by proving Naren that Pooja acting like kid . Naren wanted to know truth for which she acted and Poojacan't eveal as she promised to dadaji and going to break Naren . on other side supriya's attitude towards Pooja changed when she started kiddish act even after Pooja becoming normal supriya not happy with Pooja but happy with naina . supriya easily forgot what Pooja did for Naren and vyas family .
Naren soo much heart broken seeing that his wife not sharing truth starts again drinking and on other side naina blackmailing Naren that Pooja going to jail for Kapoor's death . Naren plays drama with naina to save his Pooja and on other side showing his anger and displeasure to Pooja by drinking . Naren is not totally wrong too , Poojashould reveal truth as it's about Naren . Naren's drinking lead him to get bone marrow as his liver got spoiled . harish , supriya and whole vyas family bone doesn't match as Naren is not their son .to save Naren , Pooja goes to ashram to findout Naren's mother who gave birth . than Chandrika enters into Narja's lifewho doesn't wanted her identity getrevealed infront of Naren and vyas family . Naren hell bent about the person who gave bone marrow to Naren . again another lie from Pooja to Naren thatshe doesn't know makes him more disappointment towards Pooja . harish feels bad that ek gungroowali ki bone marrow got matched to Naren . Naren and harish wantsto knowwho is Chandrika and why her bone marrowmatched with Naren . to hide truth , Pooja says Chandrika as her mother and she is illegitimate and naina legal daughter . Pooja thought Naren going to get 2 mothers love and , Chandrika Naren's mother to get change to showher mamta on her son . Rahul , naina plays game and beat supriya and keep blame on Chandrika . everyone easilytrust and especially Naren too but won't trust Pooja . Naren asks to choose between supriya and Chandrika as supriya had whole family and Chandrika alone so she chooses Chandrika . Naren throws Pooja and Chandrika out of vyas mansion .
6 months leap happened , Naren wanted laal bati, wantsto become politician whohates Pooja and Chandrika a lot . he uses both women for his favour and throws money on Pooja for acting as loveable couple and bad mouths about blood and khandaan . now ,Naren so proud aboud his blood and khandaan . on other hand mayank diednaina became widow of mayank , the only supporter of Narja , Pooja . interesting supriya ormal , still acting as if she stuck to wheel chair which led to Narja separation and Naren becoming cold and emotionless as supriya thinks Pooja and Chandrika going to take away Naren from her .Naren believes and trusts wrong people like Rahul and naina . i'm surprised howcome Naren let naina ge married to mayank who wanted to destroy her sister Pooja's life . it's clear Naren feels Pooja not trustworthy but naina and Rahul . Naren gone to so much low that he talks so badly with his wife and mother [ maybe , he doesn't know she is his mother still , he s her son - in - law means son only than howcome he talk so disgustingly with Chandrika ] . after leap whatever Naren doing according to his point of view also very wrong . Naren easily fallen in naina's trap and decided to marry her with Rahul but can't he trust his wife Pooja who done so much to him and his family , this is leading downfall of trp mainly Naren badmouthing his own mother and wife soon think to kill his wife zinda by making a grave . amazing development of Naren's character , they're showing . didn't like they spoiling Naren's character .

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