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SAHANA ...A RHYTHM

Every love story will not b consider as fairy tale,ya having a happy ending.

It's a complex one so read at your own risk... the concept was from a Tamil movie.

Maan Singh KHURANA was a famous singer, who craved his name in the hearts of million fans, he himself compose his songs which touched the soul of his audience, his voice creates magic and his lines makes them crazy, not only in youth he created his magic in all generation people, because his song is a mixture of love,passion,music. He marked his name in people's heart. He is named as king of music, considering all his songs mostly carries love messages. But none knew he is still waiting to know what love is!!

Yes, even being married for almost 7 yrs ,he did knew what love is, he had a lovely family with his parents and siblings and a beautiful wife, he got his share of parents love sibling fight, and makeup, but still he was immune to the love which would consume yourself .he respects his wife, the way she takes care of him, his family ,she is a perfect daughter in law, perfect sil, even a perfect wife but she never was his lover.

Sameera Maan Singh KHURANA who was simple and sophisticated was married to maan before 7 yrs, like every other they're too was arranged one, Sam was maan's father choice, she can speak about business whole day but can never utter a word about music. Whenever they both shared their views Sam would end up discussing her day with him speaking about clients and meetings, being a soft spoken maan would hear her but he never tried to share his passion like she shares about hers, even after these years he respected her but love was a far fetch dream for him, but in case of Sam she openly said how much she loved him,his response always will be a smile. She always speaks her heart out to him, but he can never ever voiced his desire to her. Even when she expressed her love for kids, he gave in to her thoughts because he always does that. He never went against anyone wishes from his parents to his wife he always tried to fulfil all their wishes even its not in his like, like giving himself to Sam he locked his dream of love too in a corner of his heart. He tried a lot to find his love in Sam but she never touched that part of his heart.

But from last six months a pair of Hazel's were disturbing him, he tried his level best to forget her eyes but ended up memorizing her features in his mind, she craved her presence in his heart just by a simple smile, her thoughts about music always fascinated him, he never stopped himself from sharing his thoughts to her. She was like a breath to him when and how she became that both don't know, first she was a regular viewer of his live concerts who always comes to him to get his autograph, slowly she made her way in his heart. Both will meet regularly either at his office or her house mostly he would ended up driving her after the performance.no one knew when things changed between them...They shared from thoughts of music to love. Simple pure love the more he demand she would willingly gave herself to him. He never said he loved her not that he didn't but his eyes conveyed the words he want to convey, neither she confessed her feelings to him. Both knew what they were doing was wrong, but one never can say what is right and wrong in love. He knew he was married and was betraying sameera, but he want to fulfil his thirst for love which he got almost after 7 yrs of waiting. She knew he was someone else husband, but she can never give herself to anyone vowing the love she had for him. She is his only his from the moment their eyes met.

Days passed both were happy in their little world until Sam saw changes in maan, his most of time staying outside, smiling to himself, staring at his mobile raise a possessive insecurity in her. She made sure she kept a tab on maan and within a day she was before geet house demanding an answer for her involvement in his husband's life.

Sam took a deep sigh determined to throw the girl out of maan life thinking she rang the bell not knowing the shock waiting for her.in few minutes door was opened before Sam blast the girl smiled and politely asked

G: aap!!??

Sam: tum koun ho!!?

G: ji hum geet hai,aur aap...

Before she continue both heard a voice which ironically belong to both.

Maan: geet aavo jaldi,i composed it finally must hear now...geet where r u!!!??

Geet: aa rahi hoon,

Before Sam ya geet could utter a word maan came out and dragged Geet not even noticing who was at door making geet hold on door loose and the door was left azar making Sam look clearly inside.

Geet too momentarily forgot about the unwanted guest and gave her full concentration to maan, they both laughed, sang the song together, enjoyed the time making slight changes in the tune which mostly geet adviced. After their long conversation when geet told maan that some woman came here they both looked at door but Sam who heard them saved herself before they watch her.

Sam left from there before they notice her, glancing a longing look at laughing maan Sam heart cried, he never was this free with her, there was always a thick wall btwn them, knowing how reserved he was, she never tried to broke that, but seeing her husband with geet totally surprised her, he was a total new man with her, the blush that adorned geet for every few minutes she could see was from maan teasing, maan and teasing was itself a new information. The way he asked her suggestions for everything he wrote he sang, hedid, says how simply geet blended herself in maan life. Being his wife he never asked her, but then she knew nothing about music, she was not a music person, still she liked his songs, didn't she!

She loved him selflessly didn't she!!??she was waiting for his love from 7 years then how can he love other woman!!??If he can love other woman he must love her too, she must be the only woman in his life, hiswife! Determined she left for home to get her love all for herself...

Yes, she just liked his work, whereas music was his love, his life, vowing herself she would also love music, will discuss with him ,will spent her time with him and will make her husband fall for her, if only she knew not the discussion about music but sharing of each other heart will lead to love she may conquer his heart much before, shewaited for him for hours and when he came ,he directly went to bed saying he had his dinner with his frnd.sam smiled to herself knowing who his frnd was!? Without asking anything she just hugged him tight fearing to lose him, fearing to let him go to his love, LOVE!!!That was what exactly he calls geet, she never asked him to respond to her I love you, thinking he was always hers and one day he will love her. He did love one day sadly not her but GEET.

Next few days Sam tried her level best to win maan, she even attend music classes to know about music only to get distracted and everything about music went above her head. When she tried to indulge maan in some talks about his upcoming concert .he softly said without hurting her, that there is nothing that she would help him, and concert is not a business meeting, saying he left, leaving Sam in tears knowing where exactly he was going and whom can help him. She knew she is losing her husband but desperate to get him back she opted the only way which according to her was left.

A day before concert Sam came to geet very well knowing maan will be busy in his stage work, she determined to get her maan back. Once again went to meet geet. The moment geet opened door,sam introduced herself as maans wife, leaving geet to paralyze in her place.

Sam: can I come in!?

Geet(composing herself):yes, plz this way.

Both made themselves comfortable on couch for the most uncomfortable talk of their life.

Sam: mein jaanthi hoon, maan aur aap,mera mathlab,maan aapse h pyar karthey hai,par mein maan koh nahi koh sakthi,mein unnse bohoth pyar karthi hoon,inn khey liye kuch bhi karoongi, mein music bhi sikhooogi,unkhey sath saari baatey karoongi,mein unnkhi dil mein apni jagah banalongi ,aap plz mere pati muje wapas dhey dhijiye, plz

Saying Sam showed her hands before geet like begging her.

Geet: mein maan koh kabhie aapse dhoor nahi karoongi, mein toh bas...

Sam: par maan khudh humse dhoor jaa rahe hai,jab tak aap hai,maan humari taraf nahi dheykenge,aap plz chale jaaye maan ko chodkar,chale jaayiye humari aur maan khi zindagi seh, hum sab kuch pehllle jaisa kardhenge, aap chale jaayiye...

Seeing Sam crying and her efforts to get maan back made geet guilty,she thought her presence in maan life affected his perfect married life, to make things clear she agreed to Sam,and as promised after the concert there was no trace of geet, she vanished like there was never a person called geet.

Maan felt like he was running in darkness,he tried his all contacts but always met a dead end, he even asked her frnds, her workplace but none had a clue about her whereabouts.

Days turned into weeks, weeks to months but there was never a news about geet, maan drowned himself in alcohol whenever he was alone. Surely he reached new heights in his career but he was a lost person, Sam every try went in drain, she wants to get maan all for herself in her process she even lost the maan she knew, she tried every possible way to get close to him only to meet his silence, frustrated she demanded a family thinking a child would bond him to herself. She even convinced after 8 yrs of their marriage, the whole family was happy hearing news along with maan, but yet Sam couldn't get his love. With passing days doctor advised its critical for Sam to continue this pregnancy so suggested abortion but Sam was adamant to have this child as maan was giving his time to her,maybe even he treats her as just a responsibility the thought he is with her was enough to make her go through this phase.

Maan was never the person to share his views with Sam,she asked for family he gave into her and she want to continue her pregnancy knowing it's risky yet he kept his thoughts to himself and silently took care of her,if not love at least he can fulfil her wishes thinking he took care of Sam in every possible way. But she didn't failed to see maan yearning heart ...his earn for love...for geet...in solitude he only remembered his days with her...she knew she saw yet she kept on trying ,she was adamant to make him love her...

The news of maan becoming father spread like fire in media and it reached geet too. The resolve to stay away from maan became stronger ,and she promised to herself never to look back from now, she had a reason to live now, thinking a small smile played on her lips looking at her son sleeping peacefully.

It's 5 yrs from the day he lost geet ,he was still trying to get info about her whereabouts, he was on his way to London as his detective said geet was seen there, without taking any chance he left asking his spy to get more info on her. Locking his seatbelt once again he drifted to the day, where he found why geet left him. it was not more than a black day in his life as he lost both his wife and child on this day, before leaving him Sam confessed how she asked geet to b out of their lives and she accepted, Sam pregnancy was always danger but the hell broke when she slipped a step from stairs on her seventh month, doctors tried their best but complications were more leaving no chance for Sam life along with baby. Knowing her end is sure Sam asked few minutes with maan and confessed her Convo with geet.it left him no where that his wife asked his love to leave him, he can't blame Sam as a human she tried to win her love, he can't even blame geet who put his happiness before hers. He always blamed himself for hurting the two women in his life if only he didn't gave inti his father demands...if only he didn't gave into Sam ...if only he could stop his heart to beat for geet...he blamed himself for the past five years for ruining two lives, yet he had a chance to save geet so he tried everything to get any single information about her...and to day finally afterGetting the details about geet, maan came with thudding heart to get his love back, after almost 5 yrs he got her where about, as soon as he rang the bell ,a cute little boy opened the door, a moment later he squealed in joy, shouting and addressing him as dad, it didn't took maan a minute to knew that he was his son, his symbol of love, a and felt proud of geet that she told about him to their son, a surprised geet stood rooted seeing maan at her door step and their son screaming in joy seeing his father.

A few minutes later geet to flung herself in his arms unable to control her feeling, she cried for herself,for him,for keeping away their child of father love, even knowing Sam is no more, she didn't dare to go back to him. Blaming herself for his ruined marriage, but now letting all her inhabitants she cocooned herself in his arms, tofeel safe.

Sahan clapped asking: dad u will never leave us right!!?

Before maan could answer geet answered

Geet: yes Sahan, from now he will never.

Maan : sahan

He immediately went to those moments where he said how much he loved SAHANA a melody tune, it's a symbol of love, patience, good ness which were another name to that tune. Thinking how much his love mattered to geet he engulfed her in a hug along with sahan, silently promising to himself to never let them go. Responding to his promise geet tightened her hold on his.

That's it dear's...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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This OS is Heart Warming and holds so much different Emotions
Though Maan spreads love through his music he never truly held love in his life until he met Geet
Sam been Maan's wife had found out about his love for Geet and she also spoke to Geet making Geet realize that she is ruining Maan's marriage
Maan and Geet separated for years until they found each other and Maan learned he had a son with Geet
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Posted: 7 years ago
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ow ihate sam who why shw always between maaneet a big thorn good she dead but i dont like after maan fell gr geet crossing limits how can he can mive on ith samera just hate that bitch sameera is so creepy
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Awesome superb emotional OS dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omg so much emotional di😭 but ya I love the main thing is it is happy ending. I didn't read emotionall ff from long time stop reading them because can't think of maneet being separate 😭and maan with other women😡that too that sameera😡just so much hate her.it's your separate pm for me.bring me here.nahi to main readnahi karne wali thi

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very emotional os
At the end maaneet together
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow, atleast they got their love and sahan too
Despite if loveless marriage Maan carried out all his duties
Sam wanted Maan all for herself n sent his love away from him giving him once again to darkness
But destiny played it's role n Maaneet united..

Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...


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Posted: 7 years ago
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emotional OS! though Maan was married 2 Sam he never loved her! he fell 4 Geet ! its sad that Maaneet were separated! Sam died and confessed wt she did! glad Maan found Geet and their son! nice end
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Lovely story
Very emotional
True love win

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