Living In The Dark (16 Parts Complete) Mature Audiences Only

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I had another plot I couldnt get rid of, of course Love Is Blind and Motives, Mother In Laws And Marriages will come as a priority, but do let me know if I should continue
Part 1-
Darkness surrounded him, 2 years had passed as he had sat in the darkness, alone.
His voice was raspy, broken as he downed water from the broken glass.

Blood dripped from his lip, his eyes closing in surrender
"You cant give up Neil " Avni's voice boomed in his head

She was right, she was always right.
He couldn't give up, not now, not yet, not ever.

"You can't keep me here forever" Neil shouted, using the last bit of his energy to anger his captor he rattled his chains

"Its been 2 years ACP Saab, nobody has come looking for you, they all think you're dead"
A small dim light was thrown into the basement

And a picture, grabbing it he shone the light over it
"Avni" he gasped

The man laughed, standing infront of him now
"Happy Birthday Neil, take this as a present, you will die with the last thing you see being her face"


Neil yanked the picture to him as his captor walked away



A woman lit a candle, placing it on a high shelf
Turning around she felt a heavy presence on her leg

"Mama, mama" Ajay shouted
Avni picked him up
"Say happy birthday papa"

"Happy birthday papa, mama when will papa come home"
Avni sighed

"Soon baby, soon"
But for how long could she say those words when she had no idea where Neil was?




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lenageorge thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh it's interesting.pls do continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lenageorge

Oh it's interesting.pls do continue

Thank you, I will update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2-
Avni placed food down infront of Neela
Neela sighed

"Atleast speak to me today, its Neil's birthday"
Avni looked up, her eyes burning with anger

"What about those 6 months of my life where you didnt speak to me, prison taught me a lot, you were meant to be my mother has the past taught you nothing about making decisions for me"

"That was 3 years ago Avni, how many times must I apologise"
Avni slammed her bowl down

"Until it stops hurting, until Neil is back, because you both made a decision without me, that has now cost me and my son a life without Neil and if he ever comes back to me, then you shall see just how angry I am at the both of you"

Neela flinched at her tone
"Everything I do is for my son, because I wont be a bad mother"

"What are you trying to say Avni"

"I am trying to say that I am angry and a simple apology wont return to me the time I spent in prison, or all the moments my son asks me for his father back, so im sorry Neela, but I wont be your Avni anymore"

Her words bitter, her eyes pained as she turned on her heel and stormed away
Although her heart was full of love for Neela and Neil, she couldnt forgive them for the pain they had caused
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes ,yes please continue...I'm liking it :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: radzshakti

Yes ,yes please continue...I'm liking it :)

Thank you! I will update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you! I will do
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Part 3-
Neil woke up, looking up, he saw a small light, Avni's picture above him

Neil banged the side of the casket he was lying in
His captor's words rung in his mind

Avni's face the last face he would see before he died

Avni, Neela and Ajay arrived at the burning light festival
Neela picked up Ajay

"Look at the lights, wow"
Ajay clapped his hands
"What time will the bonfire start"
Neela looked at her watch "15 minutes"

A basket with Neil's body was moved past Avni, Neela and Ajay

Neil sighed in relief as he finally got the box slightly open, shoving his watch through it, he hoped someone had saw


The music got louder as Ajay's eyes twinkled seeing the sparkly object on the floor

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Baba Na


Ajay went to pick up the watch, holding it up to Avni, her eyes filled with tears
"Neil's watch, he must be here"
Neela rubbed Avni's back

For this small moment, all negative feelings went away
They could be family again

Avni jumped with happines, holding Ajay's hands as they jumped into a puddle , they both laughed



Main Chali

Banke Hawa

Rabba Mere

Mainu Bacha

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Baba Na

Main Chali

Banke Hawa

Rabba Mere

Mainu Bacha


Neil banged on the box again as it was put down, next to the other boxes to be burnt
Avni watched as Neela showed Ajay one of the stalls

The bright lights shone in her eyes, Vidyut's face came into her line of vision as the lights moved past her



Mausam Bhi Be-imaan

Masti Ka Ye Saman

Roko O Logon Zameen Pe

Girne Laga Aasmaan

Thumak Thumak Ke Jhuloongi

Main Udke Gagan Ko Chhuloongi

Main Chali

Banke Hawa

Rabba Mere

Mainu Bacha

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Baba Na



Walking behind her, his hand skimmed her waist
Avni walked slowly around him, shoving his shoulders back he grabbed her again

He sniffed her hair, her hand grabbed his hand, bending it back she smiled
"What have you done with my husband" she said teeth gritted



Dhandi Dhandi Pavan

Jalta Hai Ye Badan

Jee chahta Hai Bana Loon

Tujhko Apna Sajan

Hua Nahin Ye Pehle Kabhi

Meri Jaan Badal Gayi Abhi Abhi

Main Chali

Banke Hawa

Rabba Mere

Mainu Bacha

Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Baba Na



Vidyut and Avni danced around eachother, her eyes burning with anger
"Try and find him if you can, 4 corners"

With that he spun her around fast, dipping her he kissed her cheek and walked away

Avni scrubbed at her cheek with her hand roughly

"4 corners, 4 corners " she muttered




Jaati Hai Tu Kahan

Jaaneman Jaanejaan

Ladki Hai Tu Khoobsurat

Ladka Main Naujawaan

Tujhe Gale Laga Loon Aa

Palkhon Mein Bitha Loon Aa

Ho Gaya

Mujhe Nasha

Rabba Mere

Mainu Bacha



Avni ran as fast as she could to the boxes that were to be burnt, she started opening the biggest boxes first

"Neil, Neil" she shouted
Banging from a box alerted her to his presence

Running over she knocked the locks with the rock on the floor

Shoving it open, she saw her husband, the man she would always love
Neil Khanna




Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Re Na

Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main

Arre Na Re Na Baba Na

Ho Gaya

Mujhe Nasha

Rabba Mere

Mainu Bacha



Neil climbed out of the box, weak and tired he fell onto Avni who grabbed him

"Neil" she cried, hugging him
Pressing kisses all over his face she sighed heavily




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4-
Her heart beat fast, so very fast it made her feel dizzy, his arms held her tightly to him and she wasn't sure if it was his heart or her own

For so long she had felt cold, but this warmth she felt now wasnt comparable to anything else

She could feel herself melting into him, his embrace taking away all thought and concern

There was no way Avni could ever be so at home with anyone but her husband, she tried to muffle her sobs into his shoulder but failing she allowed herself to fall

Her body felt weak as she cried for his lost presence, warm tears dripping onto his shoulder as she pulled him closer, he couldnt be anymore closer but it wasnt enough

Then without a breath between her thought and her action, she shoved him back, her hand like ice on his already cold cheek


Neil jolted back in shock at her actions
"I f**king love you, you idiot, do you know what you put me through while you sent me to prison for a crime I didnt do, did you think about how I felt, where was your love and loyalty when I needed it the most"

"Avni I"
"Shut up, just shut up, did it make you feel powerful to make me a prisoner, to have me call you sir"
Avni laughed bitterly

"Congratulations ACP Khanna, or should I say Sir? I gave you my heart and you broke it"

Turning on her heel she stormed away as she felt her heart break all over again
Not all wounds were physical and her pain was evidence enough of that
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome 👏👏
Loved it
Plz update next

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