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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kiranrathore

Awesome 👏👏

Loved it
Plz update next

Thank you! I will update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Great concept Maya..!! Go ahead with it..!! Waiting for next one..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Great concept Maya..!! Go ahead with it..!! Waiting for next one..!!

Thank you! I will update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 5-
"I have nothing to talk about with you" muttered Avni as Neil followed her into her room as they arrived

Ajay looked at Neil as Neil closed the door
"Mama doesnt like the doors shut"
Neil's eyes gleamed with pain

He knew it was because she felt imprisoned, handing Ajay to Neela, Neil turned to face Avni

Avni put her hand up, putting a line of pillows across the bed
"Your side, my side, don't cross it"

Neil huffed loudly
"Avni be reasonable , I havent seen you in 2 years, atleast let me hold you"

"And whos fault is that"
Avni got into bed, turning around
Neil slammed the door shut

"No Neil, open the"
Neil was leaning over Avni as she turned on her back
"What are you doing"

"Im doing what I should have done ages ago, im going to treat you like the amazing wife you are"

Avni pushed Neil off her, throwing him on the other side of the pillows

zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba

one shouldn't come in anybody's life, o god


Avni allowed herself to cry, the pain she felt of having the man she loved right next to her and not being able to forgive him was painful


aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba

and if comes, should never go away


Neil watched Avni's back, so close to him yet so far away


dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo-

if somebody want to give me tears later


toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba - 2

then one shouldn't make me smile first


Avni remembered old memories with Neil, happy ones, her fingers lifting to the sindoor in her hair
The one he had once wiped away



dil ke jo armaan the, dil mein hi reh gaye

the desires/wishes of heart remained in heart itself


aashiqui jo kee toh ham, ashqon mein beh gaye

i love somebody, and now i drift in tears


gham ka fasaana hai, dard ye puraana hai

this is the story of sorrow, this pain is old



Avni wished she could move past the pain in her heart
But she couldnt forgive the man she loved

itna bhi koyi yaad aaye na rabba

one shouldn't miss somebody so much


Neil wanted so badly to reach out and pull Avni to him
She and Ajay the only thing giving him a reason to carry on



zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba
dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo-
toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba

ashq aankhon mein bhare hain, jigar jalta hai

my eyes are filled with tears, my heart is burning


kya qayaamat hai, kya qayaamat hai

what a destruction is this


kya qayaamat hai-

what a destruction is this



bhari barsaat mein ghar jalta hai

in the heavy rain a home is burning


Neil led on his back, looking up at the ceiling, how much he had missed of his son's growing up, his wife's pain
His mother in law's grief



yahi sochta hoon kaise usko bhoolaaunga

i always think that how should i forget them


na woh kabhi aayegi, na usse bhool paaunga

They will never come to me, and i will never forget them


jeene ka thheekaana hai na marne ka bahaana hai

there is no source for what i should live, and there is no excuse to die as well


itna bhi koyi bhi sataaye na rabba

one should tease that much, o god


Neil huffed, his patience lost as he pulled the pillows away and held Avni to him

For now she would allow him to hold her; because she needed it to




zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba
dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo-
toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba
zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba


But tomorrow, tomorrow it was over

So, Motives, A Mother In Law And Marriage is now complete with an epilogue, also shall I make a pm list for future stories?

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 6-
Avni woke up to feel Neil's body pressed against hers

Kicking her legs against his knees, he rolled back over, pulling her with him, she lay on top of his chest

Trying to move, Avni sighed heavily
"Stop moving Avni"

"Let me go then"
Neil shook his head, his eyes still closed
"Nope"

"Why"
"Well, I dont want to"
Avni gulped as she felt his source of arousion pressing against her leg

Lifting her knee, she kneed him there as he let go, she pulled back
"Avni, what was that for jesus"

"Ill do a lot worse to you if you dont listen to me next time, control your urges"
Walking out she slammed the door loudly
Neil still groaning in pain


30 minutes later, Avni scowled as she sat across from Neil feeding Ajay
"Mamma Nani says she will take me to the park"

Avni smiled down at him "You be good for Nani hm"
Ajay nodded
"Papa and mama come to"

Neil stood up smiling, "of course we can meet you after for a picnic"
Avni distantly worried what Neil had planned

Avni bid goodbye to Neela and Ajay
Neil stood next to her, his hand on the back of her waist

Avni lifted her elbow, elbowing him in the ribs
"Stop touching me"
"But you're irresistible "

"And you disgust me" Avni spat
Neil grabbed her, tugging her back to him

"Youre beautiful"
"Neil get off of me"
"Why, you are my wife, and I your husband"

Avni blew air through her mouth
"Is that our relationship, you cant just respect it when you want to Neil or when it best serves you to"

Pulling away she walked away
Neil slid down to the floor
His head in his hands

He would make Avni love him again

Avni leaned against the wall, her hand on her fast beating heart
God the things that man could do to her kn just one glance

Happy New Year to you all! I hope the new year brings you all the joy you all deserve!
I hope you all enjoy this chapter, any ideas what will happen next?
I have updated this story with a warning, from here on out, mature audiences only please!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully penned down!! 👏 it was just Amazing ...Loved it 😊 can't wait to read more...and I'm expecting some hot and spicy encounters of them 😉😳 haha 😆 do continue soon and long chapters please! 😆 Lots of love 🤗❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayesha134

Beautifully penned down!! 👏 it was just Amazing ...Loved it 😊 can't wait to read more...and I'm expecting some hot and spicy encounters of them 😉😳 haha 😆 do continue soon and long chapters please! 😆 Lots of love 🤗❤️

Thank you! I promise there will be very soon! I will update soon! Much love🤗❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sweta2005

Update pleaseease waitingg

I will update very soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Part 7-
Avni watched as Neil sat Ajay on his lap, swinging him slowly

Of course she was happy that her son and husband could have the relationship they deserved but she was still angry, so very angry

Ajay looked up at her "Mumma, let Papa swing you"
Avni vehemently shook her head

"Oh please mama, sit on papas lap"
Neil raised his eyebrow, knowing Avni could never say no to Ajay

Avni nodded as Ajay jumped off of Neil's lap
Neil looked up at Avni as she stood infront of him

"Try anything funny and I will hurt you"
Neil smiled "I look forward it"
Avni sat on Neil's lap, her body straddling his

Reaching her hands up to the chains she held on
Neil looked like he was on top of the moon as he swung himself

As Neil swung faster, he looked down at Avni's breasts, her two top buttons were still undone

"I have a great view here Avni"
Avni glared, pushing her body up, he was now looking up at her
He smirked

"The view just gets better"
Avni let go with one hand to hit him, but ended up falling into him
Her hands splayed onto his chest

"What do you think you're doing" she asked
"Admiring my wife, problem "

Avni tried her best to move back but Neil stopped the swing and grasped her hips
"Where do you think you're going"

"Far away from you"
"Wherever you go I will follow"
"Dont be so cheesy Neil, it doesnt suit you"

Avni managed to get herself released from his hold as she ran over to the picnic blanket and sat down

Avni passed Ajay a sandwich
Neil sat next to her , turning to Ajay he smiled

"Wouldnt you like to see Papa feed Mama"
Avni glared "Dont use our son for your"
Avni stopped as Neil shoved food in her mouth

Swallowing quickly
She looked down at his thumb tracing her lip
She bit down into it

He licked his thumb after, winking
"Fiesty" he mouthed

Do let me know your thoughts
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome!! So the biwi manaofying game is on!! It will be fun..!! Do update sooner plzz!! Eager for next!!

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