Living In The Dark (16 Parts Complete) Mature Audiences Only - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Awww... yay... i knew hed win her ovee .. love it

Yay! Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 16-
Ajay sat on Neil's lap
Avni sat next to him, her head on his shoulder

Neela watched them, smiling
"You guys are so cute"
Neil laughed, pulling Avni closer

Ajay smiled "We are all cute"
Ajay grabbed Avni's hand putting it in Neil's

He put his on top
"Happy family" he giggled
Avni smiled, brushing his hair with her hand she pressed a chaste kiss to his forehead

Neil whispered something in Ajay's ear, making him run off
Ajay ran back with a small box

Avni stood up to go to the kitchen
Neil dropped to one knee
Avni gasped "What are you doing we're already"

Neil shook his head I didnt put your feelings into consideration, and I know that was wrong, so if you'll have me, I want another chance to marry you and make this right"

Neela sat Ajay on her lap
"Say yes" they cheered

Avni nodded, barely controlling her emotions, she held on tightly as he lifted her and span her around
"I really love you Avni"

Avni kissed his cheek
Smiling he put her down

Neela picked Ajay up
"You two spend some time alone celebrating, im gonna take Ajay out"

Neil lifted Avni onto the kitchen side
Pushing the ring on her finger
She looked down at it in admiration

"Close your eyes" he whispered
She felt a cold chain on her neck, then something on her forehead

Opening her eyes, she looked into the mirror Neil was now holding

"Now you look like my bride"
Avni felt so overwhelmed, bringing him closer she kissed him
"I love you Mr Khanna"
"I love you to Mrs Khanna"

And this marks the end of this story
Thanks again for all your everlasting support

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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Beautiful, she definitely deserves an apology fir that moment and you did it beautifullly, great job
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
ohhh no u said 2-3 chapters and ended in one..plz write this more..i m very sad this story ended..
but happy becoz it ended with a beautiful ending.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Sami72

ohhh no u said 2-3 chapters and ended in one..plz write this more..i m very sad this story ended..

but happy becoz it ended with a beautiful ending.

Aw, im so sorry! I didnt know how to make it longer!
Thank you, im glad you liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
thanks so much just loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

thanks so much just loved it

Hey, thank you! Im glad

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