Shivika OS: Rang De Tu Mohe Geruva~(29/12/2017)

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Posted: 6 years ago
Hello guys...
Kirthi here...

This OS is a playful one with Shivika, OmRu and  Gauri...have always wanted OmRu to tease Shivaay after the Laal Ishq...😳

sadly it got cut short by Abhay's entry and all the raitha's that ensued in the episode...and sapna adhura rah gaya...so here I have written it saans the presence of senior Oberoi's and also without the entry of Abhay...😆

PS: Dedicating this to Rimi and Thwisha...and all my friends of EDT...

P.P.S: Om's Shayari, Credit Google...edited the first line a bit...to match the scenario...so please bear with me if it is bad...😆

Hope you like it...

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~~~~~Rang De Tu Mohe Geruva~~~

Shivaay and Annika walked hand in hand towards the dining table, smiling and teasing each other...

Dadi:"Vaise Billu...kafhi dheer kardi puthar...?"
She asked as they sat down beside her...

Annika:"Dheer kaise nahi hothi...paint aise thodi jathi hein baal se... 6 baar shampoo karna pada...phir bhi I'm still reeking of paint..."
She mumbled...

Shivaay:"Vaise did you forget how helpful your loving pathi parameshwar was in helping you remove the paint off...?"
He whispered with a cheeky smile to Annika...

Annika:"aap na chup he baitto...bhohot hi cheapde ho aap..."
She said blushing...

Shivaay:"And I love you too..."

"AHEMM..."
Shivika blinked and saw that the family were staring at them...

Rudra:"Bhaiyya, yeh dining table hein...aap bhool gaye shayad..."
He said in a teasing tone...

Shivaay:"Ha...tho...Khana kavo na...roka kisne hein...?"
He said playing with Annika's hands under the table...

Dadi:"Billu, tum kuch nahi kha rahe...?"

Shivaay:''Kha rahi hoon na...dadi..."
He said smiling...

Shivaay:"Annika...vo laal Paint..."
Annika hit Shivaay with her elbow smiling sweetly at her family...

Shivaay:"mera matlab vo chicken soup pass karna..."

Om and Rudra burst out laughing...
Shivaay glared at his two brothers...Annika concentrated completely on her food  to save herself from getting teased...

Dadi:" Paint se yaad aya...aaj ghar paint karne ke liye log ane vale the na...?"

Shivaay:"Aney vala tha...par ayi nahi..."
He said innocently...

Dadi:"par mujhe Paint ki smell aa rahi thi ghar athe vakth..."

Shivaay:"vo isliye kyunki...paint ki can gir gayi..."
Annika face palmed...

Dadi:"Par didn't you say paint karne vale nahi ayi...?"

Shivaay:"Yeh...Dadi kabse Sherlock Holmes baan gayi...?"
He murmured...

Annika:"Paint karne vale nahi ayi...par paint ki can bhej diya...heina Shivaay..."

Shivaay:"ha...exactly..."

Om:"Yeah...courier kiya...nahi...?"

Shivaay:"Om...?Ek paratta aur kavoge...?"
He said smiling extra sweetly at Om...putting one in his plate...

Rudra:"vaise bhi, ithna acha painter heina humare ghar mein...tho bahar vale painter ki kya zaroorat...?"
He gave a cheeky smile to Shivaay...

Dadi:"kya bhol rahe ho...Om ghar ka painting bhi karenge...?"

Rudra:"Arey...O ka painting tho old news hein Dadi..."

Shivaay glared at Rudra and mouthed...
Shivaay:"No...don't you dare..."

Rudra:"mein humare kanji ankhom vala billuji ke baath kar raha hoon..."

Dadi:"Billu can paint too...?"

Rudra:"puchke tho dekho..."

Shivaay kicked Rudra who was sitting opposite him hard...But Rudra sensing his brother's plan pulled back his leg right on time...

Gauri:"ouch...Bade bhaiyya, vo mera pair tha..."

Shivaay:"sorry Gauri...mene tho..."
Everybody burst out laughing...

Om:"ok bhohot hogaya tange kichna..bachara Shivaay...chod dho na usse..."

Shivaay:"Thank you... Om...at least koi hein iss ghar mein jho mujhe pyaar kartha hein..."

Om:"vaise...kafi Kidkithod painting tha...nahi...?"
He said hi-5 ing with Rudy...

Annika almost dug a hole for herself to hide from her family's teasing...while Shivaay glared hard at his brothers...


Shivaay:"Really mature Om...really mature..."

Gauri:"bhaujai...Yeh kya hein...?"

Annika:"Kya hein...?"
She said helping herself to the aalupoori and daal fry...

Gauri:"Aapke baal pe..."

Annika:"Phail gaya raitha...mere baal mein kya hein...?kahan hein..."
She almost dropped her plate of  food in her panicky state...And stood up abruptly...

Shivaay looked at Gauri to see her sniggering and hi-5 ing Om and Rudra...

Shivaay:"kuch nahi hein Annika...they are just pulling our legs..."
He gestured towards them...Annika's eyes narrowed...

Annika:"Gauri..?tum bhi...?Ghadar..."

Dadi:"Koi mujhe batayega ki yeh kya ho raha hein...?"

Om:"Berang si Zindagi Ko Rangat Se Rang De,
Aur Aaj usse Mohabbat Se Rang De..!!

Gulaabi Rang Se Saja De Chehre Ko,
GaaloN Ko Dil Ki Hasrat Se Rang De..!!

Sharma Jaaye Shokhi BahaaroN Ki,
Mujh Ko Aaisi Nazakat Se Rang De..!!

LaboN Se LaboN Ki DastaaN Sun Le,
Jism-O-Jaan Ko Inaayat Se Rang De..!!"

All stared open mouthed at Om...

Rudra:"O...?kya bole jaa rahe hoo...Dadi...aap chintha maat karna...yeh sab hotha hein...hotha hein..."

Dadi:"hein...?"
She smiled seeing OmRu and Gauri teasing Shivaay and Annika...And walked away contentedly...

Rudra:"vaise bhaiyya...jaane se pehle ek gaana dedicate karu...?mere pyaare bhaiyya aur bhabhi ke liye...?"
He said placing his head on their shoulders from behind... making puppy dog eyes...

Shivaay:"Nah..."

Annika:"Ha..Kyu nahi...?Shivaay,  gaane de na..."

Shivaay:"abb bugatho...you asked for it..."
He whispered to Annika...

"Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq
Ye aeb ishq, ye bair ishq 
Ishq ishq, ishq"

Shivaay picked up the fruits from the basket in the table and threw it at Rudra one by one...
Shivaay:"Rudy ke bache..."

Rudra ran over to hide behind Om and Gauri to save himself... and made faces at Annika and Shivaay from behind these two. ...

Shivaay and Annika smiled wickedly at Rudra, who gulped...

Rudra:"Ok bye...good night...sweet dreams...see you tomorrow..."
Rudra ran away pulling Gauri and Omkara with him...

Shivika hi-fived seeing the funny way in which Rudra scurried away...

Shivaay:"So shall we leave Mrs.Oberoi...?"
Shivaay raised his hands to Annika...

Annika::"Of course...Mr.Oberoi..."
She placed her hand in Shivaay's...and together they walked to their room lost in their own world...

OmRu and Gauri smiled seeing their favorite  Shivaay Bhaiyya and Annika bhabhi so in love...

Rudra:"I'm so happy that our plan successful huva...we are so brilliant..."
He said hi-fi ing with Gauri...

Om:"Chup rah be...bade aye genius...ek Bengal Royal Tiger...aur dhosara babaji ki booti...acha huva kuch samajdhar log hein...varna OMM honi thi...isliye chalo...let's give the love birds some privacy..."

They watched as Shivaay whispered something in Annika's ears that made her blush beet red...

She shook her head, laughing at whatever Shivaay told her,  sticking out her tongue playfully , then she pivoted on her heel and fled out of their line of vision...And Instead of chasing her, Shivaay leaned against a pillar in a completely relaxed stance, crossed his arms over his chest, and called something after her with a cheeky smile... Annika was back in a second,  flinging her arms around him...

Om pulled Rudra and Gauri with him and walked away with a smile...

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Guys how was it...?

Let me know through your comments and likes...and also provide suggestions...

Kirthi...
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Posted: 6 years ago
kirthi🤗❤️you...ab tho batado shivay ne aisa kya khaha jisse anika waapas aagayi aur gave him an hug😆

Edited by yash2010 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
So adorable and funny 
Fabulous concept and beautifully written dialogue(one liners) 

Very very enjoyable to read, thanks a lot for this lighthearted piece 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Kirthi...🤗
OS is good and cute...loved the teasing part of jr.oberois 

My fav Rudy as always adorable along with Shivika...❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ohh wow this is lovely... early morning I read this and I'm sure my whole day will be laaal Ishq..
Lol I love  the way OmRu tease Shivika.it's so natural.. Dadi. . Lol always confused on everything.. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Aww so cute sweet adorable nd romantic nd hilarious too
Shayari was heart whelming 
Bt what does Shivaay said to Annika Plz tell name
I would love to read it more 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Kirthi!!🤗
This is so beautiful😳

Loved it.adored the title.my fav song!!
had a smile.throughout.
din.ki shuruvat achi hui.

take a bow!!!

Looking fwd for next OS

Thank u for the dedication😃
Edited by Thwisha617 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing os. ..
Please add me in your pocket list dearie. ..
I am simply love the plot. .
Hope u write more like this os 👍🏼
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Posted: 6 years ago
While reading this I was smiling the whole time. It was such a lovely os. Another thing I noticed was that in your os shivika bathed together. Adhuri khwaahish of yours it seems. Do write more os, ts and ff. You are an amazing writer. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow I loved it honey😳 
Rudy boy is love 🤣
This is why I love you sooo much. You always write what I want to see in the show.
Thank you for cheering up my mood😳
This is cheating. We also want to know what Shivaay told her that she came back and hugged him. Tum hamesha yehi karthi ho. 
Maryadak paranjo illenki njan koottuvettum😡😆
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Love 
Krishna
 
P.S Om nte poem translation kittumo evdelum. Enikonnum manasilayilla😛
Edited by krish_10 - 6 years ago