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Posted: 7 years ago
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Devi sat on Adhiraj's bed, sighing heavily she zipped up her suitcase

Adhiraj stood in the corner, watching, waiting for her to laugh and say this was all a joke

Pinching the top of his nose , he closed his eyes, surely this couldn't be real.

He watched as she folded her wedding clothes and put it on his bed, her clothes worn plain and white.

Rubbing the sindoor from her head she grabbed at her mangalsultra and watched as the beads hit the floor

Her words repeating in his head "I have always respected you and our relationship, but I never recieved that back, I took everything you and your family gave me, but no more Adhiraj, no more, you're dead to me, my husband is dead to me"

Her words hit ten times harder as he looked at the white sari she now wore, her sindoor now removed, the mangalsultra beads lying on the floor

Bending down he tried to pick them up and fix them, looking up at Devi, he wanted so much to beg her to stay

But this time he had to let her go, to let her be the beauty she is and he would remain the beast.

The last thing he saw, the scar on her back as she walked away

"Run Devi, run so far that I may never find you because I cannot stop myself from trying"

His words were a whisper as he stood in the room alone.

Inspired by Christina Aguilera's song- You Lost Me

Please let me know thoughts x

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice...keep it up...i hope ke aap apne story me adhiraj ki abhi Vo jese baat karta hai aur jess hai vese hi story me rakhe to jayada maza aayega 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting , Maya.. so you start with their separation and that wil be nterestingg to know..
Do continue 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kasaf

Nice...keep it up...i hope ke aap apne story me adhiraj ki abhi Vo jese baat karta hai aur jess hai vese hi story me rakhe to jayada maza aayega 😊

Aw Thank you!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Santiago24

Interesting , Maya.. so you start with their separation and that wil be nterestingg to know..

Do continue 😊

Thank you!
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Aw, thank you!

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