Originally posted by: lizzy110
brilliant when IF writers are better than the actual writers for the show
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Originally posted by: lizzy110
brilliant when IF writers are better than the actual writers for the show
SHOT 3
Omkara was concentrating on perfecting the wings of the bird he was sculpturing, when Shivay entered. Omkara halted what he was doing to turn to look at his brother.
"Dinner?? asked Shivay
"I have to complete this, Shivay. I will join you later. Said Omkara
"Come on, Om. Teri wali Palak Paneer aur kheer banarahi hai. Said Shivay with a smirk
Om looked at his brother pointedly, "Voh meri wali nahi hai.
"No? asked Shivay. "Om, she is more like a part of the family now. She visits temple with Daadi, accompanies badi maa for shopping, plays chess with papa and bade papa every weekend and now also stared to attend kitty parties with mom. She has already become Oberoi's Half Bahu.
"Come on Shivay. Not you too. Complained Omkara.
Gauri has more or less becomes part of Oberois in the past six months. Everyone is now clearly aware of her interest in Zulfi Singh Oberoi much to Omkara's chagrin. The worst part is that his whole family is amused by it and encourages it. His Daadi keeps on telling him how takkar ke Gauri is for him. His parents have kind of practically adopted her. Omkara won't be surprised if the disown him, if he by mistake makes her sad. And the most surprising member of her fan club is Rudra. When Gauri promised that she will cheer up Rudra, Omkara thought that she will only talk to him and convince him. But, Gauri went on brought her cousin Bhavya to Mumbai and in her language Dono ki setting karva di.'
Omkara was completely against the idea. However, seeing Bhavya and Rudra together no one can help but be awed by the fact that Casanova Oberoi is now completely smitten by the fiery girl. Daadi also declared them to be Takkar ke' and Rudra a Ishqbaaz'.
Though Gauri hadn't directly asked him about accepting her condition and be her boyfriend, she has clearly been dropping hints always putting Omkara in spot.
Everyone was already in dining table, when Omkara went to there. Gauri, as usual was the centre of everyone's attention. She was narrating one of her escapades from a strict professor.
"Thank god, I escaped. That man would have made me a kebab for disturbing his class. Said Gauri
"Ha, she escaped leaving me behind. Complained Rudra
Omkara could never understand how easily Rudra and Gauri have become best of friends all of a sudden.
"Rudra, more important than being mischievous is having a plan to escape from it. Tej warned
"Were you mischievous as a kid, Tej uncle? asked Gauri.
"Haan, bahut. Answered Daadi. "He would even pull Shakti into his schemes.
"Tabi toh Rudra is so naughty. Said Jhanvi. "I had hard to time managing him as a kid.
"Yeh, Shivay bhi. Added Pinky, " He used to run around the whole house at the sight of food in my hand. He hated to eat.
"Aur Omkara? asked Gauri eagerly looking at Jhanvi. "How was he as a kid?
Omkara lifted his head from his plate to glare at Gauri, but she was looking at his mother expectantly. Shivay nudged Omkara with a mocking grin earning a glare.
"Om? He was such a shaant bacha. Said Jhanvi. "Never troubled me. Very quietly he used to spend time sketching in his notepad.
"Aww... chorused Gauri, Rudra and Shivay in chorus annoying Om.
"Please, guys. Om warned
"Gauri, don't worry, even your kids will be shaant. Commented Rudra making Gauri blush.
"Shut up, Rudra. Chided Om
"Kyun? asked Rudra with a frown
Completely crazy family' mumbled Omkara as he stood up and headed towards the stairs. His steps halted at the sound of the ever annoying ringtone
Dham dham dharam dharaiya re
Sab se bade ladaiya re omkara, hey omkara
Omkara turned to glare at Gauri, who was looking at her phone. Other Oberois were snickering at Omkara's ever present irritation on hearing Gauri's ringtone.
*_*_*_*
Omkara was leaning on the couch with his leg placed on the table, sketching while Rudra was sitting beside him playing in his phone.
"Buoys... called Shivay as he sat on the bean bag opposite his brother after placing a beautiful charm bracelet in a jewel box in front of his brothers.
"What is this? Have we started jewellery business also? asked Omkara
"No, this is the gift I bought for Gauri for her birthday. Said Shivay.
"Wow, she will definitely like this bhaiya, but not more than mine. I and Bhavya have bought her a DVD collection of all Salman Khan Movies from start. Said Rudra
"Not bad... agreed Shivay then turned to Omkara, "What have you bought?
"Me? asked Omkara, "Nothing. He shrugged
"Ahhh gasped Rudra dramatically. "Nothing?? How rude O.
"Why should I buy anything?
"Come on, Om. This is her first birthday after...
"After what Shivay? asked Om looking at his brother pointedly
"You know, after you both...
"We both! Seriously! Shivay what is there between both of us, huh? Nothing. Said Omkara in a sharp tone. "I tolerate all the drama all of you do with her but I am not part of it, okay?
"But, Om...
"Give me a break, Shivay. I am not interested. How difficult is that to understand?
"If that so, then why didn't you tell her earlier. Why keep her hanging for all these months? asked Shivay
"Voh, pagal ladki is not at all ready to listen to me. Its always her manmarzi. What am I supposed to do? I thought after some days she will get over her infatuation. But, I didn't know my own family will fuel her pagalpan.
"But, Om... Shivay stopped mid sentence as he saw the girl in question standing beside the door with tears rolling down her eyes.
Omkara who turned around was shocked to see Gauri behind him.
"Gauri.. said Rudra worried
Wiping her eyes, Gauri ran from there.
"Shit! cursed Omkara as he ran behind her.
*_*_*_*
"Gauri, please listen to me. Called Omkara as he caught up with her just meters away from gate. "Listen, I am sorry.
"No, said Gauri. "I am sorry. I didn't know you were troubled by me so much.
"It is not that...
"I understand. I have been such a pain in the neck. I am really sorry. I didn't realize my love is actually annoying to you.
"Gauri, I didn't mean it. Said Om
"What didn't you mean? Calling me pagal? asked Gauri
Omkara closed his eyes in regret.
"I will not annoy you anymore, Omkara. I am sorry. Gauri was about to walk away but Omkara stopped her holding her hand.
Gauri didn't turn to look at him, but didn't try moving either.
"Will you listen to me one minute? asked Omkara
She nodded.
"Remember, I told you I will give us a chance if Rudra is happy? he asked
She nodded again
"That time I didn't know my family would be involved with you this strongly. It has become like a pressure for me to accept you and that didn't settle well with me. He confessed
"What do you intent to say?'
"Well, if my family is not in picture and I can spend free time with you alone, then I am sure I will have enough time to think about us.'
Gauri turned to him with a frown.
"Do you mean I should make your family hate me? she asked
"Don't be dramatic, Gauri. I just want you to not act like an adopted Oberoi daughter. Said Omkara
"But, I love your family. Pouted Gauri
"Okay, quick decision me or my family? asked Om
"Er... you?
"Hey, I don't appreciate the uncertainty in your voice.
"Of course you Omkara. She said
"Fine, then don't tell anyone that we are giving ourself a chance, okay? If everything works out, we will tell them, okay?
"Not if, when. She said cutely
Om smiled at her confidence and nodded.
*_*_*_*
Wanted to make lots of changes in the update, as I realized readers had different expectation from the story. But, I am caught up in some important stuff and no time to write. Hope you enjoy it.
Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Ahaan..!! Gauri ne sabki dil jeet liya..such a innocent soul she's...I love the way you always pen down Gauri as a pure soul...
Kara was irritated with his family's pagalpanti along with Gauri's...he confessed his frustration before his father and Ri listened to it..she was so hurt..but Kara had his ways to manaofy her..kaise style se pooch liya me or my family..he knew very well Gauri would never choose anyone over him...I'm pretty excited for the last shot...continue soonish..
Maybe you should do that..you know naa that we love every shade of his character... š³Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie
Thank you so muchI kinda of let Kara's character linger close to actual Om in show while try and make Ri's character differentI guess may be I should start experimenting with kara's character
Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Maybe you should do that..you know naa that we love every shade of his character... š³
Originally posted by: Unisha123
Aww so cute story and our Ri is cutest ā¤ļø Kara tho hai hi meri jaan, he is best as always, you always put the best version of Kara maybe that's one of the reason that I love you story so much. You are my fav author after book.worm. ā¤ļø
Thank you so much for writing such heart warming stories and always lift my mood up. I wish one day I will be able to write like youš³