RiKara FS ~ Will you be my boyfriend? SHOT 4 PAGE 18 *completed*

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Okay, I am gonna let you guys read the update only after my rant. This idea popped in my head after watching two off screen segments of the show Segment 1 and Segment 2. Lee is all praises for the way Shrenu's looks. After that I imagined a RuRi scenario for story (in a romantic way). I know, it is scandalous but can't help it. However, I was not sure anyone wants to read it, so dropped the idea. I retyped what I initial wrote and turned it to a RiKara story (for obvious reasons).

This one doesn't have much logic, not one of the best I have written. I casually wrote all four shots in less than two hours. Hope you enjoy it.


SHOT 1

"Hello, sweetheart, how was your weekend? Missed me?

Gauri narrowed her eyebrows and glared at her classmate in front of her. Thirteen months since she joined this college and since the first day he has been behind her. Gauri has clearly told him she is not interested in him. But, he is not ready to take no for an answer.

"Can you not leave me alone? asked Gauri irritated

"Sweetheart, come on. Stop playing hard to get'. It has been months now. Can't you see I am in love? he asked

"No, not in love. You are only taking my rejection to heart and trying to sooth your ego by making me your girlfriend. Said Gauri in a patient tone.

He pulled a chair in front of her and sat.

"That is not true, Gauri. I really love you.

"Please!! Do you think I don't know that you were with Rithika this weekend? asked Gauri

"Oh! Jealous, huh? he smiled annoying Gauri more.

"Don't be a kid. Obsession is very wrong. Please, get a life and stop irritating me.

"Baby, you don't understand. Do you realize I am an Oberoi? Imagine being girlfriend of Rudra Singh Oberoi. He said with so much pride in eyes

"See, that is your problem. Just because you are an Oberoi, you think everyone should want you. Pointed out Gauri

"Give me one valid reason for why you cannot love me? asked Rudra

"You don't deserve a reason. Just get lost. With that said, Gauri walked away taking her bag.

Rudra's friends Chubby and Ashwin who noticed the scene came to his side. They occupied chairs beside Rudra.

"Why don't you just leave her alone, Rudy? asked Chubby

"Yaar, don't you see? She loves me. She is only in denial. Said Rudra

"I don't think so. Said Chubby

"Ashwin, your GF Ramya is her friend, right? asked Rudra. When Ashwin nodded, Rudra continued, "Ask her to bring Gauri to my birthday party. I will make her accept my love for her.

*_*_*_*

Gauri walked inside the Oberoi Mansion exasperated. Why can't he just leave her alone? Today Gauri was with full plan to complain about Rudra to his parents and show him his limit.

"Kahan hai woh? asked Gauri

"It is his birthday today, Gauri. Don't upset him. Said Ramya

"Aww... Prince Oberoi's birthday and all we mere mortals should please him, right? asked Gauri sarcastically.

"But, Gauri...

"Please, Ramya. I have to put a full stop to this Rudy today.

*_*_*_*

"Bhaiya, O, Today I am going to introduce a very special person to you both in the party. Rudra said.

"President of India? asked Shivay in a sarcastic tone

"Bhaiya, please, no mazak, okay? I will introduce you both to my future girlfriend. Said Rudra

"Future girlfriend? Abhi tak girlfriend nahi bani? asked Shivay

"No, bhaiya. I have been trying for months now, but she is playing hard to get. Cribbed Rudy

"It can also be because she is not interested in you. Omkara, the most reasonable one, said.

"O, look at me. Why would anyone not be interested in me? I am hot, handsome and an Oberoi. How can anyone resist me? Don't try to discourage me, Om. I am going to get ready, okay? said Rudra before going to his room.

"Shivay, why don't you make him understand? asked Omkara

"Forget it, Om. Bacha hai, let him have fun.

"Arre, what if he is harassing that girl?

"He won't. He is innocent.

*_*_*_*

As Gauri walked inside the Mansion searching for Rudra's room, the vastness of the Mansion bemused her.

"Did I walk through this corridor already? asked Gauri to herself. "Yeh ghar nahi maze hai.

Gauri looked around and spotting someone she called to him. "Oye! Hello.

Omkara was walking to his room from Shivay's to get ready for the party when he heard someone call to him. When he turned around, he saw a young girl.

"Excuse me? he asked. But on getting no response, he walked towards her with slow strides and stood in front of her. "Yes? asked Omkara

"I am in love.

"What? Do you want something, Miss?

"I want you.

Omkara was taken aback by the directness of her words and looked at the girl as if she has gone mad.

"Are you searching for someone?

When she refused to answer and kept on staring at him like he was a candy, Omkara shrugging his shoulder turned back to go to his room.

Gauri stood there mesmerized by the sight. She was never the believer of love at first sight before two minutes. But, now she is irrevocably in love with the man who she just saw.

Gauri was still staring at the space where Omkara walked in, when Rudra came to stand beside her.

"Gauri, I am so glad you came. Were you searching for me? How sweet. Rudra kept on blabbering unaware that Gauri was day dreaming about certain zulfi-kara.

"Gauri... called Rudra seeing her stand like a statue. "Why are you staring at O's room? he asked

"O? asked Gauri breaking from her trance

"O as in Omkara, my brother.

Omkara Singh Oberoi? The elusive artist who always shies away from media? The self made billionaire? And the most handsome man Gauri has ever seen?

"Gauri, what happened? asked Rudra

"I am in love, Rudra. Said Gauri

"I know, finally my magic is melting your heart, huh? asked Rudra grinning

With a smile Gauri turned to Rudra and said, "I am in love with your brother, Omkara Singh Oberoi.

*_*_*_*

Shivay panicked seeing Rudra wailing like a kid lying on his bed. He immediately rushed to his side and asked, "Are you okay, Rudy? Why are you crying?

When Rudra didn't come down to party even one hour after it started, Shivay was worried and came in search of his brother. To see Rudra crying broke Shivay's heart.

"Bhaiyaa, main barbad hogaya. Cried Rudra

"Rudra, tell me what happened? Who made you cry? How dare someone make Shivay Singh Oberoi's brother cry? Shivay swore under his breath.

"Bhaiyyaaa. Cried Rudy more hugging Shivay.

"Kya hua a bacha? asked Shivay lovingly

"Do you know who is reason for me sadness? asked Rudy

"Who is it? Shivay was in total mood to destroy whoever is reason for his brother's tears

"It is Om.

"Kya!! asked a shocked Shivay

"Main???? asked a bemused Omkara who followed his elder brother and now stood near the door of Rudy's room.

Both Shivay and Rudra turned to look at Omkara. Shivay looked at Omkara confused shrugging, while Rudra was throwing draggers at Om.

"What did I do, Rudra? asked Omkara walking towards his brothers.

"Bhaiyaaa!!! Rudra hugged Shivay closer and said, "He is the reason I am sad.

"Om, did you scold the birthday boy? asked Shivay looking at Om.

Shivay was blind in pampering Rudra, while Omkara tried to be rational and reprimands Rudra if he goes overboard. This causes sweet tussle between younger brothers often and Shivay has to intervene and solve the issue. For every complain from Omkara about Rudra, Shivay had only one answer, "Bacha hai.

"Why would I, Shivay? Om asked raising his shoulder. He then turned to Rudra and said, "Oye! Natak band kar. Tell me what happened?

Ignoring Omkara, Shivay turned to Rudra and wiped his tears. "Won't you tell your Shivay bhaiya what happened? I will make everything alright.

"Bhaiyaa, O took Gauri away from me. sobbed Rudra

"Who? asked Shivay and Om in chorus.


SHOT 2

SHOT 3

SHOT 4

I am not sure if the title is good. If you have better title suggest it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This one funny yaar. Poor Rudy..
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That was interesting loved it so much.
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Originally posted by: reenzreenz

This one funny yaar. Poor Rudy..


Thank you

I know poor Rudy
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Cute😊 Rudy will get over it once hee meets a hot girl 😆
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Oh that's interesting..Rudra is behind Gauri and she's in love with his brother..can't wait for ShivKara's reaction...
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Funny. Love it 1st sight I can understand, confessing directly on 1st sight ..wow Gauri is too bold
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superb 👏
poor Rudy Boy😆
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Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

Cute😊 Rudy will get over it once hee meets a hot girl 😆


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Hope so...😳
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Oh that's interesting..Rudra is behind Gauri and she's in love with his brother..can't wait for ShivKara's reaction...


Thank you

Fate playing with Poor Ru

Shivay and especially Kara confused

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