RiKara FS ~ Will you be my boyfriend? SHOT 4 PAGE 18 *completed* - Page 15

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

The perfect end 👏 Enjoyed the entire FS again. Couldn't stop smiling as I read through it. It is such a breezy piece.

Originally posted by: Spyngli

Lovely update Lizzie...😃

I love ur writing style and alwyz feels blissful aftr reading ur story...😊

So finally they are togthr...😃...love their cute n naughty convo...😳...Loved how Rudy cared abt her...😊

Im sad that it gt completd...😕

Write more n more dear...we are alwyz ready to read ur stories...😛

Originally posted by: perFICtionist.

amazing man! such a happy wala ending! not too much emotional atyachar but fully loaded with crispy content! you got some mad story telling skills there girl! wuhuu 👏

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

LOVED IT

perfect ending to a very lovely story.

I loved the fact they Om kept them a secret so he didn't have any pressure and could have his Gauri all to himself😳

And poor Rudy was tricked 😆 but loved how close he and Gauri got once he realized he didn't really love her.

Loved this Naughty Ri and Naughty Kara - they were made for each other👏

Originally posted by: StarryStarryNyt

One word: Beautiful. You weave magic through your stories.

Is it too much to ask for a fifth part?

Originally posted by: MITHMA99

Lovely update

Plz write an epilogue to this story