FF:Broken Dreams( ArShi)Last Part & Epilogue Pg 42 - Page 30

this was a wonderful read. Have you written other stories???? Do let me know if you have.

read all the parts in one go !! Fantastic story !! Love it

camr across ur story by accident and read all the chapters in one go...simply mind blowing and superb...

Glad to know that people are still reading it.

One of th finest and beautiful writing!

Loved this story. ... cried a lot wen I read khushwant's sufferings😭...well written story. ..m so glad tat I came across tis...n m sure tat m goin to get a headache tmrw morning due to all the tears I have poured after reading tis story. ...loved it...great work. .would like to know if u have any blogs so tat I can follow or stalk😉

It was a very beautiful story. I really liked your take on all characters. Nobody is a complete villain and everybody can change. I loved how you showed that nobody can be complete black or white. Everyone has some shade of gray. Even a Khushi had her moments of negative behavior.

Overall Broken Dreams was a great story. I liked this view of Shyam as a grey character . I think all your characters were grey, since they all were forgiven because they all repented.

I didn't like Arnav saying "Khuswant" most of the time, i personally would have preferred Khushi. All the characters had the same name as the show, except Khushi.

I wish your Dr Sisodia had told the first time parents about hormones and its effect on a persons mood. The good doctor should have explained about how in pregnancy sex drives decrease and increase at different months, and also what are comfortable positions for intercourse.

This Dr kept faulting Arnav over everything.

the character i least liked was Arnav. He was spineless till the end, even when he tried to throw dadi out, he did not think it through.

His initial silence created the avalanche in all of their lifes.

The only good thing he did was to shut dadi up for good.

Wonderful story