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Posted: 8 years ago

SHOT 4

It was a regular dinner time at Oberois and everyone was gathered.

"Gauri bachi, doesn't come here often like before. I don't know what happened. It has been six months since I saw her. Said Daadi worriedly.

"Daadi, it is all because of O. Said Rudra glaring at Om. "He broke her heart the other day.

"What? asked a shocked Tej. " Why did you do that Om?

"Aise kuch nahi hai, papa. Said Om. "I don't know why she is not coming home.

"But, you only scolded...

"Shut up, Rudra. Said Omkara heading to his room.

*_*_*_*

"I don't know what magic you have casted on my family everyone is missing you badly. Said Om the same night when he was talking to Gauri over phone.

"Acha! Even I miss them. It is only because of certain Jatadhari Nandi I am not able to meet them.

"Are you really complaining Ms.Sharma? Isn't the prize for that good enough? Now you have Omkara Singh Oberoi irrevocably in love with you.

"But, Om, when will we tell your family?

"I kinda enjoy having you all for myself.

"Aww... Don't be selfish. Awesomeness like Gauri needs to be spread generously.

"Acha! asked Omkara mockingly

"If you don't tell your family, then I will.

"Now that I have fallen for you, you have started to boss around me. Gone is the sweet Gauri.

"That is my speciality, Omkara. Total package in single piece. Sweet, salty, hot sour.

"I will know about all that only if you let me taste you. Said Omkara slyly

"Besharam, tell your family about us, then I will let you do what you want.

"Now, that is a tempting offer.

"Oops, Om. Hostel warden is here. If she sees me in phone, she will give me lecture on young girls and their awful habit of talking late night with boys. I will call you tomorrow, okay?'

"Okay, Love you.

"Love you too, bye.

*_*_*_*

"Ommm... shouted Rudra entering Omkara's room.

"What is it? asked Omkara nonchalantly

"Om, you have to accept Gauri. Said Rudra dramatically.

"Excuse me?

"Om, bechari is very sad. She was crying during lunch time today. Said Rudra

Of course Om knows it. Gauri was crying because she flunked in one of her papers and her professor scolded her in staff room. Omkara spent twenty minutes pacifying her over phone and even promised to take her for movie that evening. His duffer brother has interpreted everything wrongly.

"Relax, Rudra.

"No, I will not relax. How can you make my friend cry, O. Please date her.'

A devil plan formed in Omkara's mind.

"I am not interested in her, but if you insiste, purely for your sake I will accept her. Said Omkara in a saint like voice

"Really! asked Rudra

"But, on one condition.

"You will give me all respect a elder brother deserves and also let me drive your sports car whenever I want.

"AHH gasped Rudy dramatically. "My car!

If anything that Rudra loves more than his brothers and Bhavya that could only be his red sports car. Ever since Shivay and Om gifted it on his eighteenth birthday, Rudra has not even let his brothers touch it.

Rudra was in deep thought. One sacrifice for him, but lifelong happiness for his best friend.

"Okay. Agreed Rudra surprising Om.

*_*_*_*

The whole family was staring at Gauri and Omkara amazed.

"Really! asked Shivay. "You both are together, now?

Omkara shrugged mumbling yeah

"When did that happen? asked Jhanvi

Gauri was about to answer that, but Omkara beat her to that and said, "I realized everyone was missing Gauri and also seeing her sad affected Rudy. So, I decided to give us a chance.

Gauri looked at Om appalled who just winked at her.

The whole family was ecstatic about the news. They all missed Gauri and to get her back as a prospective bahu of Oberoi house was icing on the top. They all gushed about how much they miss her and how happy they were for Omkara and Gauri.

Later when Omkara was on his way to drop Gauri to her hostel, she asked him how Rudy let him drive his Jaan like car.

"That is the trick. Said Omkara before explaining his deal with Rudra

"You are such a sly fox Omkara. I didn't know you were capable of this. She said

"That is my speciality, Gauri. Total package in single piece. Sweet, salty, hot sour. Said Omkara repeating Gauri's dialogue from previous week.

"I will know about all that only if you let me taste you. Gauri repeated Om's line

"That is interesting, Ms.Sharma. First kiss in a sports car, huh? Omkara wagged his eyebrows naughtily.

Few minutes later the same night, a red sports car was parked in front of a girl's hostel for solid half an hour and Gauri when exiting the car was completely flushed and thoroughly kissed. She corrected her dress and ran inside the hostel blushing, while Omkara looked at her retreating figure with a satisfied smile wiping off lipstick from the corner of his lips.

THE END

Really sorry for not updating Girl Friday yet a bit busy. Will definitely try and update tomorrow.

OS ~ Baby Oberoi


Edited by Ms.Lizzie - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
Such a light hearted feel good story it is.. totally my type..
"Rudy ke tarah uske dost bi pagal he" - I have to agree with Om here
Gouri is such a Bindass girl, telling Rudra to keep a cordial relationship since she is going to be his bhabhi, then declaring to Dadi that she is the one who likes omkara.. maza aya..enjoyed it all.
Gouri to poora family ko pata liya.. no surprise, none can resist her innocence and charm.."His parents have kinda practically adopted her, he won't be surprised if they even disown him if he by mistake makes her sad"😆😆...my fav dialogue..
Ugh.. omkara want her to choose bw him n his family..of course he very well knew that she wd chose him only...but I wanted her to choose his family and give him a jatka...I did want him to take some effort too...but it wd have looked out of character of Gouri,so it's ok...
I am sad next chapter is the last one😭.
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG om is such a guy. His tactics were really good.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg.. you updated the next chapter...just saw it now.
Rushing to read it😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
oh my ...the feels...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute-over-Hot

Such a light hearted feel good story it is.. totally my type..

"Rudy ke tarah uske dost bi pagal he" - I have to agree with Om here
Gouri is such a Bindass girl, telling Rudra to keep a cordial relationship since she is going to be his bhabhi, then declaring to Dadi that she is the one who likes omkara.. maza aya..enjoyed it all.
Gouri to poora family ko pata liya.. no surprise, none can resist her innocence and charm.."His parents have kinda practically adopted her, he won't be surprised if they even disown him if he by mistake makes her sad"😆😆...my fav dialogue..
Ugh.. omkara want her to choose bw him n his family..of course he very well knew that she wd chose him only...but I wanted her to choose his family and give him a jatka...I did want him to take some effort too...but it wd have looked out of character of Gouri,so it's ok...
I am sad next chapter is the last one😭.


Thank you

Gauri is bindas I agree...

Om just jealous of Ri getting all attention... cant share 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reenzreenz

OMG om is such a guy. His tactics were really good.


Thank you

SO typical to fool poor Ru baby
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute-over-Hot

Omg.. you updated the next chapter...just saw it now.

Rushing to read it😃


Will wait for comments
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AMIEO

oh my ...the feels...


😳

Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sarroo

Nice... thanks for the pm


Thank you

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