i feel stupid..but i’ll post it... Again

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Sapnon ki Pari..... Follow the Shadow -
part 2

part 1
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dharam-veer/851763/i-feel-stupid-but-ill-post-it

Veer's Room


Veer
– "after 5 days Jai mama will be going out to visit some temple. We can't get a better chance than this. What say Dharam??"


Veer looks at Dharam; he stumbles on a Dharam that seems to be lost in his own world. Veer gives a cute smile as if he knew what his older brother was thinking of .


Veer– "Dharam woh dekho Pari !! He points towards the door."

Dharam turn's around to - "where, Where!"

Veer starts laughing – "I should have mentioned her name eelier at least this way you would have paid attentions to me."


Dharam try's to hide his smile but our Veer see's everything

Veer – "for the first time I've seen a boy Blushing."

Dharam walks out the room

Veer- "where are you going now?"

Dharam – "village."
Veer- "Village?"

Dharam – "who knows I might meet her again."

Dharam walks out

Veer – "yep his a gonna for sure."

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..


Dharam is back at the same spot. An hour has pass but he still waits for his Pari.

Dharam- " She'll come. She has to."

As Dharam consults himself, he observes a movement. A shadow passes across. He follows from behind. The shadow moves house to house increasing its speed. Dharam can no longer keep up in the dark and he loses track. He stands there looking around trying to find the shadow once again. When he feels a sword on his throat from behind.

Voice- "who and why are you following me?"

Dharam slowly turns around

Voice – "tum"


He than raises his right hand up and waves "Hi"

The voice removes its mask and Dharam finds his Pari in front of him.

GAL - "tum! What are you doing here? Look I told you stealing from thieves is no crime."

Dharam doesn't answer and how could he. He couldn't remove his eyes of her one bit. He kept on grazing at her. The moon shines on her face making her look even more beautiful, he than slowly moves his eyes to her lips, her lips pink as a rose.

GAL– "I said why are you following me?" Dharam opens his months to answer but no words seem to be coming out. "Are you deaf or Mute? Hello."

Dharam finally speaks –" Ah"


Gal starts using single language
- "are you deaf? Do you know because of your stupid mistake, I had to return here again… are you even listening to me? Oh wait, you aren't. Cause if you would have I WOULDN'T BE HERE AGAIN."


She turns around...

Dharam- "I'm not sorry"

Gal – "Kya?"


Dharam
– "if I wouldn't have stopped you last night. Than how would have I met you again?"

Pari- "Pardon?!"


Dharam– "I know I'm smart and pretty good looking at the sametime.


Pari – "idiot"


Dharam- "idiot, maybe."


Pari - "why were you following me?"


Dharam- " who said I was following you ? I'm here to find something I lost last night."


Pari – "what?"


Dharam – "my heart… which you stole."


She starts walking away Again, Dharam holds her hand.


Pair – "Leave Me, let me go." She trys to get loose of her hand.


Dharam – "only on one condition."


Pari – "What?"


Dharam – 'promise me that you'll meet me here again 2mrw."


Gal – " no , I have to leave tonight and I have no time for strangers."


Dharam – " Fine, than I won't let you go"


Gal – " your very stubborn."

Dharam – " I know. Now tomorrow?"


Gal – "okay , okay I'll meet you here tomorrow, now let me go."


Dharam lets go of her hand , she run's toward her horse once she's on,
GAL – " I laired . I'm not coming"

Dharam just stands there and smiles he didn't expert her to keep her word. He thinks to himself. "Naam?" he yells out " Pari at least tell me your name." but he is too

............................................................ ..............................

Two days pass, since Dharam met Pari. He sits near his window … Veer walks in, he can't see Dharam miserable…


Veer
–"Dharam it's been a long time since we haven't had a race. Come let's have one."


Dharam
– "I don't feel like it"


Veer
– "still thinking about her?"


Dharam
– "it's hard not to … I don't know if I'll meet her again"


Dharam's Ma
– "who won't you meet again?" she walks in with a smile..


Dharam
– "NO one, no body, did you need something?"


D's Ma
– "tomorrow your Chand uncle is coming with his family to talked about your marriage."


Dharam and Veer look at each other


Veer
– "marriage!"


D's Ma
- "yes."


Dharam
- "but ma, I don't want to get married. I don't even know her."


D's ma
– Dharam do you trust your ME?"


Dharam
– "yes, but-"


D's ma
– than don't ask any more questions. I'm sure you'll like her. They are coming tomorrow so don't go any where and be ready."


The END

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Posted: 17 years ago
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here's the next part of my day dreaming about Dharam's lovestory..
do leave commets
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what you've already read it ??

Thanks😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 very good......the worst thing about you and your story is that i'll have to wait till you write the next part 😆 very good....cant wait.....its very nice....i can imagine everything...it has great clarity....when you write the next part...and you dont see my comments on it....then jus drop me a pm....'cause its possible that probably i missed it or sth...ok 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was nice .......plz continue
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Originally posted by: 2773696

👏 very good......the worst thing about you and your story is that i'll have to wait till you write the next part 😆 very good....cant wait.....its very nice....i can imagine everything...it has great clarity....when you write the next part...and you dont see my comments on it....then jus drop me a pm....'cause its possible that probably i missed it or sth...ok 😳

wow ... thanks for the nice comments😳😳

hey minnie thanks
i'll try and post the next part next mouth...😛

Edited by Ron16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Ron 😃, Ur attempt is sincere and u tried ur best so why u feel stupid? and its nice yaar😉, u came up with Cute story👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey PPiyu
thanks yaar .. that coming from you really means a lot
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely 😉 keep it up 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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v well written👏👏
keep it up 😃

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