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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Im bac dear...sorry for not posting my views soon...Had been terribly busy...was travelling ..had a short reunion with my inlaws.😆.Zindagi isi ka naam hai!!

Coming bac to the Chapter...im absolutely cleanbowled Dazz...absolutely breathtakingly presented n wellwritten!!Im almost thre seeing them perform ...the swift n smooth night action with OHH n Ahh ..😆😆U hve penned the intense emotions with desires n passion overtaking them beautifully...wat i luved how the attraction was so evident in their conversations n in all thse fleeting touches thy experienced n shared yet Dhani restrained but she was the first one to envelop him..invite him...The love she still have for him but yet holds the pain n rejection of his love,their child n the bitter resentment..n she couldnt help to drown in his love yet again...the yearning to be one with him aftr such a long separation!!...She wanted him as badly as he too n tat made me feel so ahh hot actually😆😆The 18+ was hell lot juicy after all Vipu was eager to hve her from the first encounter wen he had groped her...infact i was looking out for my hubby to pounce on him.😆😆😆..but my badluck😆😆

Jokes apart..i had goosebumps wen he whispered i luv u to her...i cud visualize how must hve dhani reacted it to it...reaching to her climax n his !!The lovemaking was perfect ...n Congrats for the first time writing it so convincingly with sheer brilliance...!!Ur a stupendous writer n i mean it...!!

Im way excited now for the upcoming chapter as how thy turn out the nxt morning..With this Vipu has got a hold on her...He will not back down..So can we expect more of steaming stuff...n making out part 2!!

Why do i feel Vidhaan is aware wat Vipu n Dhani r to each other n he is being teaming thm intentionally...!!lovely update as usual...!!i luved reading tis chapter again n again ...!Thanx Dazz for tis wonderful surprise..

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: mehraan
Kaanta lagaaa...Hai laga. .!!!🤪
Reserved!

haah aja, haah raja

Blanket ke neeche chali

moaning ahare groaning.. kantaan lagaaa🤪

🤣 aap toh clean bowled ho gayi🤣

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: mehraan
Im bac dear...sorry for not posting my views soon...Had been terribly busy...was travelling ..had a short reunion with my inlaws.😆.Zindagi isi ka naam hai!!
Coming bac to the Chapter...im absolutely cleanbowled Dazz...absolutely breathtakingly presented n wellwritten!!Im almost thre seeing them perform ...the swift n smooth night action with OHH n Ahh ..😆😆U hve penned the intense emotions with desires n passion overtaking them beautifully...wat i luved how the attraction was so evident in their conversations n in all thse fleeting touches thy experienced n shared yet Dhani restrained but she was the first one to envelop him..invite him...The love she still have for him but yet holds the pain n rejection of his love,their child n the bitter resentment..n she couldnt help to drown in his love yet again...the yearning to be one with him aftr such a long separation!!...She wanted him as badly as he too n tat made me feel so ahh hot actually😆😆The 18+ was hell lot juicy after all Vipu was eager to hve her from the first encounter wen he had groped her...infact i was looking out for my hubby to pounce on him.😆😆😆..but my badluck😆😆

Jokes apart..i had goosebumps wen he whispered i luv u to her...i cud visualize how must hve dhani reacted it to it...reaching to her climax n his !!The lovemaking was perfect ...n Congrats for the first time writing it so convincingly with sheer brilliance...!!Ur a stupendous writer n i mean it...!!

Im way excited now for the upcoming chapter as how thy turn out the nxt morning..With this Vipu has got a hold on her...He will not back down..So can we expect more of steaming stuff...n making out part 2!!

Why do i feel Vidhaan is aware wat Vipu n Dhani r to each other n he is being teaming thm intentionally...!!lovely update as usual...!!i luved reading tis chapter again n again ...!Thanx Dazz for tis wonderful surprise..

Mere Pyari Si Mehr, thank you for your very generous encouragement! 🤗 When we were first informed of the leap and were still under the impression that Eisha was to continue portraying Dhani, I had wanted the attraction between them to be even more evident post their separation. 😳 She was too stubborn to budge out of her misconception, but couldn't deny her lust for him any longer. Every ounce of her body ached to be his once again while her mind continued to reprimand her ominously. Had Viplav not been intimidated by Dhani, he would've kept her locked inside his bedroom every night ready to pounce on his prey. 😉 😆 My husband always tells me that I'm boring. 🤣 I don't have a sensual bone in my body, so writing the mature content of this chapter was nothing short of an adventure. Funny story, I asked hubby bear to read the first chapter and he quit after the second paragraph. 😒 He said the chapter was way too lovey dovey and that I should indulge this story with a strong measure of graphic sensuousness. 🤓 I can't repeat what he told me to write out of fear of being banned from IF for obscenity, but my reaction was what kind of third class vulgarity are you asking me to write! 🤣 Hubbies and their ideas! 😆 I felt that Viplav expressing his love to Dhani was a very important part of that sequence. His affirmation of his devotion to her was necessary for them to complete their act of love. ☺️ Dhani may have climaxed, but she hasn't vocalized her reciprocation of his love just yet. I already have the next morning planned in my head; it may or may not go according to your assumption. 😉 You'll have to wait for the next chapter. 😛 Vidhaan is completely unaware of the relationship between Viplav and Dhani. Thus far, he's only looked towards his brother as a substitute in his place when he's obligated elsewhere. He knows he can trust Viplav with his sister and his princess. 😊 Thank you for your unconditional love, Mehr! You've been a support system since the first chapter. I always look forward to reading each of your comments! ❤️

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AvaniVrinda

@AvaniVrinda

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Hi Dazz. May i ask when is the next charter coming?
Eagerly waiting 😳

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: AvaniVrinda
Hi Dazz. May i ask when is the next charter coming?
Eagerly waiting 😳

Hi Avani! I haven't started on the next chapter yet. 😳 I have a few ideas running through my mind that I need to finalize before I proceed writing. I should have it up in a week or so. 😊 Thank you for your encouragement! 🤗

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#156

sorry Dazz for getting late here.

RES.😆

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~DaZZ|ing~

@~DaZZ|ing~

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

To the lovely readers of this story:

My apologies to everyone waiting on chapter seven. I've gotten busier with my other commitments and hence haven't been able to find the time to write in peace. 😳 I'm aiming to hopefully have the next chapter up sometime next week. 😳 Thank you for being so patient! ❤️

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pearl82

@pearl82

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~
To the lovely readers of this story:

My apologies to everyone waiting on chapter seven. I've gotten busier with my other commitments and hence haven't been able to find the time to write in peace. 😳 I'm aiming to hopefully have the next chapter up sometime next week. 😳 Thank you for being so patient! ❤️

we can understand u dear. ...take your time. ...😃🤗